Jannat: Those Moments With Him - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: JShukla

This was awesome. but dare I say this time a little less intense that what her expressions conveyed in the episode.

May be you can write one more today. the episode totally deserves one more👏
this is my moments with him😳
"He has such perfect features"
What is it about him?
. What is it about that moment, that it seems its just the moment to live. The moment I have always longed to live. The moment that I wish, to get a little longer"

I know how his eyes seem to stop at me,
Those eyes seem to convey something, trying to tell me something, some kinda pleading, a request - a loving request.
When those eyes seem to change to a more passionate and determined pair of orbs, it sends a chill through me, its cold and yet so warm.
His touch makes me feel...special. Those little brushes of our hands, or whenever his touch meets mine, its just too molten. It feels like fire, like I am on a burning. But its a calm fire, like is it even possible? His touch burns me, yet calms me. I don't know what does that even mean, or even how am I to describe that. Its just too melting. I feel I have been touched like this before. His touch, touches soul. Its a strange feeling of being "connected" through the touch. Like my soul knows how this touch is, a sense of recognition, I am not able to put my finger on.

Why do I feel so drawn to him? So immersed in him, so...into him. I just feel so alive...in those moments with him.
Soo much mush and feel good factor in this one


Aww Juhi!! Thank you so much for quoting those moments as "your" moments with him! 😳 Trust me, the same is with me too! 😆

And thank you for pointing out that! I felt the same! I thought it could have been a little more intense, coz her feelings were definitely ona high yesterday! So turned on! 😉

I feel I should give another AE instead! 😆

Thank you so much Juhi! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you for writing about her thoughts and feelings, it's so awesome 👍🏼
JanAah scenes were indeed so sexylicious. Love her inner conflicts, coz we get to see Sanam sometimes.
Others here have added more feels to your piece and I love all of that.
Can't say or write anything more like those great commenters here.
And thank God her OTT self is gone, thanks to that irresistible and very attractive special someone 😉
He's such a magnet to her that she just can't resist him. But we all love that don't we?
TQ Prags for this excellent piece of writing about HER. ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow first of all loved the title jannat...coz I am a jannAH fan
nd thanks for writing on jannat again
coz jannah rocks nd brings trps🤣
loved how u explained jannat's thougts..
she missing his smile...
she watching him sad
she feels his sadness
his pain❤️
His touch makes me her feel special.
whenever his touch meets mine feels lik fire
aag ⭐️
his touch burns me yet calms me wow loved this line
on the whole awesome...
plz write more on jannah hehe😈
Edited by surbhiholic-1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sahil333

Thank you for writing about her thoughts and feelings, it's so awesome 👍🏼
JanAah scenes were indeed so sexylicious. Love her inner conflicts, coz we get to see Sanam sometimes.
Others here have added more feels to your piece and I love all of that.
Can't say or write anything more like those great commenters here.
And thank God her OTT self is gone, thanks to that irresistible and very attractive special someone 😉
He's such a magnet to her that she just can't resist him. But we all love that don't we?
TQ Prags for this excellent piece of writing about HER. ❤️


Thank you so much Rie! :)

I am glad you loved this! The fact that Sanam in her is making appearances and giving its glimpses, makes me feel more connected to her inner conflicts and feelings, hope it continues, and we get our Sanam back soon, leaving that airhead Jannat behind. But if Jannat too falls for Aahil, it would be even awesome! 😉

Yes coz no one can be spared by that "chick magnet" he is 😉😆 And how we love that too!

Your welcome Rie! 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: surbhiholic-1

wow first of all loved the title jannat...coz I am a jannAH fan
nd thanks for writing on jannat again
coz jannah rocks nd brings trps🤣
loved how u explained jannat's thougts..
she missing his smile...
she watching him sad
she feels his sadness
his pain❤️
His touch makes me her feel special.
whenever his touch meets mine feels lik fire
aag ⭐️
his touch burns me yet calms me wow loved this line
on the whole awesome...
plz write more on jannah hehe😈


Thank you! Glad you loved this.

I can see Sanam in her in those special moments, emerging out of Jannat - and that makes me write on her conflicts. The day is not far when she would leave Jannat behind 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I have rarely seen him smile. Does he ever smile?! I wonder how would he look, when he would smile?! He has such perfect features. I think he would look even graceful with a smile. Why doesn't he smile?

😭

Lovely writing, Prags.👏

She is still so far far away from him..

He doesn't smile because his reason to smile has been snatched away from him.
When will she know that Sanam is the one who gave him the luxury of a smile...the girl who released him from the bondage of his past...and told him he deserved happiness too..

..And now that very Sanam is mocking his love...treating him with contempt...💔

...and he waits...faithfully...trustingly...

The whole world can mock at his love. Even she could question him...

But he knows what she has done for him...how she held on...and he follows her cues on how patient he must be. Sahil!

Edited:
Sorry, the post was on Jannat...but I had to go on and on about Ahil...😆
Edited by chicksoup - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: chicksoup

I have rarely seen him smile. Does he ever smile?! I wonder how would he look, when he would smile?! He has such perfect features. I think he would look even graceful with a smile. Why doesn't he smile?


😭

Lovely writing, Prags.👏

She is still so far far away from him..

He doesn't smile because his reason to smile has been snatched away from him.
When will she know that Sanam is the one who gave him the luxury of a smile...the girl who released him from the bondage of his past...and told him he deserved happiness too..

..And now that very Sanam is mocking his love...treating him with contempt...💔

...and he waits...faithfully...trustingly...

The whole world can mock at his love. Even she could question him...

But he knows what she has done for him...how she held on...and he follows her cues on how patient he must be. Sahil!

Edited:
Sorry, the post was on Jannat...but I had to go on and on about Ahil...😆


Awww Chicky! Your last line says it all. Its okay, no sorries when its about HIM! 😆
Loved how HER THOUGHTS took you to actually go on about HIM, it makes my post and thoughts even special 😳😆

You and your words Chicky! Sigh! You have described it so beautifully yourself.

Yes the only reason for his smile is well..herself. And she is giving her utmost pain now. The reason for his smile is making him yearn for that smile again..😭

@Red: Oh Chicky! That was gorgeous. He just waits for her, waits for her to come back, coz he knows its HERE she belongs, always belonged, always will belong.

Thank you so much for an awesome insight to it! 😳

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