~~Fanfic of the week-New Chapter added~~

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Hi!!!

This is actually the same story....the link to the earlier chapters is given below......Oye!!๐Ÿ˜• Nisha I think I've done as you've said...If it's wrong tell me..okay..cos you know na my pea brain is a bit slow in getting in things...wokay!!!!

yup perfectly fine so for further updates in tHs fan fic keeplooking this thread๐Ÿ˜ณ

The link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/mamta/568891/mamta-ii

Akshay and Mamta means Anand and Neha in my story๐Ÿ˜ณ,okay folks and not Anand and Narayani ๐Ÿ˜†

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Posted: 18 years ago
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CHAPTER FIFTY FOUR




Akshay turns shockingly...๐Ÿ˜•

"I am Akshay..what happened officer?"

"So,you are Akshay,one who misbehaves with women,and You are under arrest...."

"What??What the hell are you talking??"๐Ÿ˜•

"Mr.Akshay,we'll tell you that later!!Now com'mon, come with us and we'll answer all your questions there in leisure...hurry up!!"๐Ÿ˜ก

Mamta looks shockingly at him๐Ÿ˜•.....But the officer comes to her ...Sid comes and stands behind her...

"You and Ms. Tanisha'll have to give a written complaint against him..."

"But,why should I? And why are you arresting him??" ๐Ÿ˜•

"Are you not Mrs.Mamta Sharma? You only called us here saying that ,your husband Mr. Akshay tried to kill you,your child and your friend Ms. Tanisha,that we've seen from our eyes....We've caught him red-handed with proofs....we've got your maid's statement ....."๐Ÿ˜ก

Akshay and Mamta look petrified....๐Ÿ˜•

"What are you saying? I never complained anything...."

Sid tries to pacify her, "Mamta calm down...listen to me...Officer take him..."๐Ÿ˜•

"Sid ,what are you saying?" she runs to the officer taking Akshay and cries, "Leave him...please..officer..Akshay,believe me...I never called them..."๐Ÿ˜ญ

"Mrs. Mamta ,don't be scared..he won't do anything to you,for complaining against him.We'll see to that...We'll make sure he doesn't come out soon...." ๐Ÿ˜ก

Mamta looked irritated and tired trying to tell them the truth...She cried and begged..Akshay was really shattered and he said , "Mamta,you hate me so much that you...How can I kill my child and you??" ๐Ÿ˜ญ

"No,Akshay..believe me...I didn't.." ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ

"Officer,please take me...now I don't have any desires to live..If I stay for any longer,I'll die cos I can't see so much hate for me in her eyes..." ๐Ÿ˜ญ

"Akshay,I didn't call the police...Officer please leave him...๐Ÿ˜ญ"

But it was too late and the police had taken him away...Mamta runs behind the jeep and she falls down unconscious...๐Ÿ˜ญ



Edited by poohtarang - 18 years ago
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oh..so much of pain..why akku has to suffer so much everywhere ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜ญ
great chapter pooh ๐Ÿ‘
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CHAPTER FIFTY FIVE




In the jail.....a devastating news was going to encounter him...

He was standing at one of the corners ,resting his head and hand on the wall.

"Akshay.."๐Ÿ˜•

He turns...

"You!! ๐Ÿ˜ก what have you come here for?For laughing at me or to see and enjoy my plight..."

"Akshay๐Ÿ˜ญ,I know that you are very angry on me..I deserve your wrath...but, you must know this,that whatever I did was not my decision.."

"Huh!! ๐Ÿ˜กI don't wanna hear this rubbish...I know you are lying..you are very good at doing that...Tanisha..once I get out of here,I won't spare you..remember that.."

"Akshay,yes..I lied to you...๐Ÿ˜ญ"

Akshay...grimaces๐Ÿคข at her innocent looking face...

"I did all this for my friendship...I betrayed you for my best..๐Ÿ˜ญ."

"And who'd that be??๐Ÿ˜ก Who is that friend of your's who wants to destroy my life??"

"Speak up ,Tanisha...๐Ÿ˜ก"

"Mamta..."๐Ÿ˜ญ

"Mamta...huh!! and you think I'll believe you" he laughs madly ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

"Yes ,Akshay..believe me...It's your own Mamta...She only asked me to do all this...She and Sid...they love each othe..and they planned all this..she only called the police and arrested you...In this way you'll be out of her life,and she could go with Sid.."

