MG OS : BreakFree *(Pt 7 & Last Prt @Pg24) *|| Reply to Note @ pg - Page 4

Created

Last reply

Replies

189

Views

23.2k

Users

60

Likes

1.1k

Frequent Posters

punam2712 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#31
what an awesome start
geet's husband is a womaniser and an abuser
but maan is also using her in his mission

she can forgive nikhil as she was naive when she met him, but will she be able to forgive maan once the truth comes out
taahir004 thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Such an Explosive Start

Geet married to Nikil and it seems he enjoys his lifestyle with other woman and dumps them but now Geet too had slept with Maan which clearly shows from his side was a mistake as he just wanted evidence against her husband but instead their both got carried away and Nikil found out that Geet had spend the night with a man but does he know who the guy is
Nikil also seems like a leech taking his belt out why...does he want to abuse his wife too yet he is a man that has to serve and cater for the people but he is doing wrong to his own wife

SheenGcian thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Wow Sobia Amazing Start 👏
Geet is married to a CORRUPT politician.. And Maan is an ACP who is after him..
Uh-huh instead of catchin that bas***d ye kia kar dya Maan babu 😲
Slept with His wife.. Bechari Geet 🥱
Cont soon
anmirza thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Terrific start... Can't wait to read more
Pumpkinseed thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Awesome part .. Geet in love with Maan and married to a minister who doesn't respect her ..Is Maan using Geet for some of his mission ??
chiki143 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Break free geet from evrything yaar... I mean both thed men... one is a womaniuser and a chauvinist. And thed other is an opportunist. Both r using her. And here geet thinks that maan respects her. Poor girl she is in illusion. Break that illusion and make her free. Let her live on her terms and her life as she wishes. Hate both maan and nikhil yaar.😡
sobia4maaneet thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#37
hi all,
i can't thank u all for ur lovely responses ...really
its over whelming for me ...itne saare reviews tou meri regular stories pr itna jaldi kabhi nahi aaye ..🤣
but jokes apart i needed each one of them ...😃
ofcourse everyone has thr own opinion about this story but try to take it as a fiction ..

thanks u all lovely people for encouraging e n hitting the like button ..luv u all

The following 69 member(s) liked the above post:

yashvijaysingh, dpurva, aaahsapca, f.f.f.f, jyotiagarwal, ShakshiShekhawa, Candy_js,

cooljigu, Aakshitha, geethacitra, parveena, vidz.maniraj, Haya1022bmw, sz01, fojiamin,

reshmaakpgmail, mkd.70, aparnapoduri, Paingel, satyasree89, PoonamT, Dazlingdivya,

creddy, leena63, cutekanan, cutestarz, pearl.white, rumana88, neel11, maaneeta17,

vspl, anuradha.nandam, -ASHU-,

TinaSwiss, chiki143, spoorthi28, sparklingeyes11, pari1689, brandgurti,

SHIK.LOVMAANEET, gurtimuskaan, sahibasharma, hemangigazal, nishamna,

sidMLOVER, Alamelu, hermoso, harshithaaa, Hanishadevi, Maaneet099,

angeldream14, _AngelSonu_, annirogc, _SnowFlakes_, jasika08, aparna3011,

sanghita0000, Preeti_Maaneet, Flawed-Beauty, punam2712, _SharmeenLuvsGC, pop77, 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6, love2_soma,

priya_21, khwaishfan, abinash079, taahir004, tabby999,


enjoy reading ..posting part 2 😉
do leave ur reviews n likes ..me waiting ..😳


MG OS : BreakFree



PART 2

Now what ..??

I don't know ..i just bloody don't know swati ..this wasn't part of the plan ..u know it ..i could have never done this to her ..i was only suppose to make her fall for me n get some evidence against that son of a bitch ...

N when I told u ...u have something for that girl

U called me stupid ..

Swati are we going to argue on this now ...the whole god damn mission is on stake now ..geet has left without even saying a word to me n I don't even know is she is ever going to meet me again ..


So what r u worried about ...the mission ..or.. her not going to meet u again ..??

Maan couldn't handle her scarcsm right now n he snapped at her with a high pitched voice he never used with his childhood friend ever ..!!

Swati shut up ..

