You are My Home!! (part#16p g.131)

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annirogc

@annirogc

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Posted: 10 years ago

#751

nice part.. maan behaviour was so much confusing.. one side he was admiring his wife and want to give a chance but other side with anchal.. what is happening.. anyways waiting for maaneet love story

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spoorthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#752

Originally posted by: Hanishadevi
lovely part...geet really dwel into maans family very well..love the way their relationship progressing..hope to see more maaneet moments...

thank you😳

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#753

Originally posted by: full2puneri
Wow... What a change...😃 Sab ne nkya expect kiya aur story kahan chali gayi... Refreshing... Amazing storyline... Realistic... Correct choice of words to depict the feelings... Would like to see where you take them from here... Am all set with you on this journey... Kahin toh aise lag raha hai that what radha is to krishna anchal is the same to maan... Just a guess... Can be wrong... And i want to read what you have in your mind... Thats going to be interesting... Baaki toh guesses maarna... Readers ki fitrat mein hai... Hayeee... Maan and geet... Both characters beautifully etched...👏

thank you so much for appreciating my efforts🤗

thanks for reading!😳

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#754

Originally posted by: deep002
fabulous update dear, maan teasing geet omg😃 eagerly waiting for next update

wishwas nahi ho raha hai na😆

thank you for reading!

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spoorthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#755

Originally posted by: rumana88
nice update
waiting for maneet love story to start

story tho start hochuki hai

its for u pep to realize😉

thanks for reading!

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#756

Originally posted by: --mittu--
Nice update
geet helping maan's baba
and maan admiring geet

thanks for reading!😊

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#757

Originally posted by: nishamna
It was amazing. Maan is a mystery for me. One side he is admiring his wife and other side he talks with that anchal. Maan was very angry non surah as he stole something from goudown. Maan gets amazed hearing geet's mature statement. so maan wants to give time to his wife . this is the reason he stays away from geet. Last part was awesome. Geet was helping her father in law.n while she was chewing pencil too. Maan behaviour and his teasing show that he loves geet than what is going on in town with that another woman. Waiting for next dear

maan is less mystery for me than geet😆

chalo glad u liked it!

thanks for reading!😊