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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
Awesome update continue soon

How can he became so cool with her something is not right may be waiting for right moment to take revenge and I think it might be cabir stealing food
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
wow...awsm update i jus loved it..ur such a amazing writer..continue soon dea m eagerly waiting fo next part...plss try to update regularly
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey when will u update next part? cant wait more dea plsss update soon...eagerly waiting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
Hey gal, just read all the parts in one go..This is nice ... Y u not updating it ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
Just waitg 4 the next part...pls update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
I loved the story do update soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Confrontation ...????? Plzzz sooon... Wait niihotaaa :(
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Posted: 9 years ago
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part-9 (c)

"ABHIMANYU"
EVERYONE SCREAMED HIS NAME IN EXCITEMENT ..
BOY- ITS MEE UR OWN ABHIMANYU ..ND U POINTED HIS FINGER ON NANDANI..IM NOT THIEF THIS IS MY OWN HOUSE OK..HE WAS LOOKING LIL ANNOYED
NANDANI- FEELING GUILTY) SORRY MUJHE PTA NHI THA...
ABHIMANYU ROLLED HIS EYES - WOW..
ALL LOOKED AT HIM FROM CORNER OF THERE EYES THEN BRUST INTO LAUGHTER...
ABHIMANYU- ANNOYED) YR THIS IS NOT FAIR GUYS U CAN'T LAUGH ON MEE LYK THIS..
SUJATA PULLED HIS EARS
SUJATA-RUK TUJHE BTATI HU..KYA KR RHA THA TU KITCHEN MAI IS WQT YEH KOI GHR ANE KA TYM HAI??
ABHIMANYU- UFF MASSI LEAVE MY. EAR ITS HURTING..ASK UR HUSBAND HE HAD GIVEN MEE SO MUCH WORK TODAY IN OFFICE THAT I DIDN'T GET TYM TO COME BACK HOME ON TYM..ND I WAS FEELING HUNGRY ISLIYE KITCHEN MAI AGYA..SORRY NOW PLZ LEAVE MY EAR
SUJATA- LOOK AT HER HUSBAND FOR AN ANSWER..
NISHANT- I DID NOTHING HE IS LYING I TOLD HIM TO FINISH HIS WORK ON TIME ND COME BACK HOME ON TYM ITS NOT MY FAULT IF HE IS SO SLOW IN HIS WORK..
ABHIMANYU- HELLO IM NOT SLOW U DON'T KNOW MASSI UNCLE MUJH BACHHE SAY KITNA KAAM KRWATE HAI..
MANIK-WAS LEAST INTRESTED IN THERE DISCUSSION HE SILENTLY WALK AWAY FROM THERE IN HIS ROOM..
SUJATA- I KNW EVERYTHING.. U TWO AR BLAMMING EACH OTHER TO DISTRACK MEE.. ITS QUITE LATE YOU SHOULD GO ND TAKE REST I WILL SEE U BOTH IN MORNING..
ND NANDANI BETA U ALSO GO TO UR ROOM ND SLEEP OK?? SHE SAID WITH A SMILE ON HER FACE...
NANDANI- OK AUNTY GOOD NIGHT UNCLE ND AUNTY...
GOOD TO U TOO (SHE WITHOUT TAKING ABHIMANYU NAME WISH HIM GOOD NIGHT ND WALK BACK TO HER ROOM)
ABHIMANYU - BDW,WHO IS SHE SUBH TK TO YAHA NHI THI!!
SUJATA- SHE IS NANDANI!
NISHANT- MANIK K SATH PADHTI HAI!!
ABHIMANYU- ok
SUJATA- SADAK PR BESHOSH HO GYI THI ISLIYE NISHANT ISE GHAR LE AYE..
NISHANT- BDI PYAARI BACHI HAI
ABHIMANYU- APP DONO KO TO SB PYAARE HE LGTE HAI..BUT YES THERE,IS SUMTHING DIFFRENT ABT HER...
SUJATA- CHL AB JAKR SOJA
ABHIMANYU- OK HE KISSED HER CHEEKS WISH THEM BOTH GOOD NIGHT ND WALK AWAY IN HIS ROOM
(just to tell u guys abhimanyu is manik cousin brother he is an orphan nd stay with his mother sister nd consider them his parents nd manik nd his siblings his own brothers nd sister.. everyone is close to him except manik.. manik consider him as his own brother.. but is not open with him much)

