MaNan Drabble: Tough Summers {Epilogue - Pg43} - Page 19

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kaumudisss

"I will earn it." He said assuringly, as he planted a kiss on the top of her head his mind drifted to the way her dry lips felt across his skin. And that was the start for his thoughts - as his mind splashed different images of her on him.

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This was LOVE the whole of it is Awesome,i liked the way you Pen down things
Keep Updating & Thanks For all The PM's😳😳😳



Thanks. I am so glad that you liked it.. My writing and my story.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Arshirox97

Beautiful!!! And I'm guessing the chapters ahead are gonna be even more interesting!!


Thanks! I hope the interest remains intact. And for that I hope I be able to present the story in that way.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zohasad2.0

Shenz I love you for updating SO much.

And aaah...I loved it.There's such a warmth in the last chapter. I totally got slayed by your play of words, Maniks emotions and Nandini's feelings.That comfort and intimacy...all at a different level.

Love you so much dear.


Thank You so very much Zoha! I don't do anything to the words. It's just simple.

Love you too, for reviewing and being supportive and friends (I think we are, aren't we?). 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Updating somehow today! Only one chapter. Please bear with this.



Chapter Eleven.




He stretched his arms, welcoming the freshness of the new morning. His eyes landed on her rooftop, hoping for her presence. Since last night he was more eager to get every possible glimpse of hers. And after a good number of days, or precisely nights.. he had a sound sleep. Even before the sun could make its presence, he had been awake. As his eyes roamed around, he heard the anklet tinkle and his lips curved expecting her arrival. But he was left disappointed as her cousin arrived at the rooftop. His face fell..he couldn't even converse with her at night.. after they found Nimish. Once Nimish was found, she took him along and denied his innumerable requests.. as he asked her to wait a little more. He wanted to make up for everything. But she just couldn't wait back with him. That wasn't possible, it was too late.


"Manik.." His head shot high as her sugary voice reached him. A smile formed across his lips watching her smile shyly. He looked at her dripping wet form.. her wet strands stuck to her face.. while some stuck at the length of her spine.. a few drops scattered here and there on her honey kissed skin. Her blouse seemed to be more revealing than ever.. while the skirt seemed to be defining her slender legs as her hips swayed while she walked.

He took his eyes off her.. and shook his head. Some thoughts are default attachment to a few people. As he reacted, she couldn't help but pout.


Irresistible!! He thought.

"Good morning anyways." She greeted him with her signature smile. "This is not a good way to greet." he complained only to have her brows arched at him questioningly. "I may need to come a little closer for that." He lowered a little, bending on the boundary, trying to reach her.. She could feel the warmth of his lips approaching on her cheeks. She placed her palm on his chest pushing him back a little.. "You aren't doing anything, Manik.." she said and eyes back at her puzzled cousin. "You got to manage with these plain mornings.." she wanted to add a little more, but she thought of it to be good this way. He responded with a pout and left the place, when she had disappeared out of his sight.


He still had to manage with the plain morning greetings.. soothing his eyes as it lingered upon her and holding unto the urge to grab her.


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"Manik bhaiyya.." Nimish cried his name as he came running to Manik. And an utterly irritated Manik stood up from his place, warning him, "How many times should I tell you not to call me that?"

"Then what do I call you?" Nimish asked while his hands rested on his hips. "I don't have time for all your drama. Just tell me where can I hide?" He asked looking back again and again.

"Whom are you hiding from?" Manik interrogated him. He was suspicious.

"Monster!" he answered instantly.

Nandini.. He thought of.

"Why is Nandini looking for you? What have you done now?" he tried digging deeper into the matter.

"You ask so many questions. Tell me if you are going to help me or not?" Nimish was about to rush the other side, when Manik pulled him into a room and asked him to hide there. With that he had even asked him not to move out of the room until Manik asked him to.

Later, Manik just waited for her arrival, with a mischievous plan already been cooked in his head.






Thoughts, please! :)

Edited by -shenz- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res!
Unres!
Kamina Manik and Sassy Nandu i like😃

Edited by -Chandramukhi.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
the cute phase of hide and seek has begun
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nimish asking for help 😳
I hope both of them trouble Nandini a lot 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update.
Naughty manik waiting for nandu
Continue soon .
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Posted: 10 years ago
omg ...how did i miss ur work...its soo amazing
soo well written and the way they are ...really good work there
i read all the chapters at once n u left me craving for more
i loved all the relations , u ve portrayed them soo well
keep writing
n can i pls get PMs ...it makes the reading soo much easier
thanks
-nidhi
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Posted: 10 years ago
cute update
manik is so naughty... 😳lovee him

update soon..eagerly waiting for the update

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