"๐Ÿ˜กS-H-U-T-U-P!!! ๐Ÿ˜กYou cheap woman๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿคข...Don't utter a word against my Mamta..first you made dirty stories of you and me,now about my Mamta and Sid...you know how much she loves me??You don't know...how could you know??You only know how to destroy love...Get out of my sight or I'll kill you...Go..๐Ÿ˜ก"

"Akshay..you'll realise that I'm right sooner or later...but,till then it'll be too long...you'll lose everything....If you don't trust me...you see it with your own eyes how they both are living together??๐Ÿ˜ญ"

"Get out...you... ๐Ÿคฌ or I'll kill you..."

He shouts madly at her๐Ÿ˜ก,ans she leaves him in a frenzy.....After some time his parents come and give his bail.

Mamta was taken to the hospital...by Sid. In the hospital she constantly repeats, that she wants to see Akshay,but as she wasn't well she was not allowed to leave.๐Ÿ˜ญ

"Mamta๐Ÿ˜•, the doctor has said that you mind is strained a lot and your body is also weak...you need rest..I'll take you to him later..."

"But my Akshay...how is he??๐Ÿ˜ญ" and she again dozes into unconsciousness...

At Mamta's home...

Shanta bai tries to pacify Ganapathy๐Ÿ˜ณ ,who's crying๐Ÿ˜ญ for his parents.....At that time only the door bell rings....

She opens the door to find Akshay and his mother...She gets nervous๐Ÿ˜•...and wipes the sweat from her face๐Ÿ˜•...

He takes Ganapathy from her hand and asks her, "When did you see me trying to kill my wife and my child???"

She almost faints...and replies๐Ÿ˜•.. "Sir, I ....Was told by Mamta and Sid sir to say so..."

Akshay is shocked but his heart doesn't want to believe all this...

"I knew you would say this...How much money did Tanisha pay you??"

"Sir, I'm saying the truth...You can go to the hospital and ask them yourself.Please leave me..."

"Hospital๐Ÿ˜•...What happened to Mamta??Which hospital??"

"City Hospital"

"Mum,hurry up๐Ÿ˜•..we need to go to City Hospital immediately...I want to see her...she must be so scared..after my arrest..."

"Akshay,beta calm down.We'll go there right now..." says his mother and they leave in his car for the hospital.

Edited by poohtarang - 18 years ago
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CHAPTER FIFTY SIX




In the hospital...

"Sid,Where's the police taken Akshay?? I want to go to him.... ๐Ÿ˜ญ Please take me to him."

"Mamta,he's fine.His parents have taken his bail and he must be at his home now.You need rest.Please lie down.."

"No,Sid..I am going right now to him...he must be thinking that I called the police" She gets out of the bed to leave...but ...

"Mamta ,go ,go and tell him that you are sorry...and what ever he did to you and Tanisha was very greatful of him...and tell him that you are still ready to forgive him.."

She stops and realise that she had forgotten all the things Akshay did to her and Tanisha..

"You know Mamta,in that fight between Tanisha and Akshay,he pushed Tanisha, that you witnessed with your own eyes,and she lost her child..."

"What???๐Ÿ˜ฒ OMG??? ๐Ÿ˜ญ " She puts her hand on her mouth in disbelief and tears flow down her cheeks.

"Sid, how is she??I want to meet her.."

"She's in the next ward..."

She hurries to Tanisha's ward....

Tanisha is lying on the bed ,sleeping,looking quite ill.Mamta walks to her in tears...

"Tanu.." ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Tanisha opens her eyes and looks slowly at her with a sorrowful face...

"Mamu......."she bursts into a cry... "Mamu...I lost my child... ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ "

Mamta holds her hand and cries... "I am sorry Tanu...I didn't trust you and all this happened to you...I had became blind in his love to realise you were true ...I'm sorry...I am also responsible for this..." ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ

"Mamu...please don't say sorry..it is me who should say sorry to you for what I did to you...that is probably why God has also punished me... ๐Ÿ˜ญI deserved it. "

"No,Tanu...calm down...what was the fault of that innocent child...It died before even seeing this world...Akshay...he has spoiled both mine and your's life....I hat him...Our curses will fall on him...My "GB" will destroy him.... ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ " and she explodes out crying heavily....

