KIARA IN DANGER 13.12
ABHIR&KIARA 14.12
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PART 218
G-Wo mujhse shayad baat hi nahi karna chahta tha
Ma-Kya bol rai hai? Aisa ho hi nai sakta
G-Warna 4 mahine baad bhi kuch kehne ko nahi hai uske paas. Naa khud phone kiya, naa milne aaya, naa chitti ka jawab dia
Ma-Tune hi usse bhagaya tha... shayad tere bulane ka wait kar raha ho
G-Maine kaha bhi. Khair, aap baat karlo
Ma-Phir? Tune kaha to kya kaha usne?
G-Kuch nahi kaha. Phone kar lo. Kehke let jaati hai
Maa bhi pareshaan. Phone karti hai Maan ko
Ma-Hello, Maan beta
M-Hello
Maan ki awaaz wahi mechanical wali hai...maa ko bhi lag jata hai ki ajeeb awaaz aa rahi hai.. ki kuch to gadbad hai
Ma-emm..kaise ho beta? Tabiyat to thik hai naa?
M-That is none of your concern. Aapko ek kaam ke liye kaha tha. You couldn't even do that much!! Kaha tha ki koi bhi problem ho Geet ko mujhe batana. MUJHE PHONE KYON NAI KIIYA?!!!???
Ma-Kya keh rahe ho beta?
Maa to ghabra gai
M-Uski tabiyat kharab ho gai uske lag gai and nobody informed me!!! NOBODY!!! TUTTE hue haath se letter likha us idiot ne!! 1 kaam kaha tha.. 1 kaam
Ma to chup...stunned si ho gai hai
M-HOW DIFFICULT WAS IT TO DIAL ! NO.?!!! Are you even her mother??? Do you even care?!!! Kuch bhi hota hai...you just let her suffer!!
Ma-Wo..beta..wo
M-SHUT UP!!
Geet was also there...maa ko upset dekhke hairaan hai
M-I swear!!! Agar adha dimag hota Geet mein to she would never have had to go to though any discomfort
Geet snatches the ph from Maa
M-Damn it all!! Kuch mat karna aap, ab jo karna hai main kar lunga
G-Ye kaise baat kar rahe ho tum maa se?
Maan chup ho jata hai Geet ki awaaz sun kar
G-Meri maa hai wo. How can you insult her? Tumhari maa ki umar ki hain. Aise baat karoge? How cloud you insult her?
M-Nahi pata kuch bhi mujhe...nahi pata kisse kaise baat karte hain, nahi pata ki kaun jhoot bolta hai, kaun sach...nahi pata kisp par bharosa karun, kispar nahi... kuch nai pata mujhe . Do you understand?
She is sniffling
G-Koi meri family ki beizzati kare, main ye bikul tolerate nahi karungi
M-Mat karo tolerate...you can never tolerate me anyways
G-Kya? Maan are you ok? Maan calm down please
M- I will not talk to you now...tumse main baad mein baat karunga
G-Kya ho gaya hai tumhe? Aise kyun react kar rahe ho? Are you having panic attacks?
M- Panic? [He laughs aloud maniacally. No I am perfectly calm.
G-You are not
M-I have to go now
Maan phir phone kaat deta hai...he won't talk to Geet
She calls again but Maan nahi uthata
Geet looks at ma
G-Pagal ho gaya hai ye. Oh God!
She hugs maa and maa hugs her back
Maa- Kya hua hai Maan ko? Maine kabhi...wo... he was always so polite and nice... he shouted... maine kabhi usse... Geet kya hua hai usse?!! What did he say to you? Kya baat hui hai tum logon ki? Mujhe naraaz hai samjh aata hai par... his reaction was so extreme...
G-Mujhe nahi pata maa...[she looks concerned]..wo kuch kehna hi nahi chahta, chillata rehta hai, phone kaat deta hai, baat nahi karna chahta, samajh nahi aa raha ho kya gaya hai
Maa- But... he was so concerned about you...why does he not want to talk to you?
G-I don't know maa. Mujhe to kuch samajh nahi aa raha. His reactions have never been this extreme
Maa- Beta I am scared for you... he sounded so violent... tune pehle kaha tha ki he has grown obsessed and all but.. aaj mujh aisa laga as if he might even hurt you...
G-Nahi maa. He won't hurt me; I know that
Maa- Nai Geet tu nahi janti...he was shouting but... but... kya bataun.. gussa nahi tha uski awaz mein...aisa laga jaise decide karke... chilla raha ho.. so that his words had maximum impact...he is.. pata nahi beta... bohot ajeeb awaaz thi.. jaise uski ho hi nahi,. jaise koi aur hi baat kar raha ho
Geet is silent yet extremely worried
G-Main kya karun? Ghar chali jaun?
Ma-Nahi!!! Bilkul nahi!
G-Nahi?
