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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: leena63

amazing update
I feel very sad when she said that her family didn't like her & last she told that her name geet,, she want to heard only from her mother,means her parents loved her but something happened to them so her so cold other relatives treated her badly or her real family treated her badly ?

her mother loved her n bro too 😛😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --mittu--

Thank you for updating di 😳
wooho geet is going with maan 😃
felt sad for her when she said abt her 😭
and the dialogues...they are very casual. .i mean like we talk!! I really love the way u r writing the dialogues 😳
Till now she didn't disclose her name 😛
hope maan will itself call her as GEET 😉
Loved it!!
Thank u for the pm di 😳

Geet .. He isn't gonna call her that 😉 other name on the way 😆😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: angeldream14

amazing

she is going with him or she said she will leave him till road n he misread it
will she ever tell him her name
hurt by a lot of people still she is more civilized that others even whens she lives in a jungle

she is junnglii but yet lovely 😉😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

maan found geet in the jungle but couldnt get her out of his mind

he lost himself in the jungle
he went back to find her
she agreed to go with him or is just seeing him off

they are connected from the past

😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank u 😛

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Posted: 10 years ago
PREVIOUS : PART : 6

RECAP: they kept walking ... he was happy that she is finally going out of this place towards his world ..
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PART 7

At some distance she looked here and there , he guessed she is up to something ... And in the other minute she was climbing on apple tree , her slim body was so appealing , thin waist , white skin , she was testing his patience now .

" Ufff ! what r u thinking maan .. behave urself "he chided himself ...she was on the top now ...

"baby , come down " he called her baby unintentionally ...

She shouted from top

" kya ?? baby kisse bulaaya ? main bachi nai hun " [ what ?? i m not a kid ]

... Good!!! now he got what will he call her .. " baby " ( lo ho gya naam karan 😆😆😆)

"apna naam nai btao gi to baby hi bulaon ga ,, baaabieee " [ if u wont tell me ur name i will call u baby ]

She throws apple toward him ,which he catch before it hit his head

" kya kar rahi ho ?" [ what r u doing ?? ]

" naam change kar nahi to sab k sab tere sir pe mar dun gi " [ change the name else i will throw all these on u ]

she throws another one , he again saves himself ..

" dekho baby , muje yehi pasand ha " [ baby , i like this only ] he was loving her cute angry expressions ..

She climbs down and comes infront of him .. he was holding both the apples she thrown ..

" de " [ give me ]

"kya doon ??" [ what ??]

" abbey hero , apple de ,bhook lagi ha " [ give me apple , i m hungry ]

" tumhain bhook lagi ha ? ?" [ r u hungry ?]

" aur main paied (tree ) pe tuje dekhne to nai gai thi k upper se kaisa dikhta ha , de ab " [ then ?? i didnt go up to see how u look from top ]

" hmm" ,he hands her apple and she start biting it ...

" khaaye ga kya ?? [ will u eat ? ]

" haan " [yes ]

" to kha na , tere haath main ha " [ then eat , u have one in ur hand ]

" nahi , jo tum kha rahi ho wo chaiye " [ no !! i want the one u r eating]

He hold her wrist , and takes bite right from where she had one .. she looks into his eyes , which were speaking some other language , she didn't learn this before??

" tu theek ha na ?" [ r u ok ?] he was lost in her .. she waves in front of him " aeee " ,..

he was still lost ..she hit his shoulder a bit hard . he comes back to his senses

" umm ohh , I .kuch nai ."

" pata ha tu aisay dekh raha tha jaisay movies main hero heroine ko dekhta ha " [ u know ! u were looking like a hero looks at his heroine in movies] she was giggling ...

"tum khud hi to muje hero bulati ho " [ u call me heroine urself] he was trying to cover his own behavior ...

" haan par main to heroine nai hun na " [ but i m not heroine ]

"to ban jao ,meri heroine " [ then be my heroine ]

" ziada dialogue marne ki zarurat nai ha , jaldi chal der ho jay gi " [ dont say too much dialogues , come quick we will get late ]

" baby , u r so unromantic "

" haan to jungle main trees k sath romance karun ?" [ so ?? should i romance trees in jungle ] he laughs .. he do smile but don't know after how much time he laughed heartedly ... only she could do this ..

" aisay hi hastay raha kar , acha dikhta ha " [ do laugh like this , u look good ] .. first time she complemented , that was straight .. she wasnt shy types .. will say whatever she feels .. ...

" haan ! tumharay sath raha to aisay hi hasta rahun ga " [ yes ! if i stayed with u , will keep laughing like this ]

" oyeee ! apni khaabon ki dunya se bahar aa ja ab hero, boht ho gai dialog baazi " [ come out of ur dream land now , enough of ur dialogues ] 😆

He was literally replying like a lover , but he didn't mind with her , had he said all this to some other girl , she would have claimed herself MRs khurana .. they were near the road , his car was parked at some distance

" suno ! tum sach main chal rahi ho na " [ listen , u r really coming with me ? ] he wanted to confirm , he didn't believe she is really coming , how come she agreed so quickly ..

