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       πŸ˜ŠHi guys.. Here's I am presenting Chapter-6...😎
            ⭐️Pardon me for typo's and any mistakes⭐️
 
ARSHI'S NEW GOLDEN WORLD β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ

                                                      CHAPTER-6

                                                               PART-A

                                                  -----DREAM-----

The scenery she saw infront of her took her breath away!!!

Kh:"Aww!!!This place is awesome!!!"she exclaimed with joy.
She started walking in that place and enjoyed the beauty of that place.

She stilled for a moment unable to believe what she is seeing...

kh:"OMG!!!There is a palace!!!"she exclaimed and jumped with joy.
She started going towards the palace...
kh:"Wow!!!This palace is beautiful!!!"she exclaimed.
She walked into the palace.
There she saw a garden which is full of colourful flowers.

She started going towards the garden...
There she saw a young men watering the plants...
kh:"Who is this Guy???"she thought.
kh:"Is he the gardener here?No,I don't think so..the gardener won't have such kind of costumes"she thought.
"If he is not the gardener then who is he?"she thought...After thinking deeply for some time she remembered something...

kh:"Wait...Is he the prince whom I'm dreaming every day?"she thought.
He look's like dashing young men...Even I didn't see his face I feel that he is handsome...His long back,height,his black hair everything seem's to be perfect.
Khushi pondered for some time and decided to see that young guy...
She started heading towards the guy...with full of excitement.
As she is nearing him her heart beat began to raise..."Dhak Dhak...Dhak Dhak..."is the only sound she could hear clearly at that time.

Kh:"Hey young men!Who are you?What r u doing here?"she asked.
He didn't reply.
Kh:"Hello excuse Me!!!I'm asking u only"she asked but even then she didn't get any reply from him.
She got annoyed with his silence and decided to see his face first before she could say anything.
Khushi then placed her hand on his shoulder and began to turn him towards her side.
Khushi was about to see his face...but she couldn't see as she opened her eyes when some one called her so...softly while holding her hand
                                       ----DREAM ENDS----

kh:"ARNAV Tum!!!"she got up quickly and exclaimed.
Ar:"Yes khushi...It's me.Actually I got up before few minutes and found u murmuring something while sleeping"he said.
"What happened to you khushi?R u fine?"he asked.
Khushi was lost in her thoughts about her prince and didn't listen anything...
Ar:"Khushi I'm asking you only.Where r u lost?"he asked her but didn't get any response from her.
He shaked her "Khushi!!!"he exclaimed while shaking her...
Khushi got concious and looked at Arnav who is feeling tensed.
kh:"What happened to u Arnav?Why r u looking tensed?"she asked as she is confused.
Ar:"What happened to me!!!Khushi tell me what happened to u?I'm calling u and trying to wake up u from a lot of time but u were not at all responding"he exclaimed.
kh:"Vo..I'm sorry"she said.
Ar:"Is every thing fine khushi?"he asked her placing his arm on khushi's shoulder.
kh:"Yes Arnav...Everything is Fine...Don't worry"she said and smiled.
Ar:"Ok then...You change ur clothes khushi.Let's leave from this place and find any place where we could get fresh up"he said.
kh:"Ok"she said and he left.
Kh:"Hey Devimaya!!!What is this?I was about to see my prince face but ended up seeing ARNAV's face!!!"she exclaimed...
"When will u show my prince devimaya?"she asked...

Khushi changed her clothes and came outside the hut.By the time she came Arnav had already changed his clothes and was ready with his luggage to leave.

                                                           
Khushi took her lugguage.
Arnav and khushi began to leave...They both were walking...
Ar:"Khushi.I'm Sorry"he said.
kh:"Sorry?For what arnav?"she asked.
Ar:"For what happened yesterday"he said.
Kh:"But yesterday what happened Arnav?"she asked with a confused expression.
Ar:"KHUSHI!!!Did u really forget what happened yesterday night?"he asked raising his eyebrows.

Kh:"Arey Arnav!!!I really don't remember what happened yesterday night for which u r feeling"she said and suddenly stopped when she remembered what actually yesterday happened.

She stood silently remembering what happened...
Ar:"Khushi!!!"he called her.
she didn't reply.
Ar:"Khushi I'm really sorry for behaving with u like that.Till now I have never behaved like this with anyone.I don't know what happened for me yesterday.
I'm really feeling shame for that"he said.
Kh:"No No!!!Arnav not only u I'm also feeling shame for that...I should have shouted at u or stop u.But I didn't do like that!!!I don't know what happened to me?"she said and pondered.

