RIMA 3S: BROKEN HEARTS (final part & epilogue - pg.19) Dt. 22/09) - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
Superb part
omg this was convo going at 2 diff places
sultan married madhu for her money and dipali married rk for his money
they both were cheating
madhu met with an accident
waiting to read more
Edited by heemasomani - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
woww Sudha..this is one hell of an update..i knw how difficult is might be for you but girl...u just nailed it...
the meotions, dialogues, expressions woww oww oww...girl..u r just topping the writers list with your wonderful thoughts and narration...

Thank you so much for the PM and teh story...cant wait to see..how these broken hearts will sooth each other and become one...👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Superb update...
Never thought u would be giving mixed scenes...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Never expected this twist but u made all of us fool but a big round of applause it was a brilliant prologue which lead everybody assuming different things n not a single one was there to think this way
Superb update loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Unresed my comment on pg.6😳
Edited by anish17 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46

First lemme laugh to my hearts content 🤣

OMG . Amazing Miss Madhurish 😲😲 . You actually very conveniently tricked everyone of us except for Neha 🤣🤣 Bravo 👏👏. What a cunning mind you have 😈 that you actually let us believed your prologue of RK divorcing Madz but then in the first chapter you actually revealed the suspense .

Well this chappy was a huge THUNDERBOLT for me 🤣🤣

OK now coming to the chap . Ahhh could I hate Dips and Sullu more 😡😡??
Your story actually made me abhor my Beautiful Sexy Dips for the first time 😭😭🤣 Else how much ever bad she is , I always liked Dips but Naaah you made me hate her for the first time and I am hating you 😡 for making me feel disgust on my poor Dips 🤣

Sullu as usual I was never ever able to connect with him so yeah I hated him from the starting only and now your story gave me another reason to loathe him from the bottom of my heart 😈🤣

Awww my Poor RK and Madz 😭😭 How can fate oppps I mean how can OUR JALEBI be so cruel to them ?? 😈 What did they do to you that you made their life so miserable 🤣🤣 But NO WORRIES I know that Miss Jalebi will compensate for all the torture and emotional torture you did on them as well as on me in the next 2 chappy by providing romantic and happy ending 😉😉🤣

Ahhh your Madz I mean in your story the character of Madz is so submissive and docile that at first I wanted to slap her for so much of begging drama Luckily atleast at the end of the chappy she stood for herself , she stood for what is right and what is wrong else trust me I would have myself shot this Sullu and Madz 🤣🤣 Do make this Madz now a strong headed women - a vamp and a brave girl like us 😈 which I always missed in MB 😆😆

WOW !! 👏👏👏 My RK is so smart and clever that he actually kept close protection officer to protect Dips 😈 which eventually turned out to be a good move by RK . Hayye My RK is by birth a smart fellow 😉😉 . I am quite happy that atleast in your story RK is a clever , witty person and I want you to keep him like that till the end unlike the MB CVs 🤢


I am commiserating with Madz in this story so much 😭😭😭 Poor her , first she lost her mom , then dad and now the person on whom she trusted more who happened to be her bloody husband (is a blot on the name of husband)😭 Atleast here RK is a smart fellow who actually turned the tables but Madz she has been the docile , naive girl from the beginning of this story . But I am happy that now she is gonna stay with RK and I don't know but such kind of brutal reality was necessary for Madz bcz she needs to see that in reality other than yourself you can't trust anyone and that too BLINDLY & SO EASILY like how she did for Sullu 😡😡 So yeah now she will understand her own importance that even she has a self-respect and dignity .


Well that's good that you are actually planning to kill that moron's baby in Madz's womb bcz I want RK's smart little baby in Madz's womb 😳🤣


Actually I would have written to give a brutal punishment to Dips and Sullu but then you already told that you are punishing them in the most gruesome manner so now I am quite relaxed 🤣🤣😆 But be little gentle with my Dips 🤣 and Sullu I don't mind 🤣

Overall a very prodigious wait lemme rephrase it a very EXCEPTIONAL chappy by you . The story was so emotional especially the Madz part that at times I was getting so senti 😆. Loved it into bits and pieces . Waiting for the next part after 23rd 😳😳



P.S. - Now you can read this thesis . I hope my wait was worth in unresing my post 😳🤣

Edited by BurnThemAll - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
OMG ! We got tricked ! 😆
But anyways I'm happy that there aren't any misunderstandings between Rishbala. 😳
Sultan n Dipali ! 😡 They're such shameless, wicked creatures.
They'll surely get punished for their crimes in d near future.
Feeling sorry for Rishabh n Madhu...But anyways, seems destiny ( or rather, u 😆 ) had planned their meeting this way...These broken hearts will definitely be healed by each other's love. Waiting for them to be together. 😛
All d best for ur exams, Sudha di. 👍🏼
Be back soon...
Thanks !
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
AWESOME twist & u have made everyone fools here LOL
I guessed somewhere that...never u can make Rk bad & madhu to be such a shameless like dips...Only & only dips & sultan can be taken that place for being shameless...🤣...and was waiting for ur chaps...

And berfore it was only prologue...& i was seriosuly not so eager...but today u made a mistake by posting chap1 and made me impatient and eager to be in wait of ur story...😃
Wt...r u serious that this story has only 2 more parts...😲
i thought it wud be some 10 parts or so...but no probz...however...😊
And yeah I was going to request u to end up the sultan's baby in madhu & plz dont make madhu regret or feel sad for that monsters baby here...but u itself said that u r gonna end that baby...we both crazies brains work same way...sorry 3's neha too 😉

And yeah i loved the concept or plot here...but thank god u didnt made it feel like heavy emotional story...😃

And ur attempt on emotional side is going to be wonderful...👍🏼
Continue soon after ur exams...
Thanks for PM dear

Amaizing take on diff type of plot...loved it !! 👍🏼


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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
That was a surprise.
you fooled us with prologue.
great start. Both have been cheated by their spouses.
will be waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
OMG !what is this? U made fool out of me.but thanks that is Deepali n sultan who cheated.
Rishbala meet n now mend each other broken heart.
But really sudha u give me a shock with ur colors.
Best of luck for ur exams .

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