Woh Phir mile!new phoenix from Mamta II

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Hi guys....

i am sure things must have changed drastically in this forum since i left...A really dreadful incident happened with my family.....my younger brother had met with a horrific train accident that i really can't imagine...he was in the hospital and he's been shifted to home only now...his spine was broken ,and he went into a spinal shock.....one whole month our family was in a terrinble trauma....but God has been great and now he's recovering slowly....and 'am really thankful to God for that........

Anyways..i want all of you to pray for him.....and so what's going on in this forum...I really have no clue....Nishu..ur Akku has sprouted a moustache..gosh!!! 8th wonder of the world...and what else has happened.......

Juhi ,Sania......don't worry..my story hasn't ended....it's gonna take a leap...just one year...... "Woh phir mile!!!! "

the link to previous chapter :

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/mamta/672908/fanfic-of-the-week-new-chapter-added

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Posted: 18 years ago
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CHAPTER SIXTY SEVEN




....A well furnished office room....

"Hasn't she come yet??" asked the young boss to his secreatry.

"No,Sir..I've tried her number..but it's coming out of range.."

These words were enough to drain the remaining pink of his face... 😕 "Oh! my God..the board members of "G" Industries will be here at any moment...She was supposed to do the presentation...Do one thing..bring the copies of all the details of this project to my cabin..and immediately send someone to her home to check what's happened? ..Hurry up!! 😡 "

The manager of "Placid International" , Mr.Menon was very worried with the absence of the company's assistant manager....

"May I come in ,Sir!!" asked the secretary timidly..to avoid his angry outburst..

"Come in ..Sudha.."

"Sir,here are the details..."

"Did you send someone to her home? She's very punctual..don't know what happened today...things are really going bizzare since we decided to do this project.. 😕 "

..After a few hours...

The phone bell rings at the managers office...

"Hello..Sudha..what happened?"

"Sir, Ramesh has returned from her home..he says, ma'am is at her home and that she won't be coming to the office as she isn't well..her maid told him this..."

"Not well...but she could have informed me..I wonder she was never so irresponsible..it's really strange..anyways thanks sudha..."

He puts the reciever down and taps his pen on the table..brooding on this whole incident...

I'll post the next chapter soon..
Edited by poohtarang - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Gosh hope your bro is fine now..and sorry for being such a sloopy friends..read my pm pooh.. we missed you soo much i thought you got angry on me 😭 😭 😭 ..

and do pass on my wishes to your bro and hope he recovers fully soon my all best wishes are with him.. 🤗

and Akku yea he was having moustaches.. not naymore he is back to old self..and mamta is ending.. see my badluck.. 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG!! 😭 im soo sorry i hope ur bro recovers soon 😳

that;s soo sad. at least he recovering right? 😳 oh and i was wondering where u went.. i was like where did pooh go? so yehh

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Posted: 18 years ago
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omgg! Pooh we missed you soooooo much!! 😭 I'm sooo glad that you are back! 🤗

I'm really sorry to hear about your brother. Gosh, I really hope he recovers soon. I will definetly pray for him to recover.

I'm so happy your continuing your FF! I really missed reading it 😭

Yeah Akku had a cowboy type mustache for a while..but he got rid of it a little while ago..and Nish is right..Mamta is ending 😭
Edited by ~*Juhi*~ - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh i'm so sorry to hear about what happened 2 ur brother...i wil pray for him....and i'm sure that in a short while he'l b back to normal! 😉
thank u 4 the new chapter!and welcome back! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks guys...you all still remember me...and thankyou all for your heartly felt prayers....'am sorry for not being frequent on this site...gotta lot to study....M.A.Lit. + C.A.T. coaching..weekdays and weekends all tied up......but i promise whenever i get a lill' bit of time..i'll popp up to be with all my lovely friends here.....
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CHAPTER SIXTY EIGHT

He looks curious over the entire thing😕

"There's gotta be something wrong...I doubt whether Karim Bhai and his people..no ...no...😕..Ramesh saw her maid..maybe 'am just overloaded with work pressure that 'am imagining things...but lemme just try her number..."

He dials the number and the bell rings...a trembling voice replies..😕

"Hello?"😕

"Kanta bai..this is Praful..How is she now??"

"Sir, she..she..she's not well.." some moments pause in which he could hear muffled cries and stomping of feets..then the voice of the trembling maid reappeared on the phone "Sir....she's gone to the hospital with her son..now i''l keep the phone..i have lots of work to do.."

Praful becomes more curious and tensed😕

"hospital...strange..and her mobile is also coming out of range when in city it's supposed to have full range,and there's no need for her to go out of the city for a hospital...😕"

Within a few hours the board members and C.E.O of "G" Industries arrive..and the meeting begins..everyone was present in the meeting except the assistant manager of "Placid"

"Where's your assistant manager?" asks the young and vibrant looking C.E.O. of "G" Industries...😳

"Mr.Sharma..actually she's very ill and 'am extremely sorry for her absense..now please can we proceed with the meeting...?"😊

"Yes,sure..I was just curious..as I've heard a lot about efficiency....and that she's the best employee of your company.."

"Yes,Mr.Sharma she is....you can meet her in future..if our deal gets finalised...." he smiles and the young C.E.O. too returns the gesture with a smile..and the meeting proceeds.

The deal gets finalised and the board members and the C.E.O. leave in their respective cars...

Praful is excited over the deal and calls his father Mr.Shiv Menon,who is also the chairman of "Placid"

"Dad,we've finalised the deal with "G"Industries..we've agreed on a 50:50 partnership..The school which was your dream will be set up soon along with boarding facilities....."

