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Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: mehjaben_nahin


oye maybe kya hai abto lana hi padhega 😉 😃 jaldi update karo...



haha wo to hai :P
but the thing is how.. mai wohi soch ri hu manik ki entry kaise karau :| :P
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
PART-4
NEXT DAY SHE WOKE UP EARLY IN THE MORNING.. SHE GET READY.. AND START PRAYING TO HER AIYAPPA..
NANDANI-AIYAPPA TODAY IS MY FRST DAY IN CLG.. I'M LIL SCARED AIYAPPA.. PLZ BE WITH MEE.. GIVE LOTS OF LOVE TO MAA PAA..
AND TOOK HER BAG AND LEAVE FOR CLG..
HER CLG WAS JUST 5 MIN AWAY FROM HER HOSTEL.. SO SHE REACHED THERE ON TYM..
AS SHE ENTER IN CLG SHE SAW SOME SENIORS ARE BULLYING FRESHERS.. SHE DON'T WANT TO SPOIL HER FRST DAY IN CLG SO SHE SOME HOW MANAGE TO ESCAPE FROM GETTING CAUGHT BY HER SENIORS.. SHE IS SCIENCE STUDENT.. AND HAS HER LECTURES SCHEDULE IN HER HANDS.. SO ITS EASY FOR HER TO KNW ABT HER CLASSES.. FIRST LECTURE IS OF CHEMISTRY SHE WENT TO HER CLASS.. SHE IS ONLY 2 MINUTES LATE..
SHE LOOK AT HER PROFESSOR
MR BHALLA WHO WAS WITH TALKING TO STUDENTS..
NANDANI-MAY I COME IN SIR
MR BHALLA- LUK AT HER YES..
NANDANI ENTER IN CLASS AND WISH HIM GOOD MORNING
MR BHALLA - U MUST BE NEW STUDENT
NANDANI-YES SIR
MR BHALLA- GUD GO AND TAKE UR SEATS..
NANDANI LUK AT BENCHES ND SAW FIRST BENCH IS EMPTY SHE WALK OVER THERE AND SIT ON THAT BENCH.. MR BHALLA LUK AT HIS STUDENTS LAST TYM.. ND TOLD THEM TO OPEN THERE TEXT BOOKS..
MR BHALLA- BEFORE I CONTINUE WITH FIRST CHAPTER.. I WANT TO CHECK UR GK IN CHEMISTRY..
WHOLE CLASS GAVE HIM WE AR NOT INTRESTED LOOK.. EXPECT NANDANI
NANDANI- I'M READY SIR.
MR BHALLA- GUD .. HE STARTED WITH HIS QUESTION ANSWER SESSION..
ONLY NANDANI WAS GIVING ANSWERS OF HIS QUESTIONS.. HE WAS IMPRESSED.. THEN BELL RANG..
MR BHALLA LUK AT HIS WRIST WATCH.. ND SAY OK STUDENTS ENOUGH FOR TODAY ND NANDANI..PRAISE NANDANI
SHE TURN BACK TO PICK UP HER BAG AND SAW HER WHOLE CLASS WAS STARING AT HER LYK SHE DIDN'T BELONG TO THIS PLANET..
SHE FELT WEIRD.. AND START WALKING WHEN A GIRL EXCITEDLY SHOUTS HER NAME ND RAN IN IN FRONT OF HER BLOCKING HER WAY.. SHE GRAB HER SHOULDERS.. AND SHOUTS HEY I'M NAVYA.. ND UR SUPER GENIUS.. ACHA HUA TUMNE USS SADU KO SB ANS DEDIYE WARNA WO HUM SB KO SUNNA SUNNA K MAAR DALTA.. THEN SHE START LAUGHING..
NANDANI LOOK AT HER FROM HEAD TO TOE.. SHE LUKS LYK MODEL.. OPEN HAIRS.. SHORT DRESS.. HIGH HEELS.. FULL ON MAKEUP.. SHE IS LUKING EXTREMELY BEAUTIFUL.. SHE THOUGHT
NANDANI- SADOO KAUN
NAVYA-AREY WO BHALLA
NANDANI- TUM APNE TEACHER KO NAM SAY BULATI HO
NAVYA- KYUN TUMNE KBHI NI BULAYA KYA THEN SHE AGAIN START LAUGHING..(SHE IS BOLD MODERN BUT BUBBLY BY NATURE..)
NANDANI- SHE GAVE HER HAWW LUK..
NAVYA - OK NEXT LECTURE IS FREE CHALO CANTEEN CHALTE HAI..
NANDANI- SMILES YEAH I'M HUNGRY
NAVYA- MEE TOO
THEN THEY BOTH WENT TO CANTEEN

