RIMA 3S: BROKEN HEARTS (final part & epilogue - pg.19) Dt. 22/09) - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Fab update.
They r in too much pain n hurting each other.
Feel there is a third hand in all this mess up.
Waiting for the story to start.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fantastic start, Sudha di.
I'm sure u r gonna rock this new style of writing as well.
Waiting to read more.
All d best for ur exams. 👍🏼
Thanks for d pm. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Awesome prologue👏
Totally different from your usual stories, yet an awesome start!
I'm really curious to know about what happened in Rishbala's life???😒
Both r accusing each other of cheating😲
I guess some third person or may b more have created misunderstandings between them...hope they will b cleared soon
All d best for ur xams👍🏼

really xcited to read more...cont soon

& don't forget to PM me...I reappy love to read ur stories
Edited by RAONE8 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue sounds very interestim..
Both are not loyal to eachother..
Pls continue soon and do pm me..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome prologue. Totally different from ur stories. Rk mistrust madhu ,caught her with other person. He is full of hatred. How u mend their broken hearts ,want to know.
Continue .
All the best for ur exams n I want pm when u update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome 3S update 👏woah what an Furious beginning very different story 😉 u wrote it fabulously dear 👏sudha do continue the story i do want to read this 👍🏼 I guess someone is creating a big misunderstanding between RishBala there must be a big reason why both think each other wrong that lead them to hate each other now and may be someone is forcing Madhu on the name of hurting Rk But i m sure if madhu is preggy then the baby is of Rk only 🤔 i m sure you would write this story also perfectly as u do with your other ones dont be nervous we love the stories u write u r too my one of the fav writer 🤗 so keep writing and updating will wait and thanks for pm !! 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats for new story
nice prologue
rk is accusing madhu and madhu is pregnant
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Surprise!!😉😆
Well, i really want to put u all out of ur misery...😆
So updating the first part now...😆
I got a study break lol... Today maintenance day so no power & i was so bored so wrote the update quockly as it contains the prologue part too...😆

Thank u so so much for ur likes & comments & encouraging me to write further... I m so glad... But i m little busy as u know so couldnt able to reply to ur comments... Pls excuse this time for not replying to ur precious comments... i love them all... But this will not happen again... As i will be posting the next update after my exams so i can leisurely read & reply to ur comments later...

U might feel this part boring... Sorry i cant help it... But i will try to write better in future... No time to proof read... So ignore mistakes...😳

PART - 1

(Merging scenes which took place at Malik & Kundra Mansion) 🤣

"Divorce Notice? You want divorce from, Me?" Madhu asked in shock with tear brimming eyes.
"Yes, I don't like you & I don't want you in my life. I cant wait to get rid of u" Sultan, Her husband said with a casual shrug.

"Rk, You can't do this to me, baby. I'm your dips, you love me & I love you. I don't want a divorce" Dipali faked a cry & begged him
"Yes. I want Divorce from you, Bitch" Rk snarled. "And that's final" he declared.

"But, Why?" Madhu demanded for an explanation. "We were happy right? What brings to this? Why you don't like me? You said you loved me & you will be my side forever right? If I had done anything to displease you please forgive me sultan. Please!" She was utterly shocked by Sultan's behaviour. She knew things were not going good between them as she could find changes in his behavior for the past few months but she thought it was due to work tension or something silly mistakes of her would have upset him but never ever once thought things will come to this stage.
"You have done everything to displease me, you are not true to me. You were seeing other men when I m not with you" Sultan accused her cold heartedly. He just want to get rid of her as he had know use with her anymore. He had taken everything from her, her virginity, her whole property which she blindly trusted him like a fool & transferred in his name thinking he was a saint. Well, who will not think that when he painted that image? He worked in Malik Group of companies & earned Malik, Madhu's father's trust, he trusted him so much to even give his daughter's hand to him & also made Sultan the CEO of Malik group of companies as he was madhu's husband now & he will be taking care of his empire from now on & then one fine day Malik died in Heart attack & that made Madhu even more vulnerable & she became so dependent on him, she too fell prey for his fake love act & when once he pulled another act saying he was not of his class, he was not rich like her & that makes her see him in different eye & to prove the point that she loves him dearly & money doesnt matter she like a fool transferred all her properties in his name including her house. After getting all he wanted from her he started torturing sexually & mentally.