Kh:"Infatuation!!!"she exclaimed...
Ar:"What?"he asked.
Kh:"Yes...It's Infatuation Arnav"she said.
Ar:"Mean's?"
Kh:"You don't know about infatuation?I'll explain u"

"  Infatuation is only an attraction between male and female. And its a state of being completely carried away by un-reason passion,
foolish examined feeling and unappreciated often completely unwanted unwarranted emotion."she said all at once and sighed.
Ar:"Hm...I think u r right"he said."But...how do u know this?"he asked.
Kh:"Will u watch Telugu movies?"she asked.
Ar:"No...But why?"he asked.
Kh:"I found I mean I heard this definition in one Telugu movie"she said.
Ar:"Hmm...But why r u watching Telugu movies?"he asked.
Kh:"To learn Telugu"she said.
"Now will u please divert this topic?"she asked.
Ar:"Only if u forgive me"he said.

kh:"Ha...Arnav I forgived u.I'm sorry"she said.
Ar:"For why?"he asked.
Kh:"For not stopping u" she laughed.



Kh:"Just kidding man!!!"she exclaimed and both laughed together.


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kh:"Arnav still how much time should we walk like this?When will we reach GOA?"she asked.
Ar:"I don't know when we will reach Goa but I think there will be any place around here where we can get fresh up"he said.
kh:"I'm feeling bore Arnav"she said.
Ar:"Then what can I do khushi?"he asked.
Kh:"Arnav why don't u tell me about ur family?"she asked.
Ar:"Okay then"he said and started telling about his family...
"My Nani...Devayani...
 My father...Pranav...
 My mother...Aarti...
 My sister...Anjali...
 My jeejaji...Shyam...
 My uncle...Manohar...
 My aunty...Manorama...
 My cousin brother...Akash...
 My servant...HP...
 My Nani's pet...Lakshmi..."he said.
Kh:"Hm...You all live together?"she asked.
Ar:"Yes.At Delhi in SHANTIVAN."he said.
kh:"If these many people will be there in ur home then it will be fun..Right?"she asked.
Ar:"Ha...Yes...We will have fun time at evening's"he said."Khushi tell me about your family"he asked.
kh:"Ok then"she said and started telling about her family...
"My father...Shashi...
 My mother...Garima...
 My sister...Payal...
 We all live in Lucknow
 My buaji...Madhumati..."she live's in Delhi"..."she said.

kh:"What else arnav?"she asked.
Ar:"Hm...You only say na..."he said.
kh"Tell me about your childhood"she asked.
Arnav started saying about his childhood memories...
After completely sharing about his memories he asked her to say about her childhood...
She started saying...

They both were walking while sharing their memories...

Khushi is sharing her memories with Arnav...
While walking Arnav's shoelace got loosened.He stopped for a while and began to tight his shoelace and forgot to stop khushi.
Khushi who is deeply involved in telling about her memories didn't notice that Arnav is not coming along with her.
By the time arnav finished tying his shoelace with a difficulty as he every time get confused in tying shoelace khushi went far away...
Arnav stoop up and was shocked to notice that khushi is not with him...

Ar:"Khushi!!!"he called her loudly.
He started searching her in every direction...but didn't find her.

Khushi is still busy in telling about her memories...but suddenly she stopped as she noticed that Arnav is not responding...
She turned around and to her shock he is not there...
SHe don't even remember the way she came as she didn't kept any focus on the way she is walking as she is busy in recollecting her sweet childhood memories...
She didn't understand what she should do now...
Suddenly she remembered that she has Arnav's mobile number...She took from him previous day...
She took out her mobile but due to her misery there were no signals there...
Kh:"Oh No!!!Devimaya...What is this???Where did Arnav go???"she asked.
she pondered for some time...
kh:"Phool pulayya chali hay payya rah patha day mory mayya aaj bathado humko rastha tujhey khiladoon poori khasta"
She says and spins around until she stops her poem. She walks that way. 

Arnav on other side is searching for khushi...
Ar:"Khushi!!!Where r u Dammit!!!"he screamed.

Khushi started walking at that way where she stopped her poem.
Kh:"Arnav!!!"she screamed.

After walking and screaming for some time she found a dhaba...
She went there...
Lady:"Hello...Welcome to this dhaba!!!"she welcomed khushi with a smiling face.
kh:"Hi...Did u see any young man coming this way?"she asked.
Lady:"No bitiya...I didn't see any one."she said.
kh:"Ok...Thank you"she said.
Lady:"Would u like to have anything bitiya"she asked.
kh:"ji...I'll have...But before that will u say if I get signals for mobile here?"she asked.
Lady:"Yes we will get signals but those are weak signals"she said.
Kh:"Thank u.I'll try to call"she said.
Lady:"OK then after u finish ur call then tell me if u want anything"she said.
kh:"Ya...Thank u"she said and the lady left.
Khushi took out her mobile and started searching for Arnav number.