NEXT DAY
NANDANI GET UP EARLY IN MORNING BEFORE EVERYONE.. ND CALLED HER FATHER. ND WISHED HIM GOOD MORNING..
THEN THOUGHT I SHOULD GO BACK IN HOSTEL NOW.. BUT HOW CAN I GO LYK THIS EVERY ONE IS SLEEPING FIRST I WILL INFORM THEM THAT IM GOING THEN I'LL GO ..HMM GOOD NANDANI... THEN SHE THOUGHT WHAT TO DO NOW SHE WENT IN GARDEN SAW SERVANT IS WATERING PLANTS..
SHE ASK HIM IF HE DON'T CAN SHE WATER THEM!
SERVANT GAVE HIM PIPE.. ND WENT INSIDE HOUSE..SHE WAS WATERING SOME BUSHES ND DIDN'T SAW WHAT IS HAPPENING OTHER SYD OF BUSHES...ND ACCIDENTLY THROW WATER ON SOME ONE WHO IS WALKING THERE..
"SHITT MAN"
Nandani heared a gal voice nd look other syd got scared mukti was standing along with rest of fab 5 members..
TUM
THEY ALL TOGETHER SAID IN LOW VOICE..THEY WERE ACTUALLY SHOCKED TO SEE HER IN MANIK HOUSE...
ALiYA- ND GOD WHAT HAD U DONE WITH OUR CLOTHES..
NANDANI- LOOK AT GROUND IM SORRY.. MUJHE PTA NHI THA..
CABIR- TUMHE KBHI KUCH PTA BHI HOTA HAI..ND WHAT AR U DOING HERE..??
NANDANI-WOH
MUKTI- PUNISHMENT TIME SHE HOLD PIPE IN HER HAND ND WALK TOWARD NANDANI REST OF FAB 5 WAS ENJOYING THE SCENE BCZ NANDANI WAS SCARED ND START WALKING BACK.. THEN BUMPED INTO SOMEONE SHE LIFTED HER HEAD TO SEE WHO IT IS ??
GOT RELIVED SEEING SHE BUMPED INTO MANIK..
MUKTI - MANIK??
MANIK- GUYS TUM LOG YEAH KYA KR RHE HO?? WHY AR U TROUBLING HER?? DON'T TROUBLE HER HE SAID LITTLE ANGRILY..
FAB 5 SHOCKED
CABIR- U R TAKING HER SYD HAVE U FORGOTTEN WHAT SHE DONE WITH U??
MANIK- I DIDN'T FORGET ANYTHING BUT ITS NOT HER FAULT ITS OUR FAULT WE TROUBLED HER.. WE SHOULD APOLOGISE TO HER..FOR WHAT WE DID I APOLOGIZED TO HER NOW ITS UR TURN GUYS SAY SORRY TO HER!!
ALIYA- U SAID SORRY TO HER?? HAVE U LOSTED WE NEVER SAID SORRY TO ANYONE IN OUR WHOLE LYF ND SHE WILL BE THE LAST PERSON JISKO HUM SORRY KAHENGE
NANDANI- WAS LISTENING TO ALL THIS QUIETLY) ITS OK I DON'T WANT ANYONE SORRY..
MANIK- NO ITS IMPORTANT NANDANI THEY HAVE TO SAY SORRY TO U
NANDANI- BUT??
MANIK- NO IF NO BUT
CABIR- MANIK KA DIMAG KHRAB HO GYA HAI LGTA HAI DIMAG PE ASAR HO GYA HAI.. WE APOLOGIZE TO HER NEVER..
MANIK- SCREAMED IN ANGER I SAID SAY SORRY TO HER NOW!!
DHRUV- GUYS ITNA STRETCH KYUN KR RHE HO TUM LOG BAAT KO IF MANIK IS SAYING HUM SORRY BOL DETE HAI..
DHRUV- IM SORRY NANDANI!!
NANDANI- ITS OK..
MUKTI ALIYA CABIR ONE BY ONE SAID SORRY TO HER..
MANIK- SMILES NOW U GUYS CAN SHAKE HAND EVERYTHING IS OK..
MEANTIME SERVANT CAME ND TOLD MANIK THAT MAM (SUJATA) IS CALLING HIM ND NANDANI INSIDE..
MANIK- CHALO GUYS MOM IS CALLING ANDR CHALTE HAI EVERYONE WALK INSIDE BUT CABIR PULLED HIS ARM ND DRAG HIM IN CORNER..
CABIR- WHAT IS COOKING IN UR MIND??
MANIK- CABIR NOTHING..
CABIR- ACHHA U CAN FOOL EVERYONE BUT NOT MEE..IM SURE SOMETHING RUNNING IN UR MIND BCZ U NEVER TOOK ANYONE SYD INFRONT OF US...
MANIK- I HAD TO TAKE HER SYD BCZ SHE IS A GOOD GIRL VERY GOOD GIRL ACTUALLY VERY INNOCENT GIRL.. BUT SHE TAKE PANGA WITH MEE..WITH MANIK MALHOTRA USNE MUJHSE SORRY BULWAYA BCZ OF HER DAD SCOLD MEE SO MUCH FOR THE FIRST TIME NOW SHE HAD TO PAY FOR THIS.. I WILL INSULT HER IN FRONT OF WHOLE CLG..
CABIR- I JUST KNEW IT BUT TU KRNE KYA WALA HAI??
MANIK- JUST WAIT ND WATCH CABIR ND
DON'T TELL THIS TO ANYONE OK!!
CABIR- OK

TO BE CONTINUED!!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Fnlly u post...nyc...plz b regular frm nw yr plzz...
nd plzzz post madly in lv plzzz
waitng fr soo lng...

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