AS THEY ENTER CANTEEN EVERYONE LUK AT THEM AND STOP DOING WHAT THEY AR DOING.. NANDANI THOUGHT IS THIS CLG OR WHAT PPL DO NTHING JUST STARES OTHERS.. THEN SHE LUK AT NAVYA.. AND UNDERSTOOD.. ALL BOYS WERE ACTUALLY LOOKING AT HER.. ACTUALLY JUST DROOLING ON HER.. ND AL GALS WERE LUKING AT HER DUE TO JEALOUSY BCZ BOYS ARE LUKING AT HER ND NAVYA WAS GIVING THEM I DON'T CARE A DAMN LUK.. SUDDENLY A BOY CAME IN FRONT OF THEM HE WAS HOLDING COLD DRINK IN ONE HAND ND IN ANOTHER PH.. HE BUMPED INTO NAVYA.. AND HIS COLD DRINK FELL ON HER DRESS
NAVYA CLINCHED HER FIST AND LOOK AT BOY IN ANGER
NAVYA- YEH KYA KIYA TUMNE MERE PURI DRESS KHRAB KRDI
BOY- I'M REALLY SORRY BY MISTAKE GALTI SAY HO GYA
NAVYA- ITS OK NOW MOVE
BOY WENT AWAY FROM THERE
NAVYA TO NANDANI HEY NANDANI TUM BAITHO ORDER DO MAI DRESS CLEAN KRKR ATI HU
NANDANI OK
NAVYA WENT TO WASHROOM
NANDANI TOOK A DEEP SAW EMPTY CHAIR AND TABLE.. SHE WENT TO THAT TABLE SHE PUT HER BAG ON TABLE AND SAT ON CHAIR..
EVERYONE AGAIN STARTING AT HER LYK SHE IS SUM GHOST :p

