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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: abba12

ANYONE WANT NEXT UPDATE 😕... ya kal hi ??

Abba me waiting eagerly jaldi update dedo😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: DIGVIPAUL


Don't worry.. Romeo has no problem wid u working after marriage..


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Amna di!! aapki dil ko Romeo chura liya kai kya 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --mittu--


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Amna di!! aapki dil ko Romeo chura liya kai kya 😉

dekho na romeo ko main pasand aa gai 😆
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Thank u guys 😉

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PREVIOUS : PART : 10

RECAP : He went to his room , after laying comfortably he again think about her , how his life is changing , the turn of events and everything .. he never felt like this before , his own concern for her make him wonder , he wanted to know why she asked him not to meet her that day .. .. in the pool of his own thoughts he drifts off to sleep .

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PART : 11 ..

Geet comes out of the room , only when she was sure that he will b asleep till now , she has to go back to her own world , where her presence will not affect anyone's life , it was dark and his mansion was too big , she knew he is rich but he was rich more then her expectations .. his mansion ,office infact everything was classy ..

It took almost half an hour for her to search the main gate , but he already ordered guards not to let go anyone out , without mentioning her ,so guard didn't let her go out ... she examined the surrounding and an idea popped her mind . she went in and came back after sometime , guard didn't have idea she will come back , she tip toed toward back wall , and it was not difficult for her to climb , she jumps outside , and start walking .. she wasn't fully well , but knew he will not let her go that easily , he will question about her past again and seeing brij coming out of his office she didn't want to tell him anything ...

She was too tired to walk , so sits on the bench along the road ... faint memory of childhood flashes , how she and bj used to do cycling late night , just because she liked to do it in night ,bj always accompanied her n Bj's friend too sometimes , the trio loved cycling late night , she didn't know this will snatch everything from her , she didn't cry , her tears dried .. she smiles faintly , she had only those memories to live , everyone leaves her alone so now she will not let anyone be a part of her life ..

She starts walking again and after long time finally reach the road that leads to jungle , it was so difficult to reach there by foot , but till morning she couldn't find any source to go back .. she climbs the tree adjacent to the road , sits on one branch n wait for the sun to rise ..

After sometime first light of the day flashes , she see a bull cart at some distance , few villagers were riding on it , she climbs down and wave them to stop , they stop and she rides , as they reach their village they ask her where she want to go , while she ask them to drop her there only .. jungle was a bit far she could walk , but will not tell anyone ... in sometime she reaches her usual route of jungle toward her hut..


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Maan wakes a bit early , by alarm which he set only for her , as she wakes up early , he also got up early for her , he didn't want her to wait for for him anymore .. he was happy to start his day with her ... he thought she isn't awake yet due to effect of medicines , so he comes to her room after taking bath and ordering breakfast for both ..

He enters the room only to see vacant bed , with sheet properly settled , disappointment ! how he fantacised her in his bed , and he will wake her up .. but then how can he expect something normal from her ... he thought she may b in washroom , but door was open , he checks everywhere , but didn't find her , he had the idea somewhere that she will not stay ,once she said she will go , she will do this ..

guard told him , that he didn't let her go , then how could she go ?

after checking everywhere , he goes to the back side and sees the blood marks on the wall

" arghh ! y did I leave her alone ? I could have slept on coutch " he cursed himself .. she had to take her medicines and doctor asked him to take care , how could he be so careless ..

He quickly goes to her room , takes her medicines n leave to meet her once again ..

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he was on his way when dadi called him, he always loved to talk to her but today he didn't want to, still he receives the call..

" so aap ne hmaari bahu dhoond hi li "

" what ??" this was not what he expected from dadi that too early morning ,,

" same was my reaction " dadi says in a mischevious voice

He was in no mood to guess the hints ..

" wese hum aap se naraz hain , hmaari bahu dhoond li aur hmain hi nai bataaya "

" dadi whats this new drama now ?"

" Oh ! so maan singh khurana forgot to see the paper and news today ?? "

" did they link me with some other celebrity now ?" it was normal for him to get linked with different celebrities n other girl even if he talks nicely with them ...