Tanisha then narrates the whole incident that took place on the eve before Mamta's B'day...

"That day do you remember...after dropping you at home,when I went back to my home..Akshay told me to come and meet him at "Hotel Taj" When I reached there ,he was all drunk ,he said his friends had forced him to drink and he was totally out of his senses...He told me that you shouldn't come to know about all this and asked me to get a gift for you...when I got the gift....he was asleep...I woke him up and asked him to take a bath...when he came back he still was not in his senses...and he..." she again started crying... ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ "I couldn't stop him...I'm sorry Mamu..."

"Mamu,say that you've forgiven me.. ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ "

"Please...forgive me..." ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Mamta sat frozen near her listening to all this...her eyes were dry and not even a single drop of tear rolled down her cheeks...She pacified Tanisha and waited with her till she had fallen asleep after crying a lot....and went back to her room...Sid had gone to buy the medicines...

In her room.....

"Mamta..."

She turns silently to find Akshay standing at the door...

"Mamta,I've come to take you with me.."

She keeps quiet...

"Mamta,why are you quiet? Do you still don't believe me?Tanisha did all this cos she wanted to snatch me from you...she said this to me herself...but you know that I can love only you...and no one else...We both trusted her like our best friend and what did she do ?She stabbed us on our back..."

"Shut up ..Akshay...It is you who has stabbed me on my back...my dreams...my faith...and you are blaming that poor Tanisha...Get lost...I don't want to see your face ever in my life cos it reminds me of your shameful acts...it gives me a lot of pain..."

Akshay goes on as if he hadn't listened to her... "Mamta, I don't want to give you explanations...It wasn't our fault...It was in our fate to face these consequences and so we faced it...but now we need to forget the past..and start a new life.."

"Akshay what have you come here for??" Sid enters looking angrily at him...Akshay too lose his temper...

"You stay away from my life.She's my wife and who are you to interfere in between...You and Tanisha have only planned all this game...and now you want to snatch my wife as well..."

"Akshay, enough..How could you think so cheaply,Sid and me...sshhh!! ๐Ÿคข ...I really regret in not understanding you...How could have I loved you all these time...??You don't deserve any one's love...you can only be hated.... ๐Ÿ˜ก"

"Mamta..."he turns to Sid.. "You ...look what have you done??What lies have you told her to get her?? ๐Ÿ˜ก "

"A-k-s-h-a-y!!!! Don't speak to Sid like that...keep your dirty mind to yourself...and leave us alone...and also atay away from Tanisha....You've already done enough damage...Now I can take no more..."

"Mamta..." ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ he looks shocked and shattered...at her not able to believe his ears...

She then ignores him and talks to Sid..

"Sid,when can I go home??? I want to see my child??...or this man will snatch him also from me..."

"Mamta, he's here .I've brought him along with me...He was crying for coming to me...so I couldn't resist my self from bringing him with me..."

"You...who asked you to take my child??Where is he???"๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ญ

Akshay goes out and sends his mother with Ganapathy....

"Ma..." ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ she runs to her,touches her feet and hugs her.She takes Ganapathy and starts crying...๐Ÿ˜ญ

"Calm down..Mamta beta,calm down.."

Ther in the corridor...Akshay and Sid come face to face..again...

"Akshay ,now you've send you mum to pacify Mamta...you forget her...now she's mine...you just wait and watch how I make her mine....huh!!!! ๐Ÿ˜ก "

"You...how dare you???" Akshay rushes to him and punches his fist on to his face.... ๐Ÿ˜ก

The ward boys come and pull Akshay away from Sid...Akshay was burning in anger and Sid was bleeding... ๐Ÿ˜ก

"Mamta is mine...only mine...stay away from her...No one not even God can separate her from me...understood..." ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Sid shouts ... "Akshay you've lost the right to call her your wife.She wants to be free from you..She wants to start a new life with me... ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜† "

"I don't believe you...my Mamta can never do that..she still loves me...right now she is angry with me..that is why she cannot see the truth...but when she comes to know of your diabolic deeds she'll hate you..."

