MG OS : BreakFree *(Pt 7 & Last Prt @Pg24) *|| Reply to Note @ pg

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hello everyone,
for those who don't know me ..i m Sobia 😊
completely mad writer of this forum since last few years ..😳
currently having a writers block 🤢 with all my current stories here i end up starting a messed up OS .. which i ve managed to get in a bit of a shape ..😕😳😳

so here i am opening a thread ..😃

its gonna be a 4-5 parts OS ..not more than that Promise 😛

MG OS Breakfree



These two were the original lines i got from google baba

Breaking free from the prison of my life;

Breaking free and I step from dawn into the light


n this is my edited version for this OS ..

Breaking free from the prison of my life;
Breaking free from all that kept me tied
Breaking free from those realtions based on lies
Breaking free of ur love, away from ur sight
Breaking free and I step from dawn into the light
Breaking free of all that is here to be able to live my life ..!!



let me know ur expectations ..will post the part tonight or early morning for sure ...😃

waiting for ur responses

luv ya
sobia

P.s : pms will be sent for this one after i post the first part ..😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Comment marne k liye kuch aur bhi hota tho😳
Improvised version is intresting😊
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congrats on the OS! superb banner! interesting title! update soon!
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Congrats for the new story sweety ...wow thrilling banner jus love it...
sound interesting...
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looking forward to read ur story...😃
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hi sobia
looking forward to read ur story ..
banner is thrilling so does the words written by u ..


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Nice concept, waiting for ur update😊
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Banner is beautiful. Concept seems interesting.
Looking forward to read note.
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hello every one, thanks for ur awesome responses ...really glad to recieve such an amazing reponse for this one ..

now i hope i don't get rotten tomatoes after posting it ...
fingers crossed ..posting part 1
enjoy reading n do leave ur reviews n likes 😃😳


MG OS : BreakFree



PART 1


Breaking free from the prison of my life;
Breaking free from all that kept me tied
Breaking free from those realtions based on lies
Breaking free of ur love, away from ur sight
Breaking free and I step from dawn into the light
Breaking free of all that is here to be able to live my life ..!!

Nikhil Arora ...son of the former Prime Minister n now the strongest contender of PM's seat ...walked in the royal arora mansion with fury he never experienced before ...he had a hobby to win beautiful hearts ..play with them ...enjoy devouring them n then ...ditch them !!
But today for the first time ever he was played with ...he was the one being ditched ...n by no body else then his own WIFE !! he could not believe when he got to know what his beautiful wife was doing last night while he was out on a party meeting ..he called home to know if she was home but she wasn't ..he was burning in fury to get back home since last night ..the reason y the left his meeting half way n flew back to Mumbai from Delhi ..it is now early morning the sun is not up yet n thr she was ..before even she could register his presence in the room she got a tight slap across her face making her fall flat on the floor ..

Tu yeh kar rahi thi tum last one week se ...

She was still sitting on the floor confused ..scared a bit even n then his words n continuous acusations sunk in ..

Don't look at me like that ..i know ..i know U were bloody sleeping around behind my back ..u bitch !!

Nikhil grabbed her gripping her hair in a harsh grip making her yelp in pain ...n pointed at her mangalsutra ..

Abb kyun pehna hai yeh ..?? han ..kyun pehna hai yeh abb ..uss waqt pehenti na jab kisi aur ke saath tum ne ...(nikhil made a disgusted face n looked away ).. u have no right to wear it geet .. no right at all ... tum ne ek baar nahi socha who u r ..?? whome u belong to ..??

Phir tu tumhain bhi humari wedding ring utar kar phek deni chahiye nikhil ...(the confused yet furious look on his face did nothing to stop her as if she was completely immune to his anger).. infact tumhain tu yeh buhat pehle hi phank deni chahiye thi ..y r u wearing it ...?? Mien nahi bhooli ke mien kuan hoon .. par tum bhool gaye ...tum bhool gaye ke ek wife hai tumhari ..jis ka naam GEET NIKHIL ARORA hai ..(n finally the whole week's pain was coming ou in the form of her high pitched voice her bitter words).. jisse tum ne 2 saal pehle shaddi ki thi ...tumhain yaad tha last week ..?? Lavish Hotel ke presidential suit ke room mien poori raat guzaarte waqt tumhain yaad aaya ke yahan ..iss room mien tumhari biwi tumhara wait kar rhi hugi ..tumhain ek baar bhi yaad aaya ke mujhe kaisa lage ga ...

Nikhil left her n she stumbbled back n balanced herself with the dresser while he looked away ..

