Jannat: Those Moments With Him

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

What is it about him? What is it about me? What just changes around me suddenly? What in the world just goes wrong, or is it right? What just happens in that one single moment, whenever he is around me? What is it?!

What is it whenever he looks at me, I seem to lose train of my thoughts for that fleeting moment. That moment, when you feel your breath is caught up somewhere between. What is it about that moment, I feel no one and no one else is around me, other than...Him. What is so strange about that moment, that I feel such a pull its just too hard to deny. What is it about that moment, that I feel so close to him and yet so far. What is it about that moment, that it seems its just the moment to live. The moment I have always longed to live. The moment that I wish, to get a little longer...just a little longer. The moment, when I always feel, "It has happened before too..."

I know how his eyes seem to stop at me, whenever we are around each other. We - the word gives a strange rush to me. I know that look in his eyes whenever he looks at me, stares at me - with those boring eyes. I couldn't help but get drawn to those deep and vulnerable eyes. They seem just too painful to look at. They tug at my heart like never ever. Those eyes seem to convey something, trying to tell me something, some kinda pleading, a request - a loving request. The eyes which seem to be asking some questions, needing some answers. Those eyes which I can't help but look in them back. It has never happened before, or is it? I know they are asking some questions, I think I know the answers too? But I just can't make myself to tell them, I don't know, maybe I don't remember...

When those eyes seem to change to a more passionate and determined pair of orbs, it sends a chill through me, its cold and yet so warm. The intensity seems to engulf me in a strange embrace, I feel so..so...protected and secure. Its just too strange, I guess amazing too. His eyes have such a powerful aura, especially when he looks at me, stares at me or just gazes at me. Like in his own thoughts, wondering something, amused at me, maybe?! I can't help but get curious to know what he is wondering?! There's such a mystery that surrounds hi, its hard to know him. But I think I know him, I don't know why, I just feel I..Know him.

I have rarely seen him smile. Does he ever smile?! I wonder how would he look, when he would smile?! He has such perfect features. I think he would look even graceful with a smile. Why doesn't he smile? I can't help but get sad a little for him, his pain. It pulls at my heart. It makes me clutch my heart. His pain bores me, bothers me, like its my own... Like I feel I am part of his sorrows and pains. Like I just want to reach out for him, and hold him, and tell him he is not alone. Why do I feel I have been there with him...

His touch makes me feel...special. Those little brushes of our hands, or whenever his touch meets mine, its just too molten. It feels like fire, like I am on a burning. But its a calm fire, like is it even possible? His touch burns me, yet calms me. I don't know what does that even mean, or even how am I to describe that. Its just too melting. I feel I have been touched like this before. His touch, touches soul. Its a strange feeling of being "connected" through the touch. Like my soul knows how this touch is, a sense of recognition, I am not able to put my finger on.

Why do I feel so drawn to him? So immersed in him, so...into him. I just feel so alive...in those moments with him.

PS: The last two episodes, gave such an insight into Sanam/Jannat's conflict, it made me write a thing or two about her. Don't be disheartened, its not about HIM today! 😳😆 Its about HIM only either ways! 😉

Don't know how it turned out though. I hope I did justice.

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minnie2308

@minnie2308

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

very nice Pragya.. this part specially tugged at my heart "I can't help but get curious to know what he is wondering?! " took me a while to get the final point, but I have finally understood that she 'Isn't" Sanam... and this new woman totally has it in her to lie and to use and to objectify others in her crazy state of mind😆

And you had to add this one 😉😆 " whenever his touch meets mine, its just too molten. It feels like fire, like I am on a burning. But its a calm fire, like is it even possible? His touch burns me, yet calms me. I don't know what does that even mean, or even how am I to describe that. Its just too melting. I feel I have been touched like this before"

Yeah, she surely feels protected. I want a delirious Jannat saying all that to Aahil and Shad to overhear😉

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: minnie2308
very nice Pragya.. this part specially tugged at my heart "I can't help but get curious to know what he is wondering?! " took me a while to get the final point, but I have finally understood that she 'Isn't" Sanam... and this new woman totally has it in her to lie and to use and to objectify others in her crazy state of mind😆

And you had to add this one 😉😆 " whenever his touch meets mine, its just too molten. It feels like fire, like I am on a burning. But its a calm fire, like is it even possible? His touch burns me, yet calms me. I don't know what does that even mean, or even how am I to describe that. Its just too melting. I feel I have been touched like this before"