" don't know about celebrity , but ur face is very clear in pics "

" what r u talking about and which pics ?"

" don't worry , I m not asking u to leave her , if she is ur choice then must b good "

" leave whom ?? "

" arrey , same girl whom u were hugging so possessively in parking lot yesterday" .

" oh I see"

" u have already seen , now I want to see my bahu .. the lucky girl hugging maan singh khurrana "

Now he got to know , this must b hot topic today , he picks the newspaper which was there on passenger seat , thanks to his stars that her face didn't appear , it was fully hidden in his chest .. he smiled looking at the pose ...

" hello ??"

" ji dadi .."

" to kab milwa rahay hain ? "

" dadi she isn't ..."

" don't say she isn't ur girlfriend , I really want u to have one "

" dadi plz she don't like all this " uff , he said something too wrong ,at a wrong point ... now dadi will tease him ...

" oh so u know about her likes and dislikes too ,I m coming back soon maan , its ok if she don't want to come to meet me I will go myself "

" plz stop it dadi , I have an urgent meeting right now , so will talk to u later " he didnt want to get teased any more

" ok , ok agar aap kehtay hain to hum aap ki unn , baaray main baat nahi karain gay , wese naam to jaan saktay hain na ??"

" dadi I don't know myself " now dadi was disappointed , she cant b his girlfriend ,if he don't even know her name ...

" lagta hai hum galat samajh gay " while maan didn't know what she is talking about

" hmmm , ab rakhta hun baad main baat karun ga "

" array nahi hum ne aap ko aik kaam k liye phone kia "

" dadi ,itni subah ... jo b hai main sham main kar dun ga " he wanted to reach soon , and first time he was refusing something to dadi , and was in hurry to cut the call

" bete aap meeting mai hain "

" nai dadi wo bus ,... " he stops midway

" acha sunaiye chota sa kaam hai "

" dadi plz sham main ..."

" nahi urgent ha na ,wo hmaari kuch sarees boutique se pick karni hain "

" dadi ,yeh to kal b kar sakta hun , aur kisi aur ko bhej kar bhi "

"nahi , wo boutique next two weeks k liye band rahay ga ,as owner is going out of country , aur hmain next week apni friend ki party attend karni ha , hmain ussi boutique se saarees leni hain "

" main kisi aur ko bhej deta hun "

" arrey nahi, aap ko hmari choice ka pata ha na ? Koi aur laay ga to hmain pasand nahi aayen gi , and shop is closing today evening only "

"OK " he said half heatedly ..Now he has no choice , he had to go himself ..

" hmain pata tha aap hmaari baat zarur sunain gay , chaliye hum aap se baad main baat kartay hain "

"Ji " he drives back as fast as he could ..and reaches the boutique .. He selects few saarees for dadi quickly .. While selecting he likes a black saaree and thinks how beautiful she will look in it , he buy that for her with matching high heels ,with accessories .. The owner gives him mysterious looks for purchasing that , as she knew his family and dadi well..

He checks the saaree then thinks how she will wear this in jungle , as he knew it will not b easy to bring her here ...so decide that if he is here why not get some other dresses for her ... He goes to other shop and buys every jeans and tops which liked for her .. And ended up buying 20 of them .along with some anarkalis .. Stuffing them in his car , he drives back to jungle .. Near 11 he reaches her hut ... He places all packets on one side ..

She was sitting near pond as always .. He too sits besides her ..

" mere uthne tak to wait kar leti " ..

She looks at him instantly .. " main ne bola tha yahaan mat aaya kar "

He gets angry .. Can she stop this for once ..

" I don't want to hear this again "

" and I don't want to see u here again " first time she replied this way , that too in his tone ..

"Boht ho gya , boht sun li tumhaari baatain main ne ... "

" haan boht ho gya , main ne sirf teri jaan bachai , aur saaf saaf bola tha k tujh se badle main kuch nai chaiye "

" aur us sab ka kya Jo mere saath ... " he went silent , feeling the heat from her arms ... He touch forehead , she was burning with fever .. Now he noticed redness in her eyes and face ..

