RIMA 3S: BROKEN HEARTS (final part & epilogue - pg.19) Dt. 22/09)

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SuRu

@My_VivJaan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

srslyyy yaar u rocksss!!! it was hilarious nd awesomeee reevaluation of prologue!!!
I thought this is gonna hatred sad story but u proved it this is sudha's story... diff in its own wayyy!!!
kuddos to u...
eagerly waiting for nxt part!!!
nd yeah thanks for accident u know why 😉 while realizing it's his baby I was like nooo man... good you did it...
loved your speech aftr chap 🤣

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: BurnThemAll
Res

Still res?? 😲

U were always so quick in commenting? Now what happened?? U didnt like the update huh??😆 got bored & slept half way thru ah??😆

I checked my thread so many times to just check whether u have commented or not... I m so eager...😛

Okay i ll wait for ur comment...😳

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veni7842

@veni7842

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Omg !! Sudha after reading the prologue I seriously thought that madhu really cheated on rk and they r gonna get divorce but after reading the chap1 I got the clear idea of what is happening in their lives...
Simply superb dear , totally different story from you but it was amazing start
Do continue after ur exams :).
All the very best for ur exams ;)

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parimaniya

@parimaniya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

mysterious prologue n hilarious update...what 2 say u just awesome...when i read d prologue, was thought this story may b going 2 b sad n painful ending... so dont dare 2 read in 1st place n avoid bt u surprised 2 hell n love ur trick in prologue...now after reading 1st part cant wait 2 next...madhu-sultan convo was painful bt love d way she show him her strong side,,,,bt enjoyed rk-deepalis convo more as rk was at his right kameena mode...know study comes 1st n its imp dear bt u made me crazy 2 giving such hilarious story...n haan u also 2 good in this type of stories...so keep writing such stories also...waiting eagerly 4 next...can u add me in ur pm's list pls...its humble request dear

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: madhurish

Still res?? 😲
U were always so quick in commenting? Now what happened?? U didnt like the update huh??😆 got bored & slept half way thru ah??😆
I checked my thread so many times to just check whether u have commented or not... I m so eager...😛
Okay i ll wait for ur comment...😳

🤣🤣🤣 wait i am reading the story only .but i will comment tomorrow in my boring lec so that your sweet story will kill my boredom in the lec . i have to type so much to write my reviews so i will do that tomorrow only 😳😳

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vishti4eva

@vishti4eva

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

loved it.please update sooner.can't wait more.want t see rk and mb kucking their respective partner's butt

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Bunny

@vivian.drashti

Explorer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Wow!!!! What a twist ... I never expected this twist...nice update... 👏

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Seema

@...Seema...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

congratulations for the new story sudha

interesting start.

do pm me.

going to read part 1

thanx fr pm

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Seema

@...Seema...

Inactive

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

part1 great job sudha.

v well written indeed

so rk n madhu the two broken hearts met,through an accident,nw they gonna heal each other.

looking forward to it.

continue soon

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#60

I was shocked reading 1st 4 dialogues..Read it 5 tyms 2 make sure am nt hallucinating..Kudos to u..Hats off to ur skills..U passed with distinction to confussed us..Enjoyed each & every dialogues of rkpali & madhu..Hate sick sultan & dipali a big nautanki

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