Yeah, she surely feels protected. I want a delirious Jannat saying all that to Aahil and Shad to overhear😉

Thank you so much Minnie! :) To be honest, I felt a little scattered for thoughts while writing this, BUt I wanted to write something on her. I still prefer writing her AE though, so I would write those only,it feels and makes me more convinced and connected 😆

Lol yes I get you. I tried to tell this from Jannat's point and still making a little of Sanam, like why she feels it has been happened before... Yes she is way too stubborn now, she likes to blame others for her mistakes actually more HIM coz HE is the one who is making her do those "mistakes" 😉😆

Oh yes! I love to write about the "touch" 😉😆 Clearly she is turned on by him these days, so this just has to be added. 😆

That would be amazing! Some home truths for him..😛

Thank you for an insightful comment 😆

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darkice7_12

@darkice7_12

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

Beautiful!

An in depth, sensitive look as to what Jannat is going through. Beautifully done . . . As she muses on what he makes her feel in every which way and how she is so absorbed in him. And there is that melancholic feel to it, where she knows her obsession and is resigned to it.

Loved it! 👏

Edited by darkice7_12 - 10 years ago

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mahwash

@Mahu34

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

WHAT IS THIS... 😲 !!! ARE YOU FOR REAL?!

THIS IS... PURE PERFECTION !! 😲😆

I am yet to watch the episode, as I didn't get the chance to do so before. But I have read all the comments at Heaven. I seriously cannot wait to go and watch it.

Prags, what can I say about this beautiful piece of writing? You do it again and again. You always leave me speechless! How do you do that? 😲🤗

This is so amazing, beautiful and gorgeous... and I'm sure you know what I mean. ❤️ It sets a calm feeling yet there's an evident rush to it as well. We get to hear Jannat's thoughts and I am sure this is what she is feeling. She is trying so hard to mask it all but she knows very well that eyes never lie. *Haayee* 😳

It was so heart touching to read. You've captured every element there was. The silence, the confusion, the curiosity, the need..

"The moment that I wish, to get a little longer...just a little longer. The moment, when I always feel, "It has happened before too...""

You have portrayed the internal battle she is going through perfectly. Despite the way she is shown - being arrogant and slightly demanding - we have to remember that there is a confused woman behind the veil. She knows that there is something about The Nawab and she is slowly starting to question these feelings she is having. Slowly...

"There's such a mystery that surrounds hi, its hard to know him. But I think I know him, I don't know why, I just feel I..Know him."

The following quote is so awesome! Prags, tell me if you thought of the beginning of their relationship when Sanam was slowly getting to know Aahil? Because it sure brought back a few memories. THIS is our Miss Dhabewali. I can so imagine her to say these words. 👏

"I have rarely seen him smile. Does he ever smile?! I wonder how would he look, when he would smile?! "

And I absolutely Love the ending part!

She is starting to question why his touch burns her. Gah.. Prags, you've left me in a heavy doze here... As I said before, you are seriously so good at embracing characters and make them your own. The fact that you've left me and others amazed is beyond words. I can't even begin to express how much I adore this! Gotta to read it again, that's for sure! 👏

"Why do I feel so drawn to him? So immersed in him, so...into him. I just feel so alive...in those moments with him."

I will be ending The Note by saying how magical feels the following words have. *Sigh* .. Those moments with him. ...

Haayee...

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Esha

@Raingoddess

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

Omg!! Finally a post by you! 😉 And this time its about her! 😆 Must say these days she is as interesting as him, ok maybe not as interesting but interesting enough 😆 Let me start off by saying you did complete justice! 👏 You seem to be doing a great job explaining her! Those fun AE's your write!! 😉😆 I love how we are getting more and more of Jannat and her feelings these days! Her reactions are such a treat to watch! 😆 Its almost as if Aahil has breathed life into her and slowly Sanam is emerging from within! Like you said he makes her feel alive! Jannat is so into him! He turns her on like never before, thrills her to the point where she gets a little scared, not of him but of herself and he awakens the passion that makes her bold! It makes her want more and more! ☺️😉

The moment that I wish, to get a little longer...just a little longer. The moment, when I always feel, "It has happened before too..."

Uff!! Yes this is exactly how she feels! 😳

I couldn't help but get drawn to those deep and vulnerable eyes. They seem just too painful to look at. They tug at my heart like never ever. Those eyes seem to convey something, trying to tell me something, some kinda pleading, a request - a loving request.

