RISHBALA FS - FOREVER WITH GUILT - (Last Part Updated on Pg 12 - 14/7) - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: silverfire

Fab update.

So madhu ditched RK n he is feeling lonely.
What is this precap. Don't tell me he is married to dips. I can't bear that. No!!!!!!
Waiting for the nxt part...


Thanks a lot Dear for your comments 😛 Well what happens next and to whom RK marries is for you to read 😛 Surely dear , will try to post the story soon 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: lucygrey21

awww poor rk. waiting for next


Awww . Don't feel bad for RK 😛 Definitely Dear will try to post the next chapter soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Glad Dear that you liked the story . Keep enjoying 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 3

*After 2 yrs*

Wife - Rishu ! How are you feeling now ? Is the fever gone ? Did you take your medicines for fever ? Why have you put the AC at such a freezing temperature ?? You are already sick and you want to get more sick .?

RK - Oh my darling wife . How much tension do you take ? Your parents chose the wrong name for you . Your name should be Mrs. Tension Rishabh Kundra rather than Mrs Deepali Rishabh Kundra.

Deepali - Rishu ! Not funny . You know how much I love you . I can't see you in pain nor sick

RK - I know my wife , and your Patidev loves you more than you love me .

Deepali (faking annoyance) - Oh really ! So you think you are going to compete and win in this love challenge from your wife ?

RK - Naah my sweet wife . I can never win from you . You are the only one in front of whom this business tycoon Rishabh Kundra's head gets bent down with respect . I can win from this world but from you I always like to loose . Thanks Deepali for coming into my life .

Deepali - Rishu just stop it . I am your wife and not any random person or your employee . Why do you always thank me . I love you unconditionally, you jerk . And in love , thank you and sorry is an insult . So stop insulting my love for you or else you are going to sleep tonight in another room .
(Holding RK's face with both hands) Rishu ! my love for you can never change and no one can change it .

RK - I know that wife that's why I love you because you gave me a reason to live and a bright life to have . For you I can do anything .

Deepali - RK ! You were the first person to help me in college and become my friend . From that instant it made me respect you and I don't know when this respect turned into love for you . But when you fell in love with Madhu I was shattered but then I realized that its not necessary if you love the person then the same person will also love you back . And I was very happy that you found the true love in a person who loves you deeply. But den ...

*Flashback*

RK din't know where he was going walking on the road and neither did the road knew where to take this man who has lost everything just few minutes ago .

Deepali (running towards RK and coming near him) - RK what are you doing here ? This road is so deserted , if anything happens to you then how will your mom live ? Come lets go home .

RK (who was still standing like a statue devoid of any emotion) - Nothing will happen to me Deepali . After what happened few minutes ago nothing more bad can happen than that . So stop worrying about me and go from here . I want to be alone for sometime .

Deepali (looking at RK) - RK please at least for your mom's sake lets go home .

RK (finally breaking down on the ground cries painfully) - Dipali she hates me . She never loved me . My love never meant anything to her . I weaved those dreams of a happy life with her and she crushed it just to satisfy her Ego and to avenge me . Deepali my love couldn't make her overpower her ego . I thought that she has become innocent , naive , good hearted in love , but NO . She proved me wrong . All this was just an act to appease me so that she could break my heart into million of pieces.

Deepali (who was now crying seeing RK like this wiping her tears roughly) - RK comm'on getup. You should cry only for that person who loves you equally for the love you have given to that person and not for the person whom you love . And why are you crying ??

RK you dint loose anything in fact she is the one who lost everything . Its her failure that she couldn't recognize the depth of your pure love . Wen she will understand about it , It will be too late . Then prove her RK that you are not poor but a rich man , not only in status but also with a heart . RK don't become weak . I am with you . Your mom is with you . We both love you very much RK and not for your status but for your heart which is made of gold .

RK my dad always used to tell me that God is seeing us from heaven and he always keeps a balance in our life . If bad things happen then even good things also happen . And RK good things always happen with good people . Its just that , right now timing is not good . Comm'on RK getup and stop crying over a person who doesn't love you or who doesn't know what love is all about .

With saying that , Deepali takes RK to his home where Radha was quite shocked to see RK in such a pitiable and broken condition .

Radha - Deepali beta what happened to my Rishu ?? Why is he looking so pale and why is he crying ? Just look at his eyes , it has become red .

Before Deepali could avert this topic RK says - Maa your daughter-in-law never loved me .

Radha (looking at Deepali) - What's wrong beta ? Why is RK saying like this ? What happened ?
With that Deepali tells everything that happened in the college hall to RK's condition to Radha .

Radha gets quiet shocked listening to all this and looking at his son's condition she faints .

Deepali - Aunty . Wake up

RK - Maa what happened to you ?

*At Hospital*

Doctor - I am sorry Rishabh beta but your mom has got a major heart attack and so she needs to stay here for some days so that we can observe her .

RK breaks down completely on hearing this from doctor that he holds the nearby chair for support .Deepali keeps her hand on his shoulder to prevent him from falling weak .

RK - Deepali within a night I have lost everything . Two I mean one person . How can fate be so cruel to me ? What sin did I commit that all this is happening with me ?

Deepali (who had tears in her eye seeing RK in so much of pain) - RK don't loose hope . Aunty will get well very soon .

Radha's condition kept on deteriorating and on the 8th day she died. This was the final nail on the coffin of RK's emotion . He felt like committing suicide but Deepali like a true friend always kept on motivating RK to live and create a big name for his mother as a tribute . Within one and a half year RK through his hard work became a big name in business industry . Now he was not a middle class man but an aristocrat man .

