MaNan FF 'THE GREEK GOD' by Alohomora Chap 62 Pg 144 - Page 26

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Posted: 10 years ago
Goddd this manik is truelly a monster yaar ...so much of pressure ...poor nandu ...m jus waiting wen dis monster gonna change into human ...who will go head over heels for our adorable nandu ...

Newys good work gal...looking forward for next update ...n thanx for the pm ...

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Posted: 10 years ago
am always urs...how can he say this to soha...
alrdy m irrirtd wit sohas entry..bt pls dnt show deir romance n all..i vil get heart attack...
youtub video idea was too gud...
again manik n nandini bumpd to each othr...waiting for next...
plz update fast...
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Posted: 10 years ago
funny witty cool intriguing al at the same tine

update soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Keep going.. Keep going...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Let Soha be the next shikar of our Clumsy queen Nandu😉😆
A little touch up here and a little there will definitely add to the haunted feel that Soha gives already, vaise bhi world class gadha Manik ki life ko to ulta kar diya now let Soha taste Nandini's clumsiness😳
Edited by -Chandramukhi.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

~ CHAPTER TWENTY ~

Manik looked flustered at the very sight of Nandini. The first thing that came rushing into his mind was the YouTube videos followed by the uncomfortable memory of their "accidental" kiss in the mall. His lips started to tingle and grow increasingly warm as his heart began to remind his brain (against his wish) about how he had felt when they had locked that day. When it had happened, something inside had just gone BOOM!

Come on, admit it, said his heart, you liked that, didn't you? That warm, luscious feeling which spread from your lips down your...

Shut up! His brain was rebellious. I can never like that. And I never did like that!

Really? Why do you keep lying to yourself? I know you feel guilty and all that and I understand that you're confused. But admit it... you did feel good. In fact, Soha has never made you feel that good.

Shut up! Shut up! SHUT UP!

She was different. She felt different. Magical... Her lips were full and electrifying... unlike Soha's...

"Come to my cabin," Manik blurted out all of a sudden. His nostrils flared as his brain screamed within his skull and he looked shaken up. Without even bothering to help her up (or at least apologize), he stormed off to his cabin.

Mukti who had been watching this from a distance came running to Nandini's aid while Dhruv stood away speechlessly.

"You alright?" Mukti asked quietly.

"Yeah," whispered Nandini.

"What is wrong with this guy?" she said quietly through gritted teeth, "he moves around like his god damn pants are on fire. At least he could have apologized."

"That's okay," sighed Nandini as she struggled to her feet, "I think I'm getting used to this. And I guess I need to be a bit more careful."

"Nandini!" Manik bellowed from his cabin.

"Now what does this idiot want?" hissed Mukti.

"NANDINI!" This time he was louder.

Flabbergasted, Nandini hurried to his cabin and presented herself. "Here I am," she said quietly.

"Close that door," he ordered sternly to which she goggled fearfully. Now what?

"Are you deaf?" he snapped rudely.

Nandini was quick to act now. Without wasting another moment, she closed the door and locked it.

Manik glowered at her for a moment before passing his cell phone to Nandini. She looked at him with furrowed eyebrows before taking it. What she saw next made her eyes go as round as guavas and forced her to clamp her wide open mouth shut. No. On YouTube? No... this is not how it happened. We never kissed that long! No... this can't be happening. What will happen if Chacha and Chachy comes to know about this? And who all could have seen this by now! What will they think about me?

Nandini looked up with the same dumbfounded look in her eyes. "This is not true..." she stammered, "How can..."

"Exactly," scowled Manik, "and guess what? My girlfriend came to know about this too."

Nandini could now see the bigger picture. His baby. Wanted to see him soon. This was why. I think I'm in trouble again. Nandini felt unbelievably embarrassed at this new revelation. Now the entire world would see this hideous video until the creator decided to take it down... or at least... YouTube decided to.

"And I swear to God, if something happens to my relationship with Soha because of this... because of you... you'll wish that you were never born." Manik said each word dangerously low and hoarse. "And I'm warning you... from now on... you better stop it with your falling down and other dramas..."

"I wasn't acting..." She began to protest. But Manik cut her off.

"And stay away from me... and my life... far away..." He had his finger pointed at her face now.

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Note: Next update to be up in two hours or so. Keep watching this space ;)

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Posted: 10 years ago
I hope she stays away, he is very insulting
Poor girl I feel bad for her


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Posted: 10 years ago
um rly feeling bad fo nandu.
watz de wrong wid manik??
wat does he think of himslf???
he s damn irritatng.
cont soon dr.
cant wait.
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Posted: 10 years ago

"And stay away from me... and my life... far away..." He had his finger pointed at her face now.

Ouch...that really hurt, he sounds as if she is doing all this on purpose! Poor girl ..well I do agree till now she was defo clumsy but definetly doesn't deserve to be treated like this.

Love the way this story is progressing ..! Thumps up to u👏

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Posted: 10 years ago
wow...superb update
n i fell bad abt nandu...plss make manik jelous...i want jelous manik...n that idiot soha usko story se nikaldo...i really hate her...manik ne nandu ko insult kiya...poor nandu...hope manik realise his feeling for nandu soon
plss update ASAP
CANT wait more des...plss next part make it big one
eagerly waiting for next part

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