So beautiful! 😳 I love the words "a loving request"! Aahil's patience is very admirable and shows how much he has matured! But his eyes do give away the pain and need! I feel that its all about the eyes anyway! Their eyes cant leave one another and once they lock, they speak a thousand words without ever saying anything! Its almost like the entire world disappears and they cant look anywhere else but at each other! Its captivating and magical! ❤️

You probably know why I like these parts so much! 😉😆 His eyes?!! 😳 You know I have a huge thing for how his eyes speak and how intensely he looks at her! Jannat would have to be some other worldly creature to not get affected! And its so clear these days that she is affected! A lot! 😆 He turns her on and creates havoc with her emotions! In a pretty innocent yet intense manner!! 😉😆

"Powerful Aura" are the perfect words to describe the Nawab's eyes and perhaps the Nawab himself! ⭐️ Gosh I cant tell you how much I loved these portions! All I could see before me are the parts from the episode where he looks at her and the way she reacts! This was the perfect post for this episode! Trust me I loved it! ❤️ 🤗

Aww reminds me of my baby Sanam! Remember how happy she was when Aahil was laughing with Rahat and Faiz! She seemed mesmerized by his smile! Almost as if her heart was bursting with happiness for him! 😳 Sanam is def somewhere inside and one day she will be strong enough to fully appear, casting aside the false garb of Jannat! As SJ said, Jannat is fictional, she doesn't exist! The other part reminds me of the Sanam who felt Aahil's pain during his nightmare and decided to put an end to it or at least start healing him! How beautiful would it be if she got flashes of those moments! Specifically when she decided to take some charge and help him move forward in life! His pain has always bothered her, pained her as well! Even today, his pain affects her as much! Thats why they are soulmates!! ❤️

Hot! Hot! Super hot! ☺️ I loved your post! The perfect treat after such a delicious episode! Hope you give us one on him soon too! You know how much I love how you write him! 😉 I guess the same goes for her now too! In fact you can write about either (well more of him) and I would enjoy reading it no matter what! 😆😆 *sigh* Simply gorgeous Pragya!!! 🤗

Edited by Raingoddess - 10 years ago

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: darkice7_12
Beautiful!

An in depth, sensitive look as to what Jannat is going through. Beautifully done . . . As she muses on what he makes her feel in every which way and how she is so absorbed in him. And there is that melancholic feel to it, where she knows her obsession and is resigned to it.

Loved it! 👏

Thank you so much! 😳

You have described it beautifully, yourself in those lines! Damn! Resigning to her obsession, yes, I think that explains what I have written in a subtle way. Her inner feeling, when she is confronted of them, when he is around her. It makes her heart do crazy things...

Thank you so much for such an insightful comment! :)

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JShukla

@JShukla

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

This was awesome. but dare I say this time a little less intense that what her expressions conveyed in the episode.

May be you can write one more today. the episode totally deserves one more👏

this is my moments with him😳

"He has such perfect features"

What is it about him?

. What is it about that moment, that it seems its just the moment to live. The moment I have always longed to live. The moment that I wish, to get a little longer"

I know how his eyes seem to stop at me,

Those eyes seem to convey something, trying to tell me something, some kinda pleading, a request - a loving request.

When those eyes seem to change to a more passionate and determined pair of orbs, it sends a chill through me, its cold and yet so warm.

Why do I feel so drawn to him? So immersed in him, so...into him. I just feel so alive...in those moments with him.

Soo much mush and feel good factor in this one

Edited by JShukla - 10 years ago

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mahwash22

WHAT IS THIS... 😲 !!! ARE YOU FOR REAL?!

THIS IS... PURE PERFECTION !! 😲😆

I am yet to watch the episode, as I didn't get the chance to do so before. But I have read all the comments at Heaven. I seriously cannot wait to go and watch it.

Prags, what can I say about this beautiful piece of writing? You do it again and again. You always leave me speechless! How do you do that? 😲🤗

This is so amazing, beautiful and gorgeous... and I'm sure you know what I mean. ❤️ It sets a calm feeling yet there's an evident rush to it as well. We get to hear Jannat's thoughts and I am sure this is what she is feeling. She is trying so hard to mask it all but she knows very well that eyes never lie. *Haayee* 😳

It was so heart touching to read. You've captured every element there was. The silence, the confusion, the curiosity, the need..

"The moment that I wish, to get a little longer...just a little longer. The moment, when I always feel, "It has happened before too...""