"Why Rk? Why? What wrong I did? Why you are punishing me for no reason?" Dipali asked in tears.
"You want a reason? You bloody wh**e! After seeing you naked in another f**ker's arms you expect me to give you the status of Rishab Kundra's wife?" Rk shouted. He trusted her implicitly even after the man who he considered more like a brother, his confidant, his P.A, Bittuji had told him that dipali was not good for him, she was only behind him for his money, she was not a wife material & she had affairs someone else, but he didnt listen to him, he just shouted at him for accusing his wife like that & said he trusted Dipali more than his life but now since he had seen all by himself, he has to shamefully agree that she was a gold digging wh**e acting all good as a perfect wife showing so much love & care but all were fake. It hurts him that some he loved dearly back stabbed him.
"Oh god! How the hell he came to know about my affair with Sultan? We were always careful in being discreet but we got caught red handed. But I should convince him some how & stay in this house at least till I get a huge some of money" Dipali thoughts.
"Rk, how could you accuse me like that? I know that Bittuji would have brain washed you again. You believe him but not your loving wife?"
"I know I was acting stupid in my blind love for you but I m not dumb. You were under surveillance, you bitch. You are forgetting you are my wife, The Rishab Kundra' wife, being a business magnate I have earned lots of enemies & to protect you whom I consider precious in my life so far from them I had appointed close protection officers who were been watching you closely which you didnt know till date as I didnt want to alert you or worry but that turned out to be the best move taken by me to catch you red handed.

"Please! Please! Don't say like that. I can't take it. I have never cheated you. I'll never cheat you. I love you" Madhu cried covering her hands over her ears to shut his cruel accusation.
"I don't have anything to do with u anymore... I m done with u... So get out of my house" Sultan says cunningly.

"Rk, those were cooked up story... I can never think of another man... I feel like worms crawling on my body if its not ur touch... Then how come i be in another man's arms??" Dipali put an oscar winning act to convince him & get back him to track.
"I don't want to hear your bullshit. Just sign the papers & get lost. Never show your ugly face to me, you deceiving bitch" Rk roared like a lion.
"Baby, please... Let me explain u"
"What u will say for this?? What story u will cook probably to make me believe u??" He asked angrily throwing the pics taken of her with sultan in emarrassing pose all cozy on bed taken by the CPO's surveillance camera.
Dipali was stunned seeing her photos with Sultan which was of last night when he had called her to meet her in a hotel saying he was tired of acting a goody good husband after achieving what he wanted from his innocent naive wife. So he wanted to pull off the drama by kicking her out of his life & start a new life with his lover dipali. But dipali was not successful in her target of fooling Rk & getting access to his properties as he was a hard nut to break. So she asked sultan to be little patient & then they spent the night together as dipali assumed Rk was not in town as he had gone to pune on business but he came right back when he got the decieving photos of dipali from his CPO's & went straight to an advocate to throw a divorce on her face as a prize for her betrayal. He was wounded by her act but he was not a weakling to let her rule over him & take all her dirty shit.

