Kasturi (fan fiction)

First time please tell me what do you think should i continue.

My Hindi is not perfect but I will try and do my best. Please enjoy!!

The main persons are Kasturi, Robbie and Raunak. Kasturi's family is same as seen on the show same thing for Robbie and Raunak. I start from the beginning.

Kasturi

Part:1

Kasturi is talking with Tanu(sister) and Navneet(sister) in her room.

Khaushalya: KASTURI !!!

Kasturi comes downstairs and go to her mom.

Khaushalya: Kasturi sabji khatam(finish) ho gaei, bazaar toh laikaiya(bring)

Kasturi: Ji mama

Khaushalya: Aur Kasturi, Tanu and Navneet ko be lakheijanna

All tree sisters are coming back from the bazaar. The tree sisters are crossing the street when Tanu and Navneet see a car coming and go back but Kasturi did not see the car so she got hit by the car. Every one comes and Robbie gets out of the car.

Robbie: Ohh SHITTT!!!

Robbie rushes to Kasturi and tell the driver to put her in the car.

Navneet: Mein ghar(home) valey ko batati hoon aur too Kasturi di ke sath ja.

Tanu Goes in the car and Navneet run till home.

Meanwile… at Sabharwal and Singhania's house

Purshotam, Dushant and Nandini are talking.

Dushant: Purshotam yeh business both acha chalrahayeh aur Robbie ke har concert super hit hai.

Purshotam: Han liken Raunak aur tumhne bhi both kush kia hai iss company vasteh.

Raunak is on the staires

Raunak: Han uncleji liken Robbie ke bina humare company itni achi nahi chalthi.

Purshotam: Robbie kahan hai

Raunak: Voh…(Agar uncleji no patha chaljaenga ke voh puri rath club mein tha toh Robbie ki chuthi hojaegi.)

Robbie comes in

Robbie: Mein yahan hoon .

Driver and Tanu come in with Kasturi.

Nandini: Kya hogya yeh ladki khoon hai

Robbie: Takhar ho gaye thi car ke sath.

Nandini: Mein jaldi Doctor ko bulathi hoon.

Nandini rushes and calls the doctor.

At Chawla's house

Navneet finally comes and Khaushalya comes to her.

Khaushalya: Navneet Kasturi aur Tanu kahan hai?

Navneet: Voh….

Khaushalya: Voh kya???

Navneet: Voh Kasturi di ka accident hogya.

Khaushalya: KYA???

And Khaushalya faints

Navneet: MAMAN

Every one rushes to her but Alka. Beeji brings water. They bring Khaushalya to her bedroom and she rests there.

Ajay: Mein Kasturi di kol jaharahanhoon.

Ajay calls tanu on her cell and she tells her were she is and ajay goes there.

Back to Sabharwal and Singhania's house

The doctor came and checks kasturi

Doctor: Yeh billkool theek hai.

Nandini: Thank you doctor

Doctor: my pleasure

Robbie brings the doctor out and sees Ajay coming

Ajay: Kasturi kahan hai.

Robbie: Khon??(who)

Ajay: Jisaka accident…

Robbie: Oh woh han mere sath ao.

Robbie: tum kya lakteh ho kas..

Ajay: Kasturi!!

Robbie: yah wathever

Robbie: Tumhara kya rishta yeh kasturi keh sath

Ajay: main uska Bhai hoon

Robbie: Ohh

Ajay and Robbie enter the room where kasturi is.

Robbie: yeh Kasturi ka bhai hai

Every one lives but tanu and ajay from the room.

Ajay: Kasturi di kaise hai?

Tanu: Thik hai

Ajay: Yeh kaisa hoa.

Tanu explains

Meanwhile Robbie and Raunak are talking.

Raunak: what happen?? Kya hoa???

Robbie: Woh main… mujeh kya patha driver ghari(car) Chalaraha tha

Raunak: Anyway what up bro

Robbie: Cool just chilling in the club…

Raunak n Robbie: All night (in same time)

Ajay comes outside

Ajay: Dhanevad(thank you)

Ajay: Mein Kasturi koh lake jaharahahoon.

Nandini: Acha driver ke sath jana liken wait until kasturi koh hooch ana (till she gets up)

Tanu comes outside with Kasturi

Kasturi: Mein thikh hoon

Ajay, Tanu and Kasturi lives the house and go with the driver

great fanfic, continue soon
and yeah don't write lives its leaves
and i don't get the part when robbie said she is avaible
can you explain it 😊
hey also i wrote some scenes on RoKa and raunak and shivani
in the Kasturi and Robbie scenes
here is the link where all my scenes started
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=677237&T PN=52
and don't comment there that section is only for scenes coment in the chat club
here is the link
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=697735&T PN=44
if you comment there you will receive a pm from mz jess and if you want you could join the robbie and kasturi scenes chat club and write scenes there

thanks i will join when i get the time and the part tht u dont understand: robbie tought tht ajay was the huby of kasturi but he is not so he says she is available like still not taken you know robbie's character before thas why but i will take out tht part

very nice keep up the good work!!!!!! 👏

great start 😉
lookin farward to ur nxt part 😃

Great Work ! 👏
Keep it up 😊