Ragna ss : back to my captive ( discontinued)

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CHAPTER 1 : "DECISION TAKEN"


" Oh...
That's indeed beautiful !!!!"
, screamed a waitress while placing a coffee mug on the table. I gazed up
and saw her piercing her gaze into my marriage ring. Something tugged at my
stomach and I focused very hard on my coffee cup, making sure that there was
space for any other thought. I slid my fingers into the cup handle and returned
my small smile to her broad smile.


"Oh such an expensive
and lovely ring... I'm so sure your husband loves you a lot... You are one of
the beautiful and the luckiest woman" A lump rose unexpectedly in my throat and
I bit my cheeks to stop myself from crying. I hesitated , "Sure"... the small
smile faltering slightly before it become forced, and then I hurried away.


Prem's car wasn't in the
driveway when I parked in front of the small house. I got it, I was relieved
that, I've not to stress myself to put our self together . As I slid my hands
into my purse to get the house keys, I heard of Prem's car tires crunched on
the gravel, "Honey, wait !!!! We will
step in together
" I heard him shouting at my back while he was parking his
car. Prem was good at what he did, and he was proud of it too. He was the president
of the royal business agency. He owned a respectful place and a man of his own.


I swallowed the guilt down that was rising up
in my throat, as I heard of his approaching steps towards me. He walked over
wrapping his hands around my waist and kissed me. Sometime I felt safe when I
was in his arms. But now his touch was just making me feel ridiculous about
myself. I gulped , and pull the keys from my purse, jerking him slightly.


The text on his mobile
phone that I saw in the morning while He was in the washroom was swimming all
over my mind. I looked down and saw him still wearing his marriage ring. My
fingers trembled and I found myself struggling to open the doors. Prem leaned
and kissed on my head before he took the keys and unlocked the house. I
breathed out in relief and kissed him before he walks in the house. I could
feel him studying my face all that time. He walked over the house, throwing his
bag on the sofa and keys on the side table. He missed, mine still standing on
the door. My body was getting cold seeing his every movement. I felt him
running away from me in that every passing second. My hands started shivering,
a void opening in my chest threatening to suck me in.


"It had had happened"


My husband!!!! My life
had found someone that was worth it, someone who could give what I couldn't. I
feared this day since my first miscarriage.


The front room was
growing darker as the sun sank behind the horizon.


"Oh" he started when he
saw me standing there, "I thought you woulg be inside. What are you doing
outside?"


He walked over to me,
reaching to my hand and pulls me inside, before locking the doors behind.


" Who's Itika?" There, I
jumped right in, not giving myself the time to back out.


Prem froze, still half
bend over the lamp he'd just clicked on.


He straightened up,
looking at the wall, "You checked my messages" his voice plain and hard.


There was silence in the room. I lost myself
to think what to answer.


He turned to me, his
eyes very different from what I knew. The warmth was gone, and they were oddly
empty.


"She's a woman . I've
been seeing"


The words hit my skull
and I gasped for air. I'd known it by their messages. Of course it could be
nothing else, but to hear him say-


"How could you?" I
whispered, the outline of his face blurring through the tears welling up in my
eyes.


"Listen here" he was
angry, his voice raising.


"You haven't exactly
what I wanted to have. Moreover, you are only struggling and struggling. Even if
i wish of starting a life with you, you even fail in coming with it. You failed
in becoming a good daughter, you were nothing but a spoiled little child, with
a failed academic careers. You failed yourself to be a wife and now I question
your ability to ever be a mother? I feel your miscarriage was not because of
any accident but a result of your insecurity and your biased nature," his words
poked and stabbed at me, leaving pale in their wake. The words that
tumbled out of his mouth brought new
floods of tears with them, the hallow loneliness, the quilt, the sorrow all
returning when I'm trying to push them away. He grabbed my wrist and yank me
closer. I winched, "You don't even make yourself to get a job, all you do is
sit and make other's upset" His eyes were dark and dangerous now, another look,
I hadn't seen on him before.


Why was he blaming me
for everything? What did I do? I looked down . I didn't know what I was feeling
anymore. My chest was aching and throbbing but my mind was blank now. I looked
at Prem , my face probabily just blank as I felt.


