MG OS : BreakFree *(Pt 7 & Last Prt @Pg24) *|| Reply to Note @ pg - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
MAAN FELL FOR GEET EVEN BEFORE THE MISSION STARTED BUT DOESNT KNOW IT YET

AND HE WAS THE ONE WHO EXPOSED HER HUSBAND TO HER
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start, Geet is married and her husband is a cheater and Geet also fall for Maan and spend a night with him. Continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful update...So Maan is taking advantage of geet's loneliness & broken self...What will happen when geet will know about Maan being a hypocrite?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb update. ...but waiting to read wht that Nikhil ""##@$$#Arora did to geet??!!!...do continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
Wat is this????????

Its actually a shocking one, start itself hav blowed me off.

pheeww.!

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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
hello everyone,
once again thank u all for ur lovely comments n likes ...means alot really !!

one thing i really wanna say to those who think geet was already beign dis-loyal to his husband in the last update .. ...she was very much loyal to her husband even after knowing his real self ...its not as if she has gone to maan begging him to bed her ...😛 ofcourse when a person u had met once continues to stare at u in a public place like that ..u can be curious n talk with him ...not to mention here geet didn't even had a proper conversation with maan ...so can't blame her of being dis-loyal YET ..

i respect my readers opinion a lot ...😊 but this was to state my prospective of it all ...😳


thank u all lovely people for hitting the like button n ur awesome reviews ..luv ya all 🤗

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enjoy reading ..posting part 3 ...do leave me ur reviews ..will waiting eagerly



MG OS : BreakFree



PART 3

Geet kept looking at him for a while n then looked away ..

Mujhe chalna chahiye ...(n she stood up to leave)..

Suniye (maan stumbled a bit to stand n then came towards her almost towering her ..looking into her eyes while geet stood holding her breath feeling his breaths on her face n his strong smell a mixture of alcohol perfume n HIM ...she so much wanted to look away but couldn't until he towered her n whispered in her ears ) buhat khubsoorat hain aap ..iss husn ko sanwaarne ke liye sirf ek muskaan ki zarorat hai ..kisi makeup ki nahi ..

Maan stepped back n looked at her face while she was lost in her words ..nobody ever said something like that to her ever ...his eyes were too captivating for her to stand thr with her sanity intact but she couldn't move herself ..still feeling his hot breaths over her skin ..his deep husky voice echoing in her ears ...n then suddenly someone pushed passed her n she fell on him with a jerk ..he balanced them both even in that drunk state well encircling her in his arms while she clutched his torso to support herself his palm clutched her waist in a firm grip n she looked up at him still in his embrace ..her hairs fell on her face veiling them both ..giving in to his hearts desire he caressed them to the back of her ears softly ..the tip of his finger feeling her skin all the way making her shut her eyes close ...they both stepped away when geet heard her friend calling her name loudly over the music ..geet looked around n then at him ..her eyes were suddenly so scared she clutched her stole n stepped back terrified with what just happened ..while maan kept looking at her ..until her friend camen dragged her out of the disc ...

it was thr 2nd meeting n while his colleagues were praising him to have finally get the mission on track he was still lost feeling her breath on his skin burning him with fire unknown to him ..he snapped out of his world with swati's comment for only him to hear ...

so u r falling for that girl aren't u ACP ..

maan looked at her bewildered n then gulped another glass of whisky down in one go ..

stop being so stupid its just for the mission ...n call it a night we have things to do tomorrow ..i m leaving ..

hmm ..aap buhat khubsoorat hain ..n what was that iske aage ...😛

swati I told u its for the mission ..

u can fool urself khurana not me ..school se aaj tak ek larki ko nazar utha k nahi dekha ..aur yahan sharukh khan ki tarha lines maar rhe hu ..kis se dialogue likh waye hain tumne ..

what ever swati ...I m not gonna waist my time convincing u ..

fine if u don't wanna accept ..but maan I want u to be careful ...she isn't the one u wanna loose ur heart to ...

yeah thanks ..now can we move ..

okie ..okie ..give me the keys .. I'll drive ...

relax lady commando ..i can drive ..

stop being so tough maan I know u since the age of 12 ..n I know ur limits U.HAVE.OVERDONE.IT ..i m driving

yeah whatever ..

***^^***
The morning sun rose n the first thing he did was to call swati ..what she told him was enough to make his blood boil in anger ..

Information pakki hai ..our informer in the Arora Mansion ..the new helper cook told us Nikhil walked in the house quite pissed at around 4 this morning ..and ...//

Maan really didn't had the patience to wait for her prolong silence to end n he snapped at her ..

And WHAT ...??

Geet ...geet has been locked in her room ..

Maan knew swati a bit too much to know she was keeping information to herself ..n hat frustrated him coz he knew what it could be ..

He has beaten her ...hasn't he ..??

Swati knew maan wouldn't take it really well n she didn't wanted to let him know how bad things have been for geet thr ... but guess her friend knows her bit too much then necessary

Answer me damit swati ...

Ye ..yes he has ..

How bad ..??

Swati know from his tone he was burning in anger ..

Can u please just stop it maan ...thr is only so much we can do to help her so please cool it ..

Have u lost ur mind swati ...that bas***d is beating her thr all coz of me n u are asking me cool it ..

Tou kya kar sakte hu tum ...bolo ..?? kya karoge ..?? arora mansion jaoge ..?? geet ko wahan se lekar aasakte hu tum ...be realistic for once ...u can't do anything now ...whats done is done ...right now we can't do anything o help her ..however we can think of some sane solution to this ...n for that u need to calm down ..

