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HER FATHER BECOMES REALLY REALLY HAPPY..
OWW GUGGO I'M HUNGRY.. SO TELL MEE WANT U WANT TOO EAT.. I'LL COOK THAT FOR US
PAPA. I ALREADY COOKED PASTA.. ANDI BOUGHT DIWALE DULHANIA LE JAYNGE DVD..ABHAY LOOK AT HER DAUGHTER THEN AT CLOCK NANDANI ITS ALREADY 10 .. IF WE WATCH MOVIE THIS TYM.. THEN I'LL NOT BE ABLE TO GET UP EARLY IN THE MORNING.. THEN I'LL GET LATE FOR OFFICE.. ABHAY SAID THIS WHILE LOOKING AT NANDANI..
UFFO PAPA UR SO BUDHU.. KAL SUNDAY HAI NO OFFICE.. NANDANI TRY TO CONTROL HER SMILE.. ABHAY- SHIT HOW CAN I FORGET HE RUB HIS FOREHEAD WITH HIS HAND..
NANDANI- CHALO PAPA MOVIE DEKHTE HAI..
ABHAY- OK OK
NANDANI- PAPA AAP DVD ON KARO MAI PASTA ARRANGE KRTI HU..
ABHAY OK GUGGO
NANDANI BRINGS PASTA IN PLATES ALONG WITH COKE SAW HER FATHER IS ALREADY START WATCHING MOVIE
NANDANI- PUT PLATES ON TABLE
AND PUT BOTH OF HER HAND ON HER WAIST
PAPA CHEATING.
ABHAY LOOK UP SAW NANDANI IS STANDING THERE.. HE NOWS HOW MUCH SHE LOVES SUCH MOVIES.. WHAT CHEATING MAINE KOI CHEATING NHI KI..
NANDANI- APNE STARTING SAY NI LGAI
ABHAY- STARTING SAY TO HAI WO TO BS INTRODUCTION SKIP KIYA
NANDANI- U KNOW NA MUJHE WOHI DEKHNA PASND HAI..
ABHAY-OK MERE MAA
NANDANI-GIGGLES..
SHE SAT NEAR HER FATHER AND START WATCHING MOVIE
AFTER FEW MINUTES SHE LUK AT HER FATHER.. WHO WAS ENJOYING MOVIE AND EATING PASTA..
PAPA KB JANA HAI NANDANI ASKED HER FATHER..
ABHAY LUK AT HER AFTER 2 DAYS GUGGO..
NANDANI- HMM ok. PAPA.. ND HWZ. THE PAPA
ABHAY- AS USUAL SUPPER TASTY..
NANDANI- SMILES
AFTER WATCHING MOVIE SHE WENT TO HER ROOM.. AND SAW JAR OF FIREFLIES.. AND HOLD IT IN HER HANDS..
ABHAY CUMS TO HER ROOM WITH A GLASS FULL OF MILK AND PLACE IT ON SIDE TABLE AND WENT NEAR NANDANI WHO WAS BUSY IN WATCHING FIREFLIES.. HE PLACE HIS HAND ON HER SHOULDER AND CALL HER
ABHAY-GUGGO DON'T WORRY BETA ITS A MATTER OF FEW DAYS TUMKO WAHA AKELA NAHI REHNA PADEGA MAINE OFFICE MAI BAAT KRI HAI ABT TRANSFER.. FR MAI BHI AJAUGA WAHA APNI GUGGO K PASS..
NANDANI- LOOKS AT HER FATHER WITH JOY IN HER EYES SACHHI
ABHAY-MUCHHII HE PULLS HER CHEEKS.. ABTO KOI TENSION NHI NA
NANDANI- NA SHE HUGS HER FATHER I LUV U PAPA
ABHAY - I LUV U 2 GUGGO
NOW APNA MILK FINISH KRKE SO JAO
NANDANI- OK PAPA
ABHAY SMILES AND WENT FROM THERE
NANDANI FINISHES HER MILK..
SHE WENT NEAR HER BED START PRAYING HOLDING HER BOTH HANDS
AIYAAPA MAA JAHA BHI HAI UNHE HAPPY RAKHNA SAFE RAKHNA UNHE MERA BHOT SARA PYAAR DENA ND DO TOLD HER I LUV HER ND MISS HER..
ND PAPA KO BHOT SARA PYAAR DENA JB MAI CHALI JAUGI MUMBAI TO UNHE MUJHE BHOT JYADA MISS MT KRNE DENA
I LUV U AIYAPPA
AFTER FINISHING HER PRAYER SHE SLEPT