You have portrayed the internal battle she is going through perfectly. Despite the way she is shown - being arrogant and slightly demanding - we have to remember that there is a confused woman behind the veil. She knows that there is something about The Nawab and she is slowly starting to question these feelings she is having. Slowly...

"There's such a mystery that surrounds hi, its hard to know him. But I think I know him, I don't know why, I just feel I..Know him."

The following quote is so awesome! Prags, tell me if you thought of the beginning of their relationship when Sanam was slowly getting to know Aahil? Because it sure brought back a few memories. THIS is our Miss Dhabewali. I can so imagine her to say these words. 👏

"I have rarely seen him smile. Does he ever smile?! I wonder how would he look, when he would smile?! "

And I absolutely Love the ending part!

She is starting to question why his touch burns her. Gah.. Prags, you've left me in a heavy doze here... As I said before, you are seriously so good at embracing characters and make them your own. The fact that you've left me and others amazed is beyond words. I can't even begin to express how much I adore this! Gotta to read it again, that's for sure! 👏

"Why do I feel so drawn to him? So immersed in him, so...into him. I just feel so alive...in those moments with him."

I will be ending The Note by saying how magical feels the following words have. *Sigh* .. Those moments with him. ...
Haayee...

Goodness Mahhu!! Oh my god! Such a long comment! Never expected this! 😲😆 No seriously! I was not that convinced with what I wrote trust me! Maybe it has to do with the feeling that I write HIM better..😳😆

Anyway!! Thank you thank you THANK YOU!! So damn much for such a lovely response to this! Its so overwhelming to know that I was able to convey my thoughts properly, even if they are qute scattered..eh 😆

I am glad you guys found that hidden in it. That I was also trying to show her as that confused woman of her feelings too! She is really conflicted, and the "lies" she has been infested upon is making her more conflicted. And those feelings he evokes in her is SO HARD to deny, they must come to the fore sometime, mustn't they? 😉

And a conflict about "knowing' him too. An attraction which she feels she "knows' or maybe "remembers" Its just so messed up right now. Frankly, I was so able to see that conflict, from last 2-3 episodes! The Sanam glimpses we have, started to come out slowly, and maybe that's the reason we can see her conflicts more properly..

@Red: Oh my! Thank you so much for that beautiful remark! 😳 I am so glad that you feel what my words want to convey! Its just amazing when you know that readers have properly got the meaning behind whats been written! I like my characters my own way too...😉😆

Thank you so much again! As you can see, I got a little carried away too..😆

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Raingoddess
Omg!! Finally a post by you! 😉 And this time its about her! 😆 Must say these days she is as interesting as him, ok maybe not as interesting but interesting enough 😆 Let me start off by saying you did complete justice! 👏 You seem to be doing a great job explaining her! Those fun AE's your write!! 😉😆 I love how we are getting more and more of Jannat and her feelings these days! Her reactions are such a treat to watch! 😆 Its almost as if Aahil has breathed life into her and slowly Sanam is emerging from within! Like you said he makes her feel alive! Jannat is so into him! He turns her on like never before, thrills her to the point where she gets a little scared, not of him but of herself and he awakens the passion that makes her bold! It makes her want more and more! ☺️😉

The moment that I wish, to get a little longer...just a little longer. The moment, when I always feel, "It has happened before too..."

Uff!! Yes this is exactly how she feels! 😳

I couldn't help but get drawn to those deep and vulnerable eyes. They seem just too painful to look at. They tug at my heart like never ever. Those eyes seem to convey something, trying to tell me something, some kinda pleading, a request - a loving request.

So beautiful! 😳 I love the words "a loving request"! Aahil's patience is very admirable and shows how much he has matured! But his eyes do give away the pain and need! I feel that its all about the eyes anyway! Their eyes cant leave one another and once they lock, they speak a thousand words without ever saying anything! Its almost like the entire world disappears and they cant look anywhere else but at each other! Its captivating and magical! ❤️

When those eyes seem to change to a more passionate and determined pair of orbs, it sends a chill through me, its cold and yet so warm. The intensity seems to engulf me in a strange embrace, I feel so..so...protected and secure. Its just too strange, I guess amazing too. His eyes have such a powerful aura, especially when he looks at me, stares at me or just gazes at me.