Maan couldn't wait to hear more n he threw his phone on the bed ..n ran a hand through his hair in frustration ..he could never imagine that man to be so monstrous ...every time he closed his eyes ..the smiling fragile face of geet came infront of him ..n to imagine he has hurt her just put his whole being on fire ..n then from somewhere within a mocking voice echoed in his ears ...even u were tricking her ...maan glanced at himself in the mirror ..the person infront of him now loathed him ..guilt itched deep within surfacing thinking about what has he done to that innocent woman ...when he started searching about geet ..her daily routine her activities ..it was all vague ...his informers were confused themselves ..somedays she won't even step out of her house ..while other she would go mad shopping around the city ..pampering herself ..going out on lunch with wives of nikhil's political friend whom she doesn't even know ...spending money on buying expensive paintings were a constant ...he thought that being the bas***d nikhil arora is ..even his wife would be a cunning bitch ..least did he knew she was such an innocent angel ...if would have known he would have never choosen her for his mission ...one mis understandig has cost him so much now ..he can't mend anything ...anything at all !! falling for her was inevitable n loosig his senses last night felt natural ...nothing wrong ..nothing sinful but now everything felt wrong ..this whole plan felt extremely wrong ..he had no right to break her trust ..she doesn't love him he knew that it was her emotional weakness that made her vulnerable in front of him n all he did was to take full advantage of it ...what kind of a jerk he is now ..!! definitely worst than her dickhead husband ...🤢

Maan smashed the mirror with his bare hands ...panting with fury shaking him ..n finally fell down hit my the strength of reality n his own guilt taking over him ..

***^^^***

Geet gained conscious a little late in the morning ...she opened her eyes n everything that happened last night played in her mind n then she looked around everything in her room was smashed on the ground ..she was lying beside the bed ..with great difficulty she managed to stand up still supporting herself with the bed post n looked at herself in the mirror ...her body had bruises ..her nightwear had been torn by his belt hiting her over the silken ware n thr were black n blue marks of belt on her arms ...every inch of hers pained to even move a slightest bit n she fell down on the bed not able to bear her weight on her bruised legs ..tears made thr way out of her eyes at her helplessness ..she glanced at the door it was close n she knew it was locked ...she clutched her knees close to her chest shaking with sobs n clutched a hand around her neck n other around her legs sitting like a ball crying ..when suddenly she winced in pain when her fingers touched some bruise on her neck ...she looked sideways to the mirror n saw it was a love bite ..she caressed it lightly n winced slightly remembering the time she spent with maan ...it wasn't physical needs that made her go to him ..NO ..it wasn't she wasn't that cheap ..it was the respect she saw in his eyes for ..respect she never got from her husband for him she was just an object with which he can do whatever he wants however he wants ...she doesn't even remember when was the last time they went out like a normal couple to have dinner or just a drive ...in 2 years of marriage she never saw the man she fell in love with back in her hometown ...coming back in india nikhil seemed to have become a completely different man that didn't even knew n sometimes feared as well ...

Abb tu yaad bhi nahi jisse zindagi maana tha
Woh aakhri baar kab humari hassi ki waja bana
Khwaab sajaye tu jo hum ne mil kar sab
Yoon laga aankh kholi aur toot kar bikhar gaye
Ek kashmakash si rahi zindagi mien kayi saal tak
Kya yeh wahi shaks hai jisse hum ne apna mana tha ..??

N then thr was a stranger ...a man whom she never met ...never evn saw ...who was trying to be friends with her may be even more ...but somehow ..his flirtish comments were making her smile ...making her feel like being herself again ...

najane kaise koi aapki hasi ki waja ban jata hai ...
najane kaise koi ajnabi pal bhar mien apna ban jata hai ..
koi na samjha ...koi na jana ..
kudrat ka yeh khel hai ..
jo bana ho aapke liye
uss par dil tiher hi jata hai ..😳

The first time she met him ...his drowning deep brown eyes ..his captivating stare ..his charming smile ..those heart warming talks ...but most of all the way he cherished her ..the way he respected her ..that night in the disc she went with her friends to get the pain of being ditched by her husband out of her system ..she dressed like she use to before marriage ..put on a heavy makeup to hide her swollen eyes n pale face from the world ...but he was able looked past it all ...how ... she couldn't understand but he did ..!! his eyes as always pulled her to him ..against all the logics she went towards him ..it was easy to walk away from him that night but hard not to go to that very restaurant the next day in a hope to see him again ..n he was thr ..sipping his coffee ..smiling at her as she made her way towards him ..no questions asked n he was thr with her all evening talking anything and everything ..if anyone would have seen them ...that person would have never thought anything cheap ..they looked like old friends talking ..smiling ..laughing ..teasing each other ...

**^^**

hope u enjoyed ..😳
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sobia
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Maan is regretting , what he did with geet. And knowing about nikhil's animalistic act, he become more upset and more guilty. That animal had beaten geet so excessively. In the morning , geet couldn't able to stand up in her feet because of her bruised legs. She was recalling that day when she met with maan. N she accepted that their intimate part was not a mistake or any weak moment but it was a act in full consciousness. Waiting for next dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
maan should not feel guilty .une limits cross ki i know its wrong but ab wo mgeet se jud chuka he he can save her from her husband
nikhil se bachane k liye usko nikhil ko expose karna hi hoga but sabse pehle usko geet se confess karna chahiye k he is also using her for his mission ..warna baad me jab geeet ko pata chalega tob she will feel betrayed
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
Aww poor geet...Men are sick sometime...ab kia ho ga agee...waiting for next update EAGERLY
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
Emotional part...
Felt bad for geet...

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