And after few weeks he was shocked to his core when Deepali proposed him . Although he din't love her but since she was the only person who was with him standing like a pillar,a guide,a philosopher, a person with whom he can share his emotions , so he din't wanted to break Deepali's heart because he knew how painful rejection is , so, he married her but since he din't wanted to start this new relationship of marriage on lie he told Deepali that he din't love her but he wants to marry her because she loves him and so he doesn't want to break her heart .

But then its said that its not necessary that a person can not fall in love the 2nd time and so seeing Deepali's love , care and respect for him made RK felt like a loved man . He felt that the love , trust and attention he wanted was been given to him by Deepali and Deepali never expected anything from RK in return . And now even RK felt that when life is giving him a second chance to fall in love and be a happy man then he shouldn't let go of this opportunity because not everyone is lucky to get love second time especially with such a painful past in the same love . RK couldn't resist from falling for Deepali for a long time after seeing all these qualities in her . 3 weeks back he surprised Deepali by professing his love for her .

*Flashback Ends*

RK - Leave it wife . Lets not talk about bad memories . We should always keep good memories with us and you are one of them .

Deepali (faking anger)- Seriously Rishu ! How much movies do you watch ?

Deepali (with quite a hesitation) - RK do you regret marrying me . I mean do you feel guilty of marrying me?

RK (quite shocked) - Why do ask this ?

Deepali (feeling awkward) - Because ...

RK (understanding that where this question was heading) - Deepali ! Earlier I felt guilty of marrying you but not now because as a wife you are entitled to all the rights from your husband and I behaved like friend and never behaved like a husband to you . That was my past and you are my present and future . And past should never come in present to spoil the future . Deepali , presently the truth which will last in future also is that I love you .

When everyone left me making me feel orphaned then you were the only one who supported me holding my hands . I married you because you had helped me a lot but now I love you because gradually I realized that you make me feel special and complete and you never expected anything from me nor from this relation nor you forced me for anything . So how can I not fall for such a person ? You are my wife and you are my life . And Mrs Tension Rishabh Kundra if I din't love you then I wouldn't have proposed you 3 weeks back .

Deepali - love you too Rishu .


Suddenly their romance is disturbed by the knock on their bedroom door .

Servant - Sir there is a woman who wants to meet you desperately . She came here yesterday also but you and mam were out .

Deepali (looking teasingly at RK) - A woman . Ohh hooo not bad Patidev . So another woman is going gaga over you . Seriously RK your charm never fails to impress anyone . Not even me . Call him inside Patil .

RK & Deepali were shocked to see that person at their doorstep .

Both in unison - YOU !!!!!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
so finally rk found true love in deepali
I think the person at door is madhu
Superb update cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
Amazing Update
So RK is married to Dipali
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fab update.
So RK found true love.
Think this story is not going to end with Rishabala lived happily ever after. As the title says madhu is forever going to live with guilt. Just my assumption.
But RK married to dipali n happy with her.😕 That's a bit difficult to digest. YUCK!
Let's see how this FS is going to end.
By the way the person on the doorstep is madhu.

Thanks!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update...! I feel yuck..! Honestly imagining the lovey dovey talks btwn Rk and dips coz I can never take they two getting married and happily ever after...other than Rishbala...but here it's totally diff as the title itself says abt Madhu living with guilt so may be this has to be there...I know at the doorstep is Madhu but it's going to be too much painful for her I guess now...as I expect may be Rk wud behave as rude as possible with her and he is deeply in love with dips so...may be now this FS is gonna be DipRish or RishDip happily ever after LoL...and madhu wud be in guilt I guess it but at last u r the writer so may be u can change it in anyways...!
Let's see the next wt is gng to be btwn our Rishbala to happen...very hard time for madhu :(

And hey ur writing so well even though it's ur first :) keep writing...eager to read the next...plz update soon dear !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely Update...👏 👏 👏

Though I would have never liked to see Deepali as RK's wife, but then in this FS, I have really loved Deepali's character bcos she supported and stood by RK, when he had no one around...😊...she truly loves him...😳

Cant guess how the FS wud progress, but with what Madhu did to RK, am sure RK wud never be able to trust her again...also he lost his mother due to that tension...😭...and I really hope Madhu lives "Forever with Guilt"...😡


Kudos for thinking out of the box and first time pairing RK-Deepali...👏 👏 👏...showing Madhu as vamp...👏...liked the different concept...😊


Pls update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sorry, cant like this update 😊.
Hated it . YUCK! 👎🏼Had i known u wud make them a couple n i wud hav to read their lovey dovey yuck then i'd hav nvr continued reading this story.
sorry, but its indigestible for me n i hated it sooo mmuucchhh.😡
I hate dipali sooo mmmuuccchhh .🤬 Im sure she did sumthing evil .😡
u should have named it diprish FS or wateva .
I thot u wud make madhu realise her love n then RISHBALA together but i guess u had already planned to show madhu as vamp n dipali as a very good girl/ heroine . I guess even Rishabh's love wasnt dat strong for madhu .😭
Im sure lots of insult is coming up for madhu n she wud have to see their lovey dovey talks or who knows may be madhu wud be dead in next update like suffering fron deadly disease .
Fault is mine . I shudnt have read it further .But , wont read it further .
[No offence ] nothing against u 😊 but i hated this update 😡.
peace out!😆😆😆
Edited by GOODLUCKANGEL - 10 years ago

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