OMG . Amazing Miss Madhurish 😲😲 . You actually very conveniently tricked everyone of us except for Neha 🤣🤣 Bravo 👏👏. What a cunning mind you have 😈 that you actually let us believed your prologue of RK divorcing Madz but then in the first chapter you actually revealed the suspense .
Well this chappy was a huge THUNDERBOLT for me 🤣🤣
OK now coming to the chap . Ahhh could I hate Dips and Sullu more 😡😡??
Your story actually made me abhor my Beautiful Sexy Dips for the first time 😭😭🤣 Else how much ever bad she is , I always liked Dips but Naaah you made me hate her for the first time and I am hating you 😡 for making me feel disgust on my poor Dips 🤣
Sullu as usual I was never ever able to connect with him so yeah I hated him from the starting only and now your story gave me another reason to loathe him from the bottom of my heart 😈🤣
Awww my Poor RK and Madz 😭😭 How can fate oppps I mean how can OUR JALEBI be so cruel to them ?? 😈 What did they do to you that you made their life so miserable 🤣🤣 But NO WORRIES I know that Miss Jalebi will compensate for all the torture and emotional torture you did on them as well as on me in the next 2 chappy by providing romantic and happy ending 😉😉🤣
Ahhh your Madz I mean in your story the character of Madz is so submissive and docile that at first I wanted to slap her for so much of begging drama Luckily atleast at the end of the chappy she stood for herself , she stood for what is right and what is wrong else trust me I would have myself shot this Sullu and Madz 🤣🤣 Do make this Madz now a strong headed women - a vamp and a brave girl like us 😈 which I always missed in MB 😆😆
WOW !! 👏👏👏 My RK is so smart and clever that he actually kept close protection officer to protect Dips 😈 which eventually turned out to be a good move by RK . Hayye My RK is by birth a smart fellow 😉😉 . I am quite happy that atleast in your story RK is a clever , witty person and I want you to keep him like that till the end unlike the MB CVs 🤢
I am commiserating with Madz in this story so much 😭😭😭 Poor her , first she lost her mom , then dad and now the person on whom she trusted more who happened to be her bloody husband (is a blot on the name of husband)😭 Atleast here RK is a smart fellow who actually turned the tables but Madz she has been the docile , naive girl from the beginning of this story . But I am happy that now she is gonna stay with RK and I don't know but such kind of brutal reality was necessary for Madz bcz she needs to see that in reality other than yourself you can't trust anyone and that too BLINDLY & SO EASILY like how she did for Sullu 😡😡 So yeah now she will understand her own importance that even she has a self-respect and dignity .
Well that's good that you are actually planning to kill that moron's baby in Madz's womb bcz I want RK's smart little baby in Madz's womb 😳🤣
Actually I would have written to give a brutal punishment to Dips and Sullu but then you already told that you are punishing them in the most gruesome manner so now I am quite relaxed 🤣🤣😆 But be little gentle with my Dips 🤣 and Sullu I don't mind 🤣
Overall a very prodigious wait lemme rephrase it a very EXCEPTIONAL chappy by you . The story was so emotional especially the Madz part that at times I was getting so senti 😆. Loved it into bits and pieces . Waiting for the next part after 23rd 😳😳
P.S. - Now you can read this thesis . I hope my wait was worth in unresing my post 😳🤣