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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

this was heartbreaking..you wrote Manik's emotions..his anger..his hurt..his love..His hatred..his turmoil to such perfection

very well written

-Reya <3

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Shreya Pokharel

@-Loq-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

This is so good...
Zee baby...
If you write so well at the airport ...You should always be there...😆
Sorry
Jokes apart...
😆
I have told you already that I learn each day with you...And you never fail to impress me ...😃

Jaggs will be proud of you...And yes I am already your FAN...
I love you...

And yes I love that you gave credit to Rubys07...😆

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MKrayZee

@MKrayZee

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Loki!!

Where have you been?!

Thank you so much :)

Jaggs is upset with me so I'm trying to make it up to her <33

And I love you too <3

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Chocomaniac

@Chocomaniac

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

That was so beautiful ! 👏 Heart wrenching , yes.But very well penned down.

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a.vaishnavi

@SankiPagal

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

ZAINUUU My love... This was beautiful... <3

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AAVANI

@vani86

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

u penned manik's emotions perfectly...👏

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Shreya Pokharel

@-Loq-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: MKrayZee
Loki!!
Where have you been?!
Thank you so much :)
Jaggs is upset with me so I'm trying to make it up to her <33
And I love you too <3

I am soo sorry...
Had a family gathering yesterday..
So busy since morning...
The gathering is till tomorrow...
So very busy...

I had to sneak and watch the show..
Thank god only 10 mins of MaNan...But worth watching...😃

Lets be on twitter...

By the way why is there Goldie below your username?

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Senpoo

@Senpoo

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Beautiful Zee!!! 👏👍🏼 You wonderfully made your emotions just flow through me as well!!! 🤗

Her presence in His life - Made him "Manik"!!! ❤️

Her absence in His life - Devoids him of everything!!! 💔

He doesn't know what was he before though assumes that he can be the "dark" that he was once... But can he get back that identity??!! He sure has to hate her for not only depriving him of the light but also for removing the darkness that he had preferred.. He doesn't have anywhere to go now!!! 🥺

And there she is, taken roles to play in his life, unknowingly, is swamping herself with so many emotions, unable to find a way to fix things for Him!!! Yes, she is not thinking for herself but for Him!!! And unknowing to her own, she is playing another role for Him here! And yes, He had to hate her for that! 🥺

Edited by Senpoo - 10 years ago

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Shreya

@-MKB-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

So finally I get a shoutout...Kay

Well Rubs get a dedication..No no I am not hurt..no it Kay 😳

But Gah this was so beautiful like why dint u write such scenes for the show? And these monologues and Manik in pain

This monster Manik is different ..he is in love and u have managed to capture the conflict between the head and the heart so well"

"Yes I love her but I hate the fact that I cant stop loving her"

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MKrayZee

@MKrayZee

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: -MKB-
So finally I get a shoutout...Kay
Well Rubs get a dedication..No no I am not hurt..no it Kay 😳

But Gah this was so beautiful like why dint u write such scenes for the show? And these monologues and Manik in pain

This monster Manik is different ..he is in love and u have managed to capture the conflict between the head and the heart so well"

"Yes I love her but I hate the fact that I cant stop loving her"

Woman. I said I love you. To the whole world. Sigh. Stop being a DQ and hug me for the courage!

@Red - the conflict is so real and will only be displayed properly (I HOPE) in the next few episodes. And thank you, for finally commenting 😳