"Where I will go? You are my life! You are my everything. Please don't push me away from your life" Madhu begged.
"Hey, cut the crap. I can't stand a bitch like u. Dont tell me u r so pure & honest to me. U r a cock blocking bitch who cant satisfied by one man so u found another. Dont tell me the guy, Mukkund in the opposite flat is ur new dick. Go sleep with him for all i care." Sultan venomous words piecred her heart deeply. She was not a wh**e to look for men to fill her desire. She was not raised like that. She was never short of anything. She was shamsher Malik's only daughter & he showered her with so much love as she lost her mother the moment she was born. She was grown with luxury but she never desired of wealth. She desired only for true love & care. She was her daddy's daughter who follows every wish as a command so without even seeing the man he chose for her or knowing about him she agreed to marry him, the man who was now killing her with cruel words. Even after marriage she poured all her love to this man & was faithful to him though she heard lots of humours about him having extra marital affairs but her trust on him over powered everything & thought all were just a baseless rumour but today she know it was all true... f**king damn well true. He didnt love her even an ounce. He decieved not only her but also her deceased father who trusted him & gave his biggest possession his precious daughter to him only to be treated her like a shit. Fate can never be cruel to a sweet innocent pure girl like madhu. Her heart was broken completely... Will it be mended ever?? Time will answer.

"Rk, i m sorry... I m sorry... I was scared. I couldnt tell u but trust me i didnt do that willingly. He threatened me that he will kill u if i didnt give what he wants. He wanted me & to save u i laid myself to him. Trust me. I did everything for u" dipali weaved a new story in the instance as she realised she was losing the battle but she cant give up so soon.
"Oh really?? U don't know me dipali. U really dont know me. Dont forget u r showing off in front of Rk. How much i loved u was true, the same way the hatred now i have for u is also f**king well true. I wont hesitate to kill u this moment & dispose ur body. So get the hell out of my house. I can never stand ur lies anymore" Rk growled at her. He was angry as hell as his pain was deep to do so.
"Where will i go?? U r all i have" Dipali begged.
"Go to hell or go sleep with him, I don't care" Rk seethed.

"Sleep with him? He was just my friend" Madhu reasoned. "He help me a lot in hour of need. I was sick so i was asking help from him yesterday but u mistook everything & blaming me. You have any idea how much u have wound me? " madhu asked in a painful voice.
"Friend?" Sultan smirked mockingly. Though he knew she was telling the truth. He was living with her for nearly a year now married & he have seen how loyal & truthful to him but he had no interest on her whatsoever. He married her only to become stinking rich. He wanted to bath in her wealth & he did. Now he was tired of all the acts so he started showing his true color blaming her for every single mistakes she commits. Yesterday night he got a nice oppurtunity to put a huge blame on her when he saw her asking some help to Mukkund at the wee hours but the fact he was just came back after having a good hard f**k with dipali. He painted the same story on her & she begged him & cried him to believe her but he stormed off with the plan to end everything once & for all so that he can marry dipali.

"Rk, u don't know what u r saying. I m deeply hurt by ur words. Sultan was my friend & he called me to the hotel to ask me a favour so i went to see him there but i never knew about his evil plan. I let him use me because i cant put ur life in threat."
"Friend with benefits!" Rk laughed sarcastically. "Yeah u let him use u but not for me. For ur pleasure & to please the f**ker.

"Please, Please trust me" Madhu moved forward to touch him. But he pushed her hand harshly & turned his face & lit the cigarette to smoke.

"Baby, please. U totally getting it all wrong." Dipali said & hugged him forcefully to get some physical contact so that she can seduce him & calm his nerves with hot f**king session. Well, she never loved him so its just f**king not love making.
"Dare you keep your filthy paws on me, Bitch" Rk angrily shouted. He felt disgusted with her touch... With her hug... So he pushed her far away from him.

"Please" Madhu begged him. She has no one in her life. She has nothing in her life. She never thought the girl who lived her life like a princess will be begging to someone to take care of her or to look after her or just give a shelter to live safely.
Sultan just shoved her away from him disinterestedly.

"Don't dream i will fall for ur crocodile tears & take u back in my life... I m hardly holding my temper... It will slip out of control any minute... So Before I kill you, you save your life by running" Rk spitted with venom." Rk spitted with venom.
Dipali's brain was not working to give him any excuse. He was so determined to kick her out of his house & mainly from his life but still she didnt get a single penny from him. She brain stormed for ideas to emotionally attack him so that he will fall putty in her hands & forgive her.

