AU SaHil 3Shot: Dear Aahil; Last Part Updated/Page 1 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Amazing job
Lovely ending
They're adorable together
Really enjoyed reading it
Thanks!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
This was so awesome
loved it to the core
beautifully written😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
This was just so beautiful!

Every emotion could be felt..

What Sanam felt at different stages even we could feel...

Write more of these...

Give another update to complete it! :)

Loved reading it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Nice update... Aahil love her tooo and its their wedding


is there any epilouge????
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Sweet story.👏
But I am with Sanam- He should have confessed first!😛 Coward!😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it! Oh so loved it! 👏


I have no words to describe how beautiful this is! You've really left me in a heavy awe.. The idea, the dialogues and the anticipation was so well described!

And I loved this following words. It has something so unique yet innocent touch to it. 👏


When did I start wanting to breathe in your scent . . . touch your warmth . . . soak in your personality . . . burrow myself so deep inside of you that no one could find me? When did I start wanting something more? I guess what I really want to know is . . . when did I grow up?


And then came their conversation at the dance floor. I could really picture it out in front of me. the scenario you chose to describe was so beautiful. I totally love Sanam and the way she replied to Aahil.


"I had to make the effort. Not only because I'm happy that you found the love of your life, but also because I'm the ex-fiance. They'll all be looking at me, too. I wanted to be bold. I wanted to make a statement."


I seriously could quote the whole thing - which I so wish I could! It's so romantic and beautiful and most importantly it's filled with so much innocence and passion. 😳


"She will be my companion. She will support me. She will be the mother of my children. And when I come home at night ...," he said softly, "when I come home at night, she'll be waiting for me.
"


And the huge confrontation happens! I'm crying buckets over here. It's so intense and heartfelt. ❤️


"I kept on hoping that you would stop the wedding'. I kept on hoping you would claim me"


*Sigh* I really have no words left to tell you how happy I am for getting a chance to read this. All the parts has something unique in them and I loved the way you wrote the characters. Honestly, for me, it was like I was watching a sophisticated movie. You deserve all the love for this one! 👏🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was simply gorgeous ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@Pagalpinky, @muskaan17rocks, @asyafreva, @dundumol96, @chicksoup, @noesha, @mahwash22, and @Raingoddess . . .

Thank you all for leaving a comment and liking the story. 😳

Comments/compliments/appreciation of the story shown in any small way are always a huge encouragement for me and make me want to write even more. 🤗 And I appreciate each and every one of you who took the time to comment.

I'll be sure to update my fanfic soon and think up other stories to write. 😆

As for an epilogue, as some of you have asked, I don't think I'll be doing one, but never say never. If there is inspiration . . . maybe from the show? . . . I will definitely write one. 😉
Edited by darkice7_12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
loved the twist, not exactly expected and it came out so nicely!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
the first 2 chapters actually got me so worried! I was like where is this going?! 😲 but then the third part made me feel so much better. that was actually very clever the way you said the "bride" was actually a model! It was very unexpected! but still, the way you wrote it was wonderfull! 🥱

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