Ma-Nahi Geet...you can't
G-Kyun nahi?
Ma-I don't like it... nahi tu nahi jaegi
G- Mumma, he is my husband. He needs me
Ma-To ?4 mahine se nahi tha kya? Nai tu abhi nai jaega. Talk to him on phone first...usse pehle nahi
G-Phone pe kaise baat karun, phone nahi utha raha; kehta hai, i don't wanna talk to you now, will talk to you later. Pata nahi uska later kab ayega
Maa-- Kuch be keh... tu nahi jaegi. I can't let you go..
Maa atak jati hai ek hi baat pe
G-Maa, main bachchi nahi hoon aur aap to aise bol rahe ho jaise Maan is a monster. I can handle him, I know that
Maa papa ko bhi bulakar keh deti hai ki Maan ne badtamizi se baat ki thi and he sounded violent and convince karliya ki she shouldn't go
Papa is also like ki Nahi, nahi jaegi...
G-No papa, Maan is fine. Usse gussa aata hai kabhi kabhi. I can handle him
Papa-Agar he is fine then you need not go anyway
G-He needs me dad. Wo mera ghar hai, mujhe wahan jaana hi hoga
Papa-Usne kaha tumse? Nai naa...he doesn't even want to talk to you... nahi beta it's not right...we won't let you go
Geet chup ho jaati hai
G-Kaha nahi to iska matlab ye to nahi ki aane se mana kar dia
Maa- Baat nahi karna chahta tujhse.. ..shayad abhi naraz hai ki usse bataya nahi ki teri tabyat kharab hai... aise mein gai to aur gussa ho jaega.. aaj baat nahi kar raha to kal kar lega... thode din ruk ja aur beta
G-Achcha, milne to jaa sakti hoon naa
Maa- Teri tabiyat kharab hai aise mein gai to aur gussa ho jaega shayad milne se bhi mana kar de, shayad wo abhi ghar par ho bhi na
G-Ghar par nahi hoga to koi baat nahi, koi to hoga naa...naukar to honge
Maa-Maine kaha na jab tak tabiyat theek nai hoti kahin nai jaegi tu ghar ke bhaar pair tak nai rakhegi
Maa says getting angry finality in her words. She didn't like the words which Maan had said about not taking care of her...about her getting sick and hurt under her care... about his questioning what type of mom she is
G-Shekhar bhaiya chod ayenge naa
Ma- Main dekhti hoon kaise chodta hai tujhe
G-Papa samjhao naa, mujhe Maan ke lie chinta ho rahi hai
Papa- Nahi maa theek keh rai hai tumhari.. waise hi tumhari tabiyat itni jaldi kharab ho jaati hai... Maan waise hi naraz hai is pure episode se.. tumhari tabiyat aur kaharab hone se kisi ko bhi acha nai lagege na kisi ka gussa khatam ho ga. 15 din aur ruk jao phir main khud tumhe chod aunga. Hum is baat par aur discussion nahi karenge
Geet chup ho jaati hai
Papa- Aur Maan ki chinta karne ki zarur nahi hai, bachha nahi hai, bada hai tumse. Uski nahi tumhari tabiyat kharab huyi hai..
Wahan Maan is continuing his work...slowly disintegrating everything...jo usne post kiye the land and property ke papers Sam ko mil jate hain
Geet calls Maan next morning par Maan nai uthata... call divert kar deta hai uski
Wahana Sam bhi call karta hai poochne ke liey ki Maan ye kya kar raha hai uska bhi phone Maan nahi uthata
Jo bhi phone kare Maan ka well wisher ya media poochne ke liye ki wo kar kya raha hai kisi ka phone Maan receive nahi karta
Sam ko bohot tension hoti hai and he contacts their other juvi mutual friends to wo bata dete hai ki Maan ne unke sath bhi bhaari settlement kiya hai.. aur bhi khabar milti hai and Sam could guess ki Maan apne business ka kya kar raha hai
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PART 219
Whana Sam bhi call karta hai poochne ke liey ki Maan ye kya kar raha hai uska bhi phone Maan nahi uthata
Jo bhi phone kare Maan ka well wisher ya media poochne ke liye ki wo kar kya raha hai kisi ka phone Maan receive nahi karta
Sam ko bohot tension hoti hai and he contacts their other juvi mutual friends to wo bata dete hai ki Maan ne unke sath bhi bhaari settlement kiya hai.. aur bhi khabar milti hai and Sam could guess ki Maan apne business ka kya kar raha hai...kyun he doesn't know. par kya to wo samjh jata hai
Ab tak jisko phone kiya sabke saath Maan ne koi settlement kia hai... ab bas Geet bachi hai
He searches from her contact net se...directory se... Ram Singh se...and finally calls her home
Udhar Maan phone nahi uthata to Geet family ko convince karne mein lagti hai ki zarur kuch gadhbadh hai Maan isn't picking up call mujhe ghar jaane do
Ghar wale adde hue hain ki nai jaegi
Maan ko Geet ke se baat kare hue kuch 5-6din ho gaye hai
Sam calls
sam-Hello?