NEXT MORNING SHE WOKE AFTER HEARING ALRAM CLOCK SHE WENT OUTSYD SAW HER FATHER ALREADY COOKED BREAKFAST ND ARRANGING IT ON TABLE.. SHE RUB HER EYES ND WENT NEAR HER FATHER GOOD MORNING PAPA
ABHAY-GOOD MORNING GUGGO
BREAKFAST KRKR JALDI READY HOJANA HUME SHOPPING PE JANA HAI
NANDANI- KYUN PAPA
ABHAY - PAT ON HER HEAD BHOOL GYI UR GOING MUMBAI.. TO SHOPPING KRNI PADEGI NA
NANDANI- OHH HAA
AFTER FINISHING BREAKFAST THEY BOTH GET READY ND LEAVE FOR SHOPPING IN THERE SANTRO CAR

PRECAP-MUMBAI

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THEY FINISH THERE SHOPPING.. AND WENT TO SUM
RESTAURANT FOR LUNCH.. AFTER THAT THEY CUM
BACK HOME.. ABHAY WAS FEELING TIRED HE WAS
SITTING ON SOFA.. NANDANI BOUGHT A GLASS OF
WATER FOR HIM HE DRANK IT IN ONE GO..
THEN HE STAND UP FROM SOFA.. ND WENT TO STORE
ROOM.. ND BRING SUITCASE.FROM THERE.. ABHAY-
GUGGOO ISKO LEKE ROOM MAI JAO MAI SHOPPING
BAGS LATA HU..
NANDANI- JI PAPA.. THEN SHE TOOK SUITCASE FROM
HER FATHER HANDS ND WENT TO HER ROOM..
ABHAY ENTERS IN HER ROOM.. WITH BOTH HANDS
FULL WITH SHOPPING BAGS.. ND PUT THEM ON
CHAIR.. GUGGO CHAL TERE PACKING KRTE HAI.. SHE
BRINGS ALL HER FAVOURITE NOVELS DVDS.. BOOKS
COMICS .
ABHAY HELPS HER IN HER PACKING..
THEN HE WENT TO HIS ROOM.. TOOK SUM PACKETS
IN HIS HANDS ND CALLS NANDANI..
SHE ENTERS IN HER FATHERS ROOM SAW SUM
PACKETS IN HIS HANDS..
ABHAY- UR GIFT..
NANDANI- CURIOUSLY OPENS FIRST GFT AND SAW
LAPTOP.. SHE BCM HAPPY.. THEN LUK AT HER
FATHER.. PAPA YEAH TO BHOT COSTLY HOGA..
ABHAY- ITS OK GUGGOO BADE BADE DESHO MAI AISE
CHOTI CHOTI BATIEN HOTI REHTI HAI TU ISMAI APNI
MOVIES DEKHNA ND WEEKENDS MAI HUM VIDEO CHAT
KAREGE
NANDANI- WOW GUD IDEA.. SHE TOOK SECOND GFT
ND OPENS IT. ND SAW A CELLPHONE..
IT WAS THE SAME PHONE SHE DEMANDED FROM HER
FATHER .. SHE HUGS HER FATHER.. UR THE BEST
PAPA.. SHE KISSED HER FATHER ON HIS CHEEKS.. HER
FATHER LAUGHS AT HER ANTICS.. SHE TOOK HER
LAST GFT OPENS IT SAW POUCH IN IT.. SHE LOOKS
AT HER FATHER.. THEN OPENS POUCH.. SAW ATM
CARD IN IT..
NANDANI- PAPA WHAT I'M GONNA DO WITH IT.. I
DON'T NEED THIS..
ABHAY- GUGGOO UR GOING MUMBAI.. U NEED CASH
THERE FOR UR BOOKS UR NOVELS ND FOR MANY
MORE THINGS.. SAMJHI BUDHU
NANDANI- HMM U HAVE A POINT .. THEN THEY BOTH
START LAUGHING..
