RiShbala SS: RevenGe That WiLL NeVeR END!! (Update on Pg 5)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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REVENGE THAT WILL NEVER END

PROLUGE:

She was panting & sweating but he continued his torture...
he continued to torture her physically
she was begging to let her go, she was begging her freedom from him..
but no he was not listening to her plea..
his was thrusting harder and harder.
he continued this torture for a while when finally he
felt satiable. he pulled out of her harshly.
And she was almost dead ONCE AGAIN!!


He got up dressed himself and said to his guards to take
her away from his eyes.
they did what exactly their Master said them to do.
just before that their Master roughly and with a strong grip pulled
her hairs. She screamed with pain visible in her most beautiful baby brown
eyes.


You will regret every second of your life for forcing me into this
"So called Marriage" of ours!! ...
(he said gritted with PASSION... PASSION FOR !!REVENGE!!
clearly visible in his dark ..very dark blue eyes in which he has no love for her
no sympathy for her ..BUT just REVENGE!! The Anger That Can Bring The Heavy Storm In This
World.

And she just stared at him speechless..

Her POV:

was he the same guy infront of her
who loved her with the passion no
one could ever love anyone in this
world.? was he the same guy who'd
beat the hell out of the world if
anyone dared to bring a sign of tears
in her eyes even?... was he the same guy
whom she trust blindly , whom she love
more than her own parents , whom she respect
More Than ANYONE in not just this World but in
ALL THE WORLDS THE ALMIGHTY GOD HAS CREATED???

Was he The SAME??


Whatever he was or it was... his physical/mentally tortures & his
hatred towards her would never EVER bring even the slightest difference
in Her LOVE which she has for him!!

& that is the only thing of what she is 100% sure about in her life...

...


P.S: Please Ignore My Grammar Mistakes.. it's the first time i,m writing anything on
anyone.. IF u want PMs , Send me a buddy request.. i promise i,ll improve my grammar with
the passage of time.

INDEX:
Chapter 1 : page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats on ur 1st story
Interesting prologue
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Interesting start... Do pm 😊
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Very interesting prologue.
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Lovely Start Sweetie,Please continue and PM Me😃
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Congrats on your first story.
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Iinteresting prologue, waiting to read more, please update soon.
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Hey Congrats on ur new Story...Prologue is really intriguing...its a great start for ur first...different take...😊
And yeah if u love someone truly and trust them and believe in them...even if u try u cant hate them...the last lines of the lady Her POV i really found gud...thats dam true...we suddenly couldnt ourselves change even if trying much from love to hate them...!!

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Firstly Congrats on your story Dear ! 👏

Brilliant start . So RK-Madhu are married as in a forced marriage 😲😲
And Mdhu loves RK . Is there any past to their story ?? I hope secrets are revealed sooner 😆
Continue soon 😳
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intresting.eager to knw their past

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