G-Hello
sam -Geet? Is that you?
G-Haan Sam?
Sam-Geet tumhari Maan sebaat hui hai kya? Wo mera phone receive nai kar raha hai
G-Mera bhi nahi, kitne din se try kar rahi hoon
Sam-Damn it...
k-Baat hui thi ek hafta pehle tab bohot gusse mein tha naa jaane kyun.
Sam-kya 1 hafte?!! kya kaha usne?
k- Mujhse kaha I'll talk to you later
Sam-Kaisa hai wo? Is he ok? Did he sound ok?
G- No he didn't sound ok. Phir naa phone kiya , naa lene aaya, naa phone utha raha hai. I am very worried
Sam-Tumhe lene?
G-He sounded weird
Sam-Mechanical?
G- Haan mechanical... ajeeb sa
Sam-Oh God oh God
G-Samaj nahi aa raha mujhe kuch...mujhe laga lene ayega par aaya bhi nahi...main wait kar rahi hoon, aur wo hai ki koi contact hi nahi
Sam- Wo lene nai aya? Wo to keh raha tha ki tum usse milna nai chahti ho. Geet tum usse chod kar apne ghar kyun ayi?
G-Main ghar aayi thi kuch dino ke liye. A scandal broke out phir meri tabiyat kharab ho gai to ghar walo ne yahan rok liya
Sam- Phir wo ruka nai tumhare paas he wouldn't care about a scandal.. uski poori life 1 scandal.. .why did he leave you? Tumhare ghar walo ne kuch kaha kya usse? Kab ayi thi tum.. usse bina bataye aye thi kya?
G-Nahi uske saath aayi thi
Sam-Kab Geet kab?
G-4 mahine ho gaye
Sam-4 MAHINE!!!!!!! Oh God... oh God... Maan...oh God..
G-Kya...? Kya hua?
Sam-Geet mujhe batao ki Maan tunmhe chod kar gaya kya hua tha?
G-A scandal broke out...I...was upset to maine ghar aane ki zidd ki wo lekar aaya aur maine usse jaane ko kaha ki aur kaha ki..mujhe jab lagega to main aa jaungi ...media was hounding us aur in 4 mahino mein meri himmat nahi hui phone karun, kyunki there was risk of media
Sam chup rehta hai...phir he whipers-
Sam-You bitch...
G-Usne bhi nahi kiya pata nahi kyun, mujhe laga baat thandi hogi lene ayega...lene bhi nahi aaya...I wrote a letter
Sam- You cold@$%!@^$.
She is jaw dropped at his cussing
Sam-Khushi mil gai tumhe uske sath khel kar!!
G- Khel kar?
Sam-You sent him away. God knows how you did it
G-Maine kya kiya?
She is sniffling
Sam-Usse jo karna hota hai karta hai...but you made him leave...main sunna bhi nai chahta tumne kya kaha hoga aur tum keh rahi ho ki lene nai aya tumhe? tume kaha ki wapas jaogi...he waited for you, you $!%!%!#$. He waited for 4 months for you @$%!@ and you say it's his fault?!!!
G-but... didn't say that
Sam-My God you are worse than all women he ever met in his life
G-I didn't even call and...
Sam-No you didn't, did you? 1 call kar deti... kitne paise karch ho jate tumhare!!
G-I wasn't well so... I thought if I would call then media and all...I thought he will take me when right time comes
Sam-Wasn't well!!! Call nahi kiya gaya you cold bloodsucking money digger coward!! Mar raha hai wo!!!
He is dying damn it! And you are thinking!
G-Kya?????????????? Kya keh rahe ho tum????
Sam-I don't care why you pretended to love him...
G-I love him. I really do.
Sam-At least you could have carried out your deception to the end. He could have died happily not like...God...
Geet is sobbing uncontrollably now
G-Don't say that. Where is he? Kahan hai wo?
Sam-Ro kyun rahi hoo!!! Pagal ho tum?!! Sab kuch deke jayega tuhme, don't worry.
G-Chup karo Sam !!!!!!!!
Sam-Every damn penny I am sure tumhe hi dekar jayega. Ab to khush ho jao..you got the best of Maan Singh Khurana his heart, soul, dignity and life
Originally posted by: raibdrop2
Wow👏 except for the cuss words I'm thrilled at the way Sam blasted Geet. I felt like shaking her myself all these days.
But Geet's way of writing in the letter (previous update) was very sweet and innocent - you switch well according to the characters.I hope she will save him on time and remain MATURE. Please do update early to give us respite:) It's a beautiful story with dark emotions.
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