Anahita and Neil FF Unconditional love [Chapter 11, pg 10] Complete - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
it's beautifully penned!! you are going great with this! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome updatr
Great you thought to continue
Loved the Update
You have beautifully penned it down
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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so guys here the precap: teeshay's birthday party , aniel stuck in the jungle and rain the jungle romance
Edited by heartbroken1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice yaar.. pls add index in first page.. it will be easy to keep track of update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey wow...really enjoyed reading ur all 3 updates, 👏 👏 wtng fr nxt updte 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 3

The next day in the GG , in the cafe,

Tina. You guys were just amazing.

Te. Ya , i mean all the couples were watching you.

A.( a bit shy ) no ... Thrre wree more couples as welll ... I need to go ... I need to take lunch to mr jaitley

And she goes ... When she enters in mr jaitleys room ...

Mr. J. Put it there.

A. Yes sir.

And when mr jaitley gets up to wash his hands her eyes fall on the photo which is on the desk . The picks it sees it... She smiles... And suddenly keeps it down. Mr jaitley comes..

Mr. J. You may leave

A. Yes sir

And she leaves. And heads off to the security departmeny to give neil his sandwich. Neil isnt there just a college of his.

When she she is in the pool area she keeps her trolley asude and sees everywhere but doesbt find him . Suddenly when she turns around she bumps into his strong broad cheast ... She is scared ... Neil holds her by her arms so closely so she doesnt fall in the pool ... Neil tries to separate her from him ... Sees her face ... They stare into each others eyes for a while... Neil is tryibg to understand her. ... Looking her deep into her eyes. ... Anie breaks the eyelock ...

A. Sorry ... Im really sorry...

N. No worries

A. Here your sandwich

N. Thanks.

A. Youre welcome.

Annie goes from there at night . In the parking lot. Neil comes as well... And joins her ...

N. So...have any plans for tonight...?

A. No not atall

N. Then you should come with tina . teeshay and me to teesahys birthday bash ...

A. Dont tell me today is teesays birthday and he didnt tell me

N. Well you could give him a surprise

A. Not a bad idea.

N. Lets wait teesay and tina must be coing in his car and ill come on my bike you go with them ...

Teesay and tina comes but the car is full with aniruds secratery and mrs. Irani.

Mrs. Irani. Darling go with neil hell give you a ride

Te. Ua annie. Come with him

A. You shut up didnt even tell me tht today is your birthday.

Te. Acha im sorry . But please do come.

Neil. ( asks shy ) ummm ... Co.e with me ...

A. Its ok ill go by taxi .. ..

N. Its night and i dont think it s sade to go alone... Im here ... You can trust me... Illl drive carefully...( 2with a smirk)

A.ok .

She gets on neils bike , but doesnt holds neil... Holds the back of the bike ...

N. Hold me toghtly , i dont want to go to the hospital instead of the party

A. Cant you say something good.

N. Im ... That i dont want to go the hostipal but party . ...now hold ...

Annie does that super hesitating ... And she blushes...

n. Secure ... Sure..

A. Yes...

N.( to teeshay ) Im new here so ill folloew you

T. Yes boss...

So teeshay starts drinving...but soon ... as he statred getting phonecalls of his friends and got busy talking to them and soon he forgot about neil annie following him and so he drove on his own ... That neil losts his way... And heads towards a weird place with a lot of trees... And a weird and some old houses... Annie wasnt afraid... She had her helicopter with her...and moreover she was a trained karatee... But she was worried...

N. Annui i lost teeshay tried to get him but lost my way i think i might followed a wrong car... Dont worry ill call him...

He calls him but , there wasnt network... It started raining heavily ... Neil grabbed annies hand and ran towards one of those abandoned houses.

N. Hello . Is anybody here?

A. I think no one is in herr... Were safe here.

N.lets wait until the rain stops

A. Ya

N. Its my fault that stuck in here in this jungle ...if you had gone in the taxi at least you woyldnt had been here.

A. Not really , if i had gone with a taxi i might not been safe like i m with you now. At least im safe with you.

They were both wet ... Neil arranged bonfire in the entrance with the roof ... Neil removed his jacket... And kept it on the half broken chair ... Annie was shivering shivering . ... Neil saw that...she sneezed

N. Annie where my jacket , youll be cold

A.no im fine...

N. Ya i can see that

Neil walked towards the chair ... Took his jacket which has dried ... and walked towards annie...and gently placed it on her back ...

N. Wear it otherwisr you get worse

A. Thank you.

It was raining heavily outside...

A. We were going to teesahy party and we ended up here...

N. Im really sorry...

A. Wow ... So now you are the one saying sorry... Mr sorry...

N. Really i ...

A. No ... Dont worry... Its ok ...

Hope it stops raining ...

Teeshay s birthday was on and people were enjoing ... But teesay was worried and tina as well... They couldt enjoy themselves ... Their friends phones wre unavailable...

The rain didnt stopped ...but it was slow now ... So they decided to leave...while coming out... Neil took annis hand with his hand... In support...so she doesnt fall down ...she slipped... but didnt fell... Neil held her... Those raindrops were falling on her face... He ... with his hand... Removed the hair which was falling on her face... They had an eyelock... Anie slowly stood properly... And they both went to where neils bike was standing...annie gave neil his jacket ... They got on the bike... Anahita held neil...tightly... Neil smilied... They drove... And on phone ... Tina was tekling neil directions when he stopped the bike and called her... Drove Fast in order to get to teesays party... They got there... N the entrance ...

Teesahy . You guys...whwre were yiu ? Are yiu ok? Annue why are your clothes wet?

Tina r u guys ok?

A. Yes were ok just A bit wet...

Ti. Here annie take this dress and change it otherwise youll fall sick.

A. Ya.

Neils clothes werent that wet and they dietd quickly. Anirudh sir joined the party as well.

Kabhi kabhi zindagi mein

Doosre maukre mil jaate hain,

Agar mul jaye toh , dost, unhe kabhi gavatein nahi hain.

Precap : Party, annie is drunk... Anahitas Confession...

Guys thank you ,, please comment and like to encourage to write more, i if you liked it .
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice... wish something ahem ahem happened in jungle,... but they came to party without any jungle me mangal... 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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so neil and annie are falling in love dheere dheere se 😳 ,wd all dt dancng,blushng,staring,getng cmfrtble wd each other 😆 vry nice updte 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Awesome update
Loved it
Precap seems interesting
Annie's confession
Nice
Sorry for commenting late
Was offline
Anywas update soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Hey guys , next chspter coming soon !!!

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