"I'm pregnant" Madhu whispered begging for a chance. She discovered her pregnancy two days back but she didnt get a chance to give him the good news as he was always away from her. Yesterday she fell so sick as she kept vomiting & was having difficulty to stand due to dizziness so she asked help from her neighbour, Mukkund who was a doctor, a close friend of madhu too so she knocked his door for help at the wee hours but sultan took everything wrongly. She can easily walk off him but where she will go? Whom she will seek help? She lost everything of hers. She was feeling miserable at the moment for not having her father by her side to console her, to protect her in his embrace. She cant take hasty step not while she was pregnant with a child. She needs to think of the poor soul growning in her. So she had no other go but only to beg him to let him stay with him though she knows it was a shame.
"Oh congrats! So lucky son of a bitch is growing in here. By the way who is the father? U know or u dont know?" Sultan smirked & roughly removed her saree to rub her stomach.

"Rk, jaan. I m pregnant. A part of u is growing in me & i swear on our baby that i will never cheat u" she lied that she was pregnant as she knew becoming a father was Rk's dream so she tried to use his weakness as a weapon. Later she can pull another miscarriage act. Right now she want to win him back so that she can be showered by him with his money & expensive gifts.
"Pregnant? You expect me to trust u? To trust you that you are carrying my child? Go & give the good news to the f**ker who f**ked you & knocked u up, that a little shit of him is growing in you, if by any case what you are saying is true But I sincerely doubt that you are pregnant" Rk growled.
"Crap! He is not going to take any of my bullshits. He is way too smart. I m getting tired of playing this pretend-pretend act. This is going nowhere. I should accept my defeat & walk put before he kills me... He really have a bad temper & he is quite a mad man. But i hate to acknowledge all my efforts taken so far went in drain. Sultan could have been little more patient... If he had then i wont be in this mess... Well at least he got succeeded in ditching his wife & acquired all her wealth... So i should go empty handed to him... Hope that bas***d doesnt ditch me." Dipali thoughts.

"How could you accuse me like that? How could you say its not your child? It's your flesh of flesh, please trust me, it's our love" Madhu screamed in agony & pulled his collar & shoke him rigorously to bring him out of his stupor. He was talking all senseless... She tolerated him so far but not any more. He was the one who touched her till date but she felt hatred & disgust on her own skin for letting a monster like him to touch. He was not the man for her. He was a breast suited only for some bitch.

"Rk, its our love. Your baby." She tried to reassure him
"Our love? You have the nerve to say that? How could you betray me? I trusted you blindly but you were f**king a f**ker behind my back. Did you sleep with him in my house in my bed when I was away on business?" Rk asked in pain. What all he didnt do to her?? He treated her like a queen. He never hurt her once. He respected her & loved her with his heart & soul but he brutally stabbed his heart & its broken into pieces now... Will it be mended ever??

"It's you who sleep with other women. I was always true to you. I gave you everything my heart my soul my body & you took everything from me & now you are treating worse than a shit. Don't you ever love me? Am I so unworthy to be loved?" Madhu asked with angry & hateful tears oozing down her cheeks.
"Yes. I dont deserve a man-wh**e's love. You are the son of a bitch not the baby growing in me. I should love the baby. But i m hating it because its ur blood. A little monster is growing in me & it will grow by ur way only, cheating innocent girls life for f**king money" Madhu spitted right on his face following a hard slap.

"I love u truely, Rk" Dipali pleaded for one last time.
"Love? Shame. You never loved me. All you cared was my money. I was blind to love a gold digging wh**e like you but I finally came to my senses. I won't let you enjoy a penny from my wealth. You are curse in my life." Rk said gritting his teeth.

