~*The Unknown Desire 2(RP)*~part 52 up pg. 64 on 13/08/16 - Page 37

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: angelsabreenxz

hey mahak it was dammed an awesome update...๐Ÿ‘ do pm me too plx



thank u dear that u liked my update and yeah sure will pm u. ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: arpita25

Finally tujhe yaad aaya ki is ko bhi update karna hai mujhe laga ki tu bhool gayi. ๐Ÿ˜†Nice update. ๐Ÿ‘
Good part and I am happy ki chahe thoda sa but u added Vardaan and Kajal's romantic moments.๐Ÿ˜ณ Shalabh and Mugdha's romance was also good.๐Ÿ˜‰ Shalabh is very sensible jo us ko laga ki abhi kiss karna will be hurry he should give her time to be closer to her.๐Ÿ˜Š But that was bad her parents made her day the worst nightmare and she is fed up with her parent's behavior. About Kajal and Vardaan he is really sweetheart. The way he took the responsibility of her mother and sister when he understood that Kajal has forgotten about it he managed everything and gave her a surprise. Even she was surprised how he did it all.๐Ÿ˜‰ She showed him fake anger but kitna gussa karegi? ๐Ÿ˜‰ I loved the song u choose.๐Ÿ˜ณ
Update ab jaldi se karna my sweety.


Happy Birthday again!!!!! ๐Ÿฅณ๐Ÿฅณ๐Ÿฅณ



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

Nice part Vertika.๐Ÿ˜ƒ



thanks Suhana ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07

Hey Vartika thanks darling for updating.๐Ÿ˜Š Nice update.๐Ÿ‘ You know whenever u show Vardaan romance it's cherry on the top.๐Ÿ˜ณ Love u for that.๐Ÿค— And this time we have two romances one was VK and another was MS.๐Ÿ˜ณ U know what I wanted to say.๐Ÿ˜‰ Vardaan is really darling how much he cared for Kajal's family. He did things as they are his and yes they are.๐Ÿ˜Š The way he felt his responsibilities towards Kajal's mom and Anchal was so sweet and see the consequences they liked him.๐Ÿ˜ƒ Anchal specially who found him extremely handsome.๐Ÿ˜‰ Mugdha was broken seeing her parents fighting at this occasion when she was so happy about her results.๐Ÿ˜ญ What makes their relation sore? Update soon and do clear mus soon.

Belated Happy Birthday to you.๐Ÿฅณ๐Ÿค—



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: poorvi16

Hey Vartika dii!!!! ๐Ÿค— Love u for the update!!!! ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

Nice one!!!! ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

I loved Shalabh and Mugdha's parts and Vardaan Kajal to usually best hain hi!!!!!!! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
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Vardaan is so darling he remembered that once Kajal mentioned that her mother is coming and he that's why rushed to pick them!!!!!!


Kajal forgot that I think!!!!! ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›

Mugdha was so happy because of both the reasons but in this update and the previous update u forgot to mention Mugdha's result!!!!!! ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜•

But her family made that day sad for her and she spent the whole night crying!!!!!! ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Try to update fast diii!!!!!!!!!!!



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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 49:-

Both became silent now thinking deeply what's wrong has been done by them. Mugdha's dad was thinking it was his fault that at her result day he should had tried to show more composure whereas Mugdha's mom thought it was her mistake that she didn't take divorce from him otherwise her daughter would have supported her.

Back in her room Mugdha was in deep thought. "Why my parents can't behave like normal married couples? Agar dad financially strong nahi ban paye to he is not wrong and if mom is stronger than him financially than it's her efficiency. She should understand that even dad is doing a job na. He even took a transfer for her when she got transferred. Mom kabhi nahi samajh sakti kisi ki feelings. Pehle dad ki feelings nahi samajh paayi ab meri bhi nahi samjhengi I am sure of that." She was crying talking to herself. Shalabh called her many times but seeing her mobile unanswered he was worried. "Kya hua is ladki ko why isn't she picking her phone."

After waiting for long an hour he dialed Sunny's number. "Tune itne raat me mujhe kyoun call kiya? Sab theek hai na? Aisa to nahi hai ki Mugdha ne aaj teri band baja di?"

"Chup kar be, tu humesha meri band hi bajata rahega bus."

"Nahi to ye time apun k liye hai hi nahi. Accha bata kya locha hai?"

"Locha ye hai ki Mugdha phone nahi utha rahi hai."

"To ye kaun sa locha hai be?"

"Hai kyoun nahi? Itne der se us ka phone laga raha hoon msg kar raha hoon but no response."

"Abe to ya koi hoga us k aas pass ya fir so gayi hogi."

"Itne jaldi nahi sote be."