You probably know why I like these parts so much! 😉😆 His eyes?!! 😳 You know I have a huge thing for how his eyes speak and how intensely he looks at her! Jannat would have to be some other worldly creature to not get affected! And its so clear these days that she is affected! A lot! 😆 He turns her on and creates havoc with her emotions! In a pretty innocent yet intense manner!! 😉😆

"Powerful Aura" are the perfect words to describe the Nawab's eyes and perhaps the Nawab himself! ⭐️ Gosh I cant tell you how much I loved these portions! All I could see before me are the parts from the episode where he looks at her and the way she reacts! This was the perfect post for this episode! Trust me I loved it! ❤️ 🤗

I have rarely seen him smile. Does he ever smile?! I wonder how would he look, when he would smile?! He has such perfect features. I think he would look even graceful with a smile. Why doesn't he smile? I can't help but get sad a little for him, his pain. It pulls at my heart. It makes me clutch my heart. His pain bores me, bothers me, like its my own... Like I feel I am part of his sorrows and pains. Like I just want to reach out for him, and hold him, and tell him he is not alone. Why do I feel I have been there with him...

Aww reminds me of my baby Sanam! Remember how happy she was when Aahil was laughing with Rahat and Faiz! She seemed mesmerized by his smile! Almost as if her heart was bursting with happiness for him! 😳 Sanam is def somewhere inside and one day she will be strong enough to fully appear, casting aside the false garb of Jannat! As SJ said, Jannat is fictional, she doesn't exist! The other part reminds me of the Sanam who felt Aahil's pain during his nightmare and decided to put an end to it or at least start healing him! How beautiful would it be if she got flashes of those moments! Specifically when she decided to take some charge and help him move forward in life! His pain has always bothered her, pained her as well! Even today, his pain affects her as much! Thats why they are soulmates!! ❤️

His touch makes me feel...special. Those little brushes of our hands, or whenever his touch meets mine, its just too molten. It feels like fire, like I am on a burning. But its a calm fire, like is it even possible? His touch burns me, yet calms me. I don't know what does that even mean, or even how am I to describe that. Its just too melting.

Hot! Hot! Super hot! ☺️ I loved your post! The perfect treat after such a delicious episode! Hope you give us one on him soon too! You know how much I love how you write him! 😉 I guess the same goes for her now too! In fact you can write about either (well more of him) and I would enjoy reading it no matter what! 😆😆 *sigh* Simply gorgeous Pragya!!! 🤗

Eshaa!! Thank you so much Girl! Yours are the comments I so look forward to! Seriously! Thank you for such an amazingly awesome comment. Yours and Mahu's - probably as long as my post or even longer 😲😆

Hmm yeah! Kinda thought it was about time, to make a post! 😛😆 And I agree, maybe equally interesting to watch HER along with HIM, if not more, I wrote this on heaven too I guess 😆 Love her these days, no matter how the situation is, I am getting to see her inner conflict, which was sorely missed all those days back! 😆 Maybe this is the way, to show her falling for him. It gives me an immense pleasure to see that her heart just KNOWS him 😉😆

@Red: You have descibed her so well in those lines! Wow! yes exactly! Those are the lines, which are meant for her these days! Sigh! Thank you so much, for telling me that I did justice to her, coz in my love for HIM I tend to overlook things and do injustice to her...😉😆

I get you about his eyes part and why do you love such things! 😉😆 Trust me I do too! I feel like, there is not even anything to say, when he looks at her. Words are just not needed for it! Its just so engrossing, they speak such a myriad of feelings, all he must be thinking that time, it gets open in front of you. Those expressive eyes are also the proof of how pure his heart is! ❤️ He is beautiful period ❤️

The world just ceases to exist, yes exactly! You have said it amazingly! Their eyelocks are something else! Nothing is needed to say anymore and everything has been said. Innocent yet intense! Hmm, that's just too innocently naughty 😉😆

I thought of Sanam too, at that particular part! When she was always there for him, his fears, his pain were hers. She still knows inside her heart, she is just too naive to understand. We have said that while losing one's memory no one forgets her traits how did she?! But to be honest, she has one trait still in her - being naive. 😆 She is still naive actually. And at this moments, she looks just as cute she looked while all those days back. That time she wasn't aware of her feelings, this time she just might be aware, hell she is! But again too naive to acknowledge, dumbo! 😆

Ah! I know how much you and I love writing and reading HIM! 😆 Its just a different feeling altogether, actually if we feel the 'same" for HER - I mean reading and writing her - then something is not right. You know what I mean?! 😆🤣

Okay! God, this comment is longer than my post itself! You see when I rant, and get excited, its by such comments! 😆 Thank you so much again for an amazing reply!

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