"I HATE YOU" Madhu said with eyes full of hatred.
"Well, u hurt me brutally... U decieved me... I was a fool to beg u in spite of knowing what all misdeeds u did to me. Well i m back to my senses... i m done with my begging & crying... So here take my curse... u will never find happiness in your life because i will punish you for messing with me. Messing with Madhubala Malik." She was no long that monster's wife. She yanked her nuptial chain & threw it right on his face. "See, one day u will be ditched the same way like u ditched me... Ur heart will ache then like how mine is aching now... & mark my words U will be penniless & find ur ass in the road side gutter & i will get my properties back by hook or by crook which my dad earned shedding his blood & sweat. U will rot in the seventh circle of hell." Madhu said with tears. But this time it was red hot angry tears.
"Well, i m throwing u the divorce because you dont deserve to be Madhubala's husband, you bas***d!" She shouted at him stunning him as she was pleasing him with all the while but suddenly turned like a wildcat. Then she signed the divorce papers & walked out of the house with head held high.

"Rk..." Dipali whispered & took a step forward to him. Rk got furious & hastily searched for something to get hold & he found a knive placed on top of a fruit basket & took it & threatend her. "What i told u about touching me? If u touch or take a step forward i will slice ur neck. Did u get it?" She noded her head in fear.
"Sign" he ordered menacingly. She signed & declared that she lost her battle miserably.
"I HATE YOU" RK spitted the words harshly in disgust. "Never show ur face to me ever again. It wont be good for u" with that Rk turned looking away from her & she ran out to save her very life.

Madhu was walking on the deserted road having no idea of where she was heading. It was raining heavily & she was drenched completely but she didnt care for anything. She felt lifeless & miserable. It was all like a nightmare to her. She missed her dad. She felt lonely...

Rk felt suffocated to stay in his mansion so he took his car keys & grabbed a bottle of whiskey from the house bar on his way & started driving his car in full speed in the heavy rain. He kept drinking while he drives. Only the alcohol could ease his pain & make him forget everything. Suddenly he saw a lady walking on the middle of the road & he applied the brake to bring it to an abrupt halt so that he wont hit the lady but still he was so close to her so he hit her legs & she fell down head long, glad she was not thrown far away as he hit her in a little speed, he had horned but she didnt move from his way as if she was also in drunken state like Him. He quickly lept out of the car & went to the lady. Her face was covered with blood & she was unconscious. He breathed a sigh of relief when he realised she was not dead.
"Oh god! I should have been careful. I hit a poor girl with my car. God save her please" he prayed & took the lady soaking in blood & rain water in his arms & took her to the hospital.
The lady he took to hospital was none other than Madhu... Who will be an angel in his life to mend his broken heart & Madhu was unaware of her saviour... Who will heal her broken heart.

From here the story of two BROKEN HEARTS begins where they will breathe life into each others soul.

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Hehe... Sorry if u all got pissed after reading this update... I know i gave u all a wrong impression in prologue... 😆 i wrote only one side convo took place in two different places & merged it so all thought it was a convo btn Rishbala...😆

I had a great time reading ur comments... 😆 when i read Rk will realise his mistake for hirting madhu i was like when he hurt her & why shld he feel guilty of giving a tongue lash to dipali??😆

& few guessed madhu did it to save Rk... Lol... I used that idea as dipali's reason to escape... 😆

& few guessed it was all a misunderstanding btn rishbala... Well its actually u all mistook it or u could say i painted in that way.. 😆

But seriously u guys think i will let Rk say all harsh words to madhu?? Or madhu will betray Rk?? 😲😆

Well, they are two separate broken hearts will mend each other... 😆 see such a simple story nah but all complicated it too much...😆

& i know u all will hate Sultan for hurting madhu so much... But her curse will come true... She will punish him with Rk's love & support...😆

Even dipali will pay for her deed so dont worry...😆

I hate to write madhu being sultan stone face's wife & pregnant with his child but i wont let it grow... Yeah i m bit cruel here... Her womb will be filled by Rk's baby in near future so in the accident she will lose that monsters child & i hope u all r okay with that...😆

Well thats the whole story i said to u all before hand so no thril... So will end this story in another two parts... But u will surely get that after 12days... Promise!!😆

Oh my! One main thing u all missed... COLORS!! dont think i m colors tv fan...😆 I clearly differentiate two different conversation in two different colors (pink & blue) but u guys clearly ignored it...😆

U see how much ever i try to write sad emotional stories... I can never pull up in that genre so will end up giving happy ending but atleast i m trying something out of my fort right?... But what to do? After all i m a crazy jalebi writer nah...😆

Okay... Cut the crap!