"Abe insaan hi hai vo bhi, teri taraf se sab superman to hain nahi jin ko neend hi na aaye."

"Oye bus kar, maine kab kaha us ko neend hi nahi aana chahiye?"

"To so gayi hogi na vo, ab tu bhi so jaa aur kal us se baat karna."

"Sahi keh raha hai tu. Mujhe bhi lagta hai ki kabhi kabhi mai over react karta hoon."

"Koi baat nahi sab ka aisa hi haal hota hai is pyaar mohabbat k chakkar me. Accha hai apun abhi is chakkar me nahi hai."

"Bhagwan kare tujhe bhi ye chakkar jaldi lag jaye tab poochoonga tere se."

"Haan haan pooch lena."

Shalabh just smiled, "Hmm chal gud night."

"Gud night, jaa k soch aur Mugdha k sundar sundar sapne dekh." He teased him.

Next day:-

"Gud morning meri jaan kahan ho tum?" Vardaan messaged Kajal.

"Gud morning I am going to take bath." She replied back.

"Can I join u?" he asked naughtily.

She sent an angry smiley with a blushing one. "No I can bath alone in a better way."

Vardaan smile Reading her msg, "Meet u in parking in half an hour be ready."

Kajal smiled reading his sms and went to kitchen where her mom was making breakfast for her.

"Good morning maa."

"Good morning beta."

"Are tum itne jaldi ready ho gayi?"

"Haan maa mera to daily ka yai rotinue hai. Jaldi nikalti hoon but aate aate late ho jata hai. But u don't worry aaj mai jaldi aa jaaongi." She bid good bye to her mom and sis and came downstairs where Vardan was waiting for her.

"To yahan ho tum."

"Haan, always waiting for you jaan." Kajal blushed listening him.

"Tum na sach me pagal ho."

"Haan tumhare liye." He added.

Kajal hit his head playfully and said, "ab chalo na we are getting late."

"Bilkul late nahi hai tumhare saath to waqt kaise beet jata hai pata hi nahi chalta hai."

"Mujhe bhi aisa lagta hai."

"Kya?"

"Ki tumhare saath time kaise beet jata hai pata hi nahi chalta."Vardan thought something when Kajal asked, "Kya hua kya soch rahe ho?"

"Yahi ki is problem ko kaise solve kia jaye."

"Kaise?"

"Don't worry jaldi hi ho jayega." He has something in his mind which he wanted to tell Kajal later.

A few days later it was Anu's marriage and Kajal was informed about this from Anchal. Anchal and Prerna jee has attended all pri wedding functions of Anu. Kajal has to tell that all of them has to go to attend her marriage compulsorily as being busy in her office work she could not attend her mehndi and sangeet. It was afternoon and Prerna jee and Aanchal were gone to attend Anu's haldi and Mugdha and Shalabh were there as well. Mugdha and Anchal has become friends now and Vardan has got the invitation from Arjun's dad as both were really good friends.

"To aaj shaam ko date pe chalein?"

"No Vardan aaj nahi ho payega."

"That's not fair kitne din ho gaye tum pe mere saath acche se time bhi spend nahi kiya." He complained like a small kid.

Kajal was also sorry but being busy because of her mother n sister she was not getting time as well," I really am sorry Vardan I know I am a bit unfair with you now a days as u know ghar pe mom wait kar rahi hoti hain aur mai kaam khatam hote hi ghar chali jati hoon aur raat me bhi itne der tak busy rehti hoon ki aaj kal baat bhi nahi ho pati tum se dhang se."

Vardan smiled looking at her cute face, taking her hand in his he kissed it and said, "I know Kajal aaj kal tum par kitne responsibility badh gayi hai and I can clearly see how lovely daughter you are. You are my pride Kajal and be always just like this. I am all yours and will be yours forever so I am at back seat you first give company to mom n Anchal, I know rest of the time and life is mine."

She smiled looking at him and now day by day her love for him is increasing as she feel her choice the perfect and so understanding. Huging him she said, "I love you Vardan and pls never leave me." He smiled and hugged her back.

While droping her back to the home she asked, "Tum bhi aaj jaldi ja rahe ho?"

"Haan yaar dad called me to said attend his friend's son's marriage today with mom as u know he is out."

"Hmmm to kis ki shaadi hai?"

"Arjun Sehgal"

Kajal found the name familiar. "Arjun Sehgal getting married with Anu Khurana in Krishna Lawn?"

"Yes, but tum kaise janti ho un logon ko?"

"Are Anu is the best friend of Anchal to last three days se vo vahin ja rahi hai har function attend karne."

"Oho...it means we are going to attend the same function." Vardan said exitedly whistling.

"I think so."

