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Posted: 9 years ago

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part 9
who ever is the writer knows very well how to hooked readers to story heads off to his/her talents I would like to know her name it's awesome to have such writers here...
now coming to story so happy to see Ram's possessiveness for Priya it shows how much he loves her & Priya first action to kiss him shows hod much she trust him after having so many fights still... it was really awesome to see such amazing story here thanks for posting... NeVi also coming closer to each other very soon... happy to know love is in the air... so now moving for next...

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leena

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Posted: 9 years ago

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part 10
Ram is truly man of his words why he promised Priya he did the same... I liked his this quality too... Rajat own nothing then just silent he is not that important to talk so from now won't say anything abt him in my next comments... but loved the whole part specially morning light romance of RaYa along with evening too so good to read such an amazing story moving doe next...

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leena

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Posted: 9 years ago

#363

part 11
RaYa got impressed with each other intelligence good too see RaYa not make any chance to argue on any matter it's really nice I enjoyed it a lot... now coming to RaYa's love I m just enjoying the flow of the story it's so awesome to read them together why I don't know but feel troubles f waiting for RaYa do moving fir next to read hope all go smooth...

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leena

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Posted: 9 years ago

#364

part 12
RaYa is so close yet so away awesome u date it is I just loved the way Ram is crazy in love with Priya... they r really lucky couple to have each other... Ram' anger always brings spices in story which I likes a lot so good to read whole part was amazing now moving for next...

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leena

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Posted: 9 years ago

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part 13
I had feelings g some thing hard is on the way to harsh RaYa it happened just that really Ram's anger is so bad he didn't even talked to her when she was returning to India. ... he becomes ragging bull why in anger hope that supreme from her family is not any new alliance from new boy... hoping for best finally Ram realized his mistakes happy to know that awesome update moving for next...

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CrzyCandid

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Posted: 9 years ago

#366

I read all the updates in one go. Really penned beautifully the story of Raya

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leena

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Posted: 9 years ago

#367

part 13
uff why do it ended very soon & in hustle bustle but loved the whole story & it's each & every part it was really good to know that everything settled down... my fear was true she actually got new alliance from that Chipku but Happy Ram settled down everything & handled nicely I was also crazy in RaYa love & their awesome love story which gave peace toy heart... too good way to batter waiting for more... Veena ji plz ask the writer to write more I loved stories made by them so pls request...

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