Pls do hit the like button & share ur views on this dull update...😆

P.s Uma di, dont worry i didnt take any resolution that i will not write crazy stories... Craziness is in my blood so i cant help writing crazy stories... Well this supposed to emotional story has turned crazy...😆

P.p.s - Shruthi baby... Yes i m on twitter... Watsapp... Wattpad... Hangouts... & FB...😆

Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago
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First let me applaud for you baby for writing a new genre from your interests 👏
N secondly I can't stop this even though I knew the mystery but still want to do this🤣
The most hillarious part was rk dips scene 😉
All the while reading it I was like bouncing on my place it was so awesome 😆poor dippy rk came out to be too smart for the bitchy bitch .all the while I was laughing my ass off especially when he threatened her with knife 😛😃👏n i felt hero go on cut her to slices but arghh then u ll go to jail n we dnt want to do 7saal ka intezzar lol 😆😆😆
In all fantastic update 😊
would u mind if I say madhu is a peanut u know y ofcourse🤢🤢
N i won't comment on sulbala part bcoz i so wanted to yawn🥱 reading sullu uncles drama blame the cvs to create a boring image of sulbala in our minds whereas rkpali were always entertaining so I enjoyed that part more u wrote amazingly 😃hope in future rk dnt leave that sullu a tongue to speak that should first thing to be cut off beside his bank balance.
I m so dam excited to see rk avenging both of these rascals n getting justice for himself n for madhu n for also mending her heart 😉
Edited by Love-Blossoms - 10 years ago
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Haha Sudha 🤣🤣
Engalai vachu comedy pannitiye 🤣
Cha nee colour different kattum podhey naan guess panni irukanum 🤣
Sari ponnu pudhusa try pannurale so colour include panni irukaanu ninaichaen 😆
But u gave us shock treatment 🤣 adhuvum current illama 🤣
Un area EB kaaran Vaazhga 🤣 due to him only we got update from u so soon 😆
Superb update Sudha 👏
Brilliantly written it 👏
I enjoyed Rk dipali Convo 😆
She is trying her best to convince him but no rk is too determine in his action and didn't trust her 👏his dialogues are superb 👏credit goes to u only Sudha 👏
I laughed wen he threatened her with knife 🤣 Podhumda saamy nu odita 🤣
Coming to madhu sultan
I hate that beast sultan how mercilessly he is accusuing her 😡
He snatched everything from her 😡
I was like 😡😡 wen madhu begging to him 😡
Old tamil movies heroines maadhiri "atthan ungalai vitta enakku vera yaarum illai ,ennai yemathadhirgal" nu dialogue paesura 😡😆
But who is the writer lsudha ,i know she ll not show female character as weak ❤️😆
Madhu got courage and cursed him and with new determination she left the place 👏
Enga da kannagi maadhiri madhu malik mansion-i saabam vittu erichuduvaalonu ninaichaen 🤣 nalla velai madam appafi pannama veetai vittu poita 🤣
Aww now the actual story has been started 😳 hero heroine meeting ❤️😆
Sure madhu ll mend his heart and rk ll be her true love ❤️
I would be glad if u kill madhu's child (no offense )dont want that monster's symbol with her
Waiting for 24th august 😆
Thanks for the pm Sudha 🤗

P.s I hope u don't have any problem if I comment in tanglish 😆


Edited by anish17 - 10 years ago

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