FF: PYAR KI KASUATI epilogue updated page 104 oct/10

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FF: PYAR KI KASUATI...

Hi with another ff I am at your service...

PROLOGUE:

IN DEHLI:

In room

Ishita crying and speaks to raman photo...: wapis ajao nahe jee sakti tumhare bina mien meri aik galati ki itni bari saza mat do ... Bus aik baar wapis ao ...

Her trances was broken by an infant cries...

Ishita took infant in her arms...shows her raman photo and Ask baby: tumhain bhi papa chahiye na??

And the baby stops her crying...

Ishita: dekha raman ruhi bhi ap ko chahti hai ap ne abhi tak apni beti ko nahe dekha... ap to ye bhi nahe jante kay apki aik beti bhi hai mere liye na sahi apni beti kay liye wapis ao... Aik baar baat to karo... poora saal hogaya hai apko ghar chor kar gaye hue... koi pata nahe hai apka... meri galti ki itni bari saza mat do... wapis ajao... and again start crying

In hall

Toshi: bas mein ne faisala kar liye hai kay mein ishita ko ghar say nikal doongi...

Mr. bhalla: ruhi kaise rahegi usky bina...

Toshi: abhi uski dadi zinda hai mein paloongi usy...

Mr. bhalla: mere jeete je ye kabhi nahe hoga sun lo kaan khool kar...

Toshi: is ishita ki waja say mera puttar ghar choor kar chala gaya...

Mr. bhalla stops toshi jee and says: mein apko wo galati dobara nahe karne doonga jo apne pehly ki thi... Muje yaqeen hai raman wapis ajaye ga... manta hoon usy wapis ane mien zyada waqt lagaya per uskay zakham bhi to zyada aur gehry hai ...

Mr. bhalla leaves... toshiji thinks: mein tumhain yahan say nikal kar rahoongi ishtia agar kal tak mera beta wapis na aya aur muje koi rook nahe paye ga...

IN DUBAI:

A handsome man was sleeping on bed suddenly he awake and scream: ishitaaa

Raman: mera dil ghabra raha hai zaroor kuch galat hone wala hai... mein wapis a raha hoon ishita.. sorry tumhain itna intezaar karwane kay liye... dial number and book a seat for dehli ...

index

part 1 : page 2

part 2 : page 4

part 3 : page 5

part 4 : page 8

part 5 : page 11

part 6 ; page 15

part 7 : page 19

part 8 : page 23

part 9 : page 28

part 10 : page 34

part 11 : page 39

part 12 : page 42

part 13 : page 48

part 14 : page 52

part 15 : page 57

part 16 : page 61

part 17 : page 66

part 18 : page 71

part 19 : page 76

part 20 : page 81

part 21 : page 86

part 22 : page 92

last part : page 97

epilogue : page 104

CHARACTERS ARE BELOW

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Raman bhalla: son of toshi and omprakash bhalla. Childhood friend of ishita loves her..

Ishita iyer: daughter of madhvi and vishwanathan. Childhood friend of raman loves him..

Omprakash and vishwanathan: best friend... want to get married their son and daughter...

Madhvi and toshiji: does not like each other and madhvi want ishita to get married to subbu...( brother of her daughter in law ) toshi want raman to get married to shagun( daughter of her friend)

Bala: brother of ishita husband of vandita...

Mihir : brother of raman loves mihika

Mihika: friend of ishita loves mihir...


Should I continue??

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thanks for appreciation will update part 1 tomorrow

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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice Start
plz do continue
Thanks For pm
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plz continue, the plot is mysterious and exciting at same time. wanted to read more. update soon
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hyee...
This is intresting...I like the start...Excited to read further...
Continue soon and thanks for pm...
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interesting prologue
will wait to read it
continue it soon😊
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Lovely start..
Yeha par be toshiji villan bangaye..

O raman not knows about ruhi birth and he has a daughter..
He left ishu ..but y..waiting for that.

i want to know how their love and marriage life started..

Raman dont know ishu pregnency news also?

Tosiji is so bad, how she think to seperate mother and daughter ..?and she want to throw ishu out from her house.

Raman is coming to india..yeh kya naya syaapa ayega ab..india ke aanai se pehile..

Thanks for pm..and continue soon..
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Originally posted by: janani_divan

Lovely start..
Yeha par be toshiji villan bangaye..

O raman not knows about ruhi birth and he has a daughter..
He left ishu ..but y..waiting for that.

i want to know how their love and marriage life started..

Raman dont know ishu pregnency news also?

Tosiji is so bad, how she think to seperate mother and daughter ..?and she want to throw ishu out from her house.

Raman is coming to india..yeh kya naya syaapa ayega ab..india ke aanai se pehile..

Thanks for pm..and continue soon..


wow comprehensive comment...
i will start from beginning, their hardships
and due to ishita one mistake how raman hurt badly that he left house...
but as the name suggest "pyar ki kasuati" their love will win ultimately...