Arnav is still searching for khushi...
While searching he saw a poster that is sticked to a tree.
In that poster it is written that there is a dhaba nearby...and the direction's to go to dhaba...
He took a snap of that poster as he was unable to pull it from tree becoz it is sticked tightely to tree.
He started going to dhaba according to that directions...

At Dhaba...

Khushi found out the number and called.But it was unreachable...
The signals were very weak...
She walked along the way she got signals but there is no use...
She got tired and sat on a bench.
There she saw a small boy crying...and went near that boy.
Kh:"Why u r crying?"she asked.
Boy:"Jiji my kite got strucked there on that tree and no one is giving me that"he said and sighed.
Kh:"You can buy another one na...There is no need to cry for that"she said.
Boy:"If that wouldn't be my favourite kite then I might not have cry"he said.
Kh:"Why is that your FAV KITE?"she asked.
Boy:"My father has gifted me that kite...Now he is not there with me...Mamma said that he went near GOD and will be sooo busy.So,he will not return for many days.
This is the only gift from my papa I had with me right now"he sighed.
Khushi eye's welled up with tears after listening to that kid word's...She decided to give that kite to him.
Kh:"Don't worry...I'll bring that kite for u..."she said.
Boy:"Sach may[Is that True?]Promise"he asked.
kh:"Promise"she said and went near tree.She pondered for some time...
She saw some stools and a big drum placed near that tree.She arranged those stools on that drum and climbed on that drum and stools.
She is trying to take out the kite from that tree...While she is taking out that kite her chunni flew away due to passing wind which she didn't notice...



Arnav reached that dhaba...
A lady has welcomed him...
He asked her about khushi...If she saw any girl coming this way...
She said "yes".
Ar:"Where is that girl"he asked.
Lady:"She is here till now...But don't know suddenly where she went"she said.
Ar:"Did u see her going in any way?"he asked.
Lady:"No.She asked about a guy...I think it's u?"she said.
Ar:"Thank u for ur information"he said and she left.
Suddenly a chunni which was flying freely in wind got settled on Arnav's face...
He removed that chunni and recognized it.
Ar:"This is the same chunni that khushi is wearing"he thought.
He turned to the direction from where the chunni came and got surprised to see khushi trying to take out the kite which got struck to that tree

After the boy saw khushi taking out the kite he jumped with joy...
Boy:"Hurray!!!Di took out the kite!!!"he exclaimed.
Khushi heard words of the boy and turned around to see that boy.
She got unbalanced and fell.
Kh:"Ma!!!"she screamed and closed her eyes.

She was about to fall to the ground when someone hold her and saved from falling to the ground.
Every one at dhaba gathered near that tree.

Arnav rushed towards khushi when he saw khushi falling to ground and held her by his arms...

Khushi felt relaxed when she was in arnav's arms.The warmth touch has made her forget every thing.She felt comfort.

Ar:"Khushi!!!"he said softly.
Khushi opened her eyes and got surprised to see Arnav there...
Kh:"Arnav!!!When did u come here?And how did u know I was here"she asked.
Arnav was about to reply when he was interrupted by the people.
Khushi slowly got down from arnav's arms...
The people asked her if she was fine.She said to every one that she is fine...

Arnav took  khushi to backside of dhaba where there were no people.

Khushi noticed her chunni is with arnav.
Kh:"This is my chunni.Where did u get it Arnav???"she asked.
Ar:"What the Hell khushi!"he yelled for which khushi got frightened.
"I was searching for u everywhere like a mad person and here what u r doing?"he shouted and clutched her shoulders tightly.

AR:"Where did u go leaving me khushi???"he yelled at khushi.

Kh:"I didn't go any where leaving u Arnav...U r the one who leaved me"she said.
Ar:"What the!!!"he shouted at her.

Khushi started crying...


When he saw khushi crying he felt pain in his heart...Her every tear is  pinching his heart...

Suddenly a boy came near them.
Boy:"Didi.Where is my kite?"he asked.
Kh:"Here it is "she said and handed that kite to that boy.
Boy:"Didi...Why r u crying?Did this man hurt you?"he asked and immediately turned towards Arnav.
"Hello man!!!Why u r shouting at her???"he asked.
"Didi is such a sweet girl that she bought me this kite which got strucked to that tree.Do u know this kite is gifted to me by my father who went near god"he said.
Arnav's heart melted by his words...
Ar:"I'm sooo very...sorry kid for scolding ur di"he said and bent down to kiss that boy.
Boy:"You r such a sweet man!!!You are apologizing"he said and kissed arnav.
"You should apologize didi"he said for which arnav nodded.
Ar:"I'm sorry khushi!!!"he said.
Kh:"It's Ok Arnav"she said.
The boy kissed khushi and left.

