FF_MANAN_BROKEN_SOUL {INDEX PAGE-5)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey guys..
I'm going to start new ff..
u guys lyk my story intezaar hope u lyk this one too..
prologue-
he is son of millionaire.many ppl work under his dad..
but he never care abt money..he is emotional sensitive
fun loving person.. who cared abt other feeling he
respect others. he had two younger brother nd sister
whom he luv alot they luv him too.. his mom dad luvs
him alot.. his friends ar his lyf.. but one incident change
him so much that now he hardly talk with any
one..except his family nd friends now he don't care abt
anyone.esle.. anyone emotions.. money money is own
his mind he want to earn more nd more money..now he
is ruthless rude arrogant person.. he hate interacting
with others.. he was famous singer of his clg.. lead
singer of his band.. he luv playing guitar.. but knw he
doesn't sing.. he broke his guitar.. nobody dare to talk
to him..when he is at home he prefer to stay in his
room.. the person who hates darkness now he luvs
darkness.. now he doesn't believe in luv nd al.. he
thinks gals trap rich boys for money now he smoke he
drink flirt with gals.. change girlfriends every week.. lyk
clothes..girls drool over him.. nobody knw what
happened to him so he is so much changed..
and she.. she is the Apple of her father eyes .. her
parents only child.. her mom died after her birth.. her
father is her mother friend philosopher guide sibling her
every thing.they live in a small town.. she got
scholarship for her further studies as she topped in 12
standard her father got admission her in space one of
top clgs in Mumbai but she didn't want to go there
leaving her father al alone she luv reading luv stories nd
believes in true luv..she luv music.. she luv everything
around her..
they ar lyk north pole south pole. what will happen
when they meet eachother??
howz it??
cmnts plz..
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zaroge thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome concept plzzz
contu soon and add me to ur pm list
Divyasaxena thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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looks interesting. ... nice prologue. .. cont. soon...
masoomii thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part -1

A GIRL WAS SITTING IN FRONT OF TV. SHE WAS WATCHING HER FAVOURITE MOVIE..AND WAS SINGING SONG
"ladki kyun najane kyun ladko si nahi hoti" la la la la.. WHEN A DOORBELL RANG.. SHE JUMP FROM SOFA AND RAN TO OPEN DOOR.. SHOUTS PAPA.. AND HUG THE PERSON WHO IS STANDING NEXT TO DOOR.. IN FRONT OF HER.. A PERSON IN HIS 40's. .. WEARING SPECKS.. HOLDING VEGETABLES ND FRUITS BAGS IN ONE HAND ND IN ANOTHER OFFICE BAG.. HE TOO SHOUTS "GUGOO" .. AND HUG HER BACK..
PAPA UR 20 MINUTES LATE.. I WAS WAITING FOR U.. SHE GAVE HER DAD I'M ANGRY ON U LOOK.. HER DAD NOWS.. HOW TO MAKE HER DAUGHTER HAPPY.. HE SAYS GUGGO.. I'M LATE BECAUSE I WENT TO BAKERY TO BUY UR FAVOURITE CHOCLATE CAKE.. SHE BECAME EXTREMELY HAPPY AFTER HEARING NAME OF CHOCOLATE CAKE.. SHE EXCLAIMED WITH JOY.. REALLY PAPA..
REALLY GUGGO.. HER FATHER ANSWER HER BACK.. AND GAVE HER SMALL BOX OF CHOCOLATE CAKE.. SHE HAPPILY START EATING IT.. HER FATHER LAUGHS.. I HAVE A SURPRISE FOR U.. WHAT SURPRISE PAPA SHE ASKED.. HER PAPA HANDOVER HER A FILE.. WHAT IS THIS PAPA.. SHE ASKED HER FATHER.. OPEN IT BETA AND READ IT.. HER FATHER SAYS WHILE LOOKING AT HER.. SHE CURIOUSLY OPEN THAT FILE AND START READING IT.. AND WAS SHOCKED.. SHE SHOUTS NO PAPA I'M NOT GOING THERE.. I DON'T WANT TO STUDY IN THAT CLG.. I AM NOT GOING TO MUMBAI.. I'M NOT GOING TO LEAVE U HERE ALONE.. SHE KNOWS HER FATHER CANNOT LIVE WITHOUT HER.. LYK SHE. DON'T LIVE WITHOUT HER.. GOING MUMBAI FOR FURTHER STUDIES MEANS SHE HAS TO LEAVE HER FATHER HERE ALONE IN MANGLORE..BECAUSE HE HAS HIS JOB HERE IN MANGLORE SHE IS NOT SELFISH.. FOR HER DREAM.. LEAVE HER PAPA HERE ALONE.. NO SHE CAN'T DO THAT.. HER LITTLE HEART PROTESTED.. HER FATHER LOOKS AT HER HELPLESSLY.. HE THOUGHT HOW TO CONVINCE.. HER.. HE KNWS WHAT IS RUNNING RIGHT NW IN HIS DAUGHTER HEAD.. BUT ITS GOOD FOR HER FUTURE.. SHE HAS TO GO THERE.. ..HE POLITELY CALL HER "NANDANI"
SHE LOOKS AT HER FATHER WITH TEAR FULL EYES..
HER FATHER ABHAY MURTHY PUT HIS HAND ON HER SHOULDER SYD HUG HER..
ND TRY TO CONVINCE HER.. NANDANI ITS UR MOM DREAM.. SHE WANT U TO SEE U SUCCESSFUL IN UR LYF ITS HER LAST WISH.. I'M DOING THIS FOR UR MOTHER OR ELSE U THINK I WOULD LET U GO THERE.. SHE LOOK AT HER MOM PICK ANJALI MURTHY SHE ALWAYS WANT TO BE LYK HER.. AND WANT TO FULFIL HER VERY WISH.. ONLY MEMORIES OF HER MOTHER IS HER PICTURES.. HER PAPA TOLD HER ONCE THAT HER MOM BELIEVES IN FIREFLIES.. SHE BELIEVES FIREFLIES IS SYMBOL OF TRUE LOVE SO SHE TOO START BELIEVING IN FIREFLIES.. SHE WAS LOST IN HER THOUGHTS WHEN HER PAPA ASKED HER.. SO U'LL GO NAA
SHE NOD HER HEAD IN YES..

PRECAP- MUMBAI
masoomii thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: zaroge

awesome concept plzzz
contu soon and add me to ur pm list



thanku..
ok :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanku :)
first part is updated ;)
masoomii thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Divyasaxena

looks interesting. ... nice prologue. .. cont. soon...


thanku :)
updated :P
masoomii thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanku :)
first part is updated ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing concept... plzz add me in your pm list.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Liked ur concept
Cont soon
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