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Divya Paul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Wohoo.. I lyked the update.. Geet is a loyal wife.. She ignored Maan's advances towards her, but God knows how much that heart have been seeing her own husband kissing some another girl.. Ah, that idiot, doesn't know Geet's value..
And Maan, well he is having feelings for her from the very first day, but he is no less.. He is using her as well.. Geet give a punch at their guts, so that they can remember this their whole life, that womens are no toys to play with..

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abinash079

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Beautiful update Lord the who l e pace of the update the emotions were conveyed perfectly
Continue soon

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TangledThoughts

@TangledThoughts

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Amazing story dear!
Geet is married to a two-timing jerk. And Maan is inhibited by his duty towards the country. Both of them are bound in their duties. Maan revealed the truth of her husband but he feels guilty of breaking her trust.
Maan is already in love with her. And what about her? Is she in love with Maan or is it a classic case of rebound?
Whatever be the case, she's going to be heartbroken when she discovers Maan's motives.
But right now she is suffering from domestic violence. I really wish for Maan to reach her and protect her.

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preeti.1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Different and awesome
maan is trying to get sime evidence against geet hubby through geet
But he slept with her
nowwhat will happen when geet will come to know

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Nice part .. Maan is a soldier and is on a mission to expose Nikhil .. Maan fallen for her in first site only but controlling himself

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Sharmeen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Awesome Part 👏
I don't think Maan is wrong here but its mistake his He couldn't control himself 😳
Cont soon

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Taahir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Fabulous and Awesome Update

Maan on mission to expose Nikil Arora and he had to get someone from inside his house and when he was shown Geet's photo immediately he was mesmerized by her beauty but her eyes the innocence it holds grab his attention .
Maan knew and also knows that she is loyal to her husband so he had to show her the truth about her husband and he made her come to the hotel where Nikil was with another woman and surely this sight broke Geet , Maan wanted to comfort her but again he could but just wait for her to come to the restaurant and when she came he had to make an effort to speak to her but he also told her that her beauty needs not to have any makeup

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

is it some joke Maan is saying and Geet's loyality towards her husband made him fall for her...she is not loyal...Nikhil's behavior or his cheating is in its place...but because he is cheating her and then she also goes to another man is called loyality...no...

so Geet did came to meet him at disco...

interesting update...

waiting for next part...

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

hi thanks 4 da pm n excellent update! well written! Feeling 4 Geet! her hubby has no shame! Maan feels bad 4 wt he did! Geet meets him at the disco! Maan compliments her! update soon

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Alpha01

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Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Maan is using Geet to get information but is falling for her instead. Geet trying to stop herself too but is finding it hard after learning of her husbands betrayal.