Kh:"See Arnav!I didn't leave u.U r the one who leaved me in that forest.I was walking while saying my childhood memories and suddenly when I turned around U r not there."she said.
"I didn't understand what to do So,I walked the way which I thought it would be best and searched u.But I didn't find u anywhere.
Then I reached this dhaba and was trying to get contact with u and all this happened."she said all at once and sighed.
Arnav understood whole situation and decided to apologize khushi...

AR:"I'm extremely sorry khushi. Actually it was my fault.My shoelace got loosened and I got busy in tightening them and forgot about u"he said.

"By the time I finished tying shoelace U were not there and I got tensed"he said.



Kh:"What the!!!"he shouted at him.

"It's your fault and u r shouting at me before some time!!!"she yelled at arnav and clutched his shoulders.

Ar:"If u want u shout at me or beat me...but please forgive me khushi..."he asked her softly holding his ears and sat on his knees.
Kh:"Hm...I forgived u.Now stand up"she said and helped him.
Ar:"Khushi do u know how nervous I felt when I didn't find u"he said.
kh:"Me too Arnav..."she said.

Ar:"But why?"he asked.
kH:"First u tell me why u felt Nervous"she said.
Ar:"We r friends khushi!!!"he exclaimed.
Kh:"Same feeling here Arnav!!!"she exclaimed
Ar:"What if something happened to u?"he said while cupping her cheeks...
Happy Tears welled up in her eyes...


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And I am sorry once again...πŸ₯±
Accha back to the update ...
List of things I loved the most ...
I just loved how they escaped...πŸ₯±
How khushi dreams of her Prince Charming and Arnav appears,,.πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰     
Khushi in a saree,,,,
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awesome update gayu...πŸ€—    [πŸ€—]
loved it...
but wait did u just mentioned bomb in train😲😲...
arshi life in danger.. wat a twist...    
no no thats not possible..
so police asked them to live d train...       [Hmm...]
arnav & khushi going towards jungle😲 so romance can b expectedπŸ˜‰πŸ˜³  [Pakka...]
but wat can b said... arnav & khushi if not fighting then there cant b sizzling chemistry ... [Don't worry u will see chemistry...or mystery...[Any one onlyπŸ˜†] ]
khushi afraid of darkness 7 loneliness ..
arnav advising her to divert her mind with listening music... nice idea...πŸ˜›    [ πŸ˜ƒ ]
thnk u so much for my all time fav song...😳😳
enjoyed d song...  [Hmm...That's great]
khushi thinking ghost arrived...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† arnav making fun of her...😳😳   [🀣]
now both of them going to hut for shelter...😳
both attracted towards each other & both forget d surroundings around themselves & lost in each others eyes...
but a stupid phone call disturb them😑 [I think if u will be there u would have break that phone🀣 Just kidding yaarπŸ˜‰]
now both afraid to face other & think hw shameless they became not knowing others feelings..
& my prediction of last update got right that they both wont know they r about to study in same college... yeah... so expecting a surprising meet in college... [It's surprise dear!!!!πŸ˜‰]
nice pics & video clipings added... this makes update more interesting... πŸ˜³πŸ˜³ [Really!!!]
so much curious for next part..
plz update soon..  
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Khushi got hurt  [Hmm...]
Arnav find the safe place to stay [Ya...]
Waiting for the next update 
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Friends kiss not bad [Yes dear but here the situation is different na...Friends kiss but not lip to lipπŸ˜†]

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khushi in saree  [ πŸ˜³ ]
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fab update...⭐️⭐️⭐️[ πŸ˜³ ]...Part A - Arnav and Khushi stepped out of the train with their luggage......Arnav went in search of a place for shelter...😎...Khushi was scared and was thinking of her prince charming...πŸ˜›...just then Arnav came and there was a moment between them...πŸ˜‰ [Hm...😳]...Arnav and Khushi became friends...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘...  [YES!!!πŸ˜†] 
Part B - They both went to the hut and changed their clothes...[ πŸ˜ƒ ]...Arnav became mesmerized seeing Khushi in a saree...πŸ˜›[ πŸ˜³ Lost in her beauty πŸ˜† ]He became romantic...😳[πŸ˜† ]...they both were lost in each other...πŸ˜‰...After sometime they both realized what they were doing and became embarrassed...πŸ˜†...loved it...[ β­οΈ ]❀️❀️❀️...waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...πŸ˜ƒ...pls continue soon...😊... 