precap- nandani crying
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23

PART-5
NANDANI IS NOW HELL ANNOYED..
AND AROUND HER WAS TALKING LYK..
PERSON1- AREY YEH KYA KR DIYA ISNE
PERSON2-ISKO AB KOI NI BCHA SAKTA
PERSON3- WO LOG ISKO CHODENGE NHI AB
PERSON4- BECHAARII
NANDANI WAS LOOKING DOWN .. SHE DIDN'T HEAR ANYTHING.. WHEN SHE NOTICE PAIR OF SHOES WALKING TOWARD HER TABLE.. AND SHE HEARS BANG ON HER TABLE.. SHE LUKS UP AND SAW SOME SIMILAR FACES.. SHE TRY TO RECALL WHERE SHE HAD SEEN THEM.. THEN SHE HORRIFIEDLY LOOK AT THEM WITH FEAR FULL EYES.. THEY WERE THE SAME PEOPLE WHOM SHE HAD SEEN IN THE MORNING WHEN THEY ARE BULLYING FRESHERS..
THEY WERE FOUR PEOPLE 2 GIRLS 2 BOYS..ALL OF,THEM PULLED CHAIRS AND SAT ON THEM.. ONE OF GIRL WAS BUSY IN LUKING HER MOBILE SCREEN. ANOTHER ONE IS STARING HER.. AND THEN LUKING AT HER FRIENDS.. WITH A MISCHIEVOUS SMILE ON HER FACE.. ND BOYS ONE IS SITTING ON CHAIR HIS BOTH LEGS IS ON TABLE .. AND ANOTHER ONE IS BUSY IN ADJUSTING HIS GUITAR STRINGS.. THEN HE LUK AT HIS FRIENDS WHO AR ALREADY LUKING AT HIM..
U KNOW TUM KAHAN HO.. ONE OF BOY WHO WAS SITTING ON CHAIR WITH BOTH LEGS ON TABLE ASKED HER..
NANDANI- I'M IN CANTEEN.. SHE SAID HESITANTLY
BOY- KNOCK KNOCK.. SO U KNW UR IN CANTEEN.. HE LAUGHS AND AGAIN LUK AT HIS FRIENDS WHO WERE TRYING TO GIVE A FORCEFUL SMILE HE THEN LUK BACK AT HER..
DO U KNOW TUM KAHA BAITHI HO..HE AGAIN ASKED..
NANDANI IS LIL SCARED NOW BUT SHE TRIED TO ANS HIM.. I'M SITTING HERE ON THIS CHAIR TABLE..
AND U KNW YEH TABLE KISKE NAM PR RESERVED HAI.. ONE OF THE GIRL WHO WAS BUSY IN HER MOBILE PHONE.. ASKED HER STILL LUKING IN HER MOBILE..
NANDANI- NO I DON'T KNW.. I'M NEW HERE
COMMON MUKTI SHE IS NEW HERE...SHE DOESN'T KNW ANOTHER VOICE CAME.. IS OF BOY WHO WAS ADJUSTING HIS GUITAR STRINGS FEW MINUTES BACK..
AS IF I CARE DHRUV.. THE GIRL WHOSE NAME IS MUKTI SAID TO HIM WHILE PUTTING HER PH DOWN ON TABLE AND GIVING HER FRIENDS I DON'T CARE LUK..
MUKTI HE IS RIGHT SHE IS NEW HERE WHO IS SAVED FROM OUR TORTURE.. SAID BOYS,WHOSE LEGS IS ON TABLE..
YEAH RIGHT CABIR SHE DID TWO MISTAKES ONE AFTER ANOTHER FRST SHE ESCAPED FROM US... THEN NOW SHE IS SITTING ON OUR TABLE FAB 5 TABLE SAID THE GIRL WHO IS STILL STARING HER... LYK SHE IS GOING TO ATE HER ALIVE.. HER NAME IS ALIA..
YUP ALIA AB PUNISHMENT TO DOUBLE MILEGI NA.. NANDANI IS NOW HELL SCARED..
SHE THOUGHT WHO AR THESE PPL WHY AR THEY TALKING TO HER LYK THAT LYK SHE DID SUMTHING WRONG.. ND WHAT IS THIS FAB 5 .. GOD AIYAAPA PLZ BE WITH MEE SAVE MEE FROM THESE MONSTERS.. SHE SILENTLY PRAYS IN HER MIND TO HER AIYAAPA
PRECAP - FAB 5 PUNISHMENT
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Mr. Bhala? Yhm 😆
Awesome update
Wad r fab 5 gonna do?continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
It's just amazing superb fantastic
looking forward for 1 chap
plzzz update soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Continue soon need manik entry can't wait
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
PART-6