"I won't spare you..if you try to harm us anymore..." ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก

Akshay again progresses to hit him,but his mother comes and stops him.....

"Akshay,come let's go home.."

"And Mamta and Ganapathy...are they not coming...."๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜ญ

"Ofcourse they'll come,but for now let's go home...Doctor has said that she needs one more day's rest..."๐Ÿ˜Š

"Okay,then I'll stay here with her...."

"Akshay...no,listen to me...beta,right now you come with me...if you don't want to spoil matters further.." ๐Ÿ˜•

"Mum,but I need to explain things to her..."

"Akshay,this isn't the right time..."

"Mum..but that Sid...he's a serpent ,very cunning..he'll snatch my Mamta from me.."

"Akshay,don't you trust Mamta,your love..."

"I do ,Mum..more than anything.."

"Then come with me ..."

Akshay looks desperately at the door but was helpless so he decides to leave as his mum said...๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜•

At his home...

"Mum,cos of you...I couldn't talk to Mamta.Now I don't know what all things that Tanisha and sid have fed into her mind....I'll go and meet her right now...and this time you also won't stop me..."

"Akshay,act sensibly๐Ÿ˜ก...she's really shattered and enraged right now...she won't understand you...I'm your mother...I believe you..,but all the proofs are against you.."

"Mum,Tanisha is a lier๐Ÿ˜ก..you don't know what did she say to me about Mamta...she told me Mamta and Sid planned all this to get me out of Mamta's life...so that ...sshhh.. ๐Ÿคข "

"Akshay,beta I don't know whether she's lying or not...but I have to tell you this now...cos you are totally mad in Mamta's love..and I didn't wanted to create a scene at the hospital...๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜ญ"

"What Mum???"๐Ÿ˜•

"Beta, Mamta wants you out of her life..."๐Ÿ˜ญ

"Mum,you too..." he nods at her looking shocked..

"Beta....I'm saying the truth...Look at this...she has send this divorcr notice to you...."

"What???You are just fooling me๐Ÿ˜†...Mum I don't like this type of jokes๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ก..."

"Beta,I'm serious...she wants to get separated from you..."

"N-O!!!!!"๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜กhe shrieks.... "this isn't true...๐Ÿ˜ญ"

"This is the truth...Akshay.."๐Ÿ˜ญ

He gets into a frnzy and shouts, "She cannot do this to me...Huh!!one paper cannot separate us...how'll she take herself from my heart...can she separate it from my heart...can she separate my love from her heart....no she cannot .... ๐Ÿ˜ญ " he then falls on the ground crying....His parents rush to him....
Edited by poohtarang - 18 years ago
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to the hospital!


thank youuu ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Tanisha and Sid are so evil! ๐Ÿ˜ก
Awesome update Pooja! ๐Ÿ‘
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CHAPTER FIFTY SEVEN




He looks at the divorce notice and stands there petrified...

Next day.....

Mamta comes with Sid and Tanisha to college.She left Ganapathy at home in care of Shanta bai..

Akshay comes in front of her and halts her way...He holds her hand...

"Akshay,leave my hand." ๐Ÿ˜ก

But his grip becomes firmer... ๐Ÿ˜†

"Akshay,leave her ๐Ÿ˜ก " Sid comes and holds his hand.

"Sid,leave him. ๐Ÿ˜ญ I don't wanna create a scene here. ๐Ÿ˜• ..Akshay what do you want?"

"You,Mamta...and my child.. ๐Ÿ˜ณ "

She pulls her hand in great rage and goes into the class.

Akshay stops Sid...he holds his collar and says, "What ever you do,you'll never succeedin taking her away from me...cos she was always mine and she'll always be mine...understood!! ๐Ÿ˜ก " he pushes him...

Sid angrily goes into the classroom,with Tanisha...He tries to sit near Mamta ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜ณ ...,but Akshay comes and sits there..making him grind his teeth in anger. ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜†

The exam begins...Mamta is writing the exam...but Akshay is staring at her...Tanisha looks angrily at Mamta with loathing eyes... ๐Ÿ˜ก

She murmurs, "You'll never let me have him..."

