RIMA 3S: BROKEN HEARTS (final part & epilogue - pg.19) Dt. 22/09)

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bokul

@bokul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

superb prologue
loved it

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Uma

@uma88

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Res

Ok let me read it first!!!!!

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Omg sudha, what happen to u. Did u took Any resolution that u wil not write ur usual genre. I hope u won't do that to us. Okay first, i know u won't strike my name out of ur pm list. So i wil be happy with that. Though am very irregular in commenting.

Now finally towards the prologue.. what a start. U seriously reminded me of her. I hope u remember her story in last is comp, it story reminded me of that. Such a venom in words. Happy that madhu is not a cry baby and finally she too let it out.

Now coming to guess..

I guess there is one or more person hidden in between them who cause this situation. Who get adv on splitting them. And I guess they both are in complete misunderstanding. Hope it get clear soon and our rk wil seek forgiveness from madhu for using those words on her.

Okay now waiting for a strong wind to blow so that I could see 23rd on my calendar soon. All the best for ur exam again and we wil be waiting for the update. And I wil try to give it gift by this week for sure.

Edited by uma88 - 10 years ago

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candle_light

@candle_light

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

great start 😊
its really different from ur previous ones which are soo sweet and lovable to read 😊 😊
waiting for the actual story to start. plz cont the rest after ur exams and all the best 👍🏼 😊

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Bunny

@vivian.drashti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

A very happy birthday dear...hope you enjoyed well...

I like the prolong of this story...waiting for you next update.

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Jyoraj

@Jyoraj

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Superb prologue.

so different from your earlier writing.

both don't trust each other. Is it some misunderstanding?

waiting to read more.

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SuRu

@My_VivJaan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

A BIG Congratulations for New story sudha dear!!! 🤗
prologue is super fantastic so emotional nd full of hatred I kinda love such stories... suspense!!!!
eagerly waiting for 1st part do pm me nd plzzz continue it...

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Nithunavi

@Nithunavi

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Well Sudha...Im not gonna guess anything now coz i myself is pressured with exam tension...😆

But yeah...firstly for the new attempt of writing a diff genre by u is so appreciable darl...👍🏼

U wil rock this emotional type of story too as like ur crazy ones...& u r one prompted author here in this forum must say !👍🏼

Love ur writings and wud love to read it whatever genre u r gonna experiment...😃

And abt prologue,...Its a complete diff& intriguing one !

And i need a PM badly 😉 though i wud be late in commenting 😃

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

OMG !!!! Did I read an intense emotional , heart-wrenching story by Miss Madhurish who usually writes a happy-merry story ?? Such a drastic change from romacne and happiness to emotional ?? Well KUDOS to you for trying out something phenomenal peice .Start of the stroy is very gripping . So they are heading for divorce ? I am sure there is third,fourth,fifth ... Persons who is responsible for Rishbala's present marriage disaster . And Madz is preggo with RKs baby but he is not acknowleding it that its his baby . Waiting eagerly to know who all are the culprits and how they both will unite in future . Once again Congo Babes for writing out something extra-ordinary . Usually I see you writing Jaelbi type stories but this time you have brought some Chilly moments in this story . Continue soon after 23rd . P.S. - Posting via cell so ignore emo-less and messiness .