Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #2 OS 7 Link to #3 in Pg 1

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Uarnkhui

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Posted: 11 years ago

#861

I wish khushi slap him. 😡 God save asr from khushi .

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devishree

@devishree

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Posted: 11 years ago

#862

wow smita di new story new concept/challenge

loving the differential concept

so anjali the cry baby again making a victim of herself in a self pitying drama

so ASR is charging like a bull on khushi always the perpetrator cum judge

poor shyam i pity u here😕

khushi is so innocent

god i loved ur "stealing husband phrase " been intercepted by ASR and khushi

so attraction b/w ASR and khushi exists i feel the only finding i find here😉

waiting for the update soon di

very anxious too

rashmi thanks for the mails

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#863

Great update Smita!

Khushi being Khushi didn't understand the complexity of Arnav's interrogation, which for sure heightened Arnav's 'need' as he slowly forgot about mission save the cry-baby from the other woman 😛

I wonder what and how Khushi will react to Arnav's accusation. I hope the fiery & feisty Khushi comes out!!

Loved it! Looking forward to the next update :) please update soon, please 😳

Thanks for the email Rashmi ! :) x

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sonal

@srain10

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Posted: 11 years ago

#864

Ok Arnav acted like a jerk once again..

Can Khushi slap him hard for saying all those words...

Atleast by listening to her innocent replies Arnav should gave understood her...

Waiting for next update...

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yoga123

@yoga123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#865

Awesome parts 5 and 6...poor girl she did not know what she was accused of...she is innocent and our mighty ASR is blind sighted of his sister...hope he doesn't hurt her...thanks for the PM

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Rattyswami

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Posted: 11 years ago

#866

I hope she slaps him😡 bewakuf kahin ka...

kuch ka kuch hi samajhta hai...

pls let Shyam blast Anjali for her impulsive and immature attitude...

She sooo deserves it

I hope that Arnav realizes his folly in the next update...

and he moves heaven and hell to apologize to our Sankadevi...

And Khushi better make him work damn hard for her forgiveness😉

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ajeetha

@abivicky86

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Posted: 11 years ago

#867

loved the story after all asr ne apna aukaat dikaa diyaa behen ke aasoo ne bhai ke dil ko piglaa diyaa na aao dekha na tao usne jaleibi ko apna dushman maan liya kab sudrega anyways loved kushis answers to him waiting for his reaction