"I know I can't give you
what you want. I want to make things good for us. I want to make myself good
enough for you, for everyone. But whenever I try something, I end up in making
others upset. I'm not biased, nor I m unsecure, I'm just trying to come in, in
your world, I know, I've failed myself in my every relation. The fact of it is
you cheated on me, and no matter how miserable you make me feel about my in
capabilities, you promised to stick to my side. For better or worse, REMEMBER?


"I'm sticking by your
side. But it's not a crime to want happiness !!!! kalpana..."


I narrowed my eyes at
him, "like this... Itika !!!"


His hand shot through
the air and slapped me tightly that I all most lost my balanced. He grabbed my
shoulder before I fall down, and knocked me into the wall . A shock of pain
spread from my back through my body and for a moment I could not breathe,


"I don't think, you need
to speak when it's only me who does anything in this bloody house, I worked
hard for you even though you don't deserve"


He stormed out of the
room . My face burned, the flesh over my cheekbones throbbing in time with her
heart, racing at a painful speed through my chest. My hands started shivering
and shaking, I buried my face in them, breaking down , letting the pain and
anguish spill out of me without trying to stop it.



It was late by the time
Prem came home. He stayed out longer that he stays ever. And now I have decided
what the next step I need to take.



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Time schedule :
1. Back to my captive
2. My planned marriage
3. Fates decided
4. Left alone by king seductive

This is how I have planned to update no. Wise. Captive is of 18 chapters, planned had just 2 or three chapters left. Fates will be completed in next 4 chapters and king I have not yet decided. I will update on regular basis... I mean 3 days gap between each update. One day for thinking, next day for writing in a copy and next day for typing. I m thinking of taking one story at a time.
Index...
Chapter 1 : Page 1 ( Decision taken )
chapter 2 : page 2 ( searching my limits)
Edited by dragonok - 10 years ago
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kindly share your reviews regarding whether to continue or stop...
thanks😊
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Awesome update dear
It so emotional update kalpi in pain that bas***d prem
Update soon
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Originally posted by: sweet1308

Awesome update dear

It so emotional update kalpi in pain that bas***d prem
Update soon


I next...
There will be a very very dirty topic 😃
Wait till then 😉
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There are so many illogical events happening, please forgive me

Chapter 2- searching my limits

hey everyone, I have always said, I read a lot of books and the story makes me think more. I have never had build a story completely on my imagination. I know its a crime to have story base from others novel. But that is how I can work. Here also I read a lot of books and then merging all I got an idea, I can never be a writer. And my this problem of not having the complete story of my own , restrain me of writing further. Still Because of DIA, RICHA I m updating. If anyone have problem with the story, I can happily end writting here. Please share ur views...

thank u J

"What"

"What did he just say? IT"S NOT CRIME TO WANT OUR HAPPINESS"

Really???? Does this seems so simple

"Of course!!!! Of course, its a CRIME !!!!! No... A SIN" Prem got into adultery and questioning me about the crime no... The sin he had been committing from so long???? Was it worth it? Does I'm to be blamed? Did I lack giving him his peace of comfort? My head shook and I felt the sweat beading up on my back, on my forehead. I can no longer stand for the man , who for once didn't even thought of me. When I needed him the most, he was busy warming the bed of the other woman. I had to get out of this hell , out of the place which reminds and will for ever remind me of my latest failure, and I had to think of a way to sneak out before that bas***d returns.

I took a bag out from my closet, I don't want to give my mind a bit second to rethink of my decision. No matter where I m leading my life, but I was so sure of leaving this man for ever. I dressed myself into my tight fitted jeans and black deep neck loose T shirt. All I wanted to look was a care free, spoiled , annoyed woman rather from the person which was stocked to me from all the long. I applied dark mascara covering my red swollen eyes, putting blush on my cheeks, I stepped out of THE HOUSE with my only bag.

It was dark, and after walking for almost 2 hours , it occurred to me that I reached a port- There were many security guards on the lookout, I was standing on the edge of the shore, with a large private ship getting ready to go. I don't know, what came into my mind, but for once I wanted to take risk. I ached for getting caught. I sneaked up towards the ship, looking around every moment but trying to keep my face as composed as it could be. I knew better to run than to be caught. But My heart forced me to try , at least for once. I kept myself cool and walked as if I belonged on the property, that guards won't pay attention to me. It seemed to be working. And I got closer and closer to the ship without even raising any alarm. As I climbed the stairs I ignored looking at anyone and slipped my self to the back end.

