Anahita and Neil FF Unconditional love [Chapter 11, pg 10] Complete

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys , i was thinking of making a ff of anahita and neel , so guys , it ll be about a second chance for neil to forget his past and move ahead in life and there is going to be romance in this hotel, so should i continue?

Index

Chapter 1
Chapter 2 (a)
Chapter 2 ( b )
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11 ( Last chapter )
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank you i ll try to update topday , nut please encourage , it's a lot of hard work

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Chapter 1

so it was thier first day , neil whose past was terrible , and anahita on a secret mission in Gulmohar Grand , teeshay and tina were as usual on their work , anahita entered he hotel , and neil who was already waiting there with anirudh saw her ...anahita walked towards them and then anirush gave them their brief , and they went to the changing room , and right there anie buped with neil , :
anie: sorry
n: tell me sth new
a: huhh , are u that seriuos all the time?
n: and if i am , so what your concerd ?
a:how rude ?

saying this they head off to their work , anie weent to give neil his sandwich ,
n: so ms. sorry , here you come '
a: neel i brought your lunch
n: i can see that
a: whatever
n: now go
a;: do you always have to be so rude to me ?
n: ( neil smirks )

Anie walks towards the door but she slips and falls,
a. ouch
n. : oh ho , so miss sorry fell down !
a. i can see that, now are you just going to stare at me or have any interntions to help me

Neil , smirks, but gives his hand to help her she looks at him firt like what happned to him ? type looks
but then she gave her hand and got up , when she was going :
n. anahita , wait you have sth on your,,, your... hum ... your...
a. what ?
n. that ... cheww...
at that time tine was passing from there so she saw and entered and sees a chewing gum on anie skirt and removes it
, t: how did this end up on your skikrt ?
a. i fell and...
t . ill tell the cleaning department to clean this room quite often : )
n: but how did this get here ?
anie was looking here and tthere cos some time back anie came to the room to unable one cam for her mission , and left , and she was chewing gum and by mistake she threw it in the bin but landed somewhere else ...

a. so i'll leave
t. see you ...
n. this girl will get into a big problem

precap: at night , when leaving the hotel ... anie and neil ( aniel ) scene ,

guys so tell me , did you like it , please read and omment , only a word of encouragement is more than enough for me ; ) and please hit the like button




Edited by heartbroken1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey great you started a ff on them
and its really interesting
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank you , ill try to updaate soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great start looking forward to it😃😃😛😛😛😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys the next chapter coming soon , btw what do you want to see in my story ? Please do share you suggestions
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Chapter 2 (a)

So after a tiring day of work anie got out of he hotel and in the parking . Neil came on his black and red bike and stopped in front of anie and hrr friend blocking their way .
N. Come ill drop you
A. No thanks
N . Dont argue ill take you whereever yiu wanna go
A. Ok please drop me on the bus statiin
N. Ok
Annie hesitatingly suts behind neil in the back seat ( guys imagine the song kuch khaass playng in the background ) and then neil breaks and annie holds his broad shoulders theyre in the bus station
A. Thanks
N. Mention not
Neil heads off and after a few minutes a car comes and takes annie from there. at night neil had had a nightmare anf got up . He was cursing himself for lt be able to helptjat girl . In few hours he got ready to go to work . In The meantime:
Anirudh : Pallavi are you coming today
Pallavi. Ill try to but anirudh this is your last chance youll have to be on time
A. Ill be take care
P. Bye
A.bye pallavi
Neil doesnt see anie till she bri mg s him lumch , when she ., waiting for him , she falls asleep in his chair .n comes and sees her sleeping on his chair and for some moments he gets lost in her beauty but soon realizes what heis doing
N . So ms sorry you like to sleep on duty
A. ( wakes up with a jerk ) huh . Oh you ,
N. ( gets very close to her they can feel each others breath ) yes me your helicopter
A . Dorry... no... sorry ...actually i came here to give you your lunch ...
N . And slept on mychair
A . No... Yess. ... I mean to lok for youit took me to take 6 roumds of thid hoyel im terribly exhausted
N. So ... my lunch?
A. Here. Btw anurudh sir has called you in his cabin.
N. Ok ill go ,
A leaves and neul smiles to himself on her going , this girl will drive me crazy lne day
Precap: Dinner with neil annie teeshay and tina , romantic dance , anirudh psllavi meeting
So guys tell me weather you like it
Should i continue ?

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update
Annie Neil were cute
Interesting precap
Waiting for the next update
Update soon
And ya don't lose hope
Its just the beginning of the show
There will be less readers
As the show goes on you'll get more readers
Untill then I am there to comment
So plz continue
I am eagerly waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you very much tarey for ypur encouraging words people like you give you more inspiration to write

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