MaNan Drabble: Tough Summers {Epilogue - Pg43}

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#161

I am really thankful to you all for being such genuine reviewers. I am touched. It makes me so happy to learn that you people find it getting better with every update. And I just hope I will be able to maintain that. If not, you people are free to criticize.

Here's the next chapter. I will be posting Chapter Ten in the next post.

Chapter Nine.

She stood up, trying to increase the distance that prevailed the two. While she stepped back, he held her. Her eyes shot wide at him, but he didn't care. Avoiding his pierced eyes, she spoke, "I don't have the time. So spit all that you have." She wasn't in a condition to stay conscious under his dark gaze not for long.

"I have a lot to spit but will you let me do all of it?" His voice seemed huskier than ever. Her breath hitched at an instant. She literally had no clue what was he asking for.

"Do you have anything to say? Or I should be leaving?" She shot an instant glare. She wasn't going to fall weak. When he didn't respond, she turned to leave. And then he held her wrist, pulling her back into his arms, where she belonged. Lifting his hand, his fingers threaded into the dense curls as his thumb soothingly rubbed around her cheek. With a sharp intake of breath, her eyes went wide only to soften. She looked into his eyes, it reflected guilt - his eyelashes lowered onto the ground as it felt heavy with guilt. He inched forward, linking his forehead to hers. She felt an inexperienced emotion rush through her. But she stayed still, wanting him to proceed.

"I know... in fact I realize what I did to you wasn't right. I was wrong... I was not able to make out what went into my head. I was just... I... I messed it up." he couldn't manage the words to explain what it was like, what he meant but the last few words were shaky.

"I realize what is done... what I did, was not right.. and.." she looked at him, expectantly, he wasn't able to put up an apology. He had never had. However, today the case was different - He wanted to but he couldn't, he couldn't gather the courage to face her and apologize. He had done nothing great to seek forgiveness.

"I know you won't ever forgive me..." he sighed, "neither you should.." Her eyes glued at his face as he freed her from his hold. "But before you leave I have something to confess-" he continued only to pause. Her heart throbbed faster against her chest.

"It is late for me to realize but what I feel for you isn't lust. It never was, it is more than lust." He spoke his heart out. He knew nothing of it made sense. It never did make sense to him. But there was something that made him wanting to speak.

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Edited by -shenz- - 10 years ago

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#162

Chapter Ten.

"And what is it?" She queried. She needed an answer. He was fanning her hopes to the deep dumped emotions. But she wanted an end to this - either ways. She made him look into her eyes as she searched into his for an emotion as likely as hers. "I asked you something?" Her voice pitched a little higher.

Her expecting eyes bored at his and he felt himself lost into those melting brown orbs of hers. They were hypnotic. His throat felt dry as she looked for an answer. But he couldn't. He wasn't able to. Seeing him deeply engrossed yet lost, she decided to leave. Maybe she was expecting and he wasn't ready for that. She grabbed all her strength to face it - that there was nothing from his side, not for now at least. And she reached the boundary to cross the other side.

He saw her leaving. It felt as though he was been deprived of his life and that thought made him panic. He grabbed her by her arm, pulling her into an unexpected hug. He broke apart, still holding her in his protective arms and said, "I don't know if its love, all I know is that you have become as important to me as breathing is to live. And if this is love, Yes! I do love you."

His joyous words echoed into her eardrums. A shy smile crept across her plush lips. Her pink hued cheeks turned darker. Looking her react this odd, he spoke, "don't you have anything to say?" and she slightly nodded in negation. "That's not fair." he complained.

While never meeting his gaze she dug her face into his broad chest "You have to earn it, to hear it." She mumbled against his bare chest.

"I will earn it." He said assuringly, as he planted a kiss on the top of her head his mind drifted to the way her dry lips felt across his skin. And that was the start for his thoughts - as his mind splashed different images of her on him. He gulped the emotion that ran through his veins, harder. While all he could do was try to calm his senses. He out of nowhere questioned her, "Well, why were you here?"

That's when she was reminded of her deary brother and she screamed his name out, "Nimish!" With that she pulled away and ran in the other direction to find Nimish, while Manik followed her.

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I have no clue how this would be taken though! -_-

Edited by -shenz- - 10 years ago

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filter.coffee

@filter.coffee

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Posted: 10 years ago

#163

i just don't know what to say...!its so beautiful.i could feel all the emotions they were feelings.i could almost see how they were standing,talking in there.its amazing how you write!

and so he said!i never saw that coming.😳 and she is right too.he has to earn it.though i think it won't be hard for him to make her say those words.she is halfway there already.

will be waiting for the next update

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: filter.coffee
i just don't know what to say...!its so beautiful.i could feel all the emotions they were feelings.i could almost see how they were standing,talking in there.its amazing how you write!

and so he said!i never saw that coming.😳 and she is right too.he has to earn it.though i think it won't be hard for him to make her say those words.she is halfway there already.

will be waiting for the next update

Awwie! Rez! Thank you so much.

I had always been uncertain about this confession. But this makes me relieved, somehow. I mean at least I know the readers would be able to accept this. And yes, it won't be hard for him, it never was. And sometimes, emotions just leads you halfway through.. and the rest goes with instincts and stuffs. :P

I am really glad that I made the decision to share this story as the first one with you all.

Edited by -shenz- - 10 years ago