Alright ..alright ..Listen just calm down ..may be that trophy wife of the minister won't do any of it n would be completely normal tomorrow at ur usual dating point ...we don't have any other option but to wait so kindly for now u please go back to ur bed n take a breather ... u need it ..
Maan couldn't have been at peace no matter what ..from the beginning of it he knew he was developing feelings for this girl ..he tried to stop himself ..he tried to keep a check on himself when with her but logic fails him whenever she is in front of him ...her innocent eyes her trust ..her beauty everything is just so divine ..he could never understand y that dickhead would ever go to another woman when the goddess of beauty was all his' ...if he were that lucky to have such an angel all for himself he would have protected her from the world kept her safe all for himself ..love her ... cherish her for eternity ..but she wasn't his ...the bitter truth that slits his heart every time ..
But he was a soldier n on a mission ..a mission to expose the involvement of the probably-next PM of our country in some of the major drug dealings in the country ...n only someone from inside his house could get him a solid proof which that Nikhil Arora won't be able to dodge with his legal team n for that he had chosen his wife ...truth be told he had been smitten by her snap only ..but he would never except it ..yet wasn't her pic that made him fall for her her it was her loyalty towards her husband had him respect her all the more.. the first time he made a move towards her at a painting exhibition ..she was smart enough to guess his intentions at first n avoid his advances ..but he didn't gave up ...untill she was by her car while her driver put all paintings in ..

Great Exhibition na ..u ..u have a great taste ..

N u don't ...(that was an instant response frm geet's side without thinking she just said it with a bit humour n then regretted it)

Sorry ..

Nothing ..mujhe abb chalna chahiye ..good bye

Umm ..Ms. Geet ..rokiye tu ..

G kahiye...

Itna acha mausam hai aur jaga bhi .. yahan ki coffee buhat famous hai ..lets begin our new friendship with a cup of coffee ..kya khayaal hai ??

Khayaal buht boora hai (geet was cursing herself for being so herself with this stranger ..keep a check on ur tongue woman ..u r not in california ..this is india n u r Mrs. Nikhil Arora ...god help me) n bye the way .. hum dost kab bane ..

Lo tu itni deir se mien ek ajnabi se baat kar rha tha ..not fair Ms. Geet

(geet took a deep breath n suddenly became all serious) .. U don't seem that ignorant to my wedding adornments Mr. Khurana ..

(maan was taken a back with her seriousness ..it looked as if she had wore a mask or something yet he tried his luck ) Oh please u can call me maan ..

N u should be calling me Mrs. Arora ...I am a married woman and mene apni pati ke bina coffee pe jana chor diya hai ..so I am sorry to have wasted ur eveaning ..but u don't stand a chance here ...

Geet had a little smirk on her face ..a naughty glint in her eyes ..she looked so mischievious in that one moment n he kept looking in her eyes ..her mask was slipping away n said in deep sensual voice looking straight at her ...
Jo shaam aap jaise haseen chehre ko dekhte guzre wohh waiste kaise hu sakti hai ..it was my pleasure to have ur company mam aur jahan tak baat coffee ki hai tu mera thikana tu har shaam yeh hi restaurant hai ..jab bhi ek dost ki zarorat pare aajayega ...yeh aashiq aapko yahin milega ..

Geet usually gets annoyed at such flirts but somehow he made her smile with his cheezy lines ...may be becoz even though he was constantly trying to make advances towards her his eyes never dis-respected her ...😳 geet looked at his eyes straight n couldn't look away ...as if captivated by those deep brown eyes ..she stood thr frozen drowning in them n so was him ..the innocence ..the beauty of those duo shaped hazel eyes were making him loose his rationality ...he was lost capturing her face in his heart when a hair strand fell on her face blocking his view almost in a trance he took a step forward instinctively she took a step back getting scared of him ,..of her own lost control ..n turned around mumbling ..

Good bye ..

