NiBir FF: Teri Meri Love Story(Chp 17&18-pg 93)*8/4*COMPLETED - Page 27

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Posted: 9 years ago
niya... amazing n lovely as always...
Kai baar dooriyaan hume nazdeekiyon ka ehsaas dilati hai - wah kya line hai
write shaayris in your updates i love them...plzzz...n ty for the pm
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Originally posted by: naina.majik

niya... amazing n lovely as always...

Kai baar dooriyaan hume nazdeekiyon ka ehsaas dilati hai - wah kya line hai
write shaayris in your updates i love them...plzzz...n ty for the pm

Thanks.. will try to write one 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey guys.. sorry for not updating yesterday.. some technical issues 😆

Now.. please ignore the mistakes.. I have not proof read it.. and please silent readers.. either you comment or leave a like😡
Enjoy the chapter😳

Chapter 4

Nisha and Kabir reached Gangwal house .. throughout the ride they were remembering their childhood... and Nisha kept asking for her gift and Kabir would give her the same reply..

"Ghar pohunchke mil jaye .."

When they went inside they found the entire family in the garden area .. Everyone saw Kabir and became very happy .. Kabir went to Dadu and took his blessings..

Dadu : Bohut deer kar di tumne aane main beta.. abh aaye hot oh kahi jana mat .. aur agar jao toh akele mat jana..

Kabir understood what Dadaji meant and smiled

Kabir : Jee Dadu.. abh toh yahin rehna hai mujhe ..

Kabir took blessings from the elders .. Bunty and Jwala had just retrned from the school.. Sukku also came from behind... they were shocked to see Kabir..

"Kabir Jiju.." The three said in union..and came running to him and gave him a tight hug ..

Kabir : Arey.. arey... kya kar rahe ho.. araam se .. main gir jaunga...

Jwala: Jiju app kahan the.. and appne kal Nishu bro ko wish kyun nahi kiya ?

Bunty: Haan Jiju.. Appko pata nahi Nishu bro kitni gussa thi..

All this while Nisha just stood with her mouth wide open... what the hell was going on over here.. Dadu is talking so sweetly to Kabir... Her sibilings and cousins are calling him " Jiju " and Kabir is not saying thm anything..

Nisha : Ek minute... tum sab isse Jiju kyun bula rahe ho ? and Dadaji.. akele mat jana isse appka kya matlab hi.. yahan chal kya raha hai koi batayega mujhe...??

"Main batati hun Bhabhi.."

Kabir's sister Krisha came down with Dolly and KIrti.. she went to Nisha and hugged her tightly..

Krisha : I missed you so much Bhabhi ..

Nisha : I missed yo too Krish.. and mujhe Bhabhi kyun bula rahi ho..

Krisha : Ohoo.. abh Bhai ki mangetaar ko Bhabhi hi bulayenge na Bhabhi... she winked at Nisha..

Mangetaar.. Bhabhi.. Jiju.. Nisha was just getting confused..

Nisha : Koi mujhe detailed explanation dega .. kya ho raha ?

Kabir : Yeh dekho.. tubelight.. isse abh tak kuch samajh nahi aaya..

Nisha : Oye.. duffer chup kar..

Kabir : Duffer main nahi duffer tu hai... sab humari baat kar rahe hai.. as a couple..

It took a few mintues for Nisha to digest what Kabir said.. Couple ? Was he serious ? That means.. Krisha meant that Kabir and Nisha are going to get engaged..

Nisha : Iska matlab ?

Kabir : Yes.. Krisha means to say ki humari sagai hone wali hai..

What the hell was this guy.. Nisha thought... He is saying so calmly about their engagement..

Nisha : Engagement.. tujh se ??

Kabir : Haan..

Nisha : Never.. saying this she went to her..

Kabir : Arey.. yeh kya tha? He looked at everyone and all gave me "You are so stupid look "

He looked at everyone with a confused expression on his face and asked " Kya ?"

Kirti : Oh common Jiju.. aise koi kisi ladki ko engagement ke bare main puchta hai kya ?

Kabir : Matlab ?

Dolly: Oh Gods..! Idiot tumhe usse ache se puchna chahiye.. proposals ke saath..

Kabir : You mean to say main usse propose karun ?

Krisha : Ofcourse bhai.. go and propose her now..

Kabir : Na.. I am not going.. he sat on the cot ..

