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sincereme

@sincereme

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Posted: 11 years ago

#851

Fabulous update...

Arnav took her to guest house by smooth talking and being sweet... Can't he see how innocent and naive she is... And in the guest house it was hilarious... 😆... I didn't know, should I be feared of his anger or laughed at khushi's answers... Hamein ulti agae tou ap ki khair ni...😆... That was the limit... But now I m scare... What will Arnav do?? I hope he wont do.anything wrong in his anger.. Loved the update...

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Nilpori

@Nilpori

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Posted: 11 years ago

#852

can i slap Arnav..???? khushi is sooo innocent...khushi's dialogue was hilarious...

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#853

Wah Wah Smitaji. Thoroughly enjoying this one and the reactions to it. See after the first few updates everyone was like maybe she is his sister. But we know better. Now everyone wants to get violent.

Her innocence came thru wonderfully in her responses to his questions. I am surprised he didn't think about them a little bit more. anticipated the idea of him kidnapping her and asking behuda sawal ab aage dekhe hota hai kya. I am sure you will surprise us again.

Appreciate the dig in the names of the office staff😉

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Vithagan2304

@Vithagan2304

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#854

khushi's s sch an inncnt soul

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BS.ILoveYou

@BS.ILoveYou

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#855

Ya...even i want to give Arnav & Anjali both a tight slap...

Bhaangi nakhu...todi nakhu..bhuko kari nakhu 😡

P.S: Unres on page 141

Edited by B.S.I_Love_You - 11 years ago

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-Zesty-

@-Zesty-

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#856

Originally posted by: rulama

😆

I saw your name in the fan fiction forum in last post and thought you updated ...😆

nice quote ... Arnav is broke ... not financially, what he doesnt has is, love, a pure unadulterated love... and the kind of love he has seen, we all saw ... a love who expect protection in return, expect him to make everything alright ... Anjali may love her Chhote ... but that is not a love a man like ASR needs to make him a better person ...

He needs a pure love, who has no expectation, no bound, not this exchanging business -- you protect my safe cocoon , i will love you in return ... he needs a love he has no believe at and that will make him believe that all middle class, poor people are not like he thinks of them , it will make him trust people ... when you will witness purity yourself, then only you will believe it ..

Eagerly waiting for next update :)

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Deepa

@deepa.e

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#857

Super excited!!

So another update today? or no??

I loved it!! LOL!! it was so hilarious to read the firstpart as i slowly traveled throu it i felt like slapping arnav myself so am sure kushi will do that! its a high possibility!