ABHAY-NOW GO TO UR BED AND SLEEP THERE LYK A
GOOD GIRL..
NANDANI OK PAPA.. HUG HER FATHER ND WENT TO
HER ROOM..
NEXT DAY WAS A BUSY DAY..
AT NIGHT AFTER DINNER NANDANI WAS LYING ON BED
.. AND READING SUM NOVEL.. WHEN ABHAY CUMS TO
HER ROOM AND GAVE HER GLASS OF MILK.. SHE
FINISH IN ONE GO.. ABHAY WAS LEAVING.. WHEN
NANDANI HOLDS HIS HAND..
PAPA MUJHE MAA WALA,SONG SUNNA HAI..
ABHAY SMILES AND SAT BESIDES HER SHE PUT HER
HEAD IN HIS LAP ND CLOSE HER EYES.. ABHAY PUT
HIS HAND ON HER HEAD..
AND START HUMMING A SONG..
CHANDA KI DOLI MAI
SHEHJADI AYI MERI (FROM SONU NIGAM)
AFTER FINISHING SONG HE SAW HER SLEEPING HE
PUT HER HEAD ON PILLOW.. COVER HER WITH
BLANKET AND LEAVE FROM THERE
NEXT MORNING -THEY LEAVE FOR RAILWAY STATION
ABHAY WAS ALSO GOING WITH HER.. AS SHE GOING
TO MUMBAI FOR THE FIRST.. ITS TOTALLY NEW CITY
FOR HER ND SHE INNOCENT ND NAIVE.. SHE DON'T
UNDERSTAND OUTER WORLDS REALITY.. SO HE WAS
GOING WITH HER TO SETTLE HER DOWN THERE..
TRAIN CUMS ON TYM THEY GOT SETTLE ON THERE
SEATS ND LEAVE FOR MUMBAI..
MUMBAI-
THERE TRAIN REACH MUMBAI ON TYM.. THEY TOOK
CAB FROM STATION ND LEAVE FOR NANDANI CLG..
ABHAY TALK TO PRINCIPAL.. AND COMPLETES OR
FORMALITIES.. NANDANI IS GOING TO STAY IN
HOSTEL.. AS HOSTEL IS JUST 5 MINS AWAY FROM
CLG SO ITS EASY FOR HER.. ABHAY TOOK LUGGAGE
ND WENT TO HOSTEL ALONG WITH NANDANI HE TALK
TO HOSTEL WARDEN.. SHE HAND OVER HER KEYS OF
HER ROOM.. ABHAY HUGS NANDANI ND TOLD HER TOO
TAKE CARE OF HERSELF... ND DAILY TALK TO HIM ON
PHONE.. NANDANI NODS HER HEAD IN YES.
SHE HAS TEARS IN HER EYES SHE HUGS HER FATHER
HE TOO HUGS HER BACK.. HOSTEL WARDEN TOO HAS
TEARS IN HER EYES AFTER WATCHING FATHER AND
DAUGHTER EMOTIONAL BYE.. SHE ASSURE HIM THAT
SHE WILL TAKE CARE OF HIS DAUGHTER.. ABHAY FEEL
RELAXED THAT HER DAUGHTER IS IN SAFE HANDS HE
HAPPILY WENT FROM THERE
PRECAP- FIRST DAY IN CLG

Originally posted by: mehjaben_nahin

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Originally posted by: anum_6

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Originally posted by: masoomii

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HEY GUYS I CHANGED INTEZAAR NAME TO
MADLY_IN_LOVE.. AS THEY ARE MAD.. GOING TO BE MADLY IN LOVE WITH EACH OTHER :P
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