ArShi FF: Sex between Hearts - Thread 9 - Page 38

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Anu567 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

Deeps,

I notice you are online with the green light on...hoping we do get the next awesome update today! Waiting!!

Best,
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Posted: 10 years ago
Can't wait for their coffee date. Pls cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Coffee date! Not bad .. Khushi is picking up fast
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Posted: 10 years ago
Now thats why they call it a TEASER!

Do you know that your ArHi in this Story is almost eatable?

❤️

Awaiting the chapter.
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Posted: 10 years ago
like the teaser now waiting for the update hope a very sweet coffee date
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Posted: 10 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago


wow wt a SWEET and meaningful meeting over a cup of coffee between arnav and khushi...but coffee is another thing...i am all grinning on their first really good friendly HUG...a well asked one from arnav's side and even better given one from khushi's side... friend to friend :)...i guess after this khushi needs to get ready for sudden hug attacksss...lol...as i am sure now arnav will not ask for it next time but directly will get it :)


i am soo happy that khushi really trying :)...true sense..FIGHTER... as per arnav :)


lavanya and khushi convo was amazing ...lavanya not only seeing the unshed tears of her friend but also she is feeling proud to see khushi trying to be compose...indeed she is TRYING...
if at one side there was a jelly lavanya on other hand i found lavuu extremely observant and at some point maybe thanking silently the person behind this change in her bestie..
loved their convo ...sharing...bestie is not easy ...very real to world :)...and then the easiness with which both discussed his gf or gf's ..:)..loved their friendship :)


loved the way khushi is welcomed in his hospital without any restrictions or discomfort...this welcoming feeling is overwhelming :)...how easily she was in his office :)..it feels great that she noticed in a way arnav's life style :)...his degrees...the ambience of office and that picture of baby alia :)...how beautifully u have shown she feeling pull towards his proud moment ...the baby picture...and though she not same line as arnav right now.. but as a friend she is proud of her friend..

wow wt an entry of dr rji..today he is ready to burn whose ass...lol...poor glove supplier..:)..its amazing to see khushi noticing so many minute things about arnav...how she had seen his anger before but how he always keep it under wrap in front of her :)...hmm...great going..she has started reading arnav :)

how to make some one feel special...need to learn from arnav ...how beautifully he brought big smiles on her face by asking her to add the sweet ..thats fantastic...and i loved it more when i read her tinkling purple bangles...i love purple..lol..
good to see how easily she is sharing about her amma and her convo on making sweet...how understanding arnav is thats simply beautiful...excellent words she uttered in praise of arnav here..he indeed saved her at many fronts...
there light funny banters and his innuendo which she is not understanding at all...but i am sure when she will start understanding it ...it would be moment of worth treasuring :)...

awee he is such a gem of person..he already messaged anjali ...how much he is careful about her ..hehe anjali really sweet friend ready to drive her off...cool :)

ok one special thing which i wanted to mentioned here...read this so many times... its beautiful ...brilliant writing deeps.."Tears rolled down her cheeks, slamming down on their fused hands, where their eyes met watching the puddle take form."...ufff kiya likha hay baby 👏


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so true to ur words here deeps..

"Together, one day at a time, till the last of life!"
Edited by lalarukh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Absolutely smashing update...loved each and every bit of it...its sunshine now ...hope it remains and shine more brighter in their lives...they do have big hurdles coming up but together they can win <3 <3 loved it..Khushi is so innocent and adorable...Arnav surely knows how to take care of her...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful update deepthi... :) i felt like i was waiting for this update from so long i.e. other arnav n khushi conversation over coffee, end of karan fiasco..!! Lovely bonding of lavanya n khushi 😊 specialy lavanya's banter that arnav is taking her place in khushi 's life... It is all feel so real, so pure that i cant explain it to you... 😛 i love lavanya being khushi's bestie, she is real friend 😊

It so good to see the warm behaviour of hospital staff towards khushi... 😃 the way arnav surprised to see n stutter around her makes me grin like an idiot 😆 i was smiling while reading their whole conversation, their hug, his fighter comment 😃 maybe i sound crazy but when i read their both hugging, i feel so relaxed.. Like now everthing will be fine 😳

When i saw your pm in my inbox, i felt like dancing dhinka chika as i was expecting update on friday or afterwards... haha , but I felt a bit sad as update is short but we can understand your AD situation too... Anyways after writing their meeting you compensate very well.. Lol!! Thanks for pm n for such a fab update :) love arshi 😳
Edited by Dhrenu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
To be enjoyed with a good cup of Kapi😃

Wow, drinking coffee never read so better😃

A chapter that made sure that many puddles took form in many of your reader's eyes. After reading this chapter, I wouldn't be surprised if someone mistook all the puddles in my eyes to a joyous storm that brewed. But, I guess my brew does not even come close to the perfectly brewed coffee, sweetened with the perfect amount of sweet and served with an eternal tinkling sound of glass bangles and a perfect smile to go along with it😉.

It is probably my superstition but every time I see a chapter opening with Lavvu's chat, there is an inherent feeling that it is going to be a wonderful read. It is always heartening to read about their hearty laughter and this time the body language was an added give away to see what Khushi is feeling. And lastly, jealousy and stealing factors made it all the more endearing.

Once she reached the hospital and was in that room waiting, I have to say you have pushed me over my edge of extreme silliness🤪. If only I could put it in words on what you have caused to this crazy fan of your writing skills🤔.

That was a just a perfect launch for the "coffee with Arshi" - the hands around her in the air, the clenched fists, seeking the permission and the embrace. Too beautiful which only you could have said it in those words. It is funny that she is the fighter but she is the one seeking protection in his warmth and embrace🤗. And what's with the "kick started my friendship" - He gets some points though for not saying scooter or bike😉. Well, to his credit, she does push him over his edges😃.

Khushi thinks that this is the first time she actually did something for him. I guess that is true on a weird physical level scale, but if she only knew what she has did to him mentally😉.

"God" was an interesting choice of word. But, I do believe that matters of heart go more by faith than face value and for that, he probably comes close to her choice of word at this point of time. But, if there was ever a doubt, the perfect thank you grace she said along with her coffee, should put any of those doubts to rest👏.

I am leaving very very happy at the end just like Khushi. But as usual, my happiness is already doubled just by the way you setup the ending for another eagerly look forward chapter.

Finally, we crazy fans always want more but we also acknowledge that there is another world that you have. Just remember that the amount of gratitude and thank you's owed to you by us is always going to outweigh any amount of apologies you can come up with🤗.

Edited by bhavali4RR - 10 years ago

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