ViDha OS: A Kiss As Sweet As Chocolate;

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VipluvDhaani; a kiss as sweet as chocolate!
Okay so, this one is basically inspired from the precape scene and by a picture Eisha posted on Instagram (the chocolate with a paper attached to it that says "Dhaani") it's a small OS, so have fun!
Happy Reading
*please ignore grammatical/spelling errors! haven't rechecked*
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As I sat on my seat, I opened the window, I was waiting for her to come, man, she had some effect on me, her acceptance, her presence made me feel things I can't put in words, As I ignored Taniya's rants and silently prayed that Dhaani comes before the beech-main-bolnay-wali, so we leave her in the asharam only.

I saw her coming out, her hair flowing like always, without any makeup, without any ornaments, she looked beautiful, for once I thought I might just keep staring and forget the chaos of what has been happening to me lately, she was my escape, my escape from Taniya, my escape from dadaji and my escape from worrying about what will happen, what life has ahead of me, yes, I am carefree, but, it does strike me at times, when all the times I've been free of all the worries I had, come to me all at once but then there she is with her brown orbs looking at me, with that slight smile she had while I couldn't open the umbrella or with the furious face when I held her hand.

My chain of thoughts was broken when Taniya pushed me to drive, I wanted Dhaani to sit in the front seat, how lovely was it when she was sitting next to me, smiling at the moon once a while, perhaps because she liked my company too. As I drove to the office, I could only think about how will I handle all this rush of feelings, I hate her for driving me crazy.

I asked Taniya to get to the office, I'll lock the car and follow her, she left but Dhaani stopped, she stood there for a minute, maybe she was waiting for me? I thought, but then she left, no words said. I saw chocolates at the shop near, so I thought why not buy some, after all what's better than a chocolate treat, I bought one for myself, one for Taniya, and one for Dhaani, well, you can't skip her! I walked inside the office and she was standing there, as soon as she saw me, she smiled, a very small smile but enough to for me to notice, she quickly turned around and started walking inside.

"Area Suno? Shikayat ki Puriya!" she stopped at once, I like that.
"ye lo!" I said as I passed her a chocolate, while I simultaneously opened mine.
"Arey, Chocolate! humay bahut pasand hai chocolate, apko pata hai jub hum chotay that toh Mai, hamain chocolate deti thi..." I watched her awestruck at her innocence and cuteness, her excitement over one chocolate, she kept talking continuously, she was probably the longest she talked to me without arguing! As she stopped suddenly and looked up I smirked.
"Acha? Chalo, tum nay kamsaykam hamaray hanthon kuch suikaar toh kiya! Humain bus it baat just khushi hai!" I could feel her smiling inside, it was just a thing I could do, I don't know why but the words came out of my mouth.
"Arey, ab muskurana chahti ho toh, muskura do! bura nahie manay gay hum!"
she laughed, a little, not much. I liked watching her like that! i'd prefer her laughing than being furious at me! Just then Taniya came back with the documents!
"Itni Jaldi kese mil gaye?" I asked?
"Bus yahan kay log itnay achay jo hain!" she replied as I passed her the chocolate.

I dropped Dhaani at her house and left to show Taniya Banaras! At nearly 7 PM we reached home and had dinner by 8 I was lying in my bed and yet again, thinking about Dhaani, this had become a routine! I heard a knock on the door and saw my sister!

"hi bhai!"
"Arey hum yahan? Iss waqt?"
"haan bhai woh, aapko yaad hai hum kese bachpan main chocolate khaya kartay thay..."
I wasn't even listening to her anymore, just as she mentioned chocolate, my whole attention was diverted to dhaani's laughing face! her laugh, so quiet yet so vibrant and lively, almost unreal!
"Bhai?" she scream!
"Haan?"
"Arey batao na chocolate chahiye ke nahie?"
I snatched the chocolate from her hand!
"Areeey?" She screamed and I closed the door!
"Bhai bhi na!" I heard her say,
I went back to bed when the chocolate incident striked me again, I smiled, as I took a sticky note and wrote "Dhaani" on it, a heart on the top of eye instead of a dot, I wanted to give this to her, I wanted to see her smile, with this in my mind I left for the ashram!

I knocked hoping she would open the door, I left the chocolate on the gate & I hid to see who would come, and It was her, It was almost as if God wanted me to meet her but alas I stayed there and there she took the chocolate and smiled.
"E? E yahan pay kon rakhkay gaya? Kahein woh Rak..." She stopped, well, she guessed it write, it was her rakshas only! but then, I didn't want her to call me rakshas!

"nai, oo itna bhi bura nahie hai kay usay ab rakshas bulaon. magar usnay ye yahan?" She started searching for me, and there I was, I stood infront of her as she froze. She looked so ethereal in the moon light, with cool breeze moving her hair, she stood still even when her hair were covering her face, I came close to her, she was still, I moved her hair back to the place...

Dhani's POV
He came so close to me that I could feel her breath on my face, I was almost too shocked to movie, he whispered "perfect" by the little english I knew, I guessed what this must have meant, in the moment, he kissed my cheek, I couldn't even comprehend what was happening. I was still. while he moved, he was looking at me, his expression so soft, my face softened, this time I wasn't furious, my hand moved to my cheek unknowingly, he kept looking at me, I kept looking at him. no words said. we just kept staring, when wind blew and my vision was blocked because my sari covered my face, when i removed it, he vanished. I sighed as I went back to sleep, unable to understand if this was a dream or did this just happen.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved ur OS it was so naughty of viplav kissing without proposingI hope we get to see this in the show 😃
Edited by AISHU183 - 10 years ago
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OHH..!! It was awesome.. just fantastic. loved it to the core. do write more dear.😳😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: AISHU183

Loved ur OS it was so naughty of viplav kissing without proposingI hope we get to see this in the show 😃


cv's itni bhi naughty nahi hai hamara jaisa sochta hai ekk kiss dikhate i love u pehle and shaadi se pehle...
tv shows mein ekk tarikaa hai...pehle ladka pyaar...boy proposing...girl impresses but not shows...
she will tease him...phir shaadi...uske ke baad kiss hota hai...
may be we have to wait for around 200 episodes to see a kiss.
Edited by tarun1234567 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome OS 😳
Loved it 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow... superb... OS 😊 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: tarun1234567



cv's itni bhi naughty nahi hai hamara jaisa sochta hai ekk kiss dikhate i love u pehle and shaadi se pehle...
tv shows mein ekk tarikaa hai...pehle ladka pyaar...boy proposing...girl impresses but not shows...
she will tease him...phir shaadi...uske ke baad kiss hota hai...
may be we have to wait for around 200 episodes to see a kiss.



considering vipluv, we might as well get a kiss on the cheek once they're both completely in love. :P
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: empathy.



considering vipluv, we might as well get a kiss on the cheek once they're both completely in love. :P


lets see what going to happen
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Actually very very late to comment on this ...I had bookmarked it long back 😊...lovely piece of writing,captured Vidha beautifully...!!reading of peck on a cheek vich is to b an attempt tomorrow if not😆...surely I willl remember this Os !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fantastic dear 👏👏
Loved the naughty Vips and lovey Dhani😳😳

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