' pyar tumhi se kr baithe~~unexpected love ' LAST PART on Pg

Zeenath Sheikh

@zeenathsheikh8

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Posted: 11 years ago

#321

Di, itni jaldi kyun khatam kardiya iss Story ko,
Anyways Awesome Update👏

Btw very excited to read your new story...aisa kya hoga iss nayi kahani mein ki RaYa ek nahin ho payenge? Jaanne ke liye zaroor padhoongi...

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punijesus

@punijesus

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Posted: 11 years ago

#322

Superb.. awesome. ... extraordinary. .. loved it. perfect ending.. thank u sis for tis wonderful story

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rosinagoor

@rosinagoor

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Posted: 11 years ago

#323

Veena
Awesome update & Very beautiful ending 👏
I love all the scenes
I love Ram very much
Thanks for the Wonderful story & Thanks for the PM too 😊

I am always ready to read your story dear
I am eagerly waiting for your new story
come back soon with Update 😊

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Cute_Saakshii12

@Cute_Saakshii12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#324

It was an Awesome story di!!!
loved it!!
love the ending!!
and thanks 4 pm!!

well talking about ur next story...i think its gona be interesting with some newness!!!
so waiting 4 it!!!

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jmehta1957

@jmehta1957

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Posted: 11 years ago

#325

Perfect ending...waiting for next story...lekin kuch samaj nahi payi raya hai par raya ban nahi paye..wht does it means...bina raya plzzz big nooo...plzzz.

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jmehta1957

@jmehta1957

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Posted: 11 years ago

#326

Perfect endind...plzz start a new story..eagerly waiting for that. .but samaj nahi payi ki new story..raya hai lekin raya ban nahi paye...plsss yaar dont want sad ending story...plzzz yaar...a big nooo plzzz .if u planed like this plsss change the story...

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veena singh

@veena23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#327

Originally posted by: jmehta1957
Perfect endind...plzz start a new story..eagerly waiting for that. .but samaj nahi payi ki new story..raya hai lekin raya ban nahi paye...plsss yaar dont want sad ending story...plzzz yaar...a big nooo plzzz .if u planed like this plsss change the story...

Hahaha...m raya ke sath bore ho gyi hu ek hi cheez karte karte..aur ab to start kar diya h in my way..dekhte hain if people dnt like it will defently end that...

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MyLuvRaShi

@MyLuvRaShi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#328

Awesome story
Good ending n thanks for the PM
Eagerly waiting for your new story

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jmehta1957

@jmehta1957

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Posted: 11 years ago

#329

Originally posted by: veena23

Hahaha...m raya ke sath bore ho gyi hu ek hi cheez karte karte..aur ab to start kar diya h in my way..dekhte hain if people dnt like it will defently end that...

Ohhh no..plss..i am a fan of ur writing...i am sorry to say...pls dont mind...if ram nd priya milenge nahi to mai to nahi padhungi...mai ram aur priya se bilkul bore nahi hui hoon.i think no one wants that...plsss

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