MUKTI-OHH LUK WHAT IS SHE HAVING IN HER HANDS.. "JHOLLA" (BAG)..
CABIR- GRABS HER BAG FROM HER HANDS..
CABIR- CHECK KRTE HAI IS JHOLLE MAI KYA HAI
. HE PUT HIS HANDS IN HER BAG ND PULL OUT A TIFFIN BOX.. HE LAUGHS TIFFIN BOX SERIOUSLY CLG MAI TIFFIN KAUN LATA HAI .. HE THROW HER TIFFIN BOX IN DUSTBIN.. NANDANI,HAS TEARS IN HER EYES.CABIR AGAIN PUT HIS HANDS IN HER BAG THIS TYM HE PULL OUT A PHOTO FRAME.. PHOTO FRAME IS OF HER FATHER MPTHER PIC TOGETHER IN IT.. SHE SHOUTS IN PAIN PLZ GIVE IT BACK TO MEE. CABIR SHOUTS PUNISHMENT TYM BABY.. EACH ONE OF US IS GOING TO GIVE U TASK,WHICH U HAVE TO COMPLETE OR ELSE .. U'LL GET TO KNW.. WHAT CAN WE DO.. HE THROW THE BAG ON HER FACE.. AND PASS PHOTOFRAME TO MUKTI.. SO UR READY CABIR ASKED HER..
TEARS ROLLS DOWN ON HER CHEEKS SHE NOD HER HEAD IN YES.. CABIR MISCHIEVOUSLY SMILES..
CABIR- COOL THEN START WITH ALIA..
ALIA- U HAVE TO CLEAN ENTIRE CANTEEN IN ONE HOUR.. SARE,TABLES CHAIRS SB.. MUJHE JARA SA BHI DIRT DIKHA THEN PUNISHMENT DOUBLE.. PURA CLG SAFF KARNA PADEGA.
NANDANI- NOD HER HEAD IN YES.. THEN FAB 5 LEAVE FROM THERE NANDANI START CLEANING CANTEEN.. SHE WAS CRYING.. HER FATHER IS NOT MILLIONAIRE OR BILLIONAIRE.. HE IS ACCOUNTANT HE HAD LIMITED SALARY.. BUT SHE ALWAYS TREATED HER LYK PRINCESS.. SHE HAD NEVER DONE SUCH WORKS EVEN IN HER OWN HOUSE ND HERE SHE DOING IT JUST FOR THE SAKE OF PHOTO FRAME.. SHE HAS,NOT ANY PROBLEM DOING SUCH THING.. BUT,THE WAY THEY DEMANDED FROM HERIT WAS UNBEARABLE FOR HER.
AFTER ONE THEY CUM BACK.. ALIA CHECK OUT ENTIRE CANTEEN
ALIA- IMPRESSIVE.. MUST SAY I'M IMPRESSED.. EK KAAM KARO MERE GHR BAI LG JAO.. MUJHE EK ACHI BAI KI SAKTH JAROORT HAI.. AND U,HAVE AL QUALITIES OF A PERFECT BAI
SHE,LAUGHS,AT HER. WHILE HER,FRIENDS SMIRKS
NANDANI,FEELS INSULTED
ALIA- NEXT TASK DHRUV DEGA..
DHRUV- TUMKO EK SONG GANA PADEGA. . YAHA SBKE SAMNE.. EK BOLLYWOOD ITEM NUMBER
NANDANI-WAS SHOCKED
SHE HESITANTLY START SINGING
AYE CHIKNI CHAMELI CHUP K AKELI PAUVAH CHDHA K,AYI..
SHE FINISHED HER SONG..
DHRUV - WOOH HHO HO.. ISKI,TO. AWAZ BHOT ACHI HAI, . HE SMILES (HE IS NOT LYK HIS,FRIENDS.. HE IS,A,PRANKSTER.. NT A MONSTER)
DHRUV- CABIR. UR TURN
CABIR- SIMPLE TASK,FOR U CLEAN,MY SHOES..
NANDANI SUM HOW CLEANS HIS SHOES
CABIR-MUKTI
NANDANI LUKS AT MUKTI
MUKTI-,SO FUN TYM.. AL U HAVE TO DO IS CLG K GATE K PASS,JAO,JO,BHI SABSE PEHLE AYE USKO PROPOSE KRNA HAI OR,USE KISS KRNA HAI
NANDANI IN DEEP SHOCK AFTER LISTENING,MUKTI TASK - SHE SHOUTS,NO,I CAN'T,DO,THIS,PLZ
CABIR-,U WANT UR,PHOTO FRAME BACK OR NOT
NANDANI - WAS ALREADY IN TEARS SHE HAS NO ANOTHER OPTION LEFT
SO SHE AGAIN NOD HER HEAD IN YES

PRECAP - KEEP GUESSING :P
KISKO MILEGA,KISS
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: HTA111

Continue soon need manik entry can't wait


in next part :P
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: 12345niyati

It's just amazing superb fantastic

looking forward for 1 chap
plzzz update soon😊



chap 1 babes.. I finished updating 6 chaps :/ and working on 7
:D
Edited by masoomii - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: pooh2015

Mr. Bhala? Yhm 😆
Awesome update
Wad r fab 5 gonna do?continue soon



hehe .. :P
they ar going to make her perfect fairytale lyf hell :| poor nandani :/
:P

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