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part 1
here go

PART 1

Scene 1

Raman dropping ishita at her clinic...

Raman: mein tumhain laine aonga.. to please khud mat jana..

Ishita: mein bachi nahe hoon jo rooz muje laine aur chorne ate ho...

Raman: pagal ye sab mein iyer uncle kay liye karta hoon...

Raman leaves...

Ishita thinks bus ravan kumar is Sunday mein tumhain apni dil ki baat bata kar rahoongi kay mein tumse kitna pyar karti hoon... Hope tum bhi mujse pyar karty hogay...

Raman sitting in car thinks bus madrasan ye chuhe billi kar khel khatam... Iss Sunday ko mein tumhain propose karoonga... bus tum haan kar do...

In park:

Mr. bhalla and mr. iyer walking...

Mr. bhalla: iyer sahib mein sooch raha hoon kiyon na hum raman ishita ki shadi karwa dain?

Mr. iyer: mein bhi yehi soch raha tha kay hum apni dosti ko rishtedaari mein badal dain...

Both laughs...

Mr. bhalla: mien aj hi toshi je say baat karonga...

Mr. iyer: mein bhi

In bhalla house:

Toshi ji talking on phone: haan haan baat pakki hai ... raman ki shadi hogi to shagun say hi...

In iyer house:

Madhvi talking o phone: haan ishita ki shadi subbu say hi hogi...

In coffee shop

Mihika: mihir muje dar lagta hai ye dono itne egoistic hain kay aik dosre say bohat pyar karty hai per bataye nahe... tumhain to pata hai aunty kabhi inki shadi nahe hone dain gi...

Mihir: tu chinta mat kar... they are meant to be together... sab theek hoga...

Scene 2:

In bhalla house

Toshi ji: bhalla ji mein ne ap say aik zaroori baat karni hai...

Bhalla: haan mein ne bhi karni hai... pehle meri suno.. aj mein ne iyer saab say raman aur ishita ki shadi ki baad kari hai... unhain koi aitaraz nahi... good news hai na..

Toshi ji gets shocked... but remain quiet..

In iyer house:

madhvi: vishwa mein ne tum say aik zaroori baat karni hai...

iyer: haan mein ne bhi karni hai... pehle meri suno.. aj bhalla sahab nay raman aur ishita ki shadi ki baad ki hai... mein ne haan kar di hai... Acha kiya na... ishu khush rahe gi

madhvi gets shocked... thinks muje toshi say baat karni hogi...

Madhvi calls toshi to meet at terrace..

Toshi: kiya baat hai?

Madhvi: ishu aur raman ki shadi...

Toshi: mein nahe chahti...

Madhvi: agar dono khud mana kar dain to?

Toshi: kaise?

Madhvi: suno...

Toshi: theek hai...

Scene 3

Ishita was practicing how to propose raman.. subbu comes and says mein help karoon...

Ishita: haan sure

Subbu: aik kaam karo tum muje raman samajh kar propose karo...

Ishita: per

Subbu: konsa yahan raman hai jo tumhain misunderstand kary ga...

Ishita proposes subbu ...

But due to evil plan of madhvi and toshi.. raman overhear and misunderstand ishita...

Raman was hurt... He goes to park... shagun comes and says: hi I want to talk to you..

Raman wipes his tears: kaho...

Ishita after practicing ask toshi ji where is raman?

Toshi ji: wo park mein hai... and smiles...

Ishita goes to park. And sees shagun proposing raman... ishita waits for raman reply..

Raman remembers ishita proposing subbu... he also says yes

Ishita feels dejected.. and runs to home crying...

Madhvi and toshi feels bad to see their children sad but they think this it best for them unknown to them it is the worst decision...

Raman and ishita both ask their parents to get them married to subbu and shagun..

Mr. iyer and mr. bhalla was shocked to see sudden change.. they believe raman and ishita live each other but unable to understand what happened that they took this decision...

Both tries to talk to them but raman and ishita were admant...

Bala also ask ishita is she really happy... she says yes...

Mihir and mihika were astonished...

Mihir: raman to aik baar bus aik baar mere kehne par lette likh ishita ko ... muje yaqeen hai kay wo sirf tujh se pyar karti hai...

Raman: accha tu kehta hai to...

Mihika: ishu mere liye raman ko letter likh... please...

Ishita: acha..

Both write letter and raman ask ishita if she loves then come at 6 pm at their favorite park.. ishita also write the same...

But to their misfortune, they letter never reaches to its destination...

Both waits... but again to their misfortune they does not see each other..

Both gets broken...

Raman gets married to shagun in next 10 days and fly to London with shagun..

Ishita engages with subbu... but ask for some time...

Both were busy in their life... they hate each other now ... But yet they love each other... Misses each other...

Unknown to them, their love story does not over yet...

Precap: leap of one year...

I know its very sad update... but it is the requirement of story...

Hope you will like it...

Waiting for your response...

Edited by sparkingsoul - 10 years ago

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