" yahaan tak a k b pooch raha hai , koi ha tere sath ?" [ y r u asking ? is there anyone with u ?]

" nahi ,wo bus wese hi "

" kaisay jaay ga? [ how will u go ]

" car wahaan parked ha ,ussi main chaltay hain "[ my car is parked there , we will go by that ]

" kitni dur hai ?" [ how far is it ? ]

" ziada dur nahi ha , aur road b khaali ha ,tum chal sakti ho " [ not so far , u can come ]

" haan chal " [ ok lets go ]

They start walking , and reach his black BMW , which was parked at some distance , she liked it ...

" hero , apni personality k sath matching car b rakhi ha " [hero , u have the car matching with ur personality ]

" tumhain achi lagi ?" [ did u like the car] .. this may be the first time Maan khurana needed approval for his choice ..

" haan ,achi to ha " [ yes its gud ]

" tum b le lena aik " [ then u can also buy one ]

" main kya karun gi?? " [ what will i do ?] ...

" drive karo gi , offcourse " .. [ offcourse u will drive]

" par muje to cycle b chalani nai aati ,, bhool gai ha , bachpan main chalati thi " [ but i dont know how to even drive a cycle , i used to do cycling in childhood ]

he smiles .. how she must look while riding bicycle

" acha chalo , baaki baatain baad main " [ ok we will chat later]

"theek ha bye " [ ok bye ]

" bye ???"

he was confused , she was coming with him then y this ???

' haan main ne galat kaha ?? koi jaata ha to bye hi boltay hain na ??? [ did i say wrong ? when someone goes we say bye right ? ]

" par tum to mere sath chal rahi ho na ? [ but u were coming with me ?] .. how much he hated this bye today ..

" o hero , tere sath road tak chalne ko bola tha , aai na main , ab kya chaiye ?" [ hero , i asked to accompany till road , what do u want ]

He held her shoulders angrily " tum ?? .. she looks at him in confusion ... he close his eyes , realization struck him, she didn't say to come with him to his world ...

But he didn't like it , past few hours were best for him. With her in her world ..

" tu gussa kun kar rha ha ??" [ y r u getting angry ? ]

He loose his grip on her shoulders n then leave her ..

"Sorry , main chalta hun" [ sorry i have to go ]

"sunn , " [ listen ] she moves her hand forward but , he sits into in his car , and drive away in anger ... She stood there in confusion for few minutes ,what happened to him suddenly .. ??

"Teri samajh main nai anay wala ,is liye chal , andhera honay ko ha " [ i cant understand him , its turning dark , i must go ]

Both again leave to opposite worlds once again , she into hers small one and he into his own luxurious life ..

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While coming back , she again passes the same apple tree , looks at it , she recalls him calling her " baby" , then the way he was looking into her eyes , the way he takes bite of apple , unknowingly her lips widen in a beautiful smile ,

" boht cute ha , pata nai kia hua jo aisay chala gya , ab kabi nai aaye ga , main kabi nahi mil paun gi us se " [ he is so cute .. dont know what happened to him , y he went off like this .. i will never be able to meet him ]

Last thought made her sad ...

" wo kun aaye ga mere liye ? meri to zarurat hi nai usse "[ y wll he come for me ? he dont need me ]

she starts walking again with sad thought of never meeting him again .. last traces of light were left , she still had to walk more , she was walking but was lost somewhere else today , y she felt bad that he left in anger ???

Ahh ! she feels some pain on her leg , looking down she see a snake creeping speedily into the bush ,.

" arghh , kaat gya phir se , kahan hai tera dehaan geet , ab kya karun ,zehr phail jay ga " [ oh!! it bite me again .. where is ur attention geet !! , now poison will spread ]

she takes the knife, place a cut ,n let the blood ooze out , she sits on the near by rock for sometime ..

" ab tak nikal gya ho ga zehr " [ poison must be out till now ]

she plucks a leaf and place it on her cut , in sometime it sticks to it and blood flow stops ..it was pitch dark now ... she starts walking quickly and in sometime she reaches her hut , she lits the fire outside n in its light she applies balm on her cut ... then go in and lays down , but sleep was no where near her eyes , she was restless , and didn't know the reason herself .

next : PART : 08

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This part is long hain na ..Hope i didnt bore u .. and i really hope u guys like this jungle romance between hero and baby 😛

for pms add .. :geet_cutehanda





Edited by abba12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mujko pata tha k geet usko road tak hi chor g
Nice update waiting for next

Love the way both talk with eachother [:)]
Edited by fariya20 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update
Knew geet won't go with maan
Maan angry n went away
Snake bites geet... She too restless
Will maan come again...
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Posted: 10 years ago
so nice update loved it so much
please continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww. Lovely update
Love baby n hero. Cute couple
Hope maan come again.

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