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Awwwesome update...after long wanted to say uff and wow in same line :)..uff for immense pain throughout and wow for her final step :)...there is so much to grasp ...so many emotions...such a rollar coaster day...in lives of all the people including readers...hehe...starting it from function till end of the day ...where she saying in the end "KHUSHI ", like her name every letter screaming there,A STRONG GIRL ...👏

excellent writing deeps...ufff bauhat hee acha likha...

loved the way u have shown khushi immense pain ...its like the intensity of pain increased with every step he was taking away from her...and i am sure his condition was nothing the less...one dying for his love other dying for her bestie...

ik aah tou nikali hogee...jo hum ney na sooni hogee...jatay jatay tum ney awaz tou dee hogee...

i guess it applies on both side...arnav and khushi ...the leaving behind or going away un voiced weils which are buried alive deep inside heart are unbelievable painful

poor lavuu how much guilty she was feeling that moment...but yeah she needs to be at peace in my eyes as at least she did tried...so she going to in laws for delivery ...loved her parting words with khushi...the foundation of arnav khushi relation...friendship ...and i felt so happy seeing khushi back in spirits when she said that she is not ready to let go of it...wow ,thats THE khushi :)

how beautifully u have shown arnav pain deeps...bangles ,ringlets..chain..her teary eyes...its aweee moment for me when he was comparing half empty half full glass ,the ice cube,the ripples..its beautiful writing👏...and then her waist chain metallic hardness with her metallic society...excellent writing...out class

seriously how much painful it is to know that someone is ur whole world but for that person u r not more than a friend..unfit...such a fit man thinking himself like this...i guess this word is having deep unlimited pain stored in it ...i guess pain screaming from every letter of it


i loved how garima is shown thinking about men types and her thoughts on new type of man ,arnav,...she came across such type for the first time...her trying to stop khushi...then payal ..whose character is so much real that mujhay dar lagta hay to point finger towards her ...as its easy to blame her but i dont know i dont have that much courage to blame her ...the one who is deprived throughout ...her emotions her jealousy her hurt...if i put my foot in her shoe...still i can't do justice ...one thing before khushi was leaving them ...loved it that she has shown mirror to every one there..

uff wt a mind blowing...soul shattering ... fight between khushi and shashi...loved this STRONG KHUSHI...if arnav is a great guy then khushi is a great woman...it proves here that both compliment each other :)...she was there with explanations and all but the moment shashi blamed arnav...the anger which was oozing out of her was mind blowing...she said it all...enough is enough...its too much pain and hurt when shashi link her infertility with arnav taking advantage of her...ufff...i guess thats a worst accusation ... i am so happy to see khushi leaving the house at that moment...as if money is loss nothing is loss...if health is something is loss but if character is loss everything is loss...and i guess a girl who is nothing but innocent pure soul,full of character...she is thrown into such filth by society including her father...its too much...thats the time an obedient khushi speaks out heart..thats the beauty of ur writing ,i loved ur timing deeps...its all about timing ...wt a bang on time...leaving behind nothing but all failours!!!

its so true and i believe this 100 % that diloon keh rishtay ,pyar keh rishtay ,ehsaas walay rishtay,khoon keh rishtoon say kahin berdh ker hotay hain..

his restless state...ufff how beautifully u have shown deeps...i got tears really...isn't pure heart sinks like that when some loved one is in difficult moments...how beautifully u portrayed his state...u r a brilliant writer with vision way par excellence...her landing at his place and telling her name to guard "khushi"...i felt like its a new refined khushi she is mentioning ...who is turned diamond after passing through endless heat up processes of coal mine of life



Edited by lalarukh - 10 years ago
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I'm here too... its NOT a res
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Every word touching the heart...loved it..if every woman had a man like Arnav in her life ..there will be no tears...
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A very heartening update this was...where Khushi was stuck between three ends Arnav...the society and loyalty towards her family. She albeit hastily did try to convince her family but then there is no pain greater than being doubted by those who culminated moral values in you...ones own parents. To be very honest after reading the teaser I had been expecting a heated conversation straight away and had been angry when Khushi felt intimidated by her father's ire but my respect and adoration for her went notches higher when she stood like a knight to protect Arnav from being tainted. That is the best part about ArHi in this FF, they way they fight for each other.
On the other hand Arnav's condition was miserable...what Khushi wanted to convey and what she spoke all jumbled up and this was sluicing his heart painfully. His love and pain have been beautifully described, his love totally pure and selfess. The way he synchronized everything with Khushi told the level to which she has been embedded in his life.
I just hope that Khushi is able to save their friendship and clarifies his importance in her life too. 😊
Edited by IpKkNdSaRunArHi - 10 years ago
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Ohh wow
Awesome teaser
Waiting for the update
Plsss update soon

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