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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 4

The party was on...annie came out wearing a beautiful maroon colour dress...knewlent dress with full sleeves... Beautiful Long curls in that black hair... Wearing high heels ...teeshay was at the dance floor... He saw her...she was looking gorgous ... Then he saw neil staring at her sitting at the bar...lost in her brauty... He smirked and went to him...

T. What happened ... Who you are staring at...? Uhhh... let me guess... Annie...?

N. Uhhh...yes( he realised what he had just said )...i mean No ...i mean... I was just ...

T. Ya yaya... My friend... You should go tell her.. .. Before it s too late... .

N. Who? What?

T. (smiling... Giving a you- wont - understand look ) enjiy your drink ...

A nnie Was talking with anirudh , tina and mrs. Irani...

T. So should i get a drink for you ?

Anirudh. please get me a mojito with alcohol...

Mrs. I. No darling i m fine...

A. Ill have s mojito without alcohol...

Tina went for...the drinks... She brougjt the drinks... But the bartender mixed the mojitos...

T. Aannie heres your mojito without alcohol ( and she handed her the with alcohol drink ) and sir this is yours .

Annie drank the whole drink...that drink had a bit too much of alcohol UI( and she easnt used to it ) ... Annie left at the dance floor ... She started having effect of the alcohol...teeshay and tina left for the dance floor... Anirudh was with mrs. Irani...drank the mojito but instantly knew this wasnt alcohol

A.wait a minute ... This is not alcohol..i think this is annies drink! Oh... ...

Mrs. I . Oh dont worry ... Shell be fine...

On the dance floor...anni was dancing..like she has lost control of herself...neils eyes was on her...he was admiring her drunken dance...inocence... Suddenly a guy came and started dancing very closely with her...anni wasnt liking his company so she changed sides...but the guy followd her...

Neil couldnt take no more...he was literrally angry... Basically he wanted to go and beat that guy until he ends up in the hospital ...but coulndt... So he angrily went to annie and grabbed her hand and pulled her towards him ... She ended up with her head against his strong chest ... she opened her eues slowly ...tried to move but couldnt as a strong arm held her waist ...she was trapped ... neil... Started dancing very closely with annie... So close that his hot breath was touching annis face... They were merely inches apart ...or maybe less... He danced like he wanted to tell everyone that annies is his...specially... That guy...

Tina teesahy anirudh and mrs . Irani were just standing there wondering what was wrong with neil... o rwith thm... The song started playing... Annie was out of her senses...

AMar Jawan Mar Jawan...

Tere Ishq Pe Mar Jawan

Mar Jawan Mar Jawan...

Tere Ishq Pe Mar Jawan

A. Neil...neil...( like a baby )

N. Yes anahita...

A. Why r u dancing with me ...like this?

N.uhh... Was getting bored so... Thought...um...( fumbling , he was saying it like even he wouldnt believed it )

A. Why r u fumbling...?

N.no ... Im nlt fumbling...

A. Youre lying...youre jealous...

N.what?

Bheegi Bheegi Sapno Ka Jaisa Khat Hai Yeh

Hayyy...

Geeli Geeli Chaahat Ka Jaise Lat Hai Yeh

A. Yes ...thats y u came here...( she said smiling )

N. Ha ha .ha... In your dreams... I was just...

...

A. Just...just what...? dont have an answer ... Youre emotionally challenhed neil... Youre so...so...leave it...you wont understand me...

Mar Jawan Mar Jawan...

Tere Ishq Pe Mar Jawan

Mar Jawan Mar Jawan...

Tere Ishq Pe Mar Jawan

Radi Krah Di Krawa

Wal Hawah Wasamah

Wadi Krah Hitawahat

All-Ah Dukha Wasamah

Neil was just lost in annies eyes...he didnt know what to answer he was lost... Confused... His ...he suddenly... Realised the closenesss between them and tried to move away but ... Annie held his hand and didnt let him go...

Latehwal Flahwahat

Al-Lah Dukha Wasamah

Wadi Krah Hitawahat

Al-Lah Dukhawasamah

N. Let me go...

A. No... ( and she put her hands on hos shoulders and startted dancing again on the soft and melodious song... He couldnt leave ... His heart wanted to dance but his brain... Wanted to leave ...otherwise he would end up doing something beyond limits)

Soche Dil Ke Aisa Kash Ho

Tujhko Ek Nazar Meri Talash Ho

Jaise... Khwabo Hai Akhon Mein Base Meri

Waise... Neendo Pe Silvate Pare Meri

Bheegi Bheegi Armaano Ki Rahad Hai Yeh

Hayyy...

Geeli Geeli Kwahish Bhi Tho Behad Hai Yeh

Mar Jawan Mar Jawan...

Tere Ishq Pe Mar Jawan

Mar Jawan Mar Jawan...

Tere Ishq Pe Mar Jawan

And finally took annies hand and took her to the bar ...Annies is terribly drunk...neil held her waist in order to not to let her fall ... she could barely stand properly...

Ani. neil... you r a so emotionally challenged ... that even ...leave it... you know what ... I'm not afraid ... of you... you ...youre so nive... inocent... or what ? that you couldn't get that I like you... no no no... I love you ... youre so nice ... so adorable ... so likeable ... but so hard from the outside...so ...so...so ... cute... such a gem of a person...who understands people problems and their weaknesses...( neil was astonished, )... I got so much in love witgh that even I didn't notice... diddnt got know...i feel a certain security in your arms ... a security tht till date no one could have given.me,,...

