Anahita and Neil FF Unconditional love [Chapter 11, pg 10] Complete - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: ayesha.af

awesome n very long update dear 👏 👏 ,wow loved their hospital scenes,they r always in fight mode evrywhere 😆 ,waitng fr cabin romance n other 2 love stories too,n i really appreciate ur efforts n hard work 👏 👏
why gg forum is so dull always btw 😭



yaar thanks a lot for your appreciation , im really very happy you liked it😃😃😃😃 , i sad of that too , why is this forum so dul , after having such beautiful couples in our show , like aniel , shreya and anirudh and tina and teeshay , some of this story readers also are not active in this forum 😭😭😭😭 who will read my story 😭😭😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
hey welcome dear,yes i loved ur story since beginning,awww dnt b sad people mst b reading ur ffs secretly 😉 😆 ,bt wheres evrybdy seriously? May b exam season chal ra hy to bzy hnge
u r awesum writer,plz do cntinue ur updates here yar? 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: ayesha.af

hey welcome dear,yes i loved ur story since beginning,awww dnt b sad people mst b reading ur ffs secretly 😉 😆 ,bt wheres evrybdy seriously? May b exam season chal ra hy to bzy hnge
u r awesum writer,plz do cntinue ur updates here yar? 🤗 🤗



I really hope that people read my ff secretely hi sahi and i also hope they enjoy it .
Yes ill be continue updating ... At least you reply me that gives me enthusiasm to contnue. Thank you so much 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64

hi guys, this is the chapter 11 , the last chapter , and thats why i have turned it into a ss , please please hit the like ...and please comment and tell me how did you like it ... Please comment as it takes a lot of time to write... And trust me a word of encourage means alot to me .. Critecism is highly apprrciated ..Have a nice day. And silent readers at least hit the like button. Please.


Chapter 11 ( Last chapter )

After a while , when the goons left , neil tried to open the door of the watchmans cabin , but it didn't opened , then annie tried , but it didn't opeend eaither , they were stuck there , ansd the mall also closed , and the watchmans locked the cabin.

A.. yeh sab tumhaari wajah se hua ahai !!

N. Unbelievable ! Phasi tum ... Bachaya maine aur ..meri vajah se hua hai ?

Neil sat on the chair helplessly , anie tried to shout fir heklp but nobody came ... So she took a sreo behind but stumbled annd fell on neils lap

Her hands were on his shoulders and neils hand was on her waist , to hold her . Annie felt shivers with his touch ... She got lost in his eyes. ... And he in her eyes ... Some stands of her hair werefalling on her face , neil saw them and he tucked them behind her ear . Anie closed her eyes while he was doing so .

Annie came back to her senses once sheopened her eyes and then she got up from his lap .

Neil looked at evrywhere but her , and same was annie doing, due to the shyness.

On that moment , in GG a big theft was taking place . Annies partner, suraj , called her.

S. Annie ! Yahan gg mein woh chori ho rahi hai ! Boss ne poocha hai ki tum kahan ho ?

A. Mein mall ke watchman ke cabin mein phas gayi hoon ... Please kisi ko bolke hamein yahan se nikalo

S. Hamein ?

A. Haan neil ... Securuty guard of ourhotel ...woh bhi mere saath hai ...

S. Ok mein kisiko bhej. Ta hoon

And someone came and opened them . Then they went to gg.

Anurudh had divorced pallavi and was drunk in his cabin , shreya came to his cabin , when he opened the door , shreya got shocked to see him inhis drunk state.

S. Sir !!!! Yeh . ... Sambhaliye apne aap ko sir !

A. Shreya , sab mujhe chod ke chale gaye , sab ...

S. Nahi sir... Sir... Mr jetley ... Woh hai na ... Main... Main hoon apke ( shreya realized what she had just said )

A. Tum ? Tum kyun ek hare huee aadmi ke saath hogi?

S. Ap hare hue nahi hai sir .. .. ...aap ...ap... Bahut ache insaan hai ...

At that moment , anirudhs phone rang and he picked it . Tina informed him that a huge theft had taken. Place in gg . He was shocked , he and shreya rushed outside . Annie and neil also arrived there. The police came there also . Annie took a gun from the police and ran to find the police. Neil was shocked seeing this.