Before anyone else could say anything Dadaji said

Dadu : Soch lo Kabir.. aagr Nisha ki manzoori nahi hui toh sagai nahi hogi.. He left saying this and the other elders also left with him.. only Kabir and cousins were left

Kabir stood up in shock.. Dadu was blackmailing him..

Kabir: This is not done..

Vasundra came with Laxmi.. they went to the shop to bring something and saw cousins and Kabir in a deep thought.. Laxmi went to Kabir and he took her blessings

Laxmi : Kya hua.. sab itne pareshaan kyun hai ?

Dolly: Nisha ne sagai ke liye na ka di..

Laxmi: Kya.. kyun ?

Dolly and Kirti explained them everything ..

Laxmi: Hey Bhagwan yeh ladki bhi na..

Vasundra : Nahi Laxmi.. bilkul theek kiya hai ussne.. Jojo.. yeh koi tareeka hota hai kisi ladki se sagai ke liye puchne ka.. ? Jao aur jake Nisha ko propose karo ache se..

Kabir : Maa..

Vasundra : Hume kuch nahi sunna .. jao aur jake propose karo.. abhi.. aur yeh lo.. Hume yeh box khali wapas chahiye.. Now go..

Kabir took the box and went to Nisha's room.. the door was open and Nisha was sittin near the window... she sat with her legs crossed..and was staring outside the window.. He went and sat next to her...He took her hand in his hand.. Nisha felt a tug on her hand and found Kabir sitting there .. rubbing the back of her hand.. he kept staring at her hand and started speaking his heart out..

Kabir : Pata hai Nisha.. inn do saalon main na maine tujhe bohut miss kiya.. Jab ta tujh se phone pe baat nahi hoti na tab taka cha nahi lagta tha mujhe... tune mujhse kaha tha ki hum Video hat nahi karnege .. tujhe pata hai do saal tak tujhe bina dekhe rehna kitna difficult tha.. par jo hua acha hua.. agar aisa nahi hota toh shayad mujhe kabhi nahi samajh aata ki tu kitni important hai mere liye.. main seedhe seedhe apne dil ki feelings kahunga tujhse.. Nisha.. I love you.. inn do saalon main mujhe samajh aaya ki tu mere liye sirf e dost nahi hai.. tu dost se badkar hai mere liye.. Main nahi janta kab kaise.. but sirf itna pata hai ki tujhse pyaar hogaya.. pehle toh mujhe dar laga ki kahin meri iss feelings ke wajah se humari friendship na affect ho.. but phir socha ki agar main apni feelings nahi confess karunga toh shayad yeh humari friendship ke liye unfair hoga... Nisha yeh sab jane ke baad tu jo bolegi mujhe manzoor hai.. Nisha main..

He finally looked up at her and saw tears in her eyes.. he felt terrible for making her cry...He took her in a hug and started apologizing

Kabir : Nisha I am really sorry Nisha .. main tujhe rulana nahi chahta tha.. I am so sorry... dekh agar tujhe sagai nahi karni toh theek hai main sabko mana kar dunga but .. tu ro mat

Nisha broke the hug and started beating him... Kabir got confused.. seconds ago she was crying and now she is beating him.. is she mad.. or his it was his confessions effect..

Nisha : Idiot.. Duffer.. Gadha kahinka... Tujhe kya lagta hai maine tujhe miss nahi kiya ? and what do you mean sagai nahi karni.. ofcourse mujhe sagai karni hai.. and tune socha bhi kaise ki I don't love you..

Kabir : Yaar main confused that.. tu itni khatarnak jwalanshil ladki.. aur main itna shaant masum sa ladka.. mujhe laga kit u mujh se pyaar nahi karti..

Kabir was back to his K paan

Nisha : Kabir tu kitna K hai..

She was about to beat him when he caught her hand..

Kabir : Chal abh mujhe ring pehna ne de..

He removed the box from his pocket and opened it.. there was a beautiful platinum band with diamonds studded in it .. Kabir was about to make her wear the ring when she pulled her hand behind.. Kabir looked at her in shock

Nisha : Meri ek shart hai..

Kabir: Kya ?

Nisha : Iss bare main.. I mean humari sagai ke bare main kisi ko pata nahi chalega.. except ghar wale and Saurav...

Kabir felt relaxed..: Ok done

Nisha : Aur tu mujhe tease nahi karega ..