"Fine than I will pick u up at 8:30 pm." He said.

"Are you mad Vardan? Mere saath mom n Anchal bhi hongi."

"To kya hua? I can drop all three of you there." He suggested.

"But mai mom ko kya bataoongi ki tum hume vahan le kar kyoun ja rahe ho?"

"Are is me bahana banane ki kya jaroorat hai? U tell them ki mai bhi to ja raha hoon vahan to I thought to give u three company varna late ho jayega aur itne raat me kahan kuch bhi milega? Mujhe bhi invite kiya gaya hai na mai koi bin bulaye nahi ja raha hoon."

Kajal was still not covinced, "U sure mom maan jayengi?"

"Are yaar itna sochne ki kya jaroorat hai maan jayengi aur haan vaise bhi mai apne jaan ko raat me akele jane nahi de sakta pata chala koi mujh se chura k tum ko le gaya to?"

Kajal laughed at his silly logic but she remember something, " N maa?"

"Maa to rahengi na tumhari."

"Oho meri maa nahi stupid tumhari maa I mean humari maa."

"Haan to accha hi hai na, isi bahane vo dono log ek doosre se mil bhi lenge.." he suggested.

"Baat to sahi hai." She liked it.

In evening:-

"I am coming jaan be ready and don't keep me waiting." He smsed her. He reached there on time and blow the horn.

"Kisi ko lena hai kya beta?"

"Haan aap ki hone waali bahu ko." He said smiling.

"Kajal bhi aa rahi hai kya party me?"

"Haan maa, Kajal hi nahi us ki maa aur sis bhi aa rahi hain. Actually Kajal ki sister Anchal Arjun ki would be wife hai and that's why all three of them are here and going to attend the wedding."

"And what about her dad?" Vaishnavi jee asked.

"I just don't know maa...bus all I know is ki he doesn't live with them and Kajal takes care of everything of her family."

Vaishnavi jee suddnely felt proud of his son's selection when he told her about it, "Beta...pata nahi what should I say about it but I am really proud of your selection. Just like I chose your father and supported him and now he is here on his own you chose a girl who is standing all by herself and about her father don't ask her about it jab vo khud samjhegi is baare me tab vo tum ko khud batayegi."

This was one of the things he loved about his mother the most. Vardaan felt proud of her mother and he knew so well that his father is gonna understand the same thing in future and his mother was right as he already knew that. Thinking about these things his eyes fell on a beautiful scene in front of him where he found his lady love coming from his house. Her just one look blown away all his senses. "How can someone look so beautiful and irresistable?"

Although he said it in very low tone but his mom heared it and looked at the direction in which Vardaan was looking. "Oho to aa gayi meri honewaali bahu." To which Vardaan realized what he just said.

"I'm sorry maa...vo maine dhyan nahi diya ki aap ho yahan." He was embarrased.

"It's ok beta...I can understand how much you love Kajal." Vardaan just gave a small smile and Kajal, Prerna jee and Anchal were reached up to his car. Vardaan came out and opened the door of car of back seat while he touched Prerna jee's feet.

"Aunty namaste."

"Namaste beta jeete raho aur khoob khush raho."

Kajal touched Vaishnavi jee's feet and took her blessings, "Maa namaste and sorry for kept you waiting."

Prerna jee looked at them in surprise when Kajal called her maa. Vaishnavi jee looked at her and said smiling, "Koi baat nahi beta. Mera intezaar to vaise bhi tum se milne k baad khatam ho gaya." And with a pause she added, "Aur haan you are looking really pretty."

"Thanks," Kajal said blushing while she was continously feeling Vardaan's gaze fixed over her.

"Are beta hume milaogi nahi apni maa se. Vardaan bol raha tha ki tumhari maa aayi hue hain."

"Are haan mai to bhool hi gayi. Maa ye Vardaan ki mom hain aur ye meri younger sister Anchal."

"Namaste aunty." Anchal said.

"Namaste," Prerna jee said.

"Namaste, are beta aap to bahut hi pretty ho bilkul apne sister jaise." To which Anchal blushed.

"Thank u aunty."

"Are tum bhi ab itne formal mat ho jao jab Kajal mujhe maa kehti hai to ab se tum bhi kehna." Prerna jee was watching all this but she was getting confused.

"Mom let's leave we are getting late."

"Are haan, aaiye aap log baithye." And Vardaan seated them on back seat while Vaishnavi jee seated besides him. It was suggested by Vardaan as he didn't want Prerna jee to have any doubt. Kajal was just seated behind him and he fixed his back mirror on her face. He was constantly staring at her while Vaishnavi jee teased him in his ears, "Will you able to drive?"

"Mom," he said irritated to which Vaishnavi jee just smiled back.