Neil was left cold like ice ... but he knew she was under the efects of alcohol... he just couldny see her like this...

Guys so this is the chapter 4 , please please hit the like ...and please comment and tell me how did you like it ... Please comment as it takes a lot of time to write... And trust me a word of encourage means alot to me and inspiresme to write more. Critecism is highly apprrciated and any suggestions any scenes you guys want to read are very well welcomed.Have a nice day. And silent readers at least hit the like button. Please.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
awesome chapter
song interpretation is something i love in stories
beautifully written
update soon
thanks for the pm
eagerly waiting to read further
by the way recheck the link i think its not working
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
wOwww,very nice update,annie has cnfssd hr love in drunken state in frnt of neil,wondering how 'll she react when she'll cme to senses 😳 ,really appreciate how u include wndrful songs in btween 😛
wtng fr next chptr 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
beautiful part.
lovely.
thank u so much for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
super amazing chapter! loved it!! do update it soonish!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Awesome story
I'm just not too inclined towards this couple
But would read it coz of your pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37

Chapter 5

So after annie spoke her heart out in front of neil... Neil was astonished...But a smile drew on his face... Although he knew she was drunk...he made annie sit on the bar chair... .it was late night... Teeshay came...

T.hey... Annie... Enjoying. ...?!!!!!!!!

An. yaa... im enjoying a lot... a wonderful party... just awesome...

Te. great !!!!!!!! and u neil... enjoyng

Ne. ya ... the party is great... I think is quite late we should leave now...

Te. but why ... its too soon...

Ne. some other day when we wont get lost in a jungle well definitely stay longer ... but I think anahita a bit tired too...

A. no im not tired8 she said with a puppy face )

Ne. ya of course that s why you cant even stand properly ... ( to teeshay ) we should go now ... thanks a lot for the party it was just awesome...

te. but wait ,... ill drop you guys home... neil you should nt drive now... ill tell the staff to take your bike to your house ...

ne. ya... thanks a lot teeshay...

te. ill go to take the keys...

Neil held annies hand s and helped her get up... she got up... but couldn't walk properly... she was intoxicated .,... neil picked annie up in his arms ... and annie ... she slowly closed hereyes... She was very tired... And placed her head cosily in his shoulder... giving neil...a current ... he was really affected by her proximity... and annir tighhten her grip on his neck... neil... was going weak,,,,,,,,, he was staring at her ...deeply ... at her inocent face... and he walked out of the hotel... teeshay came wihth the car... got out of the car and opened the door ... neil placed annie on the backseat... .

teeshay : if you want you can sit on the backseat with her ...

Ne. ya... ( he went nd sat down behind )

teeshay was driving... Anies head ...moved to neils shoulder... Comforting herself...

Te. u ... Are you ok... Evrything fine back there...?

Annie got up...and in a drunk voice said

A. Ya ... Leave me at the sunshine hotel... Now?

T. Why annie... Dont you have a house?

A. I have one... But...you just drope at the hotel... I have to make the reseevation... ( neil was listening carefully yet confused, cos annie didnt want to reveal her house )

T. But... At this time... You better go to gg thete you can stay ...

A. Ok...

They drived to gulmohar grand...

T. Neil... Please take annie to the room seeking permission to the receptionist as they dont charge the staff for staying one night in the room ...

N.yes...( to annie ) come anahita ...lets go...

He shakes annies shoulders... She was asleep...but after a while she got up... She still wasnt able to walk without falling... But neil... Held her waist tightly and took her to the receptionist... Neeil was feelimg shy but annie didnt created a scene... He then took her to her room... And made her sit on the bed ... Slowly he made her lay back... He then removed her high heels... Then he came and sat on her side ...he bent down ... And with a slow voice near her ear he said

...

N. Good night anahita... And ...and ... Youre special to me too... I love you... And cant imagine my life without you...

And he kissed her ear...

Suddenly neil came back to the reality... It was just a dream... Neil was daydreaming... Je was still sitting on tje bed...

N. Good night anahita... Take care...

Annie was deeply sleeping... Neil got up ... And ... Walked out of her room ... He came out of the hotel ... And sat in the car... While driving teeshay...told neil...

T. Ek baat kahun mere dost...

Dil jab kisi se lagjaye ...

To usse keh dejiye...

Dil kisi se lag jaye

To usse keh dijiye...

Der na ho jaye ...

Kahi woh kisi aur ki na ho jaye

so guys ... this is chapter 5 sorry for the lenght ..actually exams on, please hit like and comment ,,, please ... please


Edited by heartbroken1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Rice Mice!
Unrice!
Eeekss! it's a beautiful chapter! i really loved reading it!
written very well! i really wanted to read a lot more!
but as you have exams, do concentrate on that! til then everything else can wait!
Update ASAP!!😳
Edited by pwenCezz_symrun - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
beautiful chapter
loved it
i love when you update regularly

"Ek baat kahun mere dost...

Dil jab kisi se lagjaye ...

To usse keh dejiye...

Dil kisi se lag jaye

To usse keh dijiye...

Der na ho jaye ...

Kahi woh kisi aur ki na ho jaye"

my fav dialogue

update soon

thanks for the pm

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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Well done bud!!!!! Great ff thank u for the pm

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