''MaNan FF - Rekindling The Romance'' Epilogue

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I know Manik, You dont have to say it..it was a mistake.We jumped into things pretty early. We were too young to even decide what we needed and what we had..I mean, you were the only and first ever boyfriend i had in my life. How stupid and naive could've been..All these precious years of my life lost in agony with a loveless marriage with you. We better file for a divorce, i mean, you must be thinking it too.. Atleast i had the guts to say it out loud..? What say manik?
Manik?
Manik?
Where are you lost? Not even this you bother to listen.. Fine. You know what i feel like i've taken the right decision. Goodbye manik. DONT YOU DARE CALL ME! I'll be sending the papers by monday..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 1
Manik was still flabbergasted by whatever she just said and thinking what the f**k just happened.
Blur of moment. Worst nightmare ..wake up dude..wake up..its jus a bad dream.. NOPE IT's NOT!!!
Before i could even say anything she had left.
Did she really leave me? Where could she possibly going at this hour ? Damn i really am clueless about my own wife..
Person at the brink of life.. Battling with death usually sees flashes of moments in their life. Manik could literally see his recent past running right in front of him how few years changed him.
Scrolls of his graduation..at 20.. His 20th bday ..finally he got his much needed rein in his life. His dad was back in his life.
Nyonika, the cut-throat bitch was finally out of his life for good with a huge settlement and a NDA.. Dad's ALS and his last wish of me getting married.. Well, thats were it all started and my dream and life was flushed into drain. Married too young.. Full of passion and love at first. But after his untimely death, and the whole responsibility been thrust upon a 21yr old is way too much to handle. All i did was lash out my anger and stress on her for the past 3 years. Damn, i curse myself now.. What's the use !? I was way too engrossed in making my dead papa proud, that i forgot about my jaan. Shit i screwed bigtime. wHAt should i do? wHAt could i do? What can i do?
Gawd!
If at all there had been a timemachine,stop---rewind--make evrything alryt!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update yaar damn interesting cont soon
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Chapter 1 Contd.,
Grief is processed in 5 stages. Atleast thats what Kbler-ross stated. Every individual undergoes these 5 stages, but the time duration is what person-dependant for someone to completely move on and let go.. Manik was in classic stage1 complete and utter DENIAL state.. He was desperate to win her back no matter what, sometimes shit has to blow up to indefinite proportions for a person to realise how deeply in trouble he is.
He was continously calling her number. It went str8 to voicemail. He didn't know any of her colleagues. All the while he cursed himself for being the worst roommate for a wife in the world, let alone the fact he's her husband.
Suddenly his phone chimed in indicating a text from an unknown number, it read, ''she's safe, incase you were wondering jerk.''
then it clicked him, it must ve been that snooty lil executive guy who she hangs out with sahil, sahir or whatevr.. I tried calling back to make sure hearing her voice once but nope not a chance i guess..

I didn't know when the sun came, i found myself drenched in drool and sweat crunched up the couch.
I lazily got up.
Relationship 101 moment, no need to screw more by drowning myself n office, personal life was hanging by mere thread cant afford to lose her for this shitty work.
Called up my assistant and cancelled all my meetings and transferred power of attroney to next-in-line GM and gave myself a month vacation to mend my relationship.
I was in knee deep of shit trouble..felt like this might need bit professional help.
WHom to call?
WHom to call?
Whom should i call?
Idea bulb metaphorically
CABIR!!!! my cupid!!! who else..
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Chapter 1 cntd
Can you believe him? I mean seriously? How much more insensitive can he get? I'm done trying..why should i be the only one trying even he's married to me not like i'm the one chained to him. Her rants were heard by Sahil as she was pacing back and forth the small balcony. All he could utter was ''hmmm.. Yeahh...you're right'' or else god knows what times she'll start from the beginning of her love drama.. Their meet cute..how they were destined to be..their romance in throughout college life etc., etc., even a romantic fanatic as sahil himself seemed fedup hearing it for umpteenth time. All this while, Ronak was in kitchen, lucky bas***d is what sahil thought to himself brought in cup of hotchocolate for her..she politely refused. Whoa..thats when sahil and ronak realised that the issue was bigger than they realised it wasnt usual drama which they expected. She had really left him for real.