Dimag kharaab hugaya hai tumhara ..mien wahan tha hi nahi ..mien ..mien tu delhi mien tha uss waqt ..last week hi tu gaya tha ..

Jhoot ..ek aur jhoot ...2 saal mien najane kitne aise jhoot bole hunge tumne nikhil ..aur mien pagal ...mien pagaloon ki tarha yeh hi sochti rahi k tum busy hu ...desh siwa kar rhi ho ...par nhi ...tum tu maze ura rahe thay un larkiyoon ke saath ..

Geet (n she received another thudding slap right acorss her face making her fall on the bed this time with a bleeding lips though) .. tumhari himmat kaise huyi mujh se aise baat karne ki ..

Waoo ..waoo Mr. Nikhil Arora women empowerment ke lectured dene wale apni biwi ke liye yeh soch rakhte hain ...agar mien bahar jakar bata doon ke pechle 2 saal se jo politician women protection ke liye kaam kar rha hai actually mien har roz apni hi biwi ko physically abbuse karta hai ..manhandle karta hai tu jante hu kya huga ..

Nikhil walked towards her n bent on her clutching her chin in a harsh grip spitting fire with his eyes ..

Yeh saari himmat aaj uss hi ...uss hi kamine ki waja se hai na ..

Don't u dare nikhil ...kuch mat kehne usko ..kam se kam tum se tu behtar hai ..larkiyoon ki izzat karna tu aati hai usko tumhari tarha unko istimal nahi karta ..

U bloody bitch ..uss ACP ke dum par itna uchal rhi hai na ...ek phone call par kahan ghayab kardoonga usko pata bhi nahi chalega kisi ko ...buhat maze kar liye tum dono ne ..abb bas samjhi tum ..aaj ke baad tum iss ghar ke bahar nahi jaogi ..

Geet smirked at him

Dukh hua ...nakleef huyi ..mujhe bhi huyi thi ...jab mene tumhain uss larki ke saath uss kamre mie dekha .. buhat takleef huyi thi ...

Mard hoon mien ek nahi hazaar ke saath raat guzaroon kuch nahi kar sakti mera tum ...samjhi ..abb iss kamre se bhi bahar nahi aa paogi apni iss harkat k baad

Bhool hai tumhari ...yeh jism mera hai ..yeh aatma meri hai ..jisse chahoon usko iska malik mana sakti hoon ..aur aaj ke baad tumhara mujh par koi haq nahi ...koi rishta nahi ..

Geet shoved him away n started walking out of the room when nikhil held her hand n jerked her back on him asked towering her ..

Kyun itna maza aaya ek raat mien uske saath ..

Geet had disgust clear on her face for this man n for herself to have fell in love with this cheapster ..but she held her tears n spit her words on his face ..

Han ...abb choro mera haath ...

But he never left ..he pushed her on the floor making her collide with the dressing table bruising her arms n moved to close the door ..

Yeh ...yeh kya kar rhe hu tum nikhil ..open the door ..jaane du mujhe ..

Itni asaani se nahi geet ...(n he took out his belt).. itna acha lecture dia tum ne ..abb kuch tu award meri taraf se bhi milna chahiye na tmhain ...

***^^***

On the other side of the city in the hotel ...somebody was having a nightmare turning in his sleep sweating in an A.C room n then suddenly woke up screaming ..

GEET ...

Panting he looked around ..his cloths were scattered ..the sheets were ruffled n thr was no sign of her .. he turned around n switched on the lamps but the whole room was empty ..he put on his boxers n went towards the washroom but she wasn't thr ..he was worried sick the dream he had was terrible he knew she was in trouble ...what has he gone n done ..this wasn't part of the mission ..damn n he punched the wall in anger n went to search for his mobile ..he has never in his 7 years career has made such a big mistake ..he switched on his mobile only to see several missed calls from his office ..but ignoring them he dailed her number but she never picked up..her phone was switched off ..the frustration n anger only increased with every passing minutes until his men informed him of her save arrival at the Arora Mansion ..yet his heart wasn't at peace n to top it all his partner in this mission swati called ..

Just what the hell have u done maan ...what r doing in that hotel room of urs ...hum delhi se mumbai iss liye nahi aaye thay ...please ...please tell me u haven't slept with that minister's wife ..

His silence answered her n she took a deep breath to control herself ...though it was so difficult for her ..

Now what ..??

I don't know ..i just bloody don't know swati ..this wasn't part of the plan ..u know it ..i could have never done this to her ..i was only suppose to make her fall for me n get some evidence against that son of a bitch ...


**^^**

pheww ...i m nervous
let me know how it is ..😳 waiting for ur responses 😃


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