You are My Home!! (part#16p g.131)

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full2puneri

@full2puneri

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

Wow... What a change...😃 Sab ne nkya expect kiya aur story kahan chali gayi... Refreshing... Amazing storyline... Realistic... Correct choice of words to depict the feelings... Would like to see where you take them from here... Am all set with you on this journey... Kahin toh aise lag raha hai that what radha is to krishna anchal is the same to maan... Just a guess... Can be wrong... And i want to read what you have in your mind... Thats going to be interesting... Baaki toh guesses maarna... Readers ki fitrat mein hai... Hayeee... Maan and geet... Both characters beautifully etched...👏

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deep002

@deep002

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#742

fabulous update dear, maan teasing geet omg😃 eagerly waiting for next update

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RUMANA NAAZ

@rumana88

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#743

nice update

waiting for maneet love story to start

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DishaMG

@DishaMG

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#744

Nice update
geet helping maan's baba
and maan admiring geet

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nishamna

@nishamna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#745

It was amazing. Maan is a mystery for me. One side he is admiring his wife and other side he talks with that anchal. Maan was very angry non surah as he stole something from goudown. Maan gets amazed hearing geet's mature statement. so maan wants to give time to his wife . this is the reason he stays away from geet. Last part was awesome. Geet was helping her father in law.n while she was chewing pencil too. Maan behaviour and his teasing show that he loves geet than what is going on in town with that another woman. Waiting for next dear