That was the first time ever he was lost control over his mind due to some girl ..he couldn't believe himself ..if in his hands he would have never crossed her path ever ...but he was on a mission n he waited in the same restaurant for her for almost a week but she never came n then swati told him about Nikhil meeting his current gf at the hotel lavish tonight n he knew what he has to do to make her come to him ...n break her loyalty towards tht jerk ...
a false call of emergency was all it took to get her thr n break her image of her so-called-saint husband ... he was a soldier n he had to make the mission a success ... he was the one who made sure geet reaches the presidential suit of Lavish Hotel ..only he knew how he stopped himself from going towards her n hug while she cried standing thr watching her so-called husband walk in kissing that girl almost nude ..

Maan never felt himself so cheap before that evening to have broken an innocent heart ..the very next day .. he was almost two bottle down when he saw her walk in the disc dressed completely different in a stunning avatar ..he couldn't take his eyes off her while she walked in with her friends ...she was smiling a bit too brightly ..her makeup was too loud from last time ..n even after all that she looked hollow her eyes blank ..dancing with her friends she was still searching for something around ..n then her eyes met with him ..for a long time they both continued to look at each other until she made her way from the crowded dance floor to the bar n sat beside him ..

Tou yeh hai aapka restaurant ..ur permanent thikana ..

Well I guess ..aapke intezaar mien aashiq se deewana hugaya mien ..

I never said ill come ..

Tu phir yahan kyun hain aap ...??

Aapki ankhoon mien kuch dard dekha mujhe jo pichli baar nhi tha iss liye rok nahi paayi apne aap ko ..

Dard tu aapki aankhoon mien bhi buhat hai aaj ...jo pichli baar nahi tha ..

Geet kept looking at him for a while n then looked away ..

Mujhe chalna chahiye ...(n she stood up to leave)..

Suniye (maan stumbled a bit to stand n then came towards her almost towering her ..looking into her eyes while geet stood holding her breath feeling his breaths on her face n his strong smell a mixture of alcohol perfume n HIM ...she so much wanted to look away but couldn't until he towered her n whispered in her ears ) buhat khubsoorat hain aap ..iss husn ko sanwaarne ke liye sirf ek muskaan ki zarorat hai ..kisi makeup ki nahi ..

Maan stepped back n looked at her face while she was lost in her words ..nobody ever said something like that to her ever ...


**^^**
leave me ur reviews ...me waiting eagerly 😳😃😳

luv ya
sobia
neel11 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Waiting for the next update
nishamna thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Awesome. Maan is regretting ad he crossed his limit which was not supposed to be happen. He is a soldier . he wants to expose that nikhil and for that he get to be near geet. At first he couldn't able to get chance from geet as she was a loyal wife but after seeing her husband's true face, she is broken n only this thing made maan to come close to geet. At first he was just pretending but afterward he started to fall for geet.waiting for next dear
jasika08 thumbnail
Visit Streak 1000 Thumbnail Visit Streak 750 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Amazing update
Waiting for next update.

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tellyme

2 years ago

MG FF- Silent Whisper- Note Pg 105 Jun 30 Chapter 26, Pg 104

Overview Two people completely poles apart in career, status and style. One is the epitome of elegant, the other epitome of simplistic. One is...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tellyme

3 years ago

tellyme's MG World of Dreamzzzz - New Note Pg 83 Jun 29

Hi Buddies, Here is my all FF work compiled. Latest on Top My Forum - Anu's World of Fictions In Progress...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Vaidhumom

3 years ago

💗MG SS O RE PIYA #3 - Important note on page 19 dated 26th Jan 2025

WORK IN PROGRESS... . REQUEST YOU TO LIKE AND COMMENT ONCE I ANNOUNCE THIS THREAD IS READY I AM SO GLAD TO REACH TO THIS LEVEL. I CANT EXPRESS...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Queen0fDarkness

2 years ago

Bound by Honour| Note page 50 Bound by Honour| Note page 50

Prologue “Where are you, Sameera?” I yelled unable to hold myself back. “I’m not coming, Maan”. “It is our wedding day. You know what my...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tellyme

2 years ago

MG FF - Devil's Den #2; Updated Last Chapter Pg 71 May 18 MG FF - Devil's Den #2; Updated Last Chapter Pg 71 May 18

LINK- THREAD 1 INDEX ************************** Chapter 31 - Below Chapter 32 Chapter 33 Chapter 34 Chapter 3 5 Chapter 36 Chapter 37 Chapter 38...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".