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Shreya

@-MKB-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

The shoutout it looks like I have forced u too because I am being all DQ..

But Ru got an OS...No no its okay I get it

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Khyati

@So_Naley

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

iRes.

Coz ILU. <3

Ps: Jags be so cute with all her whining. :'D

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Bushra Iqbal

@Sanely_Insane

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: MKrayZee

Why oh why was she everywhere? He could see her face when he closed his eyes. He could hear her voice in the silence of his home. He could see her smile in the darkness of his room. He could feel her touch in the warmth of his sheets. And he did not want to. He did not want to know her. He did not want to feel anything for her. He hated her. He wanted to hate her. He wanted to hate her so much.

Whoa! This was beautiful. I read this twice already. You write with so much flair Zee. The way music comes to Manik naturally, words come to you naturally and I'm not even exaggerating. (I don't exaggerate when I'm giving an opinion, i.e.) I loved reading this. Bookmarked so I can re-read for god knows how many times.

The above part though, stood out for me. Come on woman, how do you do it? Such crispness, and yet so many emotions rushing at you.