Thats it sahil..there's no more going back from this.i'm clear on that. Crystal clear.That dick should least realise her importance in his life, her love for him. Damn!
Before going to bed. She said, ''sahil, what was that uncle's name? First thing up we are meeting him, i wanna get all my ties cut off from him for real for good.''
Tossing all the while in bed unable to sleep..she was just staring at the blank walls. She was done crying, all she could think of was done are those days waitingfor him empty promises,false hopes, skipped dinners, missed anniversaries. Gawd knows what not. She was wondering and thanking her clonazepam for giving her strength to do wat she did. sHE just closed her eyes and drained herself in lana del rey's voice to avoid anymore thinking.
Dawn for some realisation,
@sagar's home
uncle,you mean to say there is no grounds for me to divorce him unless he consents?
Yeah, beti. Mutual consent divorce is the only way. Because there is no grounds been broken in your marriage. as far as wat you and sahil tells..
Did he cheat on you? Drugs? Violence? Abuse? no right.
All the while she was just listening to him and said..yeah uncle i'll better consult with him and come with him if he has time she said with a chuckle.
She bid her adieu.
Before she could leave , uncle called her '' i know it may sound wierd, but you are almost my daughter's age..so dont think i'm crossing my professional line...its very easy to walk off a relationship..but sustaining through its hardships thats where love is tested.. Youngr generation never gets that all they see is a problem, blow it to infinite size and claim its not working. Just once have you thought / just think from his p.o.v what he's handling..love doesnt need anniversaries,bdays,wedding days to make it spl all it needs is just mere presence and reassurance that you both have each other's back. Simple gestures are enough to make one know that he's loved..just think before doing something irreparable and irrational. Good thing is that you dont have kids may have also been cause for a drift in your hiatus between you two. Jus think honey.i'll meet you tomro, hopefully not for a bad reason though.
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Chapter 2
Sagar uncle's words were echoing in her ears..''Part of growing up means to let go of some immaturity is all.'','' you both are married now, not still in college to be romancing 24*7 and expecting him to be irresponsible'', he has to be the sane one, he has to, he has to keep the house in shape for you and future, which he didnt think of while ignoring present'', classic guy problems..''
Without any prior warning just marched in opening the key combination to the door, she saw him staring at his mobile screen. Seeing the door open, he turned..
His expression confirmed that he was happy-morelike-ecstatic+relieved+confused+scared of what's gonna happen next+ bit blank!!
He came straight towards her saying'' sorry sorry honey sorry baby''.. Like his life depended on it.. She realised it was worth giving a second chance, aftrr all she expected him to accept divorce with no questions whatsoever..she didnt respond him.
She just stared at him..
He was waiting for a response, eager to see some reactions from her..he was bit taken back by her vacant stare..
After a while, she came close, gave a tight slap on his face..and said, ''thats for ditching me on our 5th anniversary jerk!''
he simply smiled.. And thanking god, that she atleasted venting her anger.. In no moment, she pulled him in for a kiss and said belated anniversary wishes jerk!
He was totally flustered by her bipolar behavior yet happy that she's here and thats all that matters now..
Saying that she left for their room and started packing her stuffs.. Manik started gttng panicky, kept on asking her but all he got was a smile as reply. She moved her things to guest room and closed it shut..

Manik was just totaly confused..
Suddenly, his shorts were vibrating..
"Jaan : m willing to give a second chance for our love, for our marriage,only if you want to. This arrangement coz mr.malhotra has gotten too much comfortable nd shortsighted over me..mebbe this will be fr gud''
he smiled seeing the word second chance.. tHat was enough for him to sweep her off feet.. Fine.. This time wont screw it, shudnt screw it up.. iS all he said to himself and made his way to the bedroom. Playing dirty and sly is how i can get her back..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really lykd d concept.. Its vry different n unique.. Plz update ASAP...
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interseting story
plz cont soon
n pm me plzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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yaar its damn amazing i read last 3 parts in one go
love u lotzz update soon :)
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chapter 2 contd
He freshened up and came downstairs in no time.He cleared out the refrigerator , threw out empty cartons. Fixed up a glass of OJ and PBS for her.
She came down after an hour or so after a dilemma of whether he left the house or not.She didnt hear his car leaving the home, so she was still was not sure.
WHen she came down stairs, she saw him playing very seriously on xbox, her stilletos clucking on the tiles were heard by him. He didnt avert his gaze from the tv , yet quietly said, that he fixed her up some bfast, ''if she wants she can have''..
She was way more curious about the fact that he was home on a working day that too @ 11am @ 11am ..she checked her phone twice ..
She thought to herself, ''am in some sorta parallel universe? Ever so sincere, who never ever took sick leave is home playing vicecity.. Wow..''
she gobbled her sandwich and gulped the oj and left for work.
The same routine continued for almost next 2weeks. Evryday she thought of asking but later. sHE tot ''it might end up in yet another quarrel. wHy do i even bother''.and left ..but today her limit was crossed so she out of curiosity asked him..
She texted him from dining table,
''Jaan : hola, turn to your left, for 30seconds''
Chime was heard, he saw and paused the game and came near her.
He asked her, ''sup, Mrs.Malhotra?''
''you temme, sup?, is everything alright?, you've been MIA to work for the past 2 weeks, whats the matter? Evrything okay?''

''oh yeah, that, i sorta gave myself a vacation, its been stated that i spend way too much time at work, so took time to spend with my everabsent wifey''
''sarcasm-much mr.malhotra!''
whenever i needed you in here you were always busy, stuck in meeting..see even now with your silly little game, how hard is it to understand what i'm saying''or even penetrate through your thick skull..
M :"woman, what do you want ?! You were the one who said we needed space..yet here you screaming at me for what ?!? Giving you what you wanted!?!?
Wow!.unbelievble..you are just f**king unbelievable...you could've better given me divorce rather than shitting me evryday with sameold crap..
BEfore she could complete, he pulled her in for a long kiss..she was resisting, hitting him , pusing his shoulder only to finally give in...they were so lost in themselves..kissing like maniacs..they broke when they were breathless..before she could even come to her senses , he again pulled her in..and mumbled ''i'm done listening to you , mrs.malhotra'.

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