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[quote=maitricuteheart]
awesome update!! [ 😳 ]

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[quote=saschades]
nice update [ πŸ˜Š ]
thanks for pm x

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[quote= -Angel.Candy-]
Awesome update !!!! [ πŸ˜‰ ]
Continue soon ...

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[quote=Happytwinkle]
Awesome updates [ πŸ˜³ ]
Loved them [ β­οΈ ]
Thanks for the pm

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[quote=Linsie]
wow nice teaser... adventure [ ⭐️ ] 

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[quote=Edna_Philip]
Nice story.[ 😊 ] Nice concept. [ πŸ˜ƒ ] All the 5 were good. [⭐️ ]
Thanks for the PM.

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[quote=niksh]
awesum update!! [ πŸ˜Š ]
loved itt!!!! [ πŸ˜³ ]
amazing

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[quote=mahrusweety]
interesting start [ πŸ˜Š ]
story line and concept is diff [ πŸ˜‰ ] and amazing [ β­οΈ ]
college life arshi story  [ πŸ˜† ]
loved it [ πŸ˜³ ]
charactersketch is also aweesome [ πŸ˜ƒ ]
bookmarking it [ πŸ₯³ ]
will read all parts and
then comment [ πŸ€— ]
thanks for pm

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[quote=YaSha0512]
Awesome storyline ...loving it already [ πŸ˜† ]
so it was awe struck for both at first sight [ πŸ˜‰ ]
gotta say Arnavs glued to that phone of his [ Yes!!! πŸ€£ ]
twice he missed khushi because of it lol [ πŸ˜† ]
wow n even payal n Akaash seem smitten [ πŸ˜‰ ]
our Anjali might play cupid hmm [ πŸ€ͺ ]
loved the whole Arnav running for train n taking khushis help... classic romantic style [ ]
well both headed to Goa but stuck god knows where [ πŸ˜† ]
wow they almost kissed but that D*** phone  ... wanna smash it lol  [ πŸ€£ ]
oh boy [ πŸ˜•  No!!!]  does this mean theyre gonna be awkward now n even become distant  [No ways...πŸ˜‰]
cant wait for them to find out theyre in same college [Me too!!!πŸ˜†]
don't wanna see either backing away [OK...]
hopefully instead the pull will be too strong for them to fight just like their almost kiss [ Hahaha...πŸ˜†]
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin [Sure dear...πŸ˜‰]   

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[quote=thiyamappy]
Thanks for sharing. [ Ok...]

Really good start and every update is getting interesting [  Really!!!😳] ...loving the kind of relationship Arnav and Khushi shares. [ β­οΈ ]

awww the hut moments.πŸ˜‰ [ πŸ˜³ ]

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[quote=sweetydoll32]
Superb story and updates dear [ ⭐️⭐️⭐️ ] loved it please update soon and please send me pms [ Sure Dear...πŸ˜‰ ]

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[quote=katj]
Awesome story.. [😊 β­οΈ πŸ˜ƒ]
Thanks for pm

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[quote=Roshini]
Awesome updates [ ⭐️⭐️⭐️ ]

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[quote=mandy15]
superb:) 
 
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[quote=Pinky.Raizada]
OMG, Loved the GIFs. [ ☺️ ] 

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[quote=Nalini_Sanzholi]
Nice story. [ 😊😊😊 ] 
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[quote=sutapasarbabhom]
Nice n cute stry [ πŸ˜Š πŸ˜³ ]
Lov all pics u upload [ β˜ΊοΈ ]
The way u describe about Taj Mahal [ Google ] .n gv all pics i apritiate ur work [πŸ€— ]
Tanx for sharing this butiful stry [ πŸ˜‰ ]
Waiting to read their college stry start [Hmmm...] 

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[quote=Sexylicious]
Such a gripping storyline <3 [ Really!!!!πŸ˜› ]
Added to reading list [ πŸ€— ] 

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[quote=madhu1210]
lovely update.. [  πŸ˜³ ]
oh no bomb in the train then  they walked  [ Hmmm...]

wow Arshi became friends now [Yes!!!πŸ˜†] 

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[quote=risha8]
Awesome chapters  [ πŸ€— ]
Can't wait for next update [ πŸ˜‰ ] 

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I'm feeling lucky to have such a sweet readers like u who r liking,commenting and encouraging me from beginning...πŸ€—

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Edited by ipkkndkasr - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice story.. loved all parts πŸ˜Š