" do u least care about urself ??" He says gritting his teeth , controlling his anger . ... She don't say anything ..

" chalo mere saath " ..

" mujhe kaheen nahi jaana .."

" zid mat karo ..bht taiz bukhaar( fever} ha "

" pehli baar nahi hua , khud theek ho jaay ga " ..

" ab yeh b bata do k khud kaisay theek ho ga ??"

She gets up and go inside the hut , silently hoping that he will leave her forever , y don't he get that she don't want anyone in her life ... she don't want to hurt him , unknown to the fact that how her words hurt him , he follows her angrily ..

" mera peecha karna band kar de ." she says in orderly tone ..

that was it .. he is worried sick about her and she is behaving as if she don't even know him , he hold her shoulders

" what u think of urself ?? a super woman ?

" muje kisi cheez ka jawaab nahi dena , chala ja yahaan se "

Never in his life he felt that much ignored and no one rejected him ever , but only she do this ... ..

" tumhain kya lagta hai , maan singh khurana cant live without u ?? or u consider urself a princess , without whom MSK will die ? or some prince will come for u ? "

She don't answer back this time , he is telling her that she is nothing for him ..

" get it straight , u r nothing to me , I will not die for the girl living in jungle , who don't even know her own name , her own identity " he said that only to instigate her , may b she answer this way , but he got bit too harsh in all this

Her gaze was fixed on ground , and his words sinking in her ... she knew she had to answer all these questions someday and to save herself from those questions she isolated herself .. no one will trust her , even if she tells .. ..

" answer me , y r u silent now ? ok , I will go ... and I m going " ...


NEXT : PART : 12

PRECAP :

She was shivering with cold , and due to her fever too , he makes her sit between his legs , giving her support ... tracing fingers in her long wet hairs .. which were open like always


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isnt the update too long again .. 😆.. review plz .. i need ur reviews , and got to clear all confusions in further parts which i m typing 😛



Edited by abba12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Loved it as expcted geet left km and went to her place she was week but somehow she reached forest...maan woke up and came to her room only to find empty room he searched for every where but didnt find her he enquired with SG who told him he didnt allow her to go maan knew once she decided its hard tomstopmher doing so he went to ner room and took her medicine and started for forest...he got call from dadi she teased him about his new gf maan saw his pic with geet he declared that there was nothing between them to dadi dadi asked him to collect her sarees from botique maan unwingly agreed he went to botique collected her sarees he also bought black ssree and 20 dresses for geet and went to forest he put the bagd in her hurt and went to sat beside her at pond she asked why he again came maan instigated to know about her now its interesting to seenwether geet will tell him about her and her family
Edited by _Chinmayi_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the update Amna,😳Geet went back to jungle😉that too in her own way,and Maan again went after her.😃Aww Dadi knew through newspaper that Maan has gf,😛but Maan neither accept it nor deny it,😳and till now he himself don't know much about her,😛and he was in so much hurry too,😆but ya he buy a dresses for Geet ,aww so lovely,❤️and when he reach jungle ,she behave rudely with him,as she don't want to trouble him and tell him about her morefeeling so bad that ,now Maan also got angry,and Geet who has fever,need care but she is not allowing Maan to be there with her,waiting for next part,😳loving it,😳awesome. ⭐️Happy Eid in advance dear.🤗



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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: _Chinmayi_

Wonderful part

Loved it maan took her to KM and made her sleep in his room he made her wear annie dress before allowing the doctor to check her up
Maan feeling bad seeing ner condition geet gain concious and found herself in her nero's house ...maan made her drink soup geet remembered about her biji maan wanted to know more about her but geet didnt tell him anything geet wanted to go back to her place but didnt allow he asked her to sleep geet finding it difficult stay here she dont want to out his life in danger so asked him to go and sleep in his room...I think she will once again leave maan and go fto her place

thanks priya 😊 ..

Originally posted by: -padmarao-

Sweet update

Maan taking good care of geet
Will go away while maan sleeping

thanks

thank u 😛

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Why can't geet share with maan
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: crazyfriends007

Awesome update
Why can't get share with maan

she will share 😛

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