The security had closed all the possible gates of the hotel. Annie and suraj csught the thief and handed him to the police , annie told the police that hr mission is over . And this was overheard by neil .

At night ... In the swimming pool area ... Annie was busy in hr phone... And the place as beautigully decorated by lights .

Neil came there and stood behind annie. Annie recognised his make perfume and turned around .

A. Neil ...

N. Annie ... Mujge tumse kuch kehna hai ...

N. Haan... Kaho neil...

N. I love you annie ... And i have always loved you ...

A. ( annue smiled ) i love you too neil ...

He hugged annie ... And she hugged him back ... Tightly .

Tina and teeshay got married and went on a honeymoon to goa . And at the ice cream stall.

T. Tina , tumhe kaunsi wali wali chahiye ?

T. Mango kulfi

T. ( to the man behind the stall ) bhaiya ek mango kulfi and ek badam kulfi dijiega please

And he gave him the ice creams and he paid and ,they started walking ... Teeshay stumbled and the ice cream fell off his hand and landed in the garbage , tina laughed .

T. Wah teeshay ! Sidha nishaana lagaya dustbin mein jaake gira.!!!

T.tina tumhe hasi aa rahi hai ?

T. Nahi toh ! ( and she cobtinued to laugh )

Teeshay leaned forward and grabbing her hand in which the ice was ... took a bite of her ice cream , tina looked t him ...

T.ab meri gir gayi toh kya hua ? Mein tumhaari shate kar leta hoon.

Tina smiled at him , they were happy in each others company .

Neil and annie got married and had a baby girl . And shreya and anirudh got married as well , giving a huge amount if happiness to anirudh to have such a nice life partner like shreya.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
beautiful ending
just loved it
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
wowww that ws vry sweet n happng ending,my only complaint:why did u end ds ff so early dear? Show end hgya to kya hua,u cn cntinue writng ur ffs 😳 anywys its up to u,,last chptr is awesum 👏 👏 loved d cabin scene,proposal scene,n vry happy dt aniel gt married n had a baby 🥳 ,tina teeshay,anirudh,shreya gt married too n r happy together,thanku for giving us such a lovely FF 👏 ⭐️ 🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: jeharshu

beautiful ending

just loved it
thanks for the pm



thank you so much ⭐️⭐️😃

im glad you liked it 😃😃⭐️


Edited by heartbroken1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: ayesha.af

wowww that ws vry sweet n happng ending,my only complaint:why did u end ds ff so early dear? Show end hgya to kya hua,u cn cntinue writng ur ffs 😳 anywys its up to u,,last chptr is awesum 👏 👏 loved d cabin scene,proposal scene,n vry happy dt aniel gt married n had a baby 🥳 ,tina teeshay,anirudh,shreya gt married too n r happy together,thanku for giving us such a lovely FF 👏 ⭐️ 🤗




thank you so much ⭐️⭐️😃

im glad you liked it 😃😃⭐️

i ended it because as the show ended , not many people would have come to read it , and moreover, my studies started so , i couldnt even get much time to write aswell. Thanks a lot ayesha to support me in this story and to share your views about this story. 😃😃⭐️⭐️

thanks a lot 😃⭐️ hope you enjoy other stories i write.




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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Beautiful story and a lovely ending.
Loved the whole thing.
Thanks dear for pms.
Looking forward to a new one soon.
Keep writing
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
Sorry for late reply

uff lovey dovey

loved the update

Neil proposed Annie

Anirudh also got happiness in form of shreya

at last all are happy

I love happy endings

Thanks for PM 🤗

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