''MaNan FF - Rekindling The Romance'' Epilogue - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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its getting awesome day by day cont soon lovely update
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aww its lovely..i like their cute fight.waiting for next update
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chapter 2 contd
He continued kissing her, but her mind clock was ticking for her office..She thought unless i give what the monster wants, he wont leave for work today. So she decided to go head on over manik's little game..and started kissing him harder, claiming his sounds and leaving him..
He was dumbstruck for a moment and all he could utter was ''whoaa''.. "what the f**k was that''..''where has this lil kitten been all these days''
Before he attempted anything..she gestured towards to her watch and started leaving saying. "unlike someone else here, we don't have the privilege of being our own boss, you know'' she chuckled.
Two can play this game he thought to himself and said, well, in that case, ''its been taken care of, i just texted Mr.Roy, you can take off for today/a week/ a month'' ..
"W*F!? What was our pact!? No interference in professional life'' when only you'll listen to me? I mean always going behind my back to work something.She was hell frustrated with him..saying all this she just dunked the OJ on his head..
He was full on dripping with juice, and said, ''wow, you just chose wrong timing to mess with me dearie'' think i'm gonna leave you ..saying this he tilted the entire carton on her.
f**k! f**k! f**k! f**k! f**k! She exclaimed!!
Before the house could drown in anymore curse words, manik shut her in the only way he knew and started sucking on the juice on her face and lips..whilst his hands were too busy trying to unbutton her shirt..outta mere frustration , he just ripped it open and started licking the juice from all over her shoulder and body .. LEaving her moaning ''manik'' which echoed in the empty house..
He started to lift her skirt and was caressing her thigh and thats when she came to her senses and said..''no manik..no..not like this..not today..not right now''.
That was enough for manik to go pissed off..he straightened himself and said..''Mebbe that's where the problem lies jaan, not every moment, every second has to be perfect and for spontaneity these perfections you want, that can't be achieved..it's simply just some unattainable and poles apart..saying this he left to clean himself..
She just stood there...'' i guess, he's right, what am i going to achieve trying to chisel and carve a perfect second, minute,moment in life when there's no one to share with''
she started walking towards his/their former room.. And entered the bathroom. He saw her coming and didn't react, he just thought.''not again''., ''not one of her lectures''..
She just lowered her skirt and came towards him..without thinking she just gripped his face and started kissing him.. He too responded and pulled her hair.. Kisses grew wild and rough, making them frantic and bump in that small cubicle of space.
"Gawd, you are so beautiful'' when you are bold like this, said manik.. May be i have forgotten to mention it often..she just shut him off..saying don't ruin..no talking..in notime they were both tangled in their bedroom in sheets..tired to the core..all wet..
She started saying ''manik. Does it always have to be like this?''
''like wat jaan?''
''to make you love me, i gotta say that i'm filing a divorce, where has the manik who once broke into my home just to stay with me for one night, all grand romantic gestures, is it just before marriage stuffs? Am i not worth doing all those right now?!''
''Jaan, is this what you wanna discuss, post-sex session?''
''be serious for once'', its like you are totally changed person now manik'' thats all i'm implying..
"you don't even love life, me, or anything anymore'' ever since papa died...you are stressing too much of work on yourself..dont' you think?
"Kuch toh bolo na manik''
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hola, just drop in your thoughts. I feel like its bit depressing.. Too much reality creeping in.. If you think i'm sorta ruining 'manan' i'll stop..
Gracias!! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Different concept..read all the chapters..interesting story..please continue soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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is the direction apt nd pleasing?
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Yes its going in a nice flow 😊
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Chapter 3
After that heavy spat, she just sat in her room..near the window drowned herself in Fallulah's voice.
Times like these make people relate to the lyrics, nandini was no different..

"Where do we belong, where did we go wrong,

If there's nothing here, why are we still here?
It's another time, it's another day

Numbers they are new, but it's all the same

Running from yourself, it will never change

If you try you could die
Give us a little love, give us a little love

We never had enough, we never had enough

Give us a little love, give us a little love

We never had enough, we never had enough''

''give us a lil love is all she could think''
She just thought to herself.
"Where have we both been lost. Why this vacuum between us even when we are together it's like we are don't exist in each other's world anymore''
She sat there and slept in reclining position near the window..
Few hours earlier...
In their room...
"kuch toh bolo na manik''
Do these words even make sense to you?
Gawd, you are just making our ''Humeshas, always forever sound so obsolete now''.. I feel so sick Manik. Destiny didn't have this life for us in bank.
Just say whats the reason for shutting me out?
Why did you shut your friends off your life Manik? ALWAYS you guys used to stand for ''all for one, one for all..'' Yet here you are, not a single clue about their life in the recent past. What changed.
Do you even know where mukti is now?
Do you know how many kids does Aliya and Dhruv have?
Have you been to any of Cabir's events?
No..lemme tell you..
The night mukti decided to leave for doctors without borders to serve at Ghana, you were stuck in a meeting in Chennai..not bothered to wish her luck even once when she's leaving the country for years.
Cabir son's baptism.. You had an ''mnc conference'' in blore..
Dhruv and Aliya had triplets..IVF..
Do you even care for them anymore..? Feels like your emotional side has been shutoff way too much for way too long.. I don't how to even mend you..Your changes are making me wonder about us. Do you even care for a fact that we don't have a kid? Or you don't plan on having that too?
Even now.. Its like i'm talking to walls.. Why did you bother to waste your precious month to spend @ home.. Instead you could have got a 100million profit turn over on some deal right?
Manik!
Manik!
Manik!
Manik!
M : Of course i'm worried about our future, i'm worried about you..its not the time for worrying..i have to secure our future..for a better life..
Before he could even complete, she started laughing like maniac, ''what life manik? With whom?'', ''If not now then never..just remember that''..''after giving me lecture on spontaneity here you are making schedules for 2040.. How is that even fair? I don't want all the luxuries. As long as we are together thats enough.. We can build a cocoon for ourselves.. A baby or two..its prime time honey..just think..i'm fed up bringing up this topic again and again. Please. Just for once think i know you are stressed ..but don't build an empire of industries at the cost of our love and family..''
I know..i know..whenever i talk, its just lectures for you these days.
I guess, i'm totally drained out now both physically and mentally.. You know what, come to me when you got answers for my questions.. I'm not talking until then..saying that she just dragged the duvet onto herself and left the room..
"why can't things be real and simple, why it has to be this complicated right now''
OH!!! gawd!! Make this room stop spinning..
He screamed ...Aaarrrggghhh..and just lied down staring at the ceiling.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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How is it? Bit too serious? Well life is..not all destined-to be ...sweethearts have a smooth love life throughout.. Evrybody hits that hiatus..just picturing manan..sure they ll find their spark soon..!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update
A totally different story
Things r very complicated
Their lives r also very complicated
Please make it simple now
Thanks for pm
Update soon

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