Soon they reached in to the party and everyone met Vardaan and Vaishnavi jee. Sunny and Anchal were happy to be together and Prerna jee was talking to Durga jee. Vaishnavi jee was busy with some of her friends who were also there after meeting Anu's mom. Senseing it a right time to share some precious moments with Kajal he pulled her in a silent corner.

"Vardaan...what is this?" she asked shocked. He kept his palm over her mouth.

"Be silent Kajal itna bolti kyoun ho? Koi aa jayega yahan agar itna shor machaogi to."

"Par hum yahan kar bhi kya rahe hain?"

Taking her hands in his and kissing it he said, "Romance aur kya?"

"Is this a right time for romance or is it a right place for romance."

"Meri jaan romance ka koi bhi time and slot nahi hota. Kabhi bhi kahin bhi kar sakte hain."

"Vardaan you have gone mad. Maa and meri maa dhoondh rahi hongi hum ko." She reasoned.

"No one is searching for us both of our mothers are busy with someone."

"Shut up, let's go back now."

"No way, bahut mushkil se ye time mila hai and I'm not going to waste it." He said gazing her hard which made her look down. His gaze was that much intent and passionate that Kajal was unable to hold it.

"Aise mat dekho mujhe Vardaan."

"Kyoun?"

"Bus mat dekho na please."

"Tum ko mujhe batana padega kyoun?"

"Tum bus aise mat dekha karo." Saying this she hugged him unable to face his gaze anymore.

"Mujhe pata nahi tha ki meri ek gaze ne tum ko itna hila diya hai to mai aur bhi bahut kuch karta."

"Shut up."

"Don't shut up me." Saying this he moved her up to his face and taking her face in his hands he kissed her forehead gently. Then he kissed her both eyes and next his target was her little nose. Next her target was her sensous lips and he preceded in that direction but she stopped him. "Kya hua?"

"Kuch nahi but you know." She pointed at her lipstick. "Agar ye kharab ho jayegi tos ab kya sochenge?"

"Ye to hai." He said thoughtfully, "To ek kaam karta hoon mai is ki kami kahin aur se poori kar leta hoon."

"Kaise?" but after that he didn't let her speak as she was just busy moaning his name while he started kissing her neck line and so on... She was left speechless by his action. She knew that it was not a ideal place but the passion and desire in him was making him week so she couldn't object and she also was loving the shower of love on her.

After some time:-

"Ab humein chalna chahiye vapas party me."

"Hmmm, man nahi kar raha hai yahan se jane ka."

"Ab chalo jayda drama mat karo samjhe." And she literally dragged her to the party where her mother was waiting for her.


Edited by Mahak Sinha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice and lovely update Vartika.. ๐Ÿ‘
Akhir tujhe apne kisi FF ki yaad to aayi itne din baad.๐Ÿ˜‰ I agree with your decision that your FF must be finished soon. Vardaan and his mom's thought for Kajal is so genuine and lovely.๐Ÿ˜Ž If each and every family thinks like that the problem of dowry will be solved from this society soon. Vardaan's mom never fails to tease her son. ๐Ÿ˜‰ Vardaan is blown by her beauty totally and as soon as he found time for romance he didn't miss that opportunity.๐Ÿ˜ณ Poor Mugdha she id damn frustrated about her family and her parents specially her mom ๐Ÿ˜ญ and Shalabh's worries are natural.๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Update this FF very soon.

Edited by arpita25 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey finally I am happy that u remember some of your FF. ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›

Nice and cute update full of understanding by Vardaan's mom and him. ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

This mom and son are the best I swear. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ I wish I can ever get such boy.

He never leaves a chance to romance with Kajal and what can he do when she was looking extremely beautiful which made him speechless. ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

I loved how his mother teased him would he able to drive? ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
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What I think is Kajal's mother
is doubting something is fishy. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰

Vaishnavi jee was feeling proud that Vardaan chose Kajal as his life partner. ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

Update fast sweety..

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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally you remember to update any of your FF. ๐Ÿ˜†

Lovely and cute update where Vardaan and Kajal found romancing.๐Ÿ˜‰ Vardaan was just waiting for a right moment to spend some precious and special moments with her. I just loved to appreciation Kajal got as being Vardaan's choice and he is awesome as he felt himself proud of his selection. Anchal got a good compliment by Vaishnavi jee.๐Ÿ˜Š Wooo Sunny proposed Anchal but she didn't say yes or no and she needs time that is more matured. ๐Ÿ˜‰
Shalabh is so much worried about Mugdha as it's obvious when she will not take his calls but Sunny is indeed smart. ๐Ÿ˜›
Ab meri maa do update it soon.

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