Edited by poohtarang - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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CHAPTER SIXTY NINE




.."Praful,my son..'am so proud of you..I'll be back soon,once my work here in London is finished..son till then take care of yourself AND YOUR MUM.. 😊, " said his dad.

"Yes,dad you too take care..really missing you...bye!!"

"Bye beta"

He puts his phone down and a smile passes his lips thinking about his family,his love...about whom he wanted to tell his dad as soon as he returns back to India.....

....Suddenly his mob. rings again..and the voice was an unpleasant on his ears as he turned into a pale stone...all vital colours of life sucked out!! 😕

... "KARIM BHAI!!!!! 😕 "

"Yes,Karim Bhai..I had warned you from fixing the deal..I had told you that the land in which you are building a school is mine..I wanna sell that land to your partner's archrival "TS group of Industries."

"Yes,I know that..but the land was never yours and it never would be...It is our property which you had illegally taken possesion of..if you continue to harrass us like this then forcefully i'll have to inform the police...understood 😡 😡 "

The harsh voice of Karim Bhai bursts out into a devilish laugh... 🤢

"Police my foot " 🤬 " ..you don't seem to have understood me really...I'd teach you the result of challenging Karim bhai.. 😡 "

"I'm not scared of a scoundrel like you....you are nothing but a bully who can do nothing but harrass innocent people..and don't consider me as one of them..I'll teach you a lesson that you shall never forget.."

"Shut up!! you big mouth..you speak a lot....now listen to this quietly.."

"Your Assistant Manager and her child is in my custody..and in a few moments the C.E.O. of "G" Industries,what was his name..."AK.."...forget it...he too would be brought here by my men and then...if you don't agree to my demands..you'll be answerable to whatever happens to them...," he then bursts out into that feverish laugh.. 🤢

"No you won't harm them...please leave them..."

"Okay...I can do that once you hand over the papers of your 100 acres land to me..legally.."

"Okay..but i need some time.." 😕

"Yeah...sure...but remember that each passing second would reduce the time of their lives..."

"Karim bhai...please don't harm them... 😭 😭 "..but the line cuts leaving him terrified and pale.

In a dark and dingy attic...

"Com'mon walk.." a blind folded man is pushed by some roudy looking thugs 🤢 🤢

The door closes behind them,again engulfing the room in darkness..

The blindfolded man is pushed into a dark room...the door is closed and the rogues laugh madly...

Then one of them talks in the darkness to someone in the phone.... "Karim Bhai the work is done..."

The blindfolded man hears some movement nearby but couldn't speak anything as his mouth was plastered,and hands tied..after some time he hears a child's cry...and he becomes desperate to open his bindings... 😕 He was clueless on why these people have kidnapped him and this child..for whom he was really feeling concerned...

Hours passed and the door opens again...One of the thugs came and opened his eyes...he couldn't open his eyes to the sudden brightness...his mouth was also untied and a plate of some dried chappatis was thrown towards him..his hands were also untied...

"Why have you brought me here?"

"Ssshhhh.....don't ask questions or I'll fire all these bullets down your throat..,"he barked pointing the pistol at him....

He kept quiet and searched for the whining child...There was a partition in the room and he thought the child would probably be behind the partition....He could see nothing,but shadows..he saw the child lying unconscious on the floor..and...suddenly the shadow of a woman being pulled by hand and ...sounds...

"No,please leave 😭 ...let me see my child 😭 ...he's not moving..What did you do to him?? 😭 😭my child...leave me.. 😭 😭 😭 ," cried the lady madly pleading to the rascals...He was swelling up with anger at his neighbours plight...He decided to act...

The thugs were teasing the lady...

One of them said, "She's so beautiful,It seems like she's not more than twenty one..and her child...ha ha...he doesn't have a father...so sad...ha..ha......in this young age..how'll you raise this child alone...without a father..ha..ha...if you don't mind we can be one..but.... 🤢 "

"Oye,...Raka you know her manager is very caring..he is lattoo over her beauty and is ready to marry her....who knows this must be his child only..."

The lady cried more hardly pulling herself from their grip to search her child in the darkness...

After hearing to the disgusting talks of the rascals the young man felt something boiling inside him..something slithering in his heart..he placed the plate down and rushed to the rascals and plunged on to them..with burning fury... 😡

The two kidnappers were not given time to think..he punched them on their faces and chest...

but..they had pistols..and before he realised it...they fired the bullets consecutively at him..he dived to save the child and lady..and the bullets pierced him all over his body..he was not feeling the pain..a strange kind of numbness..he felt some hot liquid gushing down from all over his body...he could hear the screams of the woman..the panicstricken talks of the two kidnappers..like strange murmers....

"What did you do?.....now Boss won't leave us.."

Then there was a sickening sound of a police siren...the kidnappers ran away leaving him with the lady and her child.

He turned on his back to their side..still lying wounded on the floor..and saw the lady crawling towards her child..she couldn't move..but had pearly while tears in her eyes..she pulled her child towards her..He saw her bleary face and something twiched in his heart..he wanted to call her..he knew her name,her heart...but then he heard some strange noises of footsteps and sounds like the buzzing of bees..he just stared at the woman and her child,who were reaching towards him...crying out his name...indeed they knew him..they were never away...the name echoed and re echoed.....

"AKSHAY!!!!!!"

He sinked into a dreamy and numb sleep..as if falling into a deep tunnel..with all the past memories circulating around him...deep desires turned into reality...he coulld see them..his love...his child..for whom he longed for one long year..everything felt so unreal yet so real.............







Edited by poohtarang - 18 years ago

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