I was on the ship ,on the end of it.It was all dark. I prayed to god, to start the journey as soon as possible, I hoped that I had not managed to somehow choose a ship that would be heading into foreign country, or a diiferent continent. I had my passport among my thing, but it would only open up more and more questions.

My chain of thoughts were intrupted by a sudden shock of movement around me. I heard something rattling, and I realised the ship was in the water. I sat down on the floor, trying to decide what to do. My stomach was growling faintly, and the air around me was stale. I had no idea of whose ship, I was on. A feeling of quilt crept up inside me but I kept it aside.But I was sure, it belong to someone really important, like a big bussinessman, a lawyer or a politician. My heart pounded faster and faster. What will happen to me if someone suspect that there is someone else along with the owner on the ship.. I folded my arms around me trying to cover myself or hide myself from everyone here.. I gaze up and looked around, there was a chair and a table, but no other item present. I signed with relief and stood up quickly, thinking of my excellent idea and perfect plan from slipping myself away from the eyes of all security guards when a heavy hand came down on my shoulder from behind. I yelped in surprise, jumping slightly in place before I turned around. The man behind was tall , with dark hair and eyes; his broad chest was visible from his thin white shirt, in fact, have plenty of muscle on his frame. I swallowed against the sudden dryness in my throat, my panicked mind trying to come up with something to say. The man have rugged look, his eyes were dark, intense and intimidating. The expression on his face was calm and composed, and he didn't for once look surprised on finding a stranger on his ship, and I couldn't quite make myself speak a long, terrifying moment,

"So you made yourself land here", the man asked, and I shivered at the sound of his voice- it was low, quite, almost caress against my ears.

"Oh !!! I'm the maid, did the other sevant here, not mentioned you, that I m one among you" I felt the color rising into my cheeks. The man looked up and down slowly, warily, not pleased from the fact that I called him one from the servant. He was dressed decently, not even a thought could doubt anyone of him being no one else but the owner, but why on the earth will the owner will come and meet me lonely. Even if I m being caught, then he could send his army of security guard to abandon form his ship. But him ... PERSONALLY !!!!! IMPOSSIBLE...

His gaze lingered at my tight jeans, his eyebrow rising in faint distaste when he came to my loose black T shirt, I was wearing over it.

"So you think, We All Are stupid here, The security guards stand for no purpose !!! You were spotted from the time you clued youself over the edge of the ship" My face flooded with blood and I swallowed again feeling my mouth go completely dry. It wasn't just the fact that I was discovered; it was something about the man presence. I pressed my lips together and tried to come up something; anything at all.

My heart pounded in my chest as the silence dragged out between us, the man continuing to look at me speculatively. I looked him up and down. I met his gaze once more. "you know, the journey is long and tend to be rather boring when you're on them alone... I thought of keeping you as my company" the man said, raising his dark eyebrow , the faintest hint of a smile tugging at the corner of his lips and his dark eyes warming with something like attraction.

"But that's odd... a girl seeking to invade to anyone's private ship !!!! AlONE !!!! Are you any agent?"

My hands were shakin, and I nearly tipped my balance. The man glanced at my legs and then my face, his dark gaze curious, penetrating. My heart was pounding in my chest, and my palms were clammy with sweat. I opened my mouth to speak but nothing came out.

The man reached out and took me by my arms; his fingers pressed into my skin firmly, and I cringed slightly, wondering if he knew how strng his grip was- he probably did.he guided and pulled me to a chair and pushed me down, "I hope you do realise that you've committed a very serious crime" the man said...

Precap : Kalpi being highly seduced...

I wrote it within an hour, and did not read it again . Kindly ignore gramatical errors. Next update will be tonight or till morning... pakka

Please share ur views,,...

Edited by dragonok - 10 years ago
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Lovely update. Poor kalpi but prem blames her for everything stupid
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awesome start dear.. Plz continue.. Waiting...
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Awesome update
prem is such a jerk 😡
kalpi is in so much pain😭
update next part soon

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