Kabir: sorry sirf ek shart manijayegi and e shart maine maan li..

Before Nisha could say anything he took her hand and slipped the ring in her ring finger..

Kabir: Chal abh meri ring pehna ..

Nisha : Ring kahan hai ?

"Ring yahan hai "

Krisha the cousins came inside and hugged the two..they were followed by the other family members .. Nisha and Kabir looked at each other.. were they all standing outside the room spying at them..

Krisha : Lo Bhabhi Bhai ko ring pehnao...

Nisha : Krish please..mujhe Bhabhi mat bol mujhe bohut ajeeb feel hota hai..

Krisha : Aww ok .. toh main appko Nishu bro hi bolungi..

Nisha : Haan much better..

Krisha : Abh ring toh pehna do..

Nisha took the ring from the box and Kabir stretched his hand forward with a big smile on his face.. Nisha made him wear the ring.. they were lost in their own world while the others were clapping for them ..

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Sorry for a small update 😳
Chapplas of size 4 only please😳
No andaaz and tamatars 🤢
Edited by Niya_789 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Mamaaa... Mamaa... Mamaaa... Y do I always have REAL LIFE feels Wenevr I read Updates??🤣

Super Duper Update👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Toh "Engagement Ring" Tha Nishu Ka B'day Gift ☺️😆🤣🤣

Waise Mamma Wen I was reading the start I was like😕 Hain?? NiBir ENGAGED kab huye?? Mera haal bhi bilkul Nishu ki tarah thi...😆🤣🤣🤣When I read further My confusion gayi🤪

Par kuch bhi kaho Mamma NiBir r DAKKANS & No one can give competition to them😆🤣🤣

Nishu ko Yeh baath samja nahi aaya ki Sab GF uski Engagement ke baare main bol rahi thi aur doosari taraf Kabir hai jo ladki ko Bina PROPOSE kiye bas keh dia aaj sagai hai...🤣🤣

Mamma Aapne inki DAKKANESS ki heights aur badha dii apne Imagination se..👍🏼 iskeliye U deserve an Extra Hug & Clap nah???😉toh lo... 🤗Jhappi plus 👏 clap 🤣🤣🤣

Dadu : Soch lo Kabir.. aagr Nisha ki manzoori nahi hui toh sagai nahi hogi..

Dadu BM ng Kabira...😉😆🤣 Suprb 🤣🤣🤣

Vasundra : Nahi Laxmi.. bilkul theek kiya hai ussne.. Jojo.. yeh koi tareeka hota hai kisi ladki se sagai ke liye puchne ka.. ? Jao aur jake Nisha ko propose karo ache se..


I loved how Vasu supported her BAHU than her BETA jo show main nahi hua par I really Liked dat scene where Vasu scold Kabir & Say "teekh kiya Nishu ne"👏👏👏👏 Nice thought Mammaaa👍🏼👏👏👏

NiBir Proposal was giving me SOLID REAL LIFE feels...😈😉😆🤣 aap SYS🤣

My fav part was the PROPOSAL... ☺️So sweet, ☺️So cutee... ☺️So Romantic..☺️👏👏👏

@RED Awww☺️



He went and sat next to her...He took her hand in his hand.. Nisha felt a tug on her hand and found Kabir sitting there .. rubbing the back of her hand.. he kept staring at her hand and started speaking his heart out..

Kabir : Pata hai Nisha.. inn do saalon main na maine tujhe bohut miss kiya.. Jab ta tujh se phone pe baat nahi hoti na tab taka cha nahi lagta tha mujhe... tune mujhse kaha tha ki hum Video hat nahi karnege .. tujhe pata hai do saal tak tujhe bina dekhe rehna kitna difficult tha.. par jo hua acha hua.. agar aisa nahi hota toh shayad mujhe kabhi nahi samajh aata ki tu kitni important hai mere liye.. main seedhe seedhe apne dil ki feelings kahunga tujhse.. Nisha.. I love you.. inn do saalon main mujhe samajh aaya ki tu mere liye sirf e dost nahi hai.. tu dost se badkar hai mere liye.. Main nahi janta kab kaise.. but sirf itna pata hai ki tujhse pyaar hogaya.. pehle toh mujhe dar laga ki kahin meri iss feelings ke wajah se humari friendship na affect ho.. but phir socha ki agar main apni feelings nahi confess karunga toh shayad yeh humari friendship ke liye unfair hoga... Nisha yeh sab jane ke baad tu jo bolegi mujhe manzoor hai.. Nisha main..

He finally looked up at her and saw tears in her eyes.. he felt terrible for making her cry...He took her in a hug and started apologizing

Kabir : Nisha I am really sorry Nisha .. main tujhe rulana nahi chahta tha.. I am so sorry... dekh agar tujhe sagai nahi karni toh theek hai main sabko mana kar dunga but .. tu ro mat

Nisha broke the hug and started beating him... Kabir got confused.. seconds ago she was crying and now she is beating him.. is she mad.. or his it was his confessions effect..

Nisha : Idiot.. Duffer.. Gadha kahinka... Tujhe kya lagta hai maine tujhe miss nahi kiya ? and what do you mean sagai nahi karni.. ofcourse mujhe sagai karni hai.. and tune socha bhi kaise ki I don't love you..

Kabir : Yaar main confused that.. tu itni khatarnak jwalanshil ladki.. aur main itna shaant masum sa ladka.. mujhe laga kit u mujh se pyaar nahi karti..

@Violet Hawww😆🤣🤣🤣🤣 Jwalanshil ladki & Shaant Masum sa ladka🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣


Nisha : Meri ek shart hai..

Kabir: Kya ?

Nisha : Iss bare main.. I mean humari sagai ke bare main kisi ko pata nahi chalega.. except ghar wale and Saurav...

Kabir felt relaxed..: Ok done

Mujhe na ek Sentence sunke kuch ajeeb laga...😕😆

@Bold Y didi Nishu said so???😕

Nisha : Aur tu mujhe tease nahi karega ..

Kabir: sorry sirf ek shart manijayegi and e shart maine maan li..


@Blue Kabir's K panti😆🤣🤣🤣

Before Nisha could say anything he took her hand and slipped the ring in her ring finger..

Nisha took the ring from the box and Kabir stretched his hand forward with a big smile on his face.. Nisha made him wear the ring.. they were lost in their own world while the others were clapping for them ..

@Brown Finally NiBir's Engagement ho gayiii🥳😆😆🤣🤣

Thanks 4 PM😳

Do write More🤗Q ki DMM😳😆🤣


Edited by SaruSenan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Such a cute update 😳
Nisha sachme tube light hai 😆
NiBir engaged
Continue soon...
Edited by Itsmeriya - 9 years ago
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kya bolu ab mai niyu tjhe... 👏 👏 👏 this was just awestruck... I so can imagine this scene 😳
Edited by mansi_as18 - 9 years ago
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such a cute and sweet update niyuu😳😳 Nibir engaged🥳 such main muje tere aur Kshitji ki yaad aagayi.😃😃..u told na tum dono ka bhi bday pe hua tha😉😉
Kabir n the family members scenw was nice Dadu 😉 sab ne milke plan kiya lekin Nishu ko bataya nahi 😉😉 bunty jwala n sukku huggng Kabiraa😉😳 i love this trio with Kabiraa😛😛😛
Bhabhi and jiju😆 bechari confuse hogayi LOL
yeh kabiraa such main duffer nikla...aise kehthe hai kya koi engemnt ke baare main🤣
Vasu Laxmi and cousins scenes with Kabir 👏👏 nice to see a different Vasu 😉 jojo😆😆
that proposal scene😳😳just loved it yaar😉😉ring exchange and sab family hide and watchng
so sweet
yeh dono chupa kyu rahe hai enegenmnt ki bath😉
waitng 4 the next part😉😉


Edited by ammu4u - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yaar niya kya update tha dil kush kar diya tum ne
and the confession was awesome and also with their nok jhok
but nisha iss ke baare mein kisi ko batana kyun nhi chati confused
thanks for the pm
Ritika
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow ... mindblowing update ...👏👏👏
It was superb ... NiBir confession was very sweet ... loved it ...😳😳
Thanks for the pm n sorry for being late 😊
Edited by Amina... - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mishrialways

Yaar niya kya update tha dil kush kar diya tum ne

and the confession was awesome and also with their nok jhok
but nisha iss ke baare mein kisi ko batana kyun nhi chati confused
thanks for the pm
Ritika

Thank you.. for liking it😳
Uske reasons appko next chapter main pata challenge 😆

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