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Crazypheonix008

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

another one to add in the list of your masterpieces Brishti! 😃 The contrast of Parikshit's childish innocence and Arjuna's mature melancholic nature was perfectly described! Indeed it must have been hard for Dhananjaya to recall the past events concerning the people he had lost in the great war. Loved the bonding between Grandpa-Grandson and also Father-Sons and the small ArSu moment was cute too! 😳 All in all it was an awesome OS Brishti! 👏
P.S- Sorry for the late reply

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Dr Sweety Shinde

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Grandpa Dhananjay - that's a quaint image.

Even though we know they aged, somehow Vyas keeps us thinking of his epic cast as forever young.

Nice to have another perspective on the great man. Cheers!

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.Vaikartana.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Brish you are a master at description.I was amazed at the way you described the weapon room.It was so minutely detailed.And then Arjun Parikshit bonding❤️I loved the boys innocent question "am I not your best friend?"That was so cute and pure.Blissful were ArSu family moments.Loved it.The story made me feel emotional but yet light hearted.And reading from Arjun Parikshit angle made it really special.Not much has been written about it So it was refreshing too.

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Brishti Sarkar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: .Vaikartana.
Brish you are a master at description.I was amazed at the way you described the weapon room.It was so minutely detailed.And then Arjun Parikshit bonding❤️I loved the boys innocent question "am I not your best friend?"That was so cute and pure.Blissful were ArSu family moments.Loved it.The story made me feel emotional but yet light hearted.And reading from Arjun Parikshit angle made it really special.Not much has been written about it So it was refreshing too.

Hey Vani thanks a ton!!! U made my day with such a sweet and beautiful comment.. Yes. I try to describe weel..thats the best part of writing fr me.. its like mixing all my imaginations like colours in a palette and throw them on canvas.. description is that way!!! And u r so correct people leave out those parts so blatantly. Arjun Subhadra itself is ignored. :/ Anyways, thanks darlin..glad u liked it :*

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Brishti Sarkar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: shindes
Grandpa Dhananjay - that's a quaint image.

Even though we know they aged, somehow Vyas keeps us thinking of his epic cast as forever young.

Nice to have another perspective on the great man. Cheers!

Thanks for the kind words. I like showing the human aspects in the characters and hence I put forward the humanly traits like age and emotion. :)