~*The Unknown Desire 2(RP)*~part 52 up pg. 64 on 13/08/16

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poorvi16

@poorvi16

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Posted: 9 years ago

#371

Nice update Di and thanks for updating. 😊 😊

Lovely update with full of romance of Kajal and Vardaan.. 😉 😉

Vardaan was clearly bold to see her in the party dress that's why his mom didn't leave the opportunity to tease him.😉 😉

Sunny proposed Anchal interesting.😳 😳 Let's see what she decides.😉 😉

I hate Mugdha's mom she is so inhuman and over dominating.. 😡 😡

Update asap di..

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m.bahety

@m.bahety

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Posted: 9 years ago

#372

Hii Vertika,

Sabse pehle to I always took Rajeev and Priyanka as Rajveer and Naina! Unhe Kisi aur roop me mene imagine hi nahi Kia...mujhe RN hamesha made for each other lagte hai..isliye jab mene dekha Ki is bar RN nahi balki Vardaan aur Kajal hai to ek bar to mujhe bahut bura laga.. Ek baar to mene socha Ki me ye fic na padhu par fir socha Ki ye fic to meri dost ne likhi hai to Mein nahi padhungi to ye to unfair hoga na...

Fir jab mene isse padhna shuru Kia to mujhe realize Hua Ki Mein gitni galat thi...Iss story me sirf naam alag hai but atma aur pyaar to RN ka hi hai...Aur wese bhi har character ko simao me bandhna galat hai..unhe behne Dena chahiye tabhi to alag alag rang aur jazbaat dekhne milenge..

Iss fic ne Rajeev aur Priyanka ke sath justice Kia hai..chahe Rajveer Ho ya Vardaan pyar to wahi hai...iss fic me bhi pyar wahi intensity wahi kashish hai...but story as usual sabse alag..

Kudos to you!! Tumhari soch aur writing ko salaam hai dost!!

Maan jao meri baat ban jao professional writer..Aur ha agar ban jao to mujhe bhul mat Jana..

Anyways update soon and mujhe PM krna mat bhulna..

I love you

Luv
Megha

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Akanksha

@agm1998

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Posted: 9 years ago

#373

Hey! Vardaan and kajal are soo adorable. They compliment each other soo well .

Loved d scene btw Vardaan nd his mom.😆

Kajal's mom is soo confused with kajal calling Vardaan 's mom maa😳

Vardaan's mom teases him while he drives 😳😳

Vardaan doesn't leave a single chance to romance kajal😳

Plz post d next update

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Rainu Gupta

@Rainu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#374

Hy.. M a new reader but I've read your previous stories... N dey wer awesome... Zindagi bus yu Hi was my favorite... Chahat n rest wer also NYC.. I only read Raj Naina fictions as they are my favorite couples... I was very small when the serial started bt still it was my most favorite

When I saw it again in Sony pal recently I downloaded all its episodes.. And aft getting a smartphone I strtd searching for more about it n I came to knw smethng lyk fanfic.. I strtd reading all lrl fanfictions... I was reading zbyh at nyt around 8pm n I dnt knw whn tym passed n it became morning..

I was happy reading such beautiful story but at the same tym felt lyk crying whn it ended... Sarthak's love for muskaan was really beautiful n I cnt express in words.. I wish someone lovd me dat wy...

I just want to say u r blessed with sch a grt talent dat without evn watching it to be enacted just by reading we feel lyk its real n occurring in front of our eyes... U lft me simply speechless...

Currently m reading ds fic.. 'The unknown desire' its also amazing.. I love it n can visualize Raj n Naina in front of my eyes in dose characters ...plz continue ds fic soon n for a longer duration...

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Rainu Gupta

@Rainu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#375

N yes as I said I only read Raj Naina fics.. Among all d stories yours are d best n unique every tym... U are simply awesome.. I had a long lost desire dat Raj n Naina could sme Hw unite n u made me think it ws possible... Ds couple along wd kmh arjun arohi wer my only fav..

I ws only 8yrs old whn lrl was aired... I din knw Wht love ws bt I usd to say mum I want someone jst lyk Raj..

M fm army background n evn ivl hljoin d sme aft getting graduated... I hope I get my raj. Who vl love me n also his nation...

Thx once again fo making me feel ds union of RN possible...

M emotionally touched by ur stories n I really adore u fo ua skills.. All d bst fo further writing.. N I think u cn truly become a vry gud writer or a novelist or evn a script writer if u gv it a try..'''. Luv u fo ds skil of urs'

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poorvi16

@poorvi16

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Posted: 9 years ago

#376

Dii is ko bhool gayi aap kya? 😕 😕 😕

Fir is ko bhi update karo.

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#377

Originally posted by: prerna1
nyc part..

thank u so much 😊 😊 😊

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#378

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit
Nice part Vertika..😃

thank u 🤗🤗🤗

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#379

Originally posted by: arpita25
Nice and lovely update Vartika.. 👏
thanks Arpu 😊 😊 😊

Akhir tujhe apne kisi FF ki yaad to aayi itne din baad.😉 I agree with your decision that your FF must be finished soon.
Thanks,Haan it has to be finished soon as it has been long it's running. 😊 😊 😊

Vardaan and his mom's thought for Kajal is so genuine and lovely.😎 If each and every family thinks like that the problem of dowry will be solved from this society soon.
Well said, no doubt in that. 😊 😊 😊

Vardaan's mom never fails to tease her son. 😉 Vardaan is blown by her beauty totally and as soon as he found time for romance he didn't miss that opportunity.😳
She is lovely and smart mom who is so friendly with him.😉 😉 😉

Poor Mugdha she id damn frustrated about her family and her parents specially her mom 😭 and Shalabh's worries are natural.😃
Yeah, actually he doesn't know about her family that's why he was worried.

Update this FF very soon.

Thank u so much dear for comment 🤗🤗🤗

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#380

Originally posted by: varshita
Hey finally I am happy that u remember some of your FF. 😛
I do remember it darling but sometimes I never get time to update it. 😛 😛 😛

Nice and cute update full of understanding by Vardaan's mom and him. 👏
Thank u dear 😊 😊 😊

This mom and son are the best I swear. 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 I wish I can ever get such boy.
We all think in that way sweety 😉 😉 😉

He never leaves a chance to romance with Kajal and what can he do when she was looking extremely beautiful which made him speechless. 😳
That's the love and you never stop loving your beloved. 😳 😳 😳

I loved how his mother teased him would he able to drive? 😉😉

😆 😆 😆

What I think is Kajal's mother is doubting something is fishy. 😉
Yeah, actually she doesn't know about that.

Vaishnavi jee was feeling proud that Vardaan chose Kajal as his life partner. 😊 😊 😊
Yes, Kajal deserve to be the pride. 😊 😊 😊

Update fast sweety..