Mamta gets distracted by his constant staring at her..she puts her left hand on her forehead...hiding her eyes...and concentrates on her answer sheet... ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Akshay smiles ๐Ÿ˜ณ and grabs her left hand and pulls her hand towards him ๐Ÿ˜ณ ...Mamta gives him an angry look..and tries to pull her hand... ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ณ

"A-k-s-h-a-y!!!" she shouts... ๐Ÿ˜ก

"SSsshhh!! Quiet...this is an exam...!!" the teacher scolds them... ๐Ÿ˜†

he holds her hand throughout the exam.He also fiddles with her hair and duppatta...irritating her..she waits helplessly till the exam got over.. ๐Ÿ˜†

She gets up pulling her hand...he too gets up...she raises her hand to slap him...and he closes his eyes...she is not able to hit him..looking at his innocent face..her heart doesn't permitt her to do so. ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

She walks away...Sid follows her...

Tanisha comes to him,seeking the moment as a good chance to get near him....

"Akshay,forget her...she'll never come back to you...I told you the truth...Start a new life...she was never meant for you...I'm always there for you..."

"Thanks ,Tanisha...but I warn you ...One more time you come near me with all this rubbish...I'll kill you...understand...I'll kill you..and I'm neither afraid to do so nor do I care.... now leave..out of my sight..." ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก





Edited by poohtarang - 18 years ago
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CHAPTER FIFTY EIGHT




Akshay doesn't go behind Mamta thinking that he'd stay away from her ,if it gives her happiness.Tanisha was restless to get his love .....

On seeing a heart broken Akshay sitting in his room, his father and mother comes near him and consoles him.

"Akshay,beta life is a battle, some times you win and sometimes u lose...but you fight on...either with flowers or thorns....hence sometimes you get roses and some times pain..."๐Ÿ˜ญ

He still sits absorbed in his thoughts๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜ญ looking at Mamta and Ganapathy in the photo.His parents are really worried at his condition.

"Akshay, beta say something๐Ÿ˜ญ..talk to your mum..beta...Your silence is really killing us...Oh! God,why does my son have to face all this everytime,when everything seems to come on track for him..." ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ

"Rakhi,control yourself...If you also lose your courage,who'll console him..." says Rishi.

Rakhi gets up as if she had decided something,wiping her tears...

At Mamta's home........the bell rings....

She opens the door,it's Rakhi...

"Maa...you here...please come in..๐Ÿ˜Š" she takes her blessings..and brings her into her room to Ganapathy..

"See,beta..who has come..Dadi has come to see you " and she gives Ganapathy to Rakhi... ๐Ÿ˜ณ

"I'm so happy to see you both...Mamta...๐Ÿ˜Š"

"Maa, please๐Ÿ˜• .I know what you are going to say?? I can't do that,don't force me ...You are his mother and my child's grandmother...also you are my mother...but some relations are better if not united..like mine and Akshay's...I can't see him as my Akshay now..he's lost the right..."

"Mamta ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ I won't force you...It is that I cannot see my son killing himself slowly...in pain..."

Mamta turns with tears...and tries to ignore what she said...

Ganapathy tries to divert their attention to him...he chuckles๐Ÿ˜†...and shows them a photo of his father...

Rakhi smiles๐Ÿ˜ณ and kisses him.. "Oh, my child...you do miss your Pappa.."

"Mamta ,I won't force you..but can you do me a favour...this is the request of a mother...Tomorrow is Karva chauth and we are having a function at our place..It would be your first Karva chauth and all our relatives and friends would ask about you...we can't tell them the truth now..it'll ruin our family name..I beg you Mamta ...can't you come there as Akshay's wife for one day...please ..." ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ

"Maa, please get up!!๐Ÿ˜ญdon't embarrass me..I'll come..but just for one day..and promise me you won't force me for anything.."

"Ofcourse not..I knew you'd agree..."

She then kisses her forehead๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ญ and gives Ganapathy to her .She smiles๐Ÿ˜Š and leaves....
Edited by poohtarang - 18 years ago
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pooja! man.. how did i miss this FF? i read all the chapters yaar & it's going so well.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

in fact i think it is much better than the usual screenplay mamta had for the past few months!

awww.. i just could imagine anand & neha enacting out the scenes in front of me. great job jaanu!๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

akshay has to suffer in this FF as well? poor